Date: Feb 26, 2017 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 4: Ghosts of Past
This Evan guy freaks me out.
Date: Feb 26, 2017 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 3: The New Job
Oliver seems okay. Brian must really miss Justin to get drunk with Daphne at his old apartment.
Date: Feb 26, 2017 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 2: Finding His Way
A job at a gay bar? I'm not sure that's a good idea.
Date: Feb 26, 2017 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: Moving In
Izzy seems to be different but a good kind of different. Let's see how it turns out for Justin.
Date: Nov 02, 2016 2:59 am Title: Chapter 47: Good Life
Absolutely loved this. On my bookshelf and hope to read more of Baby Purry too.
Author's Response:
Thank you! There's more on Baby Purry in the side-story called Baby Purry's Adventures =)
Date: Nov 01, 2016 7:18 pm Title: Chapter 47: Good Life
This chapter is very funny: I love how you had Gus in between them and interacting so freely even when it's about their sex life.
The earplugs and a soundproof room for his birthday was hilarious, just after "You can fuck now."
Brian is not ashamed, as usual; Justin can still turn red as soon as he has an audience, but can draw a very graphic comic.
Regarding your last comments, it's a pity that people can be so mean. Sure, there were some parts that I found "difficult" to read, but it's your story and you have every right to manage it the way you want.
I love all stories you wrote until now and I so hope you will post soon (maybe one with lots of humor such as "It's Complicated").
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and constantly sharing your thoughts on my story. I appreciate it.
I hope to post somethign new soon, too. But I don't have much time...thus, I'm answering reviews a month later.
Date: Nov 01, 2016 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 47: Good Life
Excellent job, Rody!! So sad to see the story end here but B & J are eternal in whatever verse they turn up in. I'm glad that you stuck to YOUR story regardless of the feedback. If you hadn't the story wouldn't have been as effective or memorable as NYSoM (and the others in this verse) is. This will definitely be one of those fics that I read over and over again. You always put so much detail into the story that I always feel like I've missed something and feel compelled to read it again and again until I catch every nuance of your storytelling. Continue to grow in your gift Darling and to hell with the naysayers! Use them as motivation, if anything at all. Those of us who love your work will continue to take the journey with you!
Congrats on finishing yet another fascinating tale!!
Many HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. Still laughing HARD at Gus!! Poor baby!! LMAO!
Author's Response:
Thank you for sticking around for their tumultuous journey. =)
Hehe! I'm a sucker for details. There will always be too many details in my stories. Sometimes, so many the entire plot goes puff!
Date: Nov 01, 2016 2:48 pm Title: Chapter 47: Good Life
It was such a pleasure to be able to get the "sneak peak" at this being a beta for you... thank you for trusting me enough to do that with you...
You are a fantastic writer, and I'm glad you didn't just delete this story... you know I wasn't a fan of Evan's and was mad at Brian myself for his "cheating"... but your writing made it ok, and I had faith and kept with it and I was VERY happy with the ending... :)
Author's Response:
I should be thanking you for putting up with me and my crazy schedule. I'm glad I didn't delete it, too. =)
I'm a sucker for happy endings, so as much angst and drama as I love to write, my stories will have a happy ending.
Date: Sep 16, 2016 8:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: Moving In
Finally going to take a stab at this story - got a long plane trip today, so it'll be my reading materiel of choice. TAG
Author's Response:
Several years later...I answer =)) Not quite, but yeah. Thank you so much for trying my story. I hope you're enjoying it.
Date: Aug 03, 2016 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 46: Another Level
Poor Brian with his ego so crashed! At least, he didn't break a leg or an arm.
That's nice to know there will be an epilogue. Will you write about the trip to Australia?
Date: Jul 31, 2016 8:24 pm Title: Chapter 45: Dream Holiday
Wonderful chapter: I loved how you brought THE subject back after so many years.
Funny how they met with the hot couple once more; only to let them with their cocoa.
As Brian used to say: something came up...
Date: Jul 31, 2016 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 44: Best Birthday Ever
Yeah, they did it!!! Best birthday present ever!
I especially loved:
"It is better than in my dreams," Justin said in a rough voice, sniffing. "How can I top that speech?"
Brian put his tongue in his cheek, watching him amused. "You can't, 'cause you're the bottom."
Justin gasped outraged, while Ben and Michael burst out laughing.
"Says my occasionally pussy boy?"
Date: Jul 25, 2016 3:16 am Title: Chapter 43: Romantic Gesture
oh my - a very romantic gesture- can't wait for the next update
Date: Jul 24, 2016 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 43: Romantic Gesture
This going to be a romantic in the next chapter
Date: Jul 24, 2016 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 43: Romantic Gesture
Yeah!! Gus is too cute; as for Brian, it seems he went into overdrive.
Can't wait to see the surprise!
Date: Jul 20, 2016 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 42: Gym lessons
not wanting this to end- sad
Date: Jul 20, 2016 3:45 pm Title: Chapter 42: Gym lessons
Excellent!!
I loved these parts more:
"I'm more into twinks with baby fat." Brian elbowed him in the ribs.
"Fuck you, Kinney."
"Here?"
Justin choked on his remark.
"Cat got your tongue, Sunshine?"
With courage he didn't know he possessed, Justin took Brian's hand, holding his chin high. "I'm his personal massager and I know how to work his knot like no one else."
Brian held his laugh until they were in the shower.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 41: Home
This movie: it's true that some dialogs were lame but you forget about that once they start dancing; and the music is intoxicating.
As for Patrick, they are no words or adjectives strong enough to describe him... Gahhhhhhh!
In a straight world, Penny (Cynthia Rhodes) and Brian would have made a beautiful couple.
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2016 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 12: Sweet Temptation
Cringing....scared....lol
Date: Jul 13, 2016 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 40: Gus's Birthday
Finally, Brian shows his real face with the kids; Mel seems surprised though. It's strange that Justin is not that keen on having Gus for the summer.
I just hope it won't cause a problem between them.
Great chapter!
Date: Jul 12, 2016 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 39: Father Figure
Brian's shopping habits are painful for Justin but when he shops with/for his son it's maybe worse.
Justin is down to earth and very patient. But he wants to be there for both of them.
I loved "Daddy, it's not nice to talk with your mouth full. You have to always swallow first."
Date: Jul 09, 2016 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 38: Protective
Loving this story. Like it that Brian and Justin made up and love stories about gus
Date: Jul 08, 2016 3:12 am Title: Chapter 10: Desire
I finally had time to read this wonderful story. I read one of the books but its been so long ago. No worries, I don't think I'm missing anything. Evan is scary- well as far as relationship with Brian and Justin. Justin needs to trust Brian but I fear Brian may screw up and if he does they need to work on it together. Romantic at heart- B/J forever
Date: Jul 06, 2016 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 38: Protective
I love how you write the relationship between Gus and his Daddies and how he wants to get them for himself.
I love how Brian is so protective for his son (and Justin).
Date: Jul 06, 2016 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 37: Lazy Sunday
Brian rebranding Barbie: I can't wait to read about that!
«Brian laughed loudly. "You think we get him horny?"» about the cat... It's so much fun that Justin is freaking about the cat and his bits.