[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 4:19 pm Title: Chapter 34
Seeing Lindsay and Michael try to convince everyone that they are a couple is funny. The fact that they can't seem to adjust to Gus and Jenny staying with them nor the fact that they are unable to support the two babies that Lindsay has in the oven is painful.
Date: Mar 02, 2017 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 34
Looks like trying to be a pair of sanctimonius slyboots is backfiring big time for the PITA Association! And I couldn't be happier or more sore from laughing all during this chapter! It's simply amazing that they are really trying to execute this plan; trying to force Brian's hand in paying attention to them and supporting them. I really feel bad for the babies in Lindsay's womb right now. Gus and Jenny will be alright but those two virtually have no one. I laughed aloud when Lindsay thought she could make that snide comment about the free clinic and Justin basically told her that her judgment should also be self-directed. Love that the two of them are constantly burning bridges by simply being their usual spiteful, selfish selves. No one has to be against them because Michael and Lindsay really are their own worse enemies....SMH Pathetic and no redeeming qualities to recommend them whatsoever!
BTW... I didn't miss Lindsay's reference about 'Justin's kids' deliberately negating that they are Brian's as well. What an avarcious BITCH!!! This just proves that Lindsay and Michael are some low-life leeches who will stop at nothing to get what they want which includes using innocent children. I can't wait to see how they will recover from the verbal dropkicks they have both received.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Mar 01, 2017 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 33
Oh please no, you two seriously think?? Omg, ick!!! It's hurts mommy, it hurts, lol. It's so obvious she want Gus for the cash. This is so going to backfire. You know, I wonder who will raise her kids. I'm thinking her sister. At least they will have fun visiting with Gus.
No olive branch for this Mikey. I agree that he should work for whatever he gets. Hunter deserves better (and an Escalade-- Caddies make a statement).
Date: Mar 01, 2017 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 33
Huh...is there actual hope for Michael or is it just a momentary glitch? I'm certainly not expecting miracles, but a slight opening of teh eyes would be refresing. Realizing that there are things, issues, circumstances in the world that are more important than him and what he wants. I wonder if between what his father said to him after what he overheard, and what he just witnessed with Justin, some kind or reality might hit home.
As for Lindsey, man....she's just never going to get it is she? she wants a job she's ot qualified for, and have it just handed to her. She wants a place to live without paying for it. What colour is the world she lives in? Never mind teh comments she made about B&J's relationship, and teh kids. I guess it's a matter of speaking a lie so many times, you actually begin to believe it.
I AM DYING at Lindsey's idea. OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now, the moment of truth will come when we see Michael's reaction. IS there hope, or will he continue on with his manipulations that get him no where.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 01, 2017 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 33
Michael starts to ask good questions and maybe is he on the right path. That is if he doesn't fall into Lindsey's trap.
Date: Mar 01, 2017 11:38 am Title: Chapter 33
I hope this whole plan blows up in their faces. They better not take any of those kids away from Brian and Justin.
I'm so glad Brian has grown up. :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2017 5:12 am Title: Chapter 33
I give up on Michael ever admitting that everything bad in his life is his fault and that Brian is not going to continue to be his crutch or Lindsay's.
This idea of both of them being a couple is laughable neither one wants kids they just want Brian to pay attention to them, while they keep forgetting that Brian is not playing their games and that with Justin and his family by his side they will always lose.
I can't wait to see this go splat in both their faces.
Date: Mar 01, 2017 4:59 am Title: Chapter 33
This BITCH and MITCH....that is all!
Write On Star Baby!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2017 4:53 am Title: Chapter 33
So Lindsay needs a place to live and she talks Michael into being a couple with her? Hahaha.
Date: Mar 01, 2017 1:25 am Title: Chapter 32
Why can't we be sure busting thesetwo matters? They are like a worm cut off one end and the other thrives. They never see the end of the game, it was two moves ago. You can be as upset as you want you can't stop their love or the adoptions.
Davina is a way better dad than drag queen. Go Davina! Sorry Mikey sucks!!
Date: Mar 01, 2017 1:17 am Title: Chapter 31
Awwww... Hunter's getting a car... Lol. Ok that talk was a great way to keep the focus of showing Hunter a better way. The new kids will be just fine I'm sure, the foster parents are going to spoil them rotten.
Aww, Justin HIPPA violated Bruan, that's so sexy. Actually, violating the law for love is sexy.
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2017 12:51 am Title: Chapter 32
Brian is so excited to suggest adopting Kayla and Joseph he wants to bring his family together despite Michael and Lindsay barging in with their self-serving opinions.
Danny finally saw Michael for who he really is and has decided to walk away with his integrity still intact.
Michael is exactly how Brian described him it just took Deb longer to realize that giving in to her son turned him into a spoiled brat, by the time she tried to stop it the damage had already been done and besides she had Brian to blame for Michael's faults.
