[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2017 3:35 am Title: Chapter 15
Love how Ted tells Michael off. then you top it with Jen telling Deb off. It's time that Deb learned the truth about where the money she lent her son went to.
Date: Mar 31, 2017 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
I'm almost expecting to hear Mr. Roarke yell out to Deb and Michael "Welcome to Fantasy Island". I mean...delusional much?!?! She is going to discover pretty quickly just how little she's really thought of on Liberty. Todd said it right. People came for the Brian and Justin show, not her and her man-child.
While Deb and Michael are in their own little worlds, Lindsey is very much in the here and now. Much mroe dangerous I think. She's able to use adn manipulate far more that Deb and Michael are I think. She's devious, which in turn makes her dangerous. Still hsa that sense of entitlement though. She was hoping to stay with Deb for free. At least Deb will make her get off her ass if she wants a place to lay her head. As much as she's willing to blackmail Michael, I have no idea where he's going to get any $$ to pay her off with. His idea of going to Ted is going to be a flop.
Hmmm. gotta wonder about Lindsey's motivations here. She's not as interested in the goings on in Brian's life, but is having justin followed. A bit apprehensive about that I must say. Thankfully Mel is on the ball and has informed Justin and Brian. Looks like all 3 (maybe Ted too?) will be off to Chicago.
I gotta say, I am over the moon that Ted is the baby daddy!! He won't presume too much, but will be supportive and a terrific father and friend to Mel.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 31, 2017 4:13 pm Title: Chapter 14
At least, Brian will be able to "see" his daughter growing up. But, that's freaky.
Date: Mar 31, 2017 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
Deb is getting a well deserved feedback from her favorite customers: she lost them.
Mel is finally doing the right thing for Gus and herself. I'm so happy she emptied the shared accounts.
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2017 1:38 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow, delusional much. Debbie actually thinking that the new diner would hirer her. Then Michael borrowed money from Deb and didn't use it for what he told her he would. Can't wait for her to find out. If they think Ted's going to help them out with money they have another think coming. I think Liberty will be back to the diner once Deb is gone. Looks like Mel may be moving to Chicago, wonder if it means that Ted's going to be moving too.
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2017 12:46 am Title: Chapter 14
Deb got the ultimate slap from Liberty Avenue they all left the diner and are avoiding it like a plague, of course once they find out Deb and Michael are gone I bet they will be coming back. (They better come back or Kiki is going to kick Deb and Michael's Asses)
The manager had to cut the dead weight so he can get butts in seats and revenue back into the diner.
Deb has as much chance of getting into the new diner as Lindsay has of her art getting into MoMA.
Chicago is a good move for Brian, Justin and their family I also think it is a good move for Mel and Ted aswell as the baby.
Why is Lindsay so fixated on Hannah??
The Plot Thickens
Date: Mar 31, 2017 12:12 am Title: Chapter 14
Good for Deb!!! Sanctimonious twit! Her delusions of grandeur are the stuff of legends, LOL. I'm glad that everyone left the Diner to really show what Deb and Michael's presence really means to them. I only feel bad for Kiki because she shouldn't have had her tips suffer for the Novotny arrogance. I hope the manager makes that up to her in some financial way. Debbie thinks that she's going to get a job at the new restaurant and run the Diner out of business, huh? I suspect that once word gets around that Debbie no longer works there, the patrons will be splitting their time between both places and not a loudmouth Novotny in sight!
Lindsay is really a treacherous bitch. What's funny is that while she is trying to dig Mel into a ditch, she's really digging herself into a grave of obscurity. Her 'self-preservation' approach to life is really backfiring on her, especially now that she is going to be living with Deb and Michael. LOL we'll long that lasts, LMAO!
Now Michael is on his way to Ted to 'borrow' money because he duped his mother into giving him money. This ought to be interesting! I can't wait until all of the doors are slammed in his irresponsible, lying face and he has to burst Deb's bubble that he's a perfect child.
I'm glad that Mel is opting to get out of the Pitts too. I hope Ted does as well but I also think Justin is right about Michael and Lindsay. Whereas Michael might stay in the Pitts because fanfic forbid he might actually grow a pair of balls of his own and stop wearing Debs, Lindsay is like Glenn Close in Fatal Attraction, refusing to be ignored. Hopefully she will do something that proves her a danger to herself so that any rights to Gus are permanently taken away. At the very least, she should get jail time for basically stalking Justin, especially with a young child involved. If that's not the actions of a delusional, jealous and spiteful woman, what is?! Dammit where are all the good hitmen and women when needed?
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Mar 31, 2017 12:05 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow, the characters are getting spanked! Lindsay seems the most dangerous. Tho, Deb is bound to get more pissed. I hope Brandon doesn't end up with a black eye.
i agree, go to Chicago, but remember they travel.
Date: Mar 31, 2017 12:03 am Title: Chapter 13
Damn! Mikey got played. That sucks, lol. Lindsay had them followed unbelievable! Not sure what her angle is other getting to Brian. I wonder what she had planned. Poor miserable Mel.
Date: Mar 31, 2017 12:03 am Title: Chapter 14
Yeah, we're all moving to Chicago! Get Ted to move too. I know Jen still lives in the Pitts but she can visit.
