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Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2017 1:33 pm Title: Chapter 30

Well that was interesting.  I'm glad Gus is okay with Kayla and Joseph.  Not that I expected that he wouldn't.  Gus has a big heart.

 

Go Ted!  I'm glad he punched out Michael.  That was a long time coming.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2017 8:23 am Title: Chapter 30

They are still digging their own graves...

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2017 4:51 am Title: Chapter 30

Oh. That was good.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2017 3:45 am Title: Chapter 30

Way To Go Ted!!!  Every time Michael opens his mouth I want to hit him so I am happy someone got to do it :)

Brian and Justin wanting to give Kayla and Joseph a chance at a better life is really none of Michael and Lindsay's business.

They really should be focused on dealing with the problems in their own lives instead of getting all up in Brian Justin's.

It was a nice idea the intervention but you can't talk to a brick wall Michael and Lindsay are too busy trying to play their own agenda to care about anyone else.

Hell Lindsay cares as much about Gus and the twins like Michael cares about Hunter and Jenny.

After hurting Deb I doubt they have anywhere else to turn no one is listening to their whining anymore and if Michael insults Blake again he is going to need his own room at the hospital lol

Any Chapter Where Michael Gets Hit Is A Great Chapter rofl

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2017 3:18 am Title: Chapter 30

Typical Michael and Lindsay.  Why help someone if you won't help me?  Love that Brian is willing to take in Kayla and her brother.  I feel like punching Michael in the mouth, but Teddy beat me to it.  

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2017 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 29

Oh, they are adding to their family.  I'm loving this!!!!

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2017 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 29

Poor kids..It's a good thing Brian found them earlier before something happen  to Joseph ...Wow instant kids,their marriage could have been more perfect...?

So Ben finally got a clue and moved out..Good for him..

Reviewer: Tena Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2017 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 29

This story gets better and better. 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2017 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 29

That was so funny at the end.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2017 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 29

I bet Lindsay will have a stroke when she sees that Brian took in 2 kids but didn't want her babies.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2017 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 29

I do so enjoy each and every chapter you post.  This one is great because we get to see that Brian has a big heart.  It's nice that he and Mel are getting along and funny how Michael can't seem to cope with Jenny.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2017 8:02 am Title: Chapter 28

How dare they fired Emmett,poor guy..I hope Grampy put Kelly's dad and Craig in their place and learn not to cross over Justin's family...

And the Peterson is just as pathetic as their daughter..Wonder what would Sam's reaction when Ron called him and ask him what he's planning to do about Lindsay's pregnancy or the kids when they delivered..?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2017 8:01 am Title: Chapter 28

Ron has some nerve. I guess he just thinks Brian acts like himself would in the same situation.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2017 2:51 am Title: Chapter 28

I take it that The Petersons, Craig, Kelly and her parents are learning that you don't mess with anyone associated with Grampy and Granny.

Gotta love the grandparents they know how to Bitch Slap so that you feel it forever but they never leave a physical mark lol

Ron and Nancy trying to get Brian to accept his responsibility for the twins is laughable since they didn't even recognize their grandson Gus, hopefully Sam will be his normal charming self and set Ron straight with who the father is and how he feels about it.

That was so enjoyable I can't wait to read it all over again :)

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2017 12:21 am Title: Chapter 28

LMAO!!! Craig and the Petersons got shut DOWN!!! Now they know that Lindsay is a liar... I think I most enjoyed the fact that number one: Gus called them strangers and number two: Lynette was there. Looks like loose labia lips lying Lindsay is about to get taught a lesson about honesty that she'll never forget. Lynette certainly won't let her! LOL Wonder what that conversation with Scuzzy Sam is going to be like for Ron...ROFLMFAO!!!! Hey Ron, your daughter's a lowlife and so is your future grandkids' father!

Firing Emmett after the work was done was just plain low!! They want the best but didn't want to pay for him, that's what it all boils down to. The 'scandal' surrounding him was simply the excuse. Kellie's mother is a guttersnipe for doing that. And yes I hold Kellie responsible too because if the party is given in her name- be it personal or the company- she should still check behind those she delegated responsibility to. I'm glad Warren called her out on it!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 27

You know...as much as I feel bad for ben that he heard the truth of things straight from Michael's mouth. I hope he doesn't play the victim. He was just as big an ass as Michael and Lindsey were/are. they totally manilpulated him, but everyone else around warned him. told him he was screwing up, but he didn't listen.

