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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2017 9:52 pm Title: Chapter 6

Please let Brian go to the art show. 



Author's Response: The title is "Almost But Not Quite" so that may not happen. LOL

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2017 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 5

What is Brian going to now? With Justin going away for college they will never meet. 



Author's Response: Perhaps not. ;)

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2017 9:46 pm Title: Chapter 4

I don't want our boys get hurt. Why couldn't Michael have left his phone at home?



Author's Response: Michael's always the problem. LOL

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2017 9:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh oh. This is bad. Who is going to help Brian with Kip?



Author's Response: Good question.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2017 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is all soooo wrong. I wonder what else will change now. 



Author's Response: When one thing changes, many others do too.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2017 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

That's not how it's supposed to go. Nooooo. What is going to happen now?



Author's Response: You'll soon find out.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2017 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 25

This family! Always bad mouthing someone!

This is great story, revisiting what happened in the series, and picking some pieces to reinforce the already good base. Thank you for sharing it!



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story and liked the concept.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2017 2:06 pm Title: Chapter 24

What a visit! Gus is a great kid and Brian is wrong: his kid loves him. Happy to read that Mel is seeing that Abe isn't a good name for her son. I hope Brian will be able to see the paintings Justin did when he was feeling lonely and desperate to find Brian and to have a career in arts.



Author's Response: I loved the idea of Brian as a father. He would be nothing like his own father.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2017 1:45 pm Title: Chapter 23

And Justin saved the boards for the client! Great way to start at Kinnetik! Brian is still difficult with the love thing.



Author's Response: It certainly is a great way to start at Kinnetik.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2017 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 22

The interactions between Brian and Justin are really great; same as the one with Ted, in another style.

Debbie should shut her damn mouth; she thinks she's protecting Justin, but she's hurting Brian because she can't see he has changed.

I always loved how Justin won't beg for money or support to Brian; he tries to be independant, at least for money; as for feelings, that's another topic!



Author's Response: I always thought Justin was independent and wanted to do things on his own.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2017 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 21

The second morning after: they sometimes act like they have been together for months; they just fit so well; they are always teasing the other verbally or physically. That's great!

I'm glad Justin doesn't want to say anything to Deb.

Ryder has some nerve to make Brian this proposition. At least, he can see and get Cynthia: the dynamic duo is finally reunited!

The end was funny and meaningful.



Author's Response: Thank you for all your wonderful comments. They are much appreciated.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2017 4:33 am Title: Chapter 20

Brian now knows they met before, but didn't add more comments; maybe because he doesn't want to talk about Gus.



Author's Response: Could be.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2017 4:13 am Title: Chapter 19

I loved the way Brian tried to take back what he said, but Justin wouldn't let him!

What a chapter! Justin finally saw "the eyes".

They are both "nuts" and fit so well.



Author's Response: Yep, two nuts together. LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 18

Whoa, that was hot!!! They finally had their "date" night! What an end of chapter!



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 17

Excellent! Deb and Emmett together are such an interested nozy pair of gossipers!



Author's Response: LOL Yes, they are.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 16

I love the way you revisit the series. Great job!



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 15

What a mother! She's not even able to comfort her son! At least, Brian suspects something happened.



Author's Response: Brian is more intuitive than anybody gives him credit for.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 9:03 pm Title: Chapter 14

If Justin hoped that his father would listen and understand, he was dead wrong. Now, he has nowhere to go and his date is quite angry!



Author's Response: Craig does not understand.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 13

Well, that, for sure, is a wasted night out for Justin! Well done Michael! Brian is so weak with him.



Author's Response: Yes, unfortunately.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 8:27 pm Title: Chapter 12

Wonderful chapter: this first meeting and then sort of "date" were very interesting! I hope Justin will try the lamppost in front of Babylon.



Author's Response: LOL Maybe he will.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 11

Yeah!!! Finally! Thank you for this bubble of fresh air in that meaningless life they are both living.



Author's Response: Love the way you put that.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 10

I was afraid for Brian, but fate decided he would not die, or was it Mysterious Marilyn playing God's partition?



Author's Response: We would never do that to our Brian. Of course he was saved.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 9

Damn, I forgot his birthday! How will he manage to deal with that? I hope Cynthia will come up and help him.

At least he has the award!



Author's Response: Somebody will help him.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 8

The ways may cross soon (I hope) on the ad agency project.

At least, Justin is becoming close to Gus (I can't call him Abe).

I hope Brian could do something about his ad for Liberty Air and that the award won't go to Kip for this. Kip won't be able to keep up with the new ads, he's not ready for this and it will become obvious.



Author's Response: They will cross.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 6:33 pm Title: Chapter 7

Melanie is such a bitch! Our boys didn't meet again: too bad for both of them, and us as well!

The shopping trip was very funny.



Author's Response: Yes, too bad.

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