Date: May 04, 2017 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ryan seems a nice and sweet kid.
"I heard Emmett groan and Ted bang his head on the table": I could only imagine the boring guys Ben brought.
Date: May 04, 2017 4:51 am Title: Chapter 3
I thought that delusional, desperate and ill-mannered Michael got on my nerves but I have finally found out that Sanctimonious Michael makes me want to commit {fictional} Mikey-murder! I mean seriously....Him saying, 'Really Brian, you should steer Gus towards real heros, not a rock star,' made me want to smack the words back into his mouth especially since he's been fantasizing about Captain Astro's tights-clad weenie for the better part of his 30 years on earth. How hypocritical!
Incidentally WHY hasn't Brian taken his key to the loft back yet? Now that they are on a road trip, this would be a great time to have the Super change the locks. If not, there is a definite possibility that Michael will invade the loft either trying to look for clues on where Brian and the others have gone or more likely, will be having 'personal relations' in Brian's bed. I don't buy for a moment that Michael is all that satisfied with Ben, sexually or emotionally. I think he's pushing for the others to get into 'relationships' with his new friends-by-default because he knows that given the opportunity he and his f*cked up views of how the world should work according to Mikey's law, will be left behind. Although Ben can be cool, no one wants to hang out with him and his 'Clone,' especially when said clone feels the need to make pronouncements on how his friends should live their lives according to his edicts. Move on Michael!!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter and Justin's interaction with the townspeople. Also looking forward to The Boyz arrival into Justin's private domain. Things are about to get really interesting!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2017 4:09 am Title: Chapter 3
This gets better and better. Waiting for the next chapter.
Date: May 03, 2017 4:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Huh...such an interesting take on this. Brian seems to be very open. He's really talking with Lindsey about what going on in his head. I like this side of him. He's on the hunt now adn bringing Ted and Emmett along with him. Amazing how Deb was able to remember him.
Oh this seems like it's going to be fun!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 03, 2017 11:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, well, well, what a snoop. How does he think Jus is going to take this intrusion? I'm hoping the live at first sight oartner dulls the you searched through my things part. I love a good AU, looking forward to Brian putting the pieces together.
Date: May 03, 2017 5:37 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like where this story is going already! Lindsay is an invaluable ally to Brian as well as Deb. Ted and Em should both go along for the "road trip" and let Michael be the same obnoxious, clueless turd he is. One of these days I'm going to write a fic with Michael as a MUTE so I can block out that incessant whine! Or better yet, I'll write my first crack fic with Michael as the whiny mosquito that FINALLY meets the right person... one swinging a mean giant fly swatter! LOL Anyway, I'm certainly looking forward to Brian solving the mystery of why he can't seem to get Jus T out of his mind.
Definitely needing MORE of this intriguing tale!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 03, 2017 4:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Brian in "retriever" mode will be fun to read; with Emmett in the mix, it's gonna be epic.
Gus is going to get nuts if Just T comes to the diner.
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2017 3:57 am Title: Chapter 2
That's a good question. Brian should have been a detective.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2017 9:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Another unique storyline. It's sure to be a favorite.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2017 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the way this story is fleshing out. You are keeping Michael canon, which in and of itself has me worried for Brian.
A round of applause for a new story!!!!!
Date: May 02, 2017 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning! Brian is intrigued and will do anything to get answers, even doing a road trip with Emmett and Ted.
Thank you for this new story!
Date: May 02, 2017 7:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW!! You're the poster child for the term "no rest for the weary...or is it wicked?? ;)
Already a terrific start. Very intriguing for the reader as well as it appears for Brian! :) He's proving himself to be pretty dang smart and very intuitive. Looks like he's already catching onto Justin's secret.
As usual, I'm hooked already, right out of the gate. DAmn you and your incredible talent!! LOL. I'm supposed to be workig. Oh well, I need a break here and there throughout the day, adn your updates make for a wonderful reprieve.
Cheers,
Elaine