Date: Feb 24, 2017 6:35 pm Title: Treading Water
Omg the tears...I hope we get to 'see' more video footage of Vic! Wow, let's hope everything comes out now, fucking Ian too! No pun lol
Date: Feb 24, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Treading Water
Good we are getting to some truths.
Author's Response:
And its going to be painful for everyone involved.
Date: Feb 24, 2017 5:17 pm Title: Treading Water
Love it can't wait to see Matt eat his words and recess know who he Was seeing
Author's Response:
Matt will get what's coming to him. Reece will be surprised to say the least.
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2017 5:13 pm Title: Treading Water
Wow. Thankfully Anna is okay, also Reece didn't make the biggest mistake of his life. The film was fantastic. But there is more to come. Your next chapter is sure to be awesome.
Author's Response:
I know, Reece was saved and doesn't even know it...yet. I hope it will be.
Date: Feb 24, 2017 4:40 pm Title: Treading Water
Glad Reece got out of there before Ethan arrived. He shouldn't have been there in the first place!! So freaking HAPPY Anna is alive!!! I couldn't help tearing up reading that. Brian and Justin must be beside themselves with relief!
As for "Treading Water," I'm so happy that Brian has decided that it's time for the entire truth to be told. It's long overdue. Not only that but Matt is about to see that the road Brian and Justin had would have killed him. Matt has no idea that as he's been reading Rage, he's had a pretty much firsthand glimpse of his Dads' lives. Personally, I would like to flay Matt alive for his treatment of Justin regardless of his perceived notions but this is what happens when trying to protect the children and each other.
I wonder what shenanigans Michael and Lindsay are going to pull during the reveal. And I'm sure that mealy-mouth jackass Lindsay is married to will have plenty to say in a situation that has nothing to do with religion but everything to do with humanity. I hope Jennifer is there to calm Brian and Justin but also to put that asshole in his proper place, although Debbie is a good stand-in!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
No, Reece shouldn't have been. Now that Anna is well, they can work on getting the rest of their house in order. Yep, we haven't even got to the group participation part of the evening yet. Lots of things will come to light, some that neither Justin or Brian knew was going on.
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2017 3:57 pm Title: Treading Water
Wow.. what a powerful chapter. I have tears in my eyes. What a brilliant idea to show the family video footage of their past, to help tell your story. A Million kudos.
Lisa
Author's Response:
Thank you. A million kudos, i'm honored. I hope I don't disappoint.
Date: Feb 24, 2017 2:28 pm Title: Treading Water
Ok!!! Yay!! Ethan is causing to many issues!!! Let's
get all the secrets out and the healing begin!!
Author's Response:
Never thought I'd see YAY followed by Ethan. LOL.
Date: Feb 23, 2017 10:30 pm Title: Behind the Door
Jesus! I knew it was fucking Hobbs! Omg this story had big reveals everywhere! When will we find out about Anna?
Author's Response:
LOL. Yeah, I think it was pointing that way. Sorry, I'm just catching up on reveiws. I've been working on the newest chapter.
Date: Feb 23, 2017 5:41 pm Title: Behind the Door
It was be good to see them find out just to see what they feel
Author's Response:
Yeah.
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2017 1:18 pm Title: Behind the Door
OMG. First we have Ethan, now Hobbs. And Matt's in love with a Hobbs? More soon?
Author's Response:
LOL. I'm writing fast, new chapter up.
Date: Feb 23, 2017 1:17 pm Title: Behind the Door
So Matt just got a small glimpse of Justin that he didn't know. That should tell him that his father has a temper best looked out for. I swear all of the ghosts are coming out in this one! First Ethan and now Chris!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thank you. Chris and Ethan are pretty awful here.
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2017 11:44 am Title: News
I see lots of fun to be had with this story
Hobbs /Taylor-Kinney hook-up :)
Author's Response:
Hehe. I hope so, once everyone gets thier heads on straight.
Date: Feb 23, 2017 11:33 am Title: News
No just ohhh
Author's Response:
oh ok.
Date: Feb 23, 2017 11:24 am Title: News
No just ohhh
Author's Response:
oh, Ok, Thanks for reviewing. I'm so happy you're enjoying the story.
Date: Feb 23, 2017 5:35 am Title: Falling Apart
I'm so addicted to this story already. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you. I'm so happy you are liking it so much.
Date: Feb 23, 2017 2:34 am Title: Falling Apart
Omgomg omg! Please let her be okay, we need the next chapter now....good for Justin telling Brian how it is. Brian should have continued and told Justin that it was Ethan he threw out of the hotel room. Haven't these guys learned anything lol
Author's Response:
I hope this is soon enough. No, they really haven't learned that much, Brian and Justin are so secretive sometimes.
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2017 11:37 pm Title: Falling Apart
Oh no, I hope it's not the worse. Now how do you plan to straighten Brian and Reece out?
Author's Response:
Soon, I promise, but there might be a teeny tiny bit more trouble ahead first. Sorry.
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2017 9:55 pm Title: News
Wow 10 !!! Thank you for the list ! I like this start
Author's Response:
Thank you. Yes, it is a lot of kids, like their own herd.
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2017 9:54 pm Title: Falling Apart
Vite vite la suite! J'espère qu'Ethan va disparaitre rapidement et sans faire de mal à Reece
Author's Response:
LOL, no one likes Ethan. Poor Ethan, not. Thank you for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2017 9:35 pm Title: Falling Apart
NNOO
Author's Response:
I'm sorry.
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2017 9:16 pm Title: Planes, no trains and automobiles
OM GOODNESS ETHEN??!! LOL
No wonder
Author's Response:
Trouble does follow the man.
Date: Feb 22, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Falling Apart
Ohh
Author's Response:
Bad Ohh?
Date: Feb 22, 2017 8:49 pm Title: Falling Apart
So now we are getting to the root of Brian's problem with Reece but still not the whole truth. GAH!!! EGADS!!! If Brian had just named the 'ghost of the past' that is trying to destroying his family, I think both he and Justin could save Reece from himself. But... WOW! that stern talking-to that Justin delivered was on point but yet so far off!
Now there are uniforms at the door and it's either going to be about Anna or Reece. Either way this already fragile family is about to suffer more...SMH
Can't wait for MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Brian would never admit that he's still jealous even years later. Yes he hate Ethan for what he was trying to do with Reece but he hasn't gotten over Justin leaving him for Ethan. Yep, Justin, doesn't even know half of the fight yet. As for the uniforms, chapters up. Thank you so much for reviewing.
Date: Feb 22, 2017 6:32 pm Title: Love Doesn't Exist
Can't wait next bit do it soon please
Author's Response:
New one is up, yay. Hope you enjoy.
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2017 5:34 pm Title: Love Doesn't Exist
Ethan is causing problems that Justin and Brian don't need now. Would talking help?
Author's Response:
It would. Will they? Guess you'll see. Thank you for reviewing.