[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2017 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 34
Big mistake. Justin never should have suggested that Brian does not love his son. But then Justin aways seemed to say things without thinking. But as it turns out what Justin said wasn't a mistake after all. Poor Emmett, he has to come to terms with the fact that Ted is being used to hurt Brian. Someone who Emmett has come to respect. Finally Justin and Brian are on the same page.
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2017 1:58 pm Title: Chapter 33
So the hypnotism begins. Even with McClaren there it's not easy. Would it have been any easier with Justin. He trusted Justin, but not to stay with him. At least he remembered seeing Stockwell and Craig. Keller and Johnny Deb, now that's a story I didn't remember. I will now. Keller and Hillard, now that is something. Looks like Blake is seeing a side of Ted that he doesn't like. We have Brian dancing and then Justin shows up. Justin isn't giving up.
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 32
Cynthia is on thin ice. But morally she's in the right. Deb on the other hand still has the misconception that mothers, including Joan, love their children. She can't see past that and the fact that Michael wanted Brian as a lover and never got what he wanted. You are correct, she says she loves Brian, but really she resents him. That she called Joan is a mistake. Thank goodness Emmett was there along with Lindsay and Michael to tell some home truths.
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2017 1:33 am Title: Chapter 31
Did the therapist ever show? Now I know that someone on the inside is working for the bad guys, but I can't for the life of me remember who. I hope it's not Trina though it might be Dulcinea McCoy. Poor Ted. Sadly he's going to get into trouble trying to make Brian money. Yes this will be the day Ted will never forget and will learn to regret. Melanie is a bitch and if any money is lost I hope it's hers. I can't wait to find out how Cedric exacts his idea of justice on Ted and Mel. Looks like Brian is going to let them into his mind because he knows he knows something but isn't sure what.
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2017 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 30
It is not surprising that Lindsay manages to get answers from Alex. At least Alex was able to convince her that they entended to not only catch but punish as much as possible the people responsible for Brian. What is surprising is finding Justin doing a handstand atop Garrett's desk. Love how Cynthia confirms what Justin always suspected. Shame they can't go after Ted and Monty without giving the game away. Ted's headed for a fall anyways you look at it. Maybe he'll pick up some humility.Like the description of the still injuries that Brian has. Alex showed up when Brian was expecting the therapist. Opps. McClaren is too far gone. Answer me this are Brian and Justin psycicly connected?
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2017 2:56 am Title: Chapter 29
I wasn't sure who was in the first part until they got in the elevator. So Sharon and Cynthia know each other and Brian calls Cynthia Tink, as in Tinkerbell? Much better than Wendy. How interesting that Ted is talking to someone about hedge funds. That could be a major problem. Justin is learning more about Brian from a secret room. Love Brenda Jo. She seems to be what Debbie should have been. Teddy is siding with Monty? What happens when Monty goes down?
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2017 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 28
Clair. You could call her a victem, or you could call her stupid. She could have been nicer and maybe her brother would have helped her with her looks and her grades. She is the cause of all her bad luck and look what it's got her. Sadly her youngest son is also suffering from her stupidity. Brian plans on haunting a lot of people...hmmm that's an idea for another story. The bad guys show their ugly heads. Cynthia is giving Justin a clue, at least I think she is.
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2017 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 27
I can't get over Deb. She seems to think she can deligrade Brian in one breath and demand to know where he is with another. How does Carl put up with her? Love all the team members you've given us. The background is funomenal. I love Frenchie. Wise beyond his years. Justin's memories, while HOT, are sad. There were several instances in the show that seemed oc for Justin, and the one with the syphilis is certainly one of them. It's amazing how McClaren can admit to wanting Brian but admit to all the reasons why he won't.
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2017 2:09 am Title: Chapter 26
Hillard's story is very extensive. What happened to Blanchard? Debbie and Lindsay have just met the real Justin Taylor. He let them have it. Hurrah. Monte on the other hand is about to loose his job.
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2017 12:44 am Title: Chapter 25
Who is the guy photoing confidential info? Brian's nightmares, there seems to be more to them. Monti and Eli are up to something. It's good that Brian and Mikey are back together once again. I'm surprised no one asked how he found out.
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2017 9:36 pm Title: Chapter 24
Did something happen during Brian's childhood that was so terrifying that I don't want to know? I can honestly say I don't remember reading this chapter. Lasseigne, for some reason I think he'll prove important in this story. Ethan and petty, they go so well together. Looks like Emmett now knows that McClaren is FBI. Looks like Cynthia has two men who are looking at her. So someone's tried to torch the loft?
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 23
And so the bad guys show up. I'm not sure about Teddy, will he take Brian's words to heart? That's some dream Brian's having, at least I assume it's a dream. The only way to keep Justin safe is to take him with him. Justin always seems to know when Brian needs him. How?
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2017 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 22
It's amazing how divided this family is. We have Ted, Melanie and Debbie who aren't thinking of the patient, but their own selfs. Michael and Lindsay would fall in this catagory, but they not gone as far as the others. Ben too would prefer that Michael not deal at all. Perhaps they will learn as Michael has that Brian didn't need them as much as they needed him and that time was over. Brian might think he'll be alone but... The one's on Brian's side are many. Carl, McClaren, Lance, Emmett, Drew, Keller, Nurse Beck, and of course Cynthia and Justin. You can tell who have moral character and who fall into the same catagory as Brian's attackers. Love, love, love Emmett taking over for Brian. Brilliant.
