[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2017 4:09 am Title: Chapter 5
Ok Emmett is on the Justin train. I'm glad he went to Ben to find out the truth. Shame Ben took the easy way out with Michael and Justin's expense. Ted is learning that he needs to change. Now things are about to blow.
Date: Mar 11, 2017 3:19 am Title: Chapter 5
I have gone back to thinking you are the devil...Really!!! Leaving it there? It's like you're trying to drive me crazy(though admittedly, it's a short trip). How could you make me hate Ben in one scene? I cannot wait for the next update....Hint, hint, hint. Another great story.
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2017 12:34 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm not sure but I think Ted is getting the message that what Mikey thinks isn't the way things are. This is what shoulda been, so I'm looking forward to what will be.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
I can't believe you actually have me liking Lindsay. I still hate that Emmett and Ted are being jerks but I'm still with you.
Thanks for the update.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is what I love about fanfiction. Taking a character and making them slightly different, but also keeping them within the realms of possiblity. I can totally see Emmett this way. Not mean or anything, but conflicted and easily swayed by those he considers friends and easily manipulated too. Nobody has pointed ut his, Ted's or Michael's behaviour to him because they only stick to themselves. Michael keeps everyone else at bay.
Blake was brilliant! Complete truth teller, and made Emmett question things that, till now, have seemed proper. Those who are being manipulated, in many cases, don't see it happening. Shame that Michael's influence on Ted and Emmett caused T&B's relationship to end. Will Ted see it as such or will he still be misguided?
Brian is sure in what he wants and it Justin. He's not going to take Michael's crap or Deb's either. wondering if Deb is going to be blindly backing up Michael or will she also see that Brian deserves to have a life?
Am already completely hooked and looking forward to more.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 10, 2017 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
It's unusual for Emmett, but he went to ask Blake, instead of going to Deb or Michael. I hope he won't get worse than that.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2017 3:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
How refreshing this is the Emmett at the beginning of the series. And Blake certainly told him the truth. Maybe Emmett will be able to help. As for Ted, this is what he was like as well. I'm going to enjoy this particular story just as much as all your others.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 11:42 am Title: Chapter 3
Please don't let them ruin Brian's first relationship. He's making progress and evolving. Can't wait for the boys weekend with Gus.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2017 11:19 am Title: Chapter 3
Awesome.......micheal is such a bastard ...poor blake... cant wait for more....thank for posting.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 11:00 am Title: Chapter 3
What did you do to Em??? I'm just joking, he was fine in context. I just never get to complain about your stories so... Lol
OMG you have a very interesting set up, Mikey is in a relationship sabotaging everyone else and being enabled by the same. I can't believe he was sitting on the car. Someone (all of them) need to find a back bone and some smarts. Even Brian, he said the right things but he seemed to neglect finishing Mikey and making things crystal. If he wants Justin it's going to require some work.
Im loving it!!!
Date: Mar 10, 2017 8:53 am Title: Chapter 3
I like your fresh take on the ways Mikey's obsessiveness adversely affects not only B and J, but also Ted and Blake. I'm not disliking Emmett (yet?), but I enjoy seeing him conflicted. Well done!
Date: Mar 10, 2017 6:06 am Title: Chapter 3
Already sucked into this story.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2017 5:19 am Title: Chapter 2
Great going....i like it.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 2:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Love it already!!!â¤
Date: Mar 10, 2017 1:04 am Title: Chapter 2
Ok, I liked this too. It is so easy for me to stay with the Lindsay is a nut job and Melanie is a huge bitch. Truthfully, two days ago I decided I was tired of that and was looking to read something they weren't in. Well, here they are and I don't have to hate them. YIPPEE. I count that as a win.
I could say I felt that about Michael, too. But, I love to hate him. Weird I know.
This is refreshing. More please.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so different. It worked though. Different sets of circumstances change us all.
I liked 'this' Brian and Justin. As always, I'm a sucker for them to fall in love.
I'll keep reading.
Yes, very interesting. Thanks
Date: Mar 10, 2017 12:43 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like this story!
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love the way this is going! Justin is smart and Brian seems ready - what a terrific idea. And I'm never adverse to the shadow of Mikey in the background, needing to be put in his place. Thank you for writing.
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking the changes in characters. Lindsay is pleased for Brian and Melanie isn't jealous. Gus, of course, is a little sweetheart. Now we just have to see if Mikey runs true to form.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm so loving this story. I like how open Brian is about his feelings. Gus is a riot. I can totally picture him walking around with no pants on.
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Good that Lindsey, Mel and Brian will have a positive realtionship in this one. Enjoyed their intereactions. Exciting for Lindsey to be able to use her art with Justin's business, and I like how she gave him a heds up about Michael.
Justin was up front about his interaction wiht Michael as well. all seem to starting things off on solid ground. Brian really wants to persue this with Justin.
Michael's head is going to spin off once he finds out who Brian is involved with, LOL!
Date: Mar 09, 2017 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Mel and Lindsey seem to be very nice and friendly with both Brian and Justin.
Gus is so much fun with his "queening" about his clothes.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love this beginning; Brian isn't desperate yet and I'm happy Justin saw that there might be more to come.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Terrific start to what will undoubtedly be another terrific story. Loving the fact that you are so keen on writing, and that you have so many ideas.
Curious as to why Michael is being beligerant to Justin. Is Ben talking about him? Praising him as a student and Michael is being a jealous idiot? I'm assuming the 2 guys that pulled him away were Ted and Emmett? Have to say, I may be one of the few who are looking forward to reading Ted and Emmett being misguided about Justin. I've often mentioned that it would be in interesting aspect to the story line. Of course they come around fairly quickly as they both figure out what's really going on, but it makes for something new and interesting. Their loyalties would naturally be with their "friend" Michael.
Brian is taking the initiative. Great!! That they took their time before sex again showed Justin that brian is serious. Can't wait for them to return to the Pitts! What Michael's reaction is going to be will be amusing I'm sure.
Great start!! Definitely looking forward to more! Kind of jealous of Lorie as she gets to read everything first. LOL.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the variety in your stories. Brian is the Brian he could have been. Justin is independant from the get go. Michael is an irritant, so nothings changed there. lol.