Date: May 22, 2017 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 14
This is going to get messy. Michael's in like with Jules, lol. Seriously, if he was less self centered he'd almost be human, tee-hee.
Date: May 22, 2017 2:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
Deb is such a nice person in this story!
Blake is weird and a little too much concerned by Brian's reputation. Once Drew is there, things should be OK on this side.
The kids seem to get along very well.
Date: May 22, 2017 5:09 am Title: Chapter 15
That was kind of sweet.
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2017 1:56 am Title: Chapter 15
Holy cow. Justin has faith in Brian's ability to protect him and Ryan. They have Deb on their side. Of course, Michael could still cause trouble. I'd be interested in knowing what you have planned.
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2017 11:56 am Title: Chapter 14
Everyone seems to grab Michael and push him out the door. He doesn't get it does he? Now he wants to date Justin? That is so funny.
Date: May 21, 2017 9:48 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh, no, Michael is in love. Gus was smart to leave. Mikey annoys. Blake us right to be worried. Fly Jen and Molly somewhere safe and meet then. But I guess Rita already ruined the reunion so...
Date: May 21, 2017 9:44 am Title: Chapter 13
Gee, these two are bad judges of character, lol. Michael and Rita are probably having voodoo dolls crafted.
Drew and Emmett are on a very sexy stake out, lol. Very cute. They will be in love soon.
Date: May 21, 2017 8:43 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh no, this can't be happening; Justin will never get out Michael's web now that this Dumb-Ass thinks "he's the One" and worse, he will think Brian is trying to get Justin just because he is jealous. What a potential nightmare for Justin.
I loved Gus' reaction when he heard Michael.
Date: May 19, 2017 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
I foresee Rita causing so major issues. What she's done already will more than likely turn around to bite her in the ass. She may retaliate. She obviously thinks quite highly of herself if she doesn't think the ramifications would hurt her.
glad to see that Justin is going to trust Brian. That he feels secure enough to keep to their plans.
Sleuthing Emmett and Drew is sure to be entertaining. Hopefully they will be able to deter Rita for now.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 19, 2017 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ryan is adorable and he has already adopted Brian!
Emmett is going to get what he wasn't expecting and he won't come down to earth very soon...
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2017 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 13
I would like Michael to disappear what kind of friend is he ? Very possessive !! Good start for Emmett and Drew and Brian take care about Justin and Ryan : Thank you for this chapter
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2017 4:06 am Title: Chapter 13
Will Michael cause problems? Love that Brian is willing to do anything for Justin and Ryan. Hope they can do something about Rita. Now Drew and Emmett is a great idea.
Date: May 18, 2017 12:41 am Title: Chapter 12
Michael is completely clueless. If he channeled the energy he wastes following abroad he could have a successful comic store.
Oh, I hope they aren't found, but... well, it is a story, isn't it?
Date: May 18, 2017 12:34 am Title: Chapter 11
Rita is a controlling shrew. N's he deserved to be fired. What she's up to now is riddiculous. All for the life of money, what a shame.
Brian us working over time. Justin is a poor totured soul.
Oh I hope Rita goes after the phone herself, lol. So cute, Whitney to Kevin, lol.
Date: May 17, 2017 2:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
Brian should get a huge raise for Cynthia: she has to deal with the whining piece of shit that is Michael. He is worse than a bad violin player. It gets on nerves, it's awful.
Can't wait to see how Gus will finally manage to talk to Justin and how he will deal with Ryan.
Date: May 17, 2017 2:54 am Title: Chapter 12
Captain Asshole needs to be shot with a tranquilizer dart and then put on display in the City Zoo as the first talking hyena! Michael is such a pain! Not only can't he take subtle hints but he can't take direct orders telling him to stay away! I think it's time to buy an estate equipped with barbwire, electrofied fences to keep him and Rita's minions away...SMH I already see an end to the Brian & Mikey Show with no repeats!
I like the fact that Justin is bringing Lindsay out of her shell even as he gathers more information about Brian's motives. I also love the fact that Brian was completely honest with Cynthia. Out of everyone, she would always have Brian's best interests at heart, not just as an employee but also as a true friend.
Gus was absolutely adorable in his starstruck daze!
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2017 2:41 am Title: Chapter 12
How is Brian planning to keep Michael away from the loft? Love how Gus stuttered when he realized Justin was behind him. Brian could talk to Michael all day and Michael still wouldn't get it.
Date: May 15, 2017 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 11
The last sentence!!! Way to go Emmett! Go get your BF, he's right there for you to play with.
Date: May 15, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
So I'm kinda thinking Rita is going to eventually find herself in a whole heap of shit! (kinda like was described here...literally! lol) I'm guessing once all her antics get out she can kiss her career good bye. I certainly can't see any of her other clients sticking with her after they're informed of what she did.
Brian is really looking out for Justin and Ryan. His inner circle as well as the town are going to send everyone on a wild goose chase!
So Drew and Emmett now have a reason to really really get to know each other! YAY! Drew was great!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2017 5:03 am Title: Chapter 11
Love how Brian is going out of his way to keep Justin safe. Am enjoying Emmett and Ted doing their best to help and like how Drew decided Emmett would be his excuse for being in town. Perfect.
Date: May 14, 2017 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 10
Well, that Rita is a problem. Fired is fired, leave him alone. Hopefully the loft is safe enough.
Date: May 14, 2017 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
Love this story thanks for writing.
* hugs *
Date: May 14, 2017 7:41 am Title: Chapter 10
What a bitch! One more reason to fire her! How could she hide his mother called and why?
Gus is going to get nuts when he will face his hero.
Date: May 14, 2017 4:33 am Title: Chapter 10
That bitch!! What a lowdown guttersnipe bottom-feeding bitch Rita is. Hopefully there was some hidden, non-disclosure clause in his contract allowing him to sue her. I wonder how good his lawyer is....Hopefully he or she is a shark!
Between Brian and Justin, Ms Plans won't know what hit her. But now we have the always nosy, jealous and invasive Michael that will be lurking if he finds out that Brian is back in town. I wouldn't put it past the desperate bastard to be staking out the airport...SMH
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2017 4:26 am Title: Chapter 10
Rita forgot to mention that Justin fired her. Something tells me that Rita is not going to get her way. Going to enjoy reading about how getting to Pittsburgh goes.