Date: Mar 30, 2017 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 13
I knew I always liked Kiki! Thanks for setting the record straight about Brian and Justin.
I'm glad Mel and Brian are going to support each other. And thank you for making Ted the daddy. I always thought he was a better choice over Michael.
Date: Mar 30, 2017 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 13
That was The best chapter. Deb being told off, ha ha . Linz with no money. Great.
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2017 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oooooo That's Gotta Hurt Eh Deb?
Brandon and his friends were only hanging with Michael for Brian and now that Brian isn't around they can find a new place to eat with better service lol
Wonder how management feels about Deb turning away paying customers and using the place to find Michael New Cool Kids to hang with, cause I don't see Deb stopping in her crusade to find Michael New friends who will bow to both their whims, pouting, tantrums and Deb's very loud nagging???
Mel is being smart by telling Brian what Lindsay was up to while they were gone and about the detective, Brian can give all that info to his lawyer to strengthen his case.
Does Lynnette and her husband really want to get dragged into this drama because this could get bloody?
Now what is Lindsay going to do without her money? <evil laugh>
Date: Mar 30, 2017 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yea Mel!!!! You cut Lindsey off at the pass.
I hope that Brian uses the detective reports against her to get Gus. She's such a bitch.
Date: Mar 30, 2017 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
Take THAT Bitchzilla!!!! Not feeling so superior now, huh? Mel and Ted were smart to start the process of extricating Mel from Lindsay since that witch is on a crash collision course with epic failure!
Deb got her and Michael's ass handed to her. Kiki and the other patron let the truth out so that Brandon and his friends would know just how pathetic they really are. HA!!!! No one likes the mama's boy or his mama. That must have been a real sour lemon to suck. Jaws tired yet, Deb?! LMAO
As for Brian and Mel's talk, I'm glad they have everything laid out in the open. Mel showed maturity in admitting that she knows Brian wouldn't do what she did to him and that she trusted him with Gus. Her also admitting that Brian was an awesome father was emotional. I don't think he would have ever expected to hear that from her. So happy they are joining up to defeat the Wicked Bitch of the East!!
Teddy's gonna be a DADDY!!! YAYYYYYYY!!!! Thanks be to the fanfic gods, it won't be that deranged dumbass Michael. Give the kid a fighting chance!Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2017 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 13
HA HA YES Thats what you get _itch. Love this freaking story
Thanks
~Teresa~
Date: Mar 30, 2017 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
Served you right cunty b"""""h! After all this time you were monitoring both Justin and Brian?!such evil woman you are Lindsay!!when Brian take you to court for custody,i hope they will send you to prison for felony...and yeah better Mel left you without a penny bcoz of everything you did..
Hahahaha so Deb new friends you said??when they are insulting you and your beloved son..I think I'm going to like Brandon in this one..
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2017 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
My oh my. Ted is the father, you know I think he'd make a great one. Lindsay tried to pull a fast one but Mel beat her to it. LOL.
Date: Mar 30, 2017 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 12
So...WOW! I was not expecting Mel to do that. She's had this all planned out for ages! Am curious though. At the start of the chapter, she's wishing she had made Michael sign away his rights, but then she claims the baby isn't Michael's anyway. I'm guessing she was just saying that to make it look good, as that was what they did with Brian. So happy that the baby isn't Michael's! Amn alive! she can really be free of all of them. I'm thrilled beyond measure that she's going to testify for Brian in any custody hearing.
That last part.GUH! You always give that last 1 line don't you. That one that either makes us have a viseral reaction. It's just great that you are able to do that.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 30, 2017 2:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
Damn, that's a bad day. I hate to say in but irl she has a case. If they were married before common law marriage was abolished then they could meet the standard, which would mean treat as if properly married. Don't you just hate it when people force reality onto fantasy, lol. That said, Mel was out cold. Seriously, that was cruel and unusual. Linds is no prize, but damn. And Deb poor Deb. What a mess.
In other news the boys are back together... Yay!!
Date: Mar 30, 2017 1:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
Like I said, y'all need to stay in yo lanes. Folks is gettin slammed around here. Dang, can you say that didn't go well? Poor Linds, not!
Yay, Brian is in love!!
Date: Mar 30, 2017 1:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Whoa whoa, this is take no prisoners. I bet Deb thinks twice before trying to take on the group again... Cuz they ain't playin'.
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2017 11:04 am Title: Chapter 12
I love Melanie!!!! She's such a bitch :D
Date: Mar 30, 2017 10:43 am Title: Chapter 12
Holy shit! Go Mel! I'm so glad she's on Brian's side in all of this. Things are starting to look up.
So glad our boys got a night to reconnect. :)
Date: Mar 30, 2017 5:52 am Title: Chapter 12
Yes!!that's the Mel we always knowand love...The tigress and pitbull that she always are..Now Lindsay take that cunty b""""""h,now you can go run along and tell your bestiest whiny brat and loving mommy Deb about what happen and the best news about their failed upcoming baby shower😅😅
Can't wait for Brian and Mel.join forces to get Gus stay with his father and sister..
So excited for the next chapter..