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Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2017 5:27 pm Title: Witchy Woman

Poor Reece, having nightmares...Avery is so sweet. Justin & Brian are going to be so pissed at Georgie, he's in so much trouble!

OMG two Justin Taylor's in Pittsburgh?! Of course there is! 



Author's Response:

Yeah, Reece still is struggling. Avery is adorable, have to keep him that way. Georgie's name will be mud soon enough. Glad your not mad about the temp scare with Justin. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2017 2:35 pm Title: Witchy Woman

Shame Avery got lost, that was scary.  Good think they have GPS, now if only they get him a kitten.  Poor Brian thinking the worse only to find his husband roaming the halls of a hospital.  Very nice chapter with lots of humor.



Author's Response:

Lol, maybe a kitten will come into the picture. It would be funny to see Brian vs. a sweet little kitten. Thanks, glad you liked it. I tried mix angst with humor which is kind of hard. 

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2017 1:40 pm Title: Witchy Woman

Well at least the last line lightened the mood.

Brian is going to get medieval on George for the tattoo and losing Avery.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the end bit. Yes, Brian is going to freak out on Georgie. 

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2017 4:32 am Title: Dead

Lol'd at 'Thug Lite'. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2017 4:29 am Title: Sinners and saints

Road Trip!!!  Lol! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2017 4:04 am Title: Fate

Just catching up on this story - I'd left it so long I had to go back and read from the beginning. I'm glad you're a couple of chapters ahead though, since this is a nasty cliffhanger all around. Craig killing Hobbs, Brian and Justin sorta separated, and then the accident with Michael... that's a lot to fit in one chapter! Lol! TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2017 2:01 pm Title: Dead

Bahahahaha too funny! Caleb is a thug, right! lol Why even let the young ones go into a tattoo parlor? Where were they? Brian is going to kill them! Hopefully Justin will be able to pacify him, for a little bit...good luck boys! 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2017 5:46 am Title: Sinners and saints

Lindsay and her ignorant ass husband need their asses MOLLYWHOPPED!! I mean, what the.... Yeah....I wanted to go through the screen and uppercut his balls! Seriously! 

Now lawd ham turkey, the kids are going to Florida with what essentially could be called a straight "Emmett" when he's had one too many cosmos? I hope Reece can protect them because I doubt Georgie is going to be ANY help! LOL

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: harperj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2017 4:01 am Title: Sinners and saints

So excited to see an update.  Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2017 1:33 am Title: Sinners and saints

I'm sorry.  I love your story, but when I got to the uncle in the church with his dick out I had to stop reading.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry it upset you. But understand. Thank you for reading up to this part anyway. Take care. 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2017 2:24 pm Title: Sinners and saints

Well this should be quite an adventure for the young ones and Reece...God help them! lol

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2017 4:09 pm Title: Help

Wow...this was a rough one...so many feels and tears...at least Michael knows he needs help & acutally wants it. 
Good for Jenny, finally knowing she needs to get away, have something for herself but that young woman really needs some therapy too. 

Really thought we were going to loose Micahel there for a minute. So many going through so much. Avery: poor little dude...

Brian & Justin will prevail, they are stong! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2017 3:08 pm Title: Help

You say this is sad, but what I see is Michael finally asking for help.  Avery hearing that Justin doesn't plan on leaving Brian for a cop.  And Justin planning to talk with Brian about what the cop asked him to do.  

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2017 5:43 pm Title: Fate

OMG Craig had Hobbs killed?! Will wonders never cease...wow



Author's Response:

Lol, I do try to be shocking.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Fate

So Justin wasn't responsible for Hobbs' death.  His dad was.  That's a twist I never saw coming.  Is Michael gone?  Is Jenny okay.  It wasn't her fault and I hope the police tell her that.



Author's Response:

Next chapter is going to be sad, I will warn of that.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2017 2:38 pm Title: Fate

There is bad news here!  Thank you for this chapter a little scary, I hope the next will be less stressful



Author's Response:

Don't get your hopes up, lol.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 10:04 pm Title: Cody

Very worried about Justin. Freaking Cody...omg that's so not good!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 12:36 am Title: Cody

I'm still worried about Justin here ... TAG

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2017 10:26 pm Title: Cody

WOW!!! Justin is in some serious shit if what he suspects he said is true! Let's hope that no one in the bar heard him or that Cody is still around lurking. 

The scene after Justin's introspection was hilarious! Just as normal as my siblings, cousins and I which tells you a lot about holidays around my house. It's a veritable ZOO!

Hopefully Brian isn't getting himself into a mess. If he's anywhere near Michael or trying to find out more info about Chris Hobbs' death, he surely will be. Jeez, this family has had enough turmoil and trouble to last them a lifetime!

Looking forward to MORE! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2017 9:46 pm Title: Cody

Oh this is bad.  Justin ordering a hit?  Where is Brian?

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 6:45 am Title: The Hit

This sounds like a very bad idea, Justin . . . TAG

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Date: Apr 27, 2017 6:34 am Title: The Homecoming

I'm feeling that same foreboding as Justin. Hope it's not too bad . . . TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 6:13 am Title: Moving

Love Harley! And now we get to meet Anna. What s great family our boys have amassed! TAG

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2017 10:06 pm Title: The Hit

Oh my... the tangled webs!!! Cody is back on the scene?? I hope he doesn't involve Justin. Maybe Chris owed money to the mob or something....Or maybe it had something to do with Hobbs' wife, who we have yet to hear about... Oh the possibilities are ENDLESS here! 

As for Jenny's husband, Rodger, God I wanted to punch him in the mouth! Why is she married to that asinine bully?! Being Mel's daughter, I can't imagine that she would allow that kind of abuse to happen to her. Once again, I want to floor Michael and his mouth for planting the seeds that Jenny wasn't good enough in her head. I know that daughters always look for the validation their fathers either give- or in this case didn't give- in their potential mates but this is just too much!! Someone needs to do something quickly! Or Jenny needs to make up her own mind and realize that she is being abused far worse than if the bastard hit her before she becomes a statistic. Hell, she already is one!! 

Good Chapter! Can't wait for the NEXT!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2017 8:55 pm Title: The Hit

Justin did it or had it done?  That was a surprise.  Now if he could do something about Rodger.

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