Brian admits the part he played but at the end of the day Michael has to accept the rest of the blame because Brian has walked away and Michael needs a new doormat, a new puppeteer to guide him and fix his mistakes
Michael and Lindsay fit because their selfishness knows no bounds and as much as they despise each other, they also depend on the other to get or do what is needed so they can get what they want.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter:)
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2017 1:48 pm Title: Chapter 32
Michael still doesn't get that Brian wants to adopt Kayla and Joseph. Love how Brian explained things to Danni and how Danni explained to Mikey why he can't be what Michael wants.
Date: Feb 28, 2017 11:33 am Title: Chapter 32
Yeah they are adopting the kids. I'm glad Brian is the one spear-heading this. It makes it that much more special that he is finally growing up.
Michael has really stepped in it now.
Thanks for the update.
Date: Feb 28, 2017 7:18 am Title: Chapter 32
Love how Brian and Justin just moved thigs along,adopting the kids and B doesn't care anymore with the dump ass and mostly i love how Auntie D finally accepted that his so called son is just a selfish person...
Date: Feb 28, 2017 5:32 am Title: Chapter 32
It's good that the adoption idea was Brian's conclusion.
Danny is not blind anymore about his son. Mikey is quite alone now.
Date: Feb 27, 2017 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 31
Wow! I think this is one of the first times that someone put it to Michael so clearly. Did he ever have a belief that wasn't Brian's...THAT was most brilliant Star!!! I hope he actually takes it to hear. He really needs to figure himself out soon. While he's not necessarily "bad" in this one, (ok, the diner scene was definitely bad!!) he's definitely frustrating. I want to pull a Deb and smack him up side the head. Perhaps that's teh problem...she's smacked him too many times and caused damage? LOL. ;) I get the impression that Daniel may be one of the few people to ever get through to him properly. He may never be the father that Michael had always hoped for, but he could definitely be a friend. An positive influence in his life. Someone that won't let him get a way with crap.
Am LOVING how Brian and Justin's realtionship is developing! Now the have the added 2. Now that was lovely and so heartwarming! that Michael and Lindsey confronting him the way they did was terrible, and completely selfish. Michael has a tendency to run off at the mouth without thinking. I think he may have learned a bit of a lesson at the diner!! Lindsey though...she's just a totally selfish bitch. Shes' pissed because Brian won't lie for her. She's being forced to be accountable for her own actions. I mean the nerve!! ;) But B&J though...coming out stronger and stronger every day. Brian is incredibly nurturing in this. I love it! Justin is of course as well, but it's almost expected of him. Yup...these 2 are going to be amazing together.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Feb 27, 2017 5:21 pm Title: Chapter 31
I love the new relationship between Mel and Brian. They still tease each other, but it's not mean anymore.
Hunter seems to enjoy this new family.
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2017 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 31
Loving it couldn't stop reading the whole story is very amusing looking forward to more.
Date: Feb 27, 2017 11:21 am Title: Chapter 31
Perfect chapter. I love the little family they are making together.
Date: Feb 27, 2017 6:23 am Title: Chapter 31
That was Hot!!!and doing it raw too....
I can see Mel and Brian bonding with each for the sake of the kids but this time i thnik it's more like they really like each other..
Michael no words can explain,he's just an hopeless case..
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2017 5:51 am Title: Chapter 31
Brian is embracing being an adult because now he has people in his life who want to see him happy.
Michael just wants to continue to act like a child and let everyone do the hard work while he reaps the awards.
That's why he and Lindsay are frenemies neither one wants to earn the accolades they just expect everyone to love them and do whatever they want while continuing to excuse how really nasty, mean, spiteful, vindictive, jealous, lazy, greedy, self-absorbed and cruel they really are, plus they will use each other to get what they want and then stab the other in the back to win.
They really can't see that they got left behind years ago and that no one is going to be their doormat anymore.
Brian gave Hunter some good advice that will help him as he makes his way through this crazy thing called life.
A very hot romantic moment between Brian and Justin that continues to cement how perfect they are for each other :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2017 4:20 am Title: Chapter 31
This as all your other chapters is perfect.
Date: Feb 26, 2017 3:35 pm Title: Chapter 30
That hurt... a lot. I'm no fan of those two but even an idiot needs a hand, Lindsay is the worst sort of partner. They should have said "You are a non inseminated married pregnant Lesbian. You have stuck with anything you vowed to do. At best you're confused confused selfish slut and at worst you're a self centered manipulative parasite." I guess she pissed me off.
I really want Hunter to get that Range Rover so he totally needs to baby sit the new kids to earn it as a graduation gift. I'm surprised Brian hasn't had sticker shock -- he went from upper middle class to elite he could order the entire Armani line. Ehh, fictional rich can be so frugal. I hope the kids enjoy food, safety, love, comfort and wealth. They can respect it but they should also enjoy it.
I wonder if Grampy helped with Madonna's adoptions? lol
Date: Feb 26, 2017 3:22 pm Title: Chapter 29
OMG what a benefit! So wrong to fire Emmett I'm happy Gramph handled that. Craig is such an idiot.
Grampy is with Brian to stay, lol. The kids are here! Yay. I was wondering if they'd take Hunter of find another way. And here's two Lillie cuties who need love.