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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 1:09 pm Title: Chapter 10

This is the chapter that is hardest to read because of the pain that Brian went through.  However thankfully I've read this before and know that Brian is a survivor.  Also that Emmett is a wonderful friend.  I have to admit it seems like the gang in NY instinctively know somethings wrong.  Daphne defending Brian while Debbie talks smack.   Boy is she going to regret her words.

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Date: Apr 20, 2017 4:50 am Title: Chapter 9

It's interesting that Emmett is the only one to see Brian for who he is.  Now we find out that Emmett wasn't the target.  Brian was.  Someone doesn't want him to be young and beautiful.

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Date: Apr 20, 2017 2:10 am Title: Chapter 8

You have to love Daphne.  She has a way of seeing through everyone.  I agree with her assessments. Love how Ben told Mel to shut up.  She's so easy to put in a bad light because of the many times she worded exactly those sentiments.  Michael also could be seen the same way.  Deb is way too harsh and just pissed Justin off.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 1:42 am Title: Chapter 31

Ted needs to just fucking do one

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 1:25 am Title: Chapter 30

It's so funny how I am desperate for Brian and Justin to get back together, but so happy about Brian and Chris LOL. These boys are hot - and Brian does need something now, he needs to feel wanted.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 1:09 am Title: Chapter 29

I got chills when Justin went to the loft, and for him to find what Brian had built for him????? GOOSEBUMPS! 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 1:01 am Title: Chapter 28

WAIT, what the actual fuck??? Have I missed something or did you only just say that Craig, Stockwell and Hobbs are a part of this. I mean, we knew Stockwell was back, but omg, I feel like I may have missed something LOL. Haven't,  right?

Cynthia, oh you, she knows what she's doing by sending Justin to the loft, smart loft. Brian will kill her LOL

Brian promising to come back and haunt people is brilliant.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 12:47 am Title: Chapter 27

I seriously love Chris so much. Is it bad that I kind of wanted them to fuck, just to give Brian some relief? But that wouldn't have been fair to Chris. He needs a hot guy to love him for who he is... maybe Matt ;)

 



Author's Response:

Yeah,  I love Chris too.  Would you be interested in hearing the identities of the cast members in my mind as I wrote this story?

CYN

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 12:36 am Title: Chapter 26

Ted is soooo annoying omg.  And won't they figure out where he's gone sooner or later? God,  Brian, you are such a pain in the ass, but that's why I love ya lol

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 12:26 am Title: Chapter 25

Cynthia soooo deserved to be made junior partner, I am so happy for her. She has his back, and will never let him down.

Brian saying goodbye, omg, Justin has to see through it, right?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

That Emmett was the victim of a hate crime was a nice touch and I think I used it in one of my stories not remembering where I got the idea from.  Love how Lance and Drew are looking out for Brian who is looking out for Emmett.  Ya did good.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 24

Is it weird that I don't trust Cedric?

Also, the plastic surgeon loves Cynthia hehe.

I loved Justin and Brian bumping into each other. He needs to know Justin won't go away!

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 23

The last part of this chapter gave me so many feels omg, I just can't. I thought it would be Justin coming in to help at the end, but I didn't think it would be, so when it was I was so happy. And I love that Chris and Justin are getting along, they need to. But my heart really is breaking for Justin. He loves Brian so much and he just wants to be there for him. And Brian wants it too, but he loves Justin too much to allow him to be,

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 22

Apart from Emmett and Cynthia, he's just pushing everyone he cares about away, isn't he? Such a stubborn little shit, is Brian.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 21

Chris is sooooooo going to fall in love with Brian, isn't he? I mean, how could he not LOL. But poor Justin, he literally had his heart ripped out in front of him. It was lovely that Gus got to see him though, and I knew the kid wouldn't be scared. Kids are stronger and braver than us, we never give them enough credit.



Author's Response:

Loving the chapter by chapter comments. Thanks so much for taking the time and making the effort.

Cyn

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 20

Seriously, I know Brian is really hurt right now, but I want to kick his ass. He thinks he's saving Justin, but he's going to end up breaking his heart (and his own for that matter) even more. I just want to shake him, but he's injured, so I also want to snuggle him lol

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 19

I know he's trying to protect Justin, but it's going to cause them both so much pain along the way *shakes fist* it better be worth it, Mr. Kinney.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 18

Do you hear that noise? THAT IS MY HEART BREAKING. Is Brian bullshitting, he doesn't have someone else, does he??? No, he can't do.  He better not LOL. Although I wouldn't mind if it was Matt LMAO < but no, no, he loves Justin, and Justin is right, he's just trying to get rid of him, to be mean so he leaves. Well, that shit doesn't work with our Sunshine :)

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 9:08 pm Title: Chapter 17

I hope they find a way to pay back those sicko creeps that took pictures and sold them to the press, they deserve all that would come their way.

Seriously, Cynthia in this is just freaking amazing and so perfect for how I think their relationship was. She won't let ANYONE hurt him if she can help it. Bring in Justin, although, I have a feeling Brian might not be AS happy to see him. He'll be so scared :(

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 8:54 pm Title: Chapter 16

HE'S AWAKE, HE'S AWAKE!!!!!!!! i'M SO HAPPY! And I love that he was a sarcastic son of a bitch the second he woke up, just the way we like him. Poor Emmett, thank goodness Matt was there to tell him that Emmett relayed the message and tried to keep Justin away, but he's a stubborn little shit that needed to see his man :)

Cynthia in this makes me smile so much too.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 15

YAY Justin and Brian have been reunited. The shell bracelet was a lovely touch.

I feel that Justin and Matt will clash, but they're both fighting for the same thing, for Brian to be okay. I can't wait to see what happens. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 2:12 am Title: Chapter 14

I am so happy Justin is on his way to see him. I hope he gets there in time before anything else happens :( He needs to know he's there for him. Also, loving your Cynthia in this <3

Bed now, more tomorrow. I can't wait.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 1:57 am Title: Chapter 13

I seriously adore Matt, like legit crushing on him hehe!!!

I still need to go to bed, bloody hell!

Justin is on his way, yay. BUT, will he be safe???????????????

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 1:38 am Title: Chapter 12

IN YOUR FACE, ST JOAN!!!!!

I get why they're not telling Justin, but omg, he doesn't know that Brian is seriously hurt and argh!

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 1:28 am Title: Chapter 11

I'm crying, and I already love this Matt guy... seriously, I need to go to bed, but can't stop reading!!!!!!

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