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Date: May 02, 2017 5:03 am Title: Chapter 57

Emmett knows!  Emmett is very observant.  Much more than Michael ever was.  It looks like Bradford has managed to skip town.  Why?  If anyone can help Brian figure out what's wrong with Ted's proposal it's Cynthia.  Somebody tried to kidnap Katy?  Oh dear Teddy's really done it now.  You've managed to leave us in suspense.

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Date: May 02, 2017 3:42 am Title: Chapter 56

Ted still doesn't understand that Cynthia is smarter and more in tune with Brian than he will ever be.  Little JR is finally coming back to Pittsburgh.  And Justin got his land to build their home.

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Date: May 02, 2017 2:58 am Title: Chapter 55

This party of Emmett's, while well meant, probably isn't wise.  Is Mel going to do something stupid?  Why do I feel there is something fishy about the property Justin wants to buy?  And how is Ted tied to it?

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Date: May 02, 2017 12:36 am Title: Chapter 54

I can't see Brian as being helpless.  Why is it that he can?  Who was it that got away?  I'm surprised that Ted and Melanie bothered to show up for Em's party.  Of course it's not over is it?

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Date: May 01, 2017 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 53

Brian always seems to think that nobody should be able to support him in his hour of need.  Or maybe he has too much pride?  Lindsey's mother needs to get a life.  You know I always thought Lynette was older.  She'd go well with Melanie.  Poor Ron.  I do hope the get-together at the club turns out all right.  Then there is Ted and how he can blame Brian for his faultering relationship with Ted is beyond me.   It looks like Teddy is going to screw himself over once again.  I wonder how the wives of the men arrested for the crime against Brian feel about their spouses.  I hope Craig manages to lose it all. 

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Date: May 01, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 29

WTF is wrong with Ted?! So pissed at him! Jeez....

That little room Brian made: oh my goodness...sad, sweet...

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Date: May 01, 2017 3:39 pm Title: Chapter 52

Just when you thought Brian was fixed, something more needs to be done.  Will he push everyone away again?  Then there's Ted.  How he can listen to Melanie and not see the conniving bitch is beyond me.  Ted still has tunnel vision.  Melanie thought her life was perfect for them, but really it was only for her.  Selfish witch.  Looks like Brian will get away with his plans.

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Date: May 01, 2017 5:41 am Title: Chapter 51

Well, we have one of the culprits - almost.  Follow the money trail.  What does Brian have planned and who is going to tell Justin?

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Date: May 01, 2017 3:49 am Title: Chapter 50

Noooooo!!  You have Cynthia knowing who done it, only they haven't yet and you didn't tell us who!!!!  Okay how is it that no one and I mean no one checked on Brian while Jackson was there.  I knew that pillow was a problem.  Hurray for Emmett!  Now do we learn how everything got so fucked up?

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Date: May 01, 2017 1:33 am Title: Chapter 49

It wasn't bad enough that you had Brian beatened and disfigured, you had to give another crisis?  At least Lindsay is learning she doesn't want to settle as she had in the past.  Deferring to Melanie on most things.  Ron's agreedment to help is good.  Justin has a bad feeling, Cynthia has a bad feeling, McClaren has a bad feeling.  I have one too.

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Date: Apr 30, 2017 4:15 pm Title: Chapter 48

After all the upset of the previous day it's amazing how relaxed Brian is. Mel strikes again as we learn of her influence on Gus.  Gus who sees the truth.  I have to admit you had me scared when Melanie went to Debbie.  Melanie has everything twisted.  Glad Liam showed up.  I'm wondering what Cynthia almost remembers.  

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Date: Apr 30, 2017 3:08 pm Title: Chapter 47

No fair giving us something like that at the end of the last chapter.  McClaren needs to do a better job.  Melanie showed up on Lindsay doorstep.  Fireworks?  Poor delusional Melanie.  McClaren and Justin!?  Then we come to the best part.  Where Ted and Melanie have the unmedigated gall to try to enlist Emmett into their scheme.  Emmett, who is the only one who sees Brian for who and what he really is without the blinders the rest of them have or had.  Too good.

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Date: Apr 30, 2017 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 46

Lindsay is trying to find herself.  She's looked really looked at herself and not liking what she sees.  Katy has been rescued, she's sure she saw someone watching.  McClaren thinks it's the rambling of a child, but the young resident thinks they should listen.  It's scared Brian enough that he wants everyone out of the line of fire.  Now we need to know how much help Ron can be.  Then Melanie shows up.  Who's watching JR? Brian visit to Turnage was something I forgot.  The results even more surprising.

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Date: Apr 30, 2017 3:55 am Title: Chapter 45

It's nice to see how great a friend Emmett is to Brian.  It's disappointing how everyone thinks the kids are safe but nobody has checked to make sure.  I think Katy rescued Gus, but what caused her to have a bleeding on her temple?

