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Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2017 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 26

Brian drops everything and goes to support Hunter. That's what being a parent is all about. This is a priority issue. I love the idea he has for the school joining with the centre. Hunter...wow! he nailed it with Ben and called him on all their foolishness. I really don't think he realizes he's wrong. That he's screwing up. I don't hink it's hitting home yet. 

and Michael.....well now. Sorry but I have to laugh. He thinks he doesn't have to stick to the baby's schedule. that it's not that important. "Better let her sleep" OK then. LOL. How's that working out for you? BAHAHA! The very fact they tried the bottle pissed me off. thank goodness she puked up all over them. Frigging idiots! Grrrrrrrr! Wondering if they will stay in denial as to the amount of effor it takes to look after a baby. There's 2 of them and they can't cut it, but they expect Mel to? Uhhuh... 

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2017 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 26

Ben and Michael really know how to take care of their kids...

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2017 11:32 am Title: Chapter 26

They are so irresponsible.  I wouldn't let them take care of a goldfish.

I'm glad Brian and Ted were able to take Hunter to the school.  I hope they are able to make it bigger and accomodate more kids.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2017 3:27 am Title: Chapter 26

What an irresponsible idiot Michael could be!!and it's rubbing off of Ben,bcoz he became a stupid person too...Mel might  be furious now...

Thanks for updating..:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2017 2:05 am Title: Chapter 26

I'm glad to see that Brian and Ted by extension are backing Hunter.  I think the idea of combining the school with the project that  will help Drew is a great one.  I knew Michael would screw up, but I didn't know just how spectacularly he would do it.  Ben is not bright for a college professor.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2017 1:09 am Title: Chapter 26

Ben is just as self-absorbed as Michael!! I'm with Ted on wondering how Michael and Ben ended up together. I guess Michael isn't so enamored of being a full-time parent now, is he? But then again, Michael is a hard-learner and I have a feeling he will admit defeat before long. Women make shit up INDEED!!! What an ass!

I'm glad that Brian and Ted went to the school with Hunter. Regardless that Ben was there- late I might add- they had a chance to see firsthand what the school was all about. I also think it renewed their resolve to get the foundation off the ground and implement programs that will be most effective.

I can't help but compare Brian to Michael in this instance. Michael had none of the turmoil that Brian had, yet he ended up working at the Big Q for years and never willing to work to become more past the mediocre comic book store clerk (because he sure doesn't act like an owner) that he is. Instead because he was Deb's darling, he expected to be given whatever is heart desired; he expected undue charity. Brian was basically poor, abused and on his own despite having a two-parent household, and yet he applied himself to be more than working-class poor, shunning help, no matter how altrustic the intent. In short, Brian has a world more in common with Hunter and the other kids they are trying to help than someone like Michael ever could. Brian also has compassion which with a mom like Deb, I can't understand how that trait skipped over selfish ass Michael.

I think it is Brian's reasoning and idea to make the foundation more than about changing a kid's geography but their entire life that is going to help this exceed even his own expectations. Ms. Martinez seems like a real gem of a person, as well as Justin and Daphne. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2017 1:00 am Title: Chapter 26

Parents of the Year!!

Michael and Ben are so full of parental knowledge maybe they should write a book.

Mel should drop Jenny off with her daddies and maybe Gus would like to spend sometime with Lindsay and the babies?

Maybe the grandparents would like to meet The Petersons after all they can have a conversation about honesty and letting Lindsay handled her own messes?

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2017 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 25

Go Granny!  She's giving Michael, Ben and Lindsay a dose of reality.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2017 5:13 am Title: Chapter 25

Excellent strategy. They didn't think what it will imply to have the kids so quick.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2017 1:54 am Title: Chapter 25

Looks like they have Michael and Lindsay on the ropes.  I'd hope that Ben had wised up but I guess not.