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2017 4:15 am Title: Chapter 21
Gus is here to see his dad and Justin is going to help. Is it wise? Only future chapters will tell. However I think that Ron will do what needs to be done to save Gus. McClaren(I can't call him Chris) and Justin have a talk off. Who won? Rick finally showed up. Now he planning to take Brian away!
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2017 12:48 am Title: Chapter 20
Michael's been too busy being a suburbian fag to notice that Brian wasn't the same. Asking him if he knows about Brian's new guy is futile. Sadly Justin seems to feel that he can just show up and Brian will jump at the chance to take him back. I'm not sure how Ted is going in this. Will he become the friend that Brian needs or will he get tossed out with the garbage. Melanie is so hostile that I can't see her surviving this story. Now the game is on.
Date: Apr 22, 2017 1:26 pm Title: Chapter 12
Omg omg omg...I just started this on Monday and I cannot stop reading! Holy shit what a story! I'm going through sooooooo many emotions! Love love love this! But I am neglecting my other fics on KD....I'm so torn!
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2017 3:30 am Title: Chapter 19
The diner and everyone is snarking over Brian. Emmett and Hunter are the only ones who see the reality. Ben might but he's so caught up in Michael, Melanie won't. If they come unglued they have themselves to thank for it. What is Ted's problem? Keller says there's a possibilty that Brian's face can be saved. Why does Brian have trouble believing it? Yay, Drew's admitted to Em that he's the one he wants. Now we meet a new character McClaren who if I remember right, becomes the guy Brian told Justin he was with. Justin is learning a truth that isn't really the truth and boy does it hurt.
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2017 12:28 am Title: Chapter 18
Justin missed Brian's awakening while picking up his mother at the airport. I think Jennifer's response to all this will be much better than Deb or Joan's. Cynthia is a true blessing. Love how she tells Michael off. Personally I would help Michael, not a bit. Brian is once again tossing Justin off of Mt. Kinney. Thank goodness I know it's not permanent.
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2017 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 17
Wow. Lindsay and Melanie are going to have it out when bam Ron shows up. What a surprise to learn that he doesn't have much time left and wants to reunite with his daughter and her children. Now the question is just how bad is his wife going to react? As to having Gus there, does Brian really want him to see him like he is? Love how Lindsay told everyone off and ordered them out all except Em. Cynthia backing her up. Wonder just how much of all that Brian was awake for?
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2017 7:08 pm Title: Chapter 16
Vic visits and Brian realizes he has no choice but to wake up and confront Justin. Justin knows he's alive and well. Keller's nurse managed to do the impossible. She was able to contact the one doctor who can fix Brian's pretty face. Sadly Justin was caught by Deb who seems to think she has rights to know everything. Justin found the one person he needs to talk with - Emmett. Justin finally told every off. Hope they take it to heart. Hunter was a nice surprise. He saw Brian differently from the 'family' much the way Justin saw Brian. Cynthia is the first, well second, to find out that Brian is waking up. Her and Lance would make a nice couple.
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2017 3:27 pm Title: Chapter 15
Brian is so lucky that Keller is on his case. Now he's calling in someone he hasn't talked to in almost five years because Brian needs him. Michael only thinks about how Brian's medical crash will effect him, how will he be able to go on without Brian. Such a shame. Emmett is the only one thinking of what Brian would want rather then how what happens will effect him. Why are all the really hot and or brilliant guys such pricks? Justin's not going to win this. With Horvath and Lance on his case he's not going to have a choice. Justin declaring his love. Somehow I don't see it as being this easy.
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2017 2:00 pm Title: Chapter 14
Reliving the worst times of his life is not a good thing for Brian. Probably why he flatlined. Steven finally told Justin why he shouldn't go back and arranged his flight back. Hope Justin doesn't get kidnapped. Lindz looking at her life without Brian. Things are really going to be hard when Mel finds out about the checks Brian has sent them. Melanie dislike Brian on general principal, once she finds out that Lindsay went behind her back all hell is going to break loose. As for Justin he has nothing better to do than think. He's unaware of how much Emmett has risen is Brian's judgement nor that Brian has allies in Lance, Keller and Drew.
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2017 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 13
Unfortunately Deb spoke the truth. Back then everyone turned a blind eye to things that happened. Who knew that Keller had such a history. Michael always was fairly niave, but he was also cruel to Justin. As for Justin, I think deep down he knows something is wrong. Did Ethan send the picture? Why didn't Daphne tell Justin Brian"s message. I can't wait to meet Alexandra
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2017 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 12
Interesting that Ben is the one in communication with Brian. I hope Eli gets in trouble for what he plans to do. Joanie and Claire will NOT get their hands on Brian's money. Deb needs to see, once again, that a mother is not always the best person.
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2017 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 11
Things are bad. As for Michael rescuing Brian, it always seemed to me that whenever Brian had problems the most Michael ever did was tell him why and that it was his fault. No help at all. Glad he has Emmett. His enemies are personal and Brian would use his last breath to save Justin. You come up with the most compelling OC's. First Lance and now Keller. Characters who know Brian better than his 'best friends'. Ben appears to be the only one with any sense.