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Date: Apr 29, 2017 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 44

Hillard and Keller.  Now that's a pair.  What is it that Brian should tell Turnage?  This chapter makes me ashamed of the history this country shares with this story.  Justin does seem to not trust that people are looking out for Brian?  First the carnival, now the horseback riding?  Problems abound.  Strange how Redding turns out to be connected to someone involved in the Pitts.  How do you manage to keep all the characters straight?

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Date: Apr 29, 2017 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 43

Something about that stupid pillow is coming back to haunt me.  If I were Liam I'd cut Debbie out because inspite of her apparent change of heart there is always the chance that she'll swing back the other way.  Teddy doesn't seem to understand that he could have, should have been fired.  That he could have served jail time.  If things keep up he might just see that.  The story of Daniel is such a sad story.  Do we find out who was the betrayer?  Then someone took a pot shot at Brian and Company?

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Date: Apr 29, 2017 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 42

The description of Justin and Gus painting are so on the money.  Now Brian owes Trina $96 for tickets to an amusement park for a change to ride on a dolphin?  Why do I feel that leaving Brian with Jackson is not a good thing?  Will Liam go after Debbie?  One hopes.  None is so blind as those who will not see.  Describes Deb.  Katy would have set Deb straight in a flat minute.  Katy who could rule the world.

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Date: Apr 29, 2017 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 41

Wonder what Quinn has in mind for Melanie?  Where does Justin get the idea that Ted has been there for Brian?  When Justin first met Brian Ted constantly made snide comments about Brian.  Brian rescued Ted several times and while Ted at one point became the best friend that Michael wasn't capable of being at the time, he seemed to fell that he was too good for Brian's company.  The people on the home front are working hard. Will it pay off?  Nick, Shirley, Hillard.  They all have pieces of the puzzle.  Can they figure it out in time?  Now we have Melanie using JR to get Michael to side with her.  Thank goodness for sensible Ben.  Thank goodness for Liam, one more tragidy overted.  Then there's someone connected in the area that could cause harm.  That's scary.

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Date: Apr 29, 2017 3:53 am Title: Chapter 40

Brian's dreams bring in things he'd long since forgotten.You've given us a peek into what happens nine years down the line.  A new lawyer, a new character.  How did I miss a meeting at the courthouse?   Liam, Pretty Boy?, is going to be a big help.  Amazingly I think Ted is going to survive but Melanie has burned her bridges.  I have to feel sorry for JR.  Mel's in debt and Michael is no help financially.  Brian doesn't have to do anything for her and Justin went pittbull on her.  

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Date: Apr 28, 2017 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 39

Gus is back with his daddy!  That Gus sure can talk.  With a puppy who evidently loves Brian.  Looks like payback is coming Ted and Melanie's way.   Teddy is still trying to make his fall all about Brian.  Love the puppy's name.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                

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Date: Apr 28, 2017 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 38

Guilt.  Both feeling it because of the prom.  Though when you think about it who brings a bat to a prom?  One feeling it because his dad was involved in the others beating.  He didn't make his dad be involved.  Mocha frosting!  Sometimes I wish they would have a threesome  Brian, Justin, and McClaren.  Then McClaren would have someone.  I like Nicholas, hope nothing bad happens to him.  

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Date: Apr 28, 2017 12:27 am Title: Chapter 37

Perhaps Ted has had a change of heart.  Melanie, the viper, is sure to come to her just deserts.  You've mentioned that pillow before, Brian doesn't complain without cause.  Interesting that you brought up the history of Bailey's Landing.  Wouldn't it be something if Emmett turned out to be related to Lillian.  Love how McClaren will go after Justin because it was best for Brian.  

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Date: Apr 27, 2017 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 36

Darn, I was hoping for much worse for Ted.  He got off easy.  You gave Mathis instructions and didn't let us in on the plans.  So cruel.  Love how Cynthia lit into Debbie and by extention Mel.  Then finding out that Melanie never filled the papers that Brian signed or formally adopted Gus was icing on the cake.  It was obvious that Cynthia enjoyed every moment of nailing their asses to the carpet.  Love all the little flashbacks that remind us of how unfair they were to Brian.  McClaren and Justin go at it.  Who won?  Looks like an attack is planned.  Sad that McFed hasn't spotted it.

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Date: Apr 27, 2017 7:56 pm Title: Chapter 35

Obviously the place where Brian is staying needs better soundproofing.  Ted's in for it now.  He's given Gus away.  This is one of the most exciting chapters with a showdown.  Teddy, Melanie, and Debbie along with Joan and Claire against Brian.  We learn of how Cynthia and Brian met. And we have Brian show up even if only on the phone.  Now how do Debbie and Melanie take everything.  What will happen to Ted.  Personally I'd like to see him thrown in jail, but I guess that's wishful thinking. 

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Date: Apr 27, 2017 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 22

So Justin is a genius, so please tell me he's not fooled by this that he knows Brian well enough to know that he's full of s*** and just pushing everyone away for the obvious reason. Please tell me that Justin's going to be doing his own investigation and finding out that Chris is a plant. I don't want to have to read another 40 chapters knowing I'm Brian hurt Justin....uuggghhhh!

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