Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 5:47 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oh thank goodness Brian is smart enought to see through Michael's crap! Ted too. Hopefully between Ted, Emmett and Justin, Blake will be able to see that Ted was doing his job and not running to Michael. It may take awhile, Blake is understandably mistrustful of the whole thing. can't blame him a bit. 

those sweet moments between B&J always make me smile! Always gives me a happy feeling especially in amongst all teh angst going on with the others. Brian knows his prioroties. Justin is comfortable in this realtionship.

Good that Brian went right away to confront Ben and got the answers he needed. they will all have a deeper understanding of what lengths Michael will actually go to get what he wants. Hwo far will Michael try to go with this? How much trouble will Ben get in or will he be able to avoid it? Hopefully this will be the reality check he needs to stop using.

So glad you updated already! Was waiting on pins and needles to see what was going to happen. 

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 3:48 pm Title: Chapter 12

Once again, you throw a facinating twist into the mix. Chris as the step-brother, Molly being so against Justin. All very interesting and am really looking forward to what you're going to do there. Completely threw me for a loop. Love it!

Hopefully Justin opens up to Brian about everything going on with the family. As much as he's always dealt with it before, he has support from Brian now and he should use it. If nothing else, Brian would definitely understand.

 So the roids explains Ben's behaviour a bit. Still, doesn't excuse it though. Seems like he has a whole ton of shit to deal with and is using roids to assist. Seems like Ben fell back into it, where as Blake had Brian to be a real friend, 'cause really, there's no real difference between them. Addict is addict. Does Ben or Michael differentiate between the 2 I wonder?

As for Michael. My goodness. He really is a manipulative little asshole isn't he? So many ways this can play out. I can only hope that Brian doesn't fall for it, or that he at least keeps a hands off approach. Mind you, after the incident at the diner, knowng that Ben is using again, I can't see him just ignoring it. Just the thing Michael is hoping for and will use to his advantage. Oh I hope it doesn't work. I hope that they are able to figure out he did it to himself. I mean they'd only have to look at Ben's hands to see that he didn't do anything. As much as Michael is manipulative, he doesn't really tend to think things through. He jumps at an opportunity rather than making any kind of plan. Really is a dumb ass!

Brutal cliff hanger there Star!!! 

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 10:51 am Title: Chapter 12

This is a new low even for Michael.  I hope Brian doesn't fall for his nonsense.

I hope Justin will talk to Brian about his family more.  It's so obvious they love each other and want to take care of one another.  Daphne is right, don't hide the bad.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 8:24 am Title: Chapter 12

What a bastard micheal is!???? Lieing piece of shit... i so wanna kill him here. What a story...i like it very much... thank u for updating.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 6:28 am Title: Chapter 12

Poor Justin still dealing with those people in his life. ..Let Molly live her life the way she pleases and live yours,atleast for once Justin shouldn't be thinking about her at all if she's just being a brat towards him...I love how Brian being supportive..

I hope Ben really did beat that whiny brat,if he's planning to use it to get to Brian,but hoping B won't believe it for a minute...

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 4:02 am Title: Chapter 12

Wow Michael is a piece of work.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 1:19 am Title: Chapter 12

So Ben wanna tango, well Brian's got some moves for ya brother, lol.  Omg all the anger and dare I say rage?  Ok, no way how did you find a way to make Craig and Chris worse? Seriously that is just ick and Dad should never ask Justin to come.  ick!

Emmett and Ted deserved the cold shoulder.  I love Ted and Blake together, but Ted will need to prove himself.

Oh No He Didn't!! I have no words.  Zero.  He deserves whatever is coming.

Please Brian don't answer the phone.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 1:11 am Title: Chapter 12

If Ben is consistent with his steroid abuse then Michael is consistent with playing the victim so Brian can come and save him, only this time I hope Brian ignores his pitiful cries and he tells him to figure it out for himself.

Justin needs to do to Molly what Brian is doing to Michael let her go and see if she figures out the truth herself.

The next chapter is going to be interesting :)

 

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 11

glad to see that Gus isn't fooled by Michael's games. Kids are smart. Good on him.

Good plain hard truths that Brian told Michael and in particular Ben. Ben is still being a dick mainly cause he's using again. doesn't excuse the fact that he started this whole thing by using Justin. He still hasn't come clean to Michael about it, and still makes excuses for his behavior. I like Justin's truth too. That Ben needed to make shit up to keep Michael's interest.

Deb was great sitting on the sidelines like that. I can totally visulaize her asking the diners what's what. Like that she's not taking everything from Michael as golden and has opened her eyes to him and hsi ways.

Nice day at the Zoo. Perhaps there's hope for Emmett and Ted to be brought into B&J's circle. I think Justin will still want them to prove themselves. Can't blame him. 

Will Justin catch onto what Brian was saying?

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 7:06 am Title: Chapter 10

Gus is adorable...cute.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 5:11 am Title: Chapter 10

Gus is so funny and seems to like spending time with Justin.

Brian shouldn't have said he was going to smoke when he went to call Ted and smoke. But, it seems Justin didn't catch that.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 3:07 am Title: Chapter 11

Looks like NOTHING has gone Bugs and Daffy's way, LMAO!!!! I was so PROUD of Brian for telling it like it is, Justin for knocking Michael on his ass and finally Deb for asking before automatically believing her lying ass offspring. Brian is reclaiming his life and I couldn't be happier! Also laughed out loud when Emmett told Ben the absolute truth about Michael's motive for marrying Ben and Brian asked the really important question of why Michael actually said yes to marriage. Hopefully all of the side effects of Ben's steroid use will be turned on Michael. Yeah... there is NO LOVE lost from me for the Pricks of Liberty this fic!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

P.S. Let's hear it for those Diner patrons too!! WHOO-HOO!!!!! Take that Dumb and Doofus!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2017 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 10

Go Justin!  You tell him.  Michael is such an ass.  He's losing everyone in his life.

 

I love Brian/Justin/Gus time.  I can totally picture Gus running around naked, my nephews used to do that all the time.  They just hated to have clothes on. lol