Lindsey is useless. Still feeling entitled. sheeeesh.

Michael just wants Jenny to have a real connection to Brian. they could "raise their kids together"...again pfffffffffffffft.

cheers

Elaine

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 28

Now that was just mean.  For them to fire Emmett after he did all the work.  At least we know the food is good.  I hope they appologize to Emmett.  Molly and Gina seem to get along.  Gus is into older women?  Lovely chapter.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 27

Well well well they're so eager to get Jenny from Mel but unable to take care of her and expected Debbie to watch the baby???They don't even know that Deb was not at home...Michael really is a stupid dump ass, (sorry )and now he's all alone bacause seems Lindsay doesn't care about his plan but her own agenda..And at first i was pissed with Ben when he cornered Justin but i guess now he heard the reall reason for his so called husband for getting back with him he finally get it..it must a punch to his guts..

Aaaah Brian is so sweet and adorable the way he acts toward Justin..Picking  him up from work,bcoz he doesn't want him to drive from working at night like it was Justin's first time..??I'm sure it's just a way to him first thing in the morning..😍😍

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 27

You know, I was totally going down the road of Ben losing his hearing a and never finding out the Mikey used him, but no, Mikey just needed to say it loud enough.  Poor lovesick Ben.  Mikey playing the family card is hysterical.  He still thinks he should be rich, so he really doesn't even understand family.  I love how Lindsay is so concerned she hasn't even tried to come up with a plan for Gus beyond trying to go out with Brian to meet Grampy. 

Mel lucked out cuz, Granny and Grampy are putting those two in their lanes.  Brian and Justin are in love and united, no complaints.  The gala is coming, lol.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 11:55 am Title: Chapter 27

I love that Brian and Justin are not taking any shit from anyone. 

Michael, Ben, and Lindsay need to grow up and take responsibility if they want to see their kids.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 4:45 am Title: Chapter 27

Excellent! Michael is burying himself.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 27

Yay, Ben finally got it.  I feel sorry for Jenny, Michael would have let her starve.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 3:12 am Title: Chapter 27

Oh No Ben You Don't Get To Walk Away From This Wreck, You Hitched Yourself To This Train So Enjoy The Ride!!!

Ben can't really be surprised Michael is using him he had years to deal with Michael running after Brian and Let Him, he treated Hunter like crap repeatedly and Let Him, now that Michael wants to play Daddy he should just bend over and Let Him continue to step all over his back.

Michael is expecting Deb to take of  Jenny while he sits on his flat Ass and read comics, he is ready for the responsibility of a baby like Ben is ready for the responsibility of a teenager.

I wouldn't be surprised if he got on the witness stand and blamed Danny for the reason why he is a crappy father, Brian may not have wanted to be a father but unless the girls started bitching he never willing turned his on back on Gus and left others to handle the hard stuff.

Michael wanted a kid to improve his status quo and to in a way link him to Brian but he never wanted to be an actual father, he wanted the title without the responsibility and in a way so did Ben, they liked spending time with Jenny but loved sending her home so Mel could deal with everything else.

Justin told Ben the truth and after hearing from Michael why they are actually back together he wants to believe I say Too Little, Too Late Dad.

Brian is doing the right thing by combining the halfway house and school so these kids can have somewhere safe to go and a chance to better their lives with people who really do care and want them to succeed.

Can't Wait to See What Happens Next? <Does happy dance>

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 2:21 am Title: Chapter 27

OH so NOW Ben wants to hear?!!! LOL Well I guess it was better late than never. Looks like the Entitled train is finally pulling out of the station and Michael and Lindsay are FIANLLY getting left behind. About damn time! 

Really Michael and Lindsay deserve each other and Ben deserves both of them for being stupid!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 1:57 am Title: Chapter 27

Michael is an ass. How is he going to care for a baby, he can't take care of himself?

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