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2017 1:36 am Title: Chapter 25

Oh no is the plan not working? That's too bad. I cannot wait, I hope this goes to court

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2017 1:24 am Title: Chapter 25

Don't you just love it when what they want bites them in the ads.ha ha ha

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2017 12:45 am Title: Chapter 25

And so begins the Cunty Crusaders foray down the road of full-time parenthood. Yippee Kayay HOORAH!!! Already they are failing. <snort> 'They act like it's such a big deal' indeed Mealymouth! Jenny should have messed to much that it did more than hit her diaper but hit his hands and clothes too. Yeah, I'm evil but what parent hasn't experienced the biological warfare known as abnormally dirty diapers? LOL

As for Lindsay, I'll bet she's regretting siding with Michael right about now....LOL I loved how Mel and Brian handled her. Wonder how she is going to come up with the child support since she never- and I mean NEVER- seems to be AT WORK. Furthermore is her immediate need of having a permanent place to stay. Although I don't think that Michael will find it so easy to have Hunter coming back to live with them, I still think that he's going to push her out the door. It's already obvious that she's refusing to be his built-in babysitter, so what use is she?

Granny's plan is really shaping up and Deb is helping it to succeed... and the besst part is that Michael doesn't even know it, LMAO!!!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2017 12:39 am Title: Chapter 25

This is going there be quite a bonding experience for Michael and Ben I see them being able to handle Jenny and all it requires to take care of a baby and Hunter's problems.

I hope Lindsay finds a place soon it will be good for Gus to spend time with her and his half siblings all alone.

Okay I say it won't even been an hour before Michael is calling Deb and Lindsay is pestering Brian to help her.

I wish the next chapter was up already cause this is going to be good lol

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2017 12:15 am Title: Chapter 25

Well that was way better than what thought was coming.  The plot is almost fiendish it's so good.  Ben and Mikey are in for it.  Lindsay is going to dp need to decode the type of life she wants.  She could price Grampy wrong, she won't likely, but she could.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 25

LOL. Oh wow. Everytime you do this to me. I think it's going one way then...BAM! You totally change it up and bring one out from left field. THat was awsome!! LOL.

I'm imagining Michael's face when Jenny took a dump. I gues they are going on a mad dash shopping trip tonight to get some emergency stuff she'll need. OH! butwait...don't they have that school meeting tonight> Oh my...whatever will they do? I bet a call to ma is in the works. Hopefully she'll be busy.

Lindsey too was thrown for a loop. Not just by Mel either. Typically she expected Brian to assist. Thankfully he stuck to his guns. No help to come from him.

Both Lindsey and Michael/Ben are going to quickly discover that looking after kids full time is not that easy. And arg! Lidnsey is still lying to her parents.

Still pissed at Ben. I guess he didn't hear how Michael spoke to Lindsey or what he said. They are both in WAAAAAAAAAAY over their heads. As long as no harm comes to Jenny, this could all be pretty humerous! lol. Ben is going to slowly see just what kind of "man" Michael really is. Still, he has pissed me off. Well done. I must say, I do enjoy it every once in awhile having Ben be a pretentious ass. Makes for something fun adn new. I'm enjoying this! 

And so so glad that B&J are merging all their stuff together! And Warren is right there to back them all up. I also think that M&L need to watch out for Granny! Whoooooooooeee! She's gonna be a source to be reckoned with I think. Another amusing character in this.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 5:37 pm Title: Chapter 24

WEll, I guess there goes my theory that M&L were on the road to straightening out their lives adn realtionships. And looky there! they've managed to add  Ben into their little road trip to selfishness and entitlement. I must say, I did NOT see that coming. My first reaction is that Ben is a dick. I mean, I'm pretty pissed off at him with regards to Hunter. He of all people should've been more aware and understanding of what Hunter was going through. It shouldn't have taken justin to point things out to him. butnow...to take up with Michael about Jenny!?!? when neither of them can father Hunter? That ben is making completely illogical excuses for Michael's behaviour...OOOOOOHHHHHHH I want to just bitch slap him. I'm honestly more furious at Ben than I am at Michael adn Lindsey. I expect it from them. 

AS for Lindsey...sorry, but it's pretty laughable! She actually thinks she's capable to raising all these kids?  I honestly thought that she and Michael were going to have a spurt of maturity. Obviously not. I would make for a very short angst period though wouldn't it ;)  )  She's a manipulative cunt. (sorry...bad word, but there are times when it's the only description pausible) She manipulative and thinks that she adn her "name" have influence. Wiat till she sees that having the entire family behind Justin does. hehe. she has no idea does she?? Then she goes running to Michael who as usual, shows his true colours, except now, Ben overhears. Will be be able to make excuses? How much did Ben actually overhear? If he sticks with Michael for now at least, what's going to happen? Oh the possiblities! You definitely keep us guessing.

And so anxious now to see what you have for us in teh next chapter!! dying to now Ben's reaction to all this.

Cheers,

Elaine 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 24

Lindsey thinks that she can win against Brian when she's pregnant from adultery. Does she even have a job, a home?

Micheal and Ben won't have the support from Hunter and that could weigh against them.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 22

Michael and his theories about Brian having fun being drunk and drugged up. Doesn't he remember what happened at Brian's 30th birthday?

The kids are to die for and Justin is all alone at tickling time.

Drew didn't realize Sierra might have cheated too... He must have been very busy with Emmett!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 9:35 am Title: Chapter 24

I just want to choke Lindsay and Michael.  Theses are children's lives you are messing with.

I hope Mel, Brian and Justin are able to keep the kids away from that newly formed family.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 4:58 am Title: Chapter 24

So yet again Ben is putting Michael's needs in front of what is right and Hunter has been pushed to the sidelines again, what the Hell does Michael know about taking care of a baby he barely acknowledged Gus exists because he took Brian's attention away from him.

I don't think there are any comics about taking care of a baby who is going to be spending a lot of time with Deb than either of her daddies.

And Lindsay she could barely take care of Gus when Mel left so she almost married a Frenchman, how is she going to handle three kids with no support from Brian? (Perhaps Mommy and Daddy should experience a Cold Wasp Shoulder?)

Ben is an idiot who wants to believe Michael is pure of heart and refuses to see that Michael only looks out for Michael, I hope he heard every word his doting husband said maybe he will wake up, take off the rose colored glasses and see Michael for who he really is!

Michael and Lindsay deserve the Hell that is about to rain upon them!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 4:46 am Title: Chapter 22

Michael is still just looking for excuses and Danny is wasting his time because Michael knows he is as fault but to admit to it means everything he thought before, including his feelings about and towards Brian was purely selfish.

And that as friendships go he took a lot more than Brian ever gave and Michael doesn't want to see that much less admit to it.

Gus and Callie were cute trying to get Justin to take them to Disneyland that will have to be a trip for later, Brian and Justin need to get away from the madness.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 4:26 am Title: Chapter 21

Can't interrupt Michael when he is in full blown 'Woe Is Me' mode I swear he and Lindsay should just sit in a room and lament how bad their lives are while hoping that Brian will come to save them...again.

Brian staying away from both of them is a good thing cause it's time for them to act like adults and fix their own problems.

Brian is out of the 'Saving Michael and Lindsay' business it is a never ending cycle that sucks the life right out of you.

Gus saying I love to Justin was so sweet because even with all the uncertainty in his young life he knows that his daddies love him and will protect him no matter what.

Mel walking away from Lindsay shows she is stronger than she thinks and that she is putting herself and those kids first.

There are those who want to grow up and others who love living in the past.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 4:03 am Title: Chapter 20

Justin finally figured it out and is ready to face that getting married five years ago in a drunken whim wasn't such a mistake.

Brian is right about marrying the love of your life and ignoring the haters who just don't want Brian to be happy.

Now Michael standing outside waiting for acknowledgement from Brian that will never come.

He destroyed the last thread of friendship he and Brian had now it's time for him to understand what a cold shoulder feels like.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 4:00 am Title: Chapter 24

Wow what an asshole Michael could be!!i hope Ben leave him again,because it turns out the whiny brat has just been using him!!And Ben.,what a nerve coming to Justin's house just to put the blame on him for the whiny's problems??You're better than that Ben?!

So Lindsay you being a cunt and manipulative one,what does it feel.now that your so called confidant is just using you as well..??and now being on Brian and Justin's bad side not to mention Grampy,what are planning to do??I'm sure sooner Sidney would fire you for bringing scandal to his gallery and surely your parents will deny you too bcoz of their social climbing status and doesn't want to get on Warren's bad side,so you're all alone now..

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