[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2017 6:58 pm Title: Chapter 48: FEAST of the GOLDEN GEESE Part 3
You were so not kidding about the action going on and the reveals of who else is associated with the nightmare.
Please Let Brian and Justin Be Okay!!
Deb deserved that slap and so much more if she manages to bail Michael out he is gone and she will be in serious trouble, cause the family will slaughter her before the police can arrest her.
Evangeline just couldn't resist trying one more time and she got one of many paybacks.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2017 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 41: WELCOME TO POINT/COUNTERPOINT
I was surprised by David. He has improved with age. Michael listened but did he learn? I'm not so sure. Ethan is plainly delusional. The accident that took out both him and Dickhead Dixon was perfectly timed. Now Craig is on his way to ask his son for money to use to take out Phoenix? Surely Justin will want to know why he wants money and lying won't work.
Date: Oct 20, 2017 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 48: FEAST of the GOLDEN GEESE Part 3
What a chapter! Fireworks in many domains: too bad Justin and Brian are wounded. At least, they are in good hands.
Thank you for the update.
Date: Oct 20, 2017 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 48: FEAST of the GOLDEN GEESE Part 3
My goodness! so much happening in just one chapter! Justin is one tough little fighter! Holy moses! Excitment, angst, galore! my adrenaline was pumping throughout the entire read. So much so I had to read it twice so I could take it all in without the intial emotions running rampant.
totally freaked out that Brian and Justin were shot! Oh my goodness!!!!! I know they'll be OK, but still...scary shit!
Dirty cops galore! Evangeline is one too?!?!?!??! Holy shitballs! Maloney is going down as well.
What's going to happen with Evangeline now? Will she escape from the hospital or will this be her end g ame? Fianlly caught and brought to justice? She is going DOWN!!
Such a long wait for this chapter but so well worth the wait! I'll be of course putting this on my Kindle to re-read in it's entirety in one fell swoop. Can't wait!
So looking forward to what you have for us next. Is this winding down now? Any more PB's up your sleeve for us?
AS always, totally transfixed with your storylines. Always brilliant
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2017 1:49 pm Title: Chapter 40: TAKING A STAND
Everything is in the open and Brian and Justin are still strong.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2017 1:38 pm Title: Chapter 39: HAMMERS
What happened to Justin was tough to read. Thank heavens for Daphne.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2017 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 38: IN THE LAND OF THE MISSING
Oh Lord, while it looks like they might be finding out who the boss is. I'm not so sure. Pheonix and her team better watch their backs.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2017 3:15 am Title: Chapter 37: DANGEROUS ALLIES
Well, Craig is getting his comeupence in more ways than one. His wife is leaving him broke.
Date: Aug 08, 2017 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 47: FEAST of the GOLDEN GEESE Part 2
I just finish chapter 47. This story is very insteresting I'm really enjoying it how soon before the next chapter.
lah
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2017 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: BEING BRIAN KINNEY
OMG!!!!!!!! I AM SO HOOKED ON THIS STORY PLEASE DON'T LEAVE US WAITING LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 36- STACKED DECK
The story gets more involved with each chapter. Chris came out of this much better than expected, because Brian and Justin are honorable. Mikey just keeps blowing it with every word out of his mouth.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 35: IT'S A SMALL WORLD AFTER ALL
Drama is an understatement. Dickhead Dixon being thrown out is the least he deserves.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 3:18 pm Title: Chapter 34: FCUK (not talking about the French Connection y'all!)
Looks like we may have Hobbs and Townsend on side Kinney.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 33: THE MATRIX DECODED
And now we return to our regular programing. Will Townsend manage to come out of this unscathed?
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 2:55 pm Title: Chapter 32: FIRE OFF- The Arrival of Avlossa
Lord a mercy. What does Michael think he can accomplish. I'm hoping Jason isn't planning anything unpleasant.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 2:47 pm Title: Chapter 31: AND IT CAME TO PASS
The messages from Ethan will prove just how delusional the man is. Now as for forgiving Michael, after all he did, I don't think it's an option.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 2:28 pm Title: Chapter 30: PRESERVING THE TAYLOR-KINNEYS 101
Here's hoping that Ian doesn't come out looking good.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 2:14 pm Title: Chapter 29: DISTURBING THE PEACE
Nice scene between John and Peter. What they don't realize is that with Brian and Justin on their side, they are much better off.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 2:12 pm Title: Chapter 28: LOVE OF THE LOVELESS- Michael
How Michael thinks Brian will forgive is beyond me. Even when confronted with the truth he acts like he did nothing wrong. Ben is well out of it. Maybe Deb will see the truth because if not her relationship with Carl will be in jeapordy.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 1:54 pm Title: Chapter 27: REVELATIONS
This has been an interesting conversation. I like that John and Peter will be bettering themselves. I hope Jenny Rebecca realizes her dad is a dead beat dad. Then we have the Lindsay/Colby connection. Oolala.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 4:37 am Title: Chapter 26: NOT A ONE-TRICK PONY- Ethan
Ethan is getting himself in hot water.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 3:45 am Title: Chapter 25: SHARING...SOMETHING- Daphne and Troy
I love how Daphne explained Michael and Ethan. Can't wait to see how Michael plans to spin what he did, because you know he ain't going to be telling the truth.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 1:20 am Title: Chapter 24: IT'S NOT JUST A RIVER- Debbie and Carl
You point out a major problem with Deb. Her inability for seeing the manipulative shit her son is. Hopefully Carl will decide living with her is not worth it and Ben will come to the same conclusion about Mikey.
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2017 4:38 am Title: Chapter 23: HOW SOON IS NOW- Ben
It's a shame that Daphne took Michael in even if it was for Ben and Debbie.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2017 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 22: FROM BRITIN TO THE AMITYVILLE HORROR
It was hard to believe that Malicious Mel has changed so much. But she's changed in a good way that bows well for J.R. Daphne has found her match, another good thing. John and Peter turning up gives this story another direction. Then you have Michael, who should have been tossed out the moment Ethan showed up.