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Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2017 11:40 am Title: Chapter 37

Well Brian tried to be the bigger person.  Michael just won't listen.  I'm glad Debbie is standing here ground.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2017 5:16 am Title: Chapter 37

Daphne and Justin are prototypes for best friends. They want the other to be happy, with or without them.

Maybe Carl did get a point with Michael.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2017 3:19 am Title: Chapter 37

Nice to see Daphne, Andrew, Callie and Andy again.  It goes to show just how different Justin's best friend are from Brian's supposed best friends.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2017 12:35 am Title: Chapter 37

Wow, Mikey you have to catch up you're losing it.  You'd a thought he would have improved with the love of a good woman, lol, but nope.  Brian was harsh but he was valid and fair.  

Callie!!! She's so funny! Poor Andy, she's going to be the best most smothering big sis cuz she's so bitter still.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2017 12:29 am Title: Chapter 37

With Michael it is always one step forward and fifteen steps back because for a moment he sees the truth then he denies he saw, heard anything so he can act like a petulant child who just can't understand why everyone won't do what he wants.

Brian sees what being a best friend means while Michael and Lindsay just see it as what they can get and who they can blame.

A very insightful chapter :)

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2017 11:32 am Title: Chapter 36

Nice way to look at things Lindsay.  I do hope she will sign full custody over to Blake and Ted.  The babies shouldn't have to suffer with her for a mother.

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 35

BellaDonne will be speaking on behalf of Hunter... "I did it for my future, but the car and a jealous Mikey makes it especially sweet!? Grampy and Granny rock!!!! Oh thank you fic gods!!!!

Seriously, how do these two keep up with their next moves with all the games they play? 

Blake is right to be cautious.  Linds is the devil and the kids come with a side of ridiculous birth mom.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 36

I can understand why Blake is hesitant he has seen the pain and destruction Lindsay causes in her quest to be the center of the universe and he wants no part of it.

Everyone wants to do what is best for these innocent babies but no one wants to deal with Lindsay, so how do you help these babies without getting dragged into Lindsay's web??

Sam won't care because he can't stand kids they interfere with his creativity and Lindsay just likes having the power to manipulate those around her for her own selfish ends.

Michael is his own worst enemy he feels because Deb bent over backwards to give him everything that everyone should do the same and when they don't he whines, pouts acts like a three-year old until he gets his way.

For years everyone has said Brian was the one who refused to grow up but actually Michael was the real Peter Pan, he doesn't want to admit that anything is his fault cause it is easier to deny  that he is the one who never wanted to take responsibility for his actions.

Every time he gets a modicum of smarts he reverts back to toddler mode and ignores the truth, he won't admit he has done wrong because he doesn't want to face the consequences of his actions and so everyone else must suffer.

Every Chapter Just Gets Better and Better :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 36

I worry about those babies too.  At least it looks like Michael is getting a clue.  Maybe, maybe not.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 3:31 pm Title: Chapter 36

Maybe Michael will get out of this arrangement before it's too late.

At least, he was decent to Hunter, that's a change.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 1:13 pm Title: Chapter 35

Granny for President!!!  

I just hate that they didn't take the babies.  I know Linds is a dingbat, but the lives they could have.  Sure, Blake and Ted will do well, but it isn't B and J.  Ted is going to handle it.  I'm surprised Callie hasn't gone Postal with all the new editions.  

I hope Mikey isn't too crushed.  He can find another woman, lol.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 11:38 am Title: Chapter 35

I hope for Ted he could get the babies, but I hope he will only deal with Sam.

Michael will have a surprise when he will find out...

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 10:40 am Title: Chapter 35

Well Ted and Blake here's your opportunity.  Take the babies!

I don't know how Justin held back from punching Sam.  His kids are not strays!  ARGH!!!

I know I probably don't tell you often enough, but I truly LOVE this story.

Hugs,
Jessica

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 2:58 am Title: Chapter 35

Well it looks like Captain Asshole is really going to be on his own regarding custody, which is fine with me since I wouldn't trust his egotistical, lazy ass to take care of a sewer rat in NYC and we KNOW they can fend for themselves, LOL.

As for that Dumb Heifer-cat, she and her narcissistic sperm donor deserve each other. Is it wrong for me to want both of them to go to Europe and drown in the Seine? Yeah... I know I'm vicious when it comes to Quadruple L and Scuzzbucket Sam. If Ted and Blake do adopt the kids, hopefully they would make her sign over her parental rights and a restraining order to stay away indefinitely or until Ted and Blake see fit for her to come around. Since no one wants her special kind of stupid to infect them, it would be easy to forget she actually exist. 

As for Gey (which means Dumb and I'm using in place of Galaxy) Ladd, he needs to come up with a plan to design a life and become an adult. No one is buying his wounded, doe-eyed act but I have a feeling he's cruising to get his doe-eyes wounded in an entirely different manner if he keeps messing with Brian, Justin, Ted, Blake, Em and Drew. Someone is bound to lay his ass out.

Great Chapter and looking forward to more!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 1:39 am Title: Chapter 35

Not surprised by Lindsay's actions she only sees her kids as something to have like a new purse that she can toss in the closet later when people aren't paying attention to her anymore or if she wants money and to be worshipped and adored.

The chick actually acts like she is the only woman to ever have a baby, too bad she only wants them for a second before she moves on to a new accessory.

She and Sam deserve each because they are selfish, narcissistic and self-absorbed morons who's toxic relationship does not need to be inflicted on innocent babies

Ted and Blake would be great parents to the twins but no one should have to deal with the Lindsay Drama, if they do get custody of those babies they should make sure Lindsay and Sam sign away their parental rights and get a restraining order against Lindsay because she will try to get as much money as she can and she will come back to make their lives miserable for years.

Looks like as soon as Lindsay gets those babies out of her she is hightailing it out if town.

So what is Michael going to do without his Boo (Ewww Need to Smack Myself For Thinking That and Then Writing It lol) to help him get custody of Jenny?

I can't believe there will be no wedding maybe they could have gotten Captain Astro to officiate? rofl

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2017 1:03 am Title: Chapter 35

Somehow I see Ted and Blake being written all over this.   It would solve all Lindsay's problem, such as they are.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2017 6:58 am Title: Chapter 34

That chapter is funny enough to be a standalone fic!! Seriously, you outdid your silly on this, lol.  


It doesn't appear they are surrendering, but who knows. Perhaps an engagement photo in cosplay? Lol I'm just not seeing the GLC Davina wedding as working for Linds, lol.


Fantastic!!!


 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2017 3:54 am Title: Chapter 34

I had to delete my first review cause I confused it with another story <bangs my head against the wall>

I do believe that the GLC should be decorated with both Michael and Lindsay's taste and the Wedding clothes should be Captain Astro centric.

I also think The Petersons and their friends should be there to witness the spectacle and maybe they can take home a gift bag lol.

How can they want to have custody of Gus and Jenny when they can't even handle them for a few hours without crying Uncle?

Ooo maybe they should do a 3-d  themed wedding or a laser beam wedding like Star Wars meets Beauty and the Beast, or maybe they should have a War of the Roses themed wedding they already have the fighting part down??? (Of course Michael would make an ugly Kathleen Turner, but Lindsay might be able to pull off a Michael Douglas?;))

Can they dance to Its a Deadman's Party? :)

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2017 1:58 am Title: Chapter 34

Oh! I am so loving this! I live for anti-Michael and anti-Lindsay stories and nobody does it better!

I keep telling myself I'll never start reading another WIP because I just can't wait for the updates, but this is so awesome!

Keep it coming!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 34

I don't know how they all didn't vomit.  I can totally picture Debi not being able to keep it together.   What a funny chapter!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 34

I meant to add this earlier that one would think that Ron and Nancy would be happy that Lindsay is marrying a man this time...but then again Michael is not a man; he's a mouse! LOL

Cringeworthy but funny as hell!!!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 34

Hahaha it's hilarious😅😅How long can they pretend until everything went down because from the look of it they can never get along well..

I am so enjoying this new drama of the crazy dou...

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 34

Man...for a nano second there I have a modicum of hope for Michael. Is it bad that I'm almost glad he disappointed me? LOL. I'm actually in shock that he considered going through with this scam. I mean, the really don't even like each other, how can they possibly think that anyone is going to believe this?

I have to say though...I have GOT to stop reading these when I'm at work. I was in an absolute FIT of giggles reading this. Thank goodness I can close my office door, otherwise I'd be having folks giving me the stink eye. Seriously though.......OMFG!!!!!!!! So many hysterical moments in this chapter! Your comedic ability is something that has always drawn me to your writing. Always, in every fic, there are parts that are either baltantly funny, or comedic undertones. Eitherway...you are funny as hell are so talented at bringing it across to the reader, and incorporating it into your stories.

These 2 obviously didn'tthink things through at all. The mistakenly assumed that Brian would provide support, assumed Mel would keep her on the insurance, adn now it seems they have little time to think things through even further as their weddingwill be fast approaching. Seriously...are they going to go through with it?!

Deb slayed me. She's encouraging a quicky wedding between M&L...Hunter waling into the door...Ron and Nancy's regard for Michael...Oh man...the list goes on. 

I seriously can't wait for more of this. So needed this laugh today! I'm going back to read it again. LOL.

THANK YOU for this most entertaining chapter! Absolutely loved it!!!

cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 34

Ha ha ha!!! The dream couple! They are together for less than a week and they are already arguing. I could imagine Michael manners with the WASP.

Reviewer: Tena Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 34

Lol! Oh picturing Michael and Lindsay cracked me up bi live that the family is not buying it for a minute but pretending too. Wonderful. More please

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