Date: May 05, 2017 7:34 pm Title: Preparations for the fight
OK. A)...since when has Justin been studying law?? :)
I think this chapter pretty much summed up, and spoke the words of so many QAF fans! I have a small inkling or perhaps its' hope, that Brian will accept adn agree with everything that Justin said. That he'll actually start to take the steps needed to stop the cycle of...well...abuse really, from his so called friends.
Justin definitely unloaded. Yes, now he's nervous about brian's response, BUT...he didn't just up adn walk away. He's starting to talk. I think though, that no matter what, there must be a huge weight off of Justin's shoulders.
Great chapter
Cheers
Elaine
Date: May 04, 2017 4:02 pm Title: Preparations for the fight
I like seeing such a strong Justin. TAG
Date: May 03, 2017 10:31 pm Title: Preparations for the fight
WHOA!! Go Justin! He spoke the truth and all that we have all felt at some point watching the series. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
Great Job!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 03, 2017 10:33 am Title: Preparations for the fight
Wow! Justin is so right about all of it. I know Brian just tries to keep the peace but he really doesn't want Gus to go. It's looking like they might actually be fighting for custody of him instead of just trying to get them to stay in Pittsburgh.
Date: May 03, 2017 2:43 am Title: Preparations for the fight
That's right, you get your sonny boy back.
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2017 2:37 am Title: Preparations for the fight
Justin is studying law? That's a story in itself. Brian had better go along with the brilliant Justin Taylor.
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2017 2:36 am Title: Keep quiet no more
Yes, Justin is once again standing up for Brian.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2017 11:39 pm Title: Finally talking things over
Welcome to KD, and secondly, this was lovely. I'm glad they had this talk, it was something they SO desperately needed on the show omg!
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2017 11:39 pm Title: Finally talking things over
Welcome to KD, and secondly, this was lovely. I'm glad they had this talk, it was something they SO desperately needed on the show omg!
Date: May 01, 2017 10:17 pm Title: Finally talking things over
I normally don't read a new story on the first chapter by someone I haven't read before. That said, I'm glad I started this one. Its a "what shpuld have been" instead of the writer's rush to end the show.
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2017 4:24 pm Title: Finally talking things over
What a fabulous way to start a non-marriage.
Date: Apr 30, 2017 9:07 pm Title: Finally talking things over
Welcome to KD!! This is a great start to their lives together! Can't wait to find out how the other bozos react!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 30, 2017 8:26 pm Title: Finally talking things over
I can't wait to hear what they do about the Gus situation.
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2017 6:50 pm Title: Finally talking things over
Welcome to KD. This looks like it will a great story.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Finally talking things over
Welcome!!
This should have been the ending of QAF, It will be interesting how you write Lindsey and Michael.
As TAG said, happy writing and enjoy the site!
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2017 5:21 pm Title: Finally talking things over
Welcome to KD! I'm always so excited to see new authors here. Your story premise sounds intriguing. Happy writing. TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you for the warm welcoming words!