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Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 41

OK, so those last few lines....major lump in my throat. That was really really lovely and something Brian I'm sure really needed to hear.

I guess now we can honestly trust Michael apparently. He's been very straight forward. Kind of impressed. I took in what others said to him, didn't get all pissed off when they were skeptical, and finally understood what all his mother did for him growingup, and also, just how much a father Carl has been. 

I think Emmett may take a bit longer to forgive Michael. Can't really blame him. Unlike wiht Justin, what he did effected more people and did far more damage.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 11:35 am Title: Chapter 40

I'm still very skeptical of Michael.  I hope for Hunter and Jenny's sake he's actually trying to be a better person.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:25 am Title: Chapter 40

Well, that's a bit better, Mikey really trying to help.  Linds and Sam suck.  Hunter hopefully will forgive Mikey.  Granny is awesome.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:22 am Title: Chapter 39

Seriously, Mikey you should keep a sucker in your mouth so at least you'd have to take it out before speaking and maybe those seconds will filter some of the stupid.  You get points for trying to help.

Im glad the opening went well.  Everyone should be pleased with the progress.  

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:19 am Title: Chapter 38

I warned you Mikey and now look, no sexy muscle bound Professor.  And frankly if you read the paper you'd know dying from AIDS is the US, the cocktail works Ben has anther 40 years in him.  

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:33 am Title: Chapter 40

It's good to see Michael pull his head out off his ass..I hope it stay that way and his jealousy toward Justin stop all at once...

Lindsay is really a manipulative cunt..The family better off without her constant annoying presence around..

She doesn't know what hit her when she learn that Michael is about to betray her..

Reviewer: jaspersgirl21 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 7:42 am Title: Chapter 1

I can't believe I'm admitting this but, I was actually crying over Michael in a GOOD way in this chapter, so I thank you for that. I love when a story can make me cry and laugh and all the other emotions  in between. It's  a beautiful and breathtaking thing to watch someone change for the better. I only hope that it will be a permanent change. I know there will be bumps on his journey because , let's face it, he's Michael , but I think he has the potential to be a wonderful human being. Can't wait for the next chapter !!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 6:01 am Title: Chapter 40

A part of me wants to believe Michael is embracing change and is helping Ted and Blake, but the other part is wondering what is his actual angle and where to hide the body encase he decides to do a double cross? lol

Lindsay is determined to keep a tight hold on Brian by using Gus and her unborn children that is a woman who should be boiled in oil.

All she sees is dollar signs and the envy of everyone around her the truth is something she will deny because it doesn't get her what she wants the center of Brian Kinney's Universe.

I hope she does sign over her rights to Gus and the babies so they can all be free of her and she can leech off Sam until he finds his next muse.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 5:29 am Title: Chapter 40

Yeah, the good Michael seems to be back and for a right reason!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 12:18 am Title: Chapter 40

How nice to see a Michael who isn't thinking of himself.  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 40

Hmmmmmm. I can see this plan working if only Michael actually stays on track. I'm not sure he can be trusted. I have to admit though, maybe....just maybe there's hope for him yet. I don't see him as being overly malicious in this, just...inately stupid. lol. He's done the tyipical 1 step forward 10 steps back thus far. If he's trying to convince Hunter, and really work on hsi relationship with Hunter, I'd hate to see him really ruin it by falling backwards again.

Lindsey on the other hand, is simply trying to keep herself in Brian's world. She'll do anything to stay there, even in teh smallest way. She may be heading off with Sammy boy, she still feels she needs to have a hold here just in case she comes back. She's simply awful!! Gus is teh only one she wants ties with as it keeps a slight hold on Brian. The twins are only useful if Brian takes them, which she assumes he will. But he won't. She's using Michael for the time being. she definitely has more up her sleeve, but she's in for a shock when the twins go to Ted and blake, and Mel and Brian figure everythign out with Gus.

Good to see Michael hopefully coming to terms with reality finally. Definitely not holding my breath as I've said, but let's just say my fingers are crossed for him. As much as I'm an anti-Michael fan, this one really isn't. He's a pain in the ass and quite selfish, I do see hope for him. And if he's able to win over Hunter and the gang, good for him, especially if he's able to help screw Lindsey in teh end. lol

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 39

Damn it Michael: shut your mouth or stay home!

Brian saved the day and Justin must feel overwhelmed.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 39

What a gorgeous heart warming chapter. Brian naming it Justin's Heart was so touching. Paying tribute to his husband this way was lovely. It show's just how much Brian has changed. How open he's become, not just with Justin, but he really showed it at the opening of the center by talking with, who he thought was the street kid. Opening up to her like he did. I'm glad that part turned out OK! Loved the intereaction with Zack and Nat. REally showing that they don't want a hand ut, but want to work at and honest job. they don't want handouts. amazing the difference in attitudes between these two and Michael, who would be quite happy to have everything just handed to him without having to earn it.

Michael needs to seriously learn how to use a filter on his mouth. I'm honestly not even sure he realizes how condecending he really is, or if he really does look down his nose at these kids. What was his real motivation to go to the opening? I can't see it being for true altruistic purposes. He's far too selfish. Was it just to try to hang with Brian? Was it so he looks better in the public eye, or to look better in Brian's eye? Whatever his motivation, he's still a stuck up little prick whose entitlement issues are misplaced! I seriously don't get where they come from.

Nice article that Nancy wrote. 

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 11:23 am Title: Chapter 39

Awe..."Justin's Heart."  Brian is so head over heals in love with his husband.

Michael does need to learn to keep his mouth shut.

I'm glad it was a reporter and not a real street kid.  It was real sweet to see them all pitching in to take care of Zach and Nat.

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 4:39 am Title: Chapter 39

Excellent chapter!

Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 1:07 am Title: Chapter 39

An excellant chapter and once again Michael almost steps in it.  But Brian's trying to talk a girl out of leaving brought tears to my eyes.  I applaud the center and wish there were places like this in every town.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 12:50 am Title: Chapter 39

Really nice

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 12:35 am Title: Chapter 39

Maybe if Michael had to struggle he wouldn't be so quick to put down others who have to survive on the streets.

He had Deb who worked until she was to tired to get so he had everything his little heart desired, he never once had to fight to make it one more day because he had Deb, Vic, Brian to protect him from the real world while he could live in his comic books and fantasies.

Michael lived a life of a little Prince while Deb worked and saved to give him a better life so he would never know how utterly cruel and draining life could be and how did her son pay her back?

He treated her like crap called her embarrassing, talked down, criticized, humiliated and cast her aside unless he needed his battles fought.

Michael took one step forward to come to the center and help then he opened his mouth and moved twenty steps back, luckily it was a reporter and not an actual kid coming there for help.

Justin's Heart is going to help anyone who wants a chance for a better life, Brian should be very proud of all he did behind the scenes to make this center possible and everyone who helped should be happy aswell.

Very Good Chapter :)

 

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 12:07 am Title: Chapter 39

I loved it.Great job <3

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2017 5:37 pm Title: Chapter 38

Not sure if Lindsey will agree to signing over her rights. Could go either way. If she has a chance to live the high life with Sam, will that superceed any aspirations she has for Brian? If she's under the impression that Brian is NOT going to take the kids, then she may just happily sign away her rights and be done with it, not realizing it's Ted and Blake who are adopting them. Never mind signing away her rights to Gus! That's her 1 and only link to Brian. Trouble is if she finds out before she signs the papers. then it could be all bad. 

Michael is a bit like a yo yo. Not too sure how he's going to react to the finality of Ben leaving. Could go either way. Will he realize that he's fucking up or will he play the blame game? always interesting to read an update and find out what he's doing. At least he's stopped with the Hetero BS. that was just creepy! lol.

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2017 11:36 am Title: Chapter 38

Poor Brian he's starting to finally see that Michael wasn't ever really who he thought he was.

I'm so happy for Blake and Ted.  I do hope they can get Lindsay to sign away her rights.  Keeping my fingers crossed all goes well for Brian and Mel with Gus too.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2017 5:20 am Title: Chapter 38

I hope Michael didn't hear the news, otherwise, he will let Lindsay know right away.

I'm happy Ben took this decision; it was time for him to let go.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2017 4:23 am Title: Chapter 38

Lindsay still trying to get Brian to play daddy to her babies so she can keep him close and his checkbook, too bad Brian would rather see her in Mongolia than near him or his family.

Not surprised by Sam but if he doesn't want kids they have this great invention it is called: A Vasectomy You Asshole!!!

Michael took two steps forward by kicking Lindsay out of his house but how long before the the petulant child shows up again now that Ben is leaving and wants to sell the house?

I really hope Michael didn't hear Ted and Blake talking because they will never get those babies without Lindsay squeezing as much as she can get out Ted's pockets and trying to convince Brian or Justin to take her babies.

Lindsay should leave with Sam and sign over her rights to Brian but I don't see Lindsay giving in until she gets her cut.

Lindsay makes the mafia look tame and Michael Elmer Fudd with pigtails and a lollipop<smh>

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2017 3:53 am Title: Chapter 38

Will Michael finally realize he's ruint his relationships?  Tell me he didn't overhear Ted and Blake?  I really want them to become fathers.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2017 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 37

Callie is being the typical jealous big sister. She's unsure of her place at the moment, but that's natural. She'll come around eventually and become the great sis that she's emant to be. It's always hard to share the affections of people when she was the only one for a time. She'll figure it out soon enough that there's enough love adn affection to go around. 

As for Brian and Michael, it seems that Michael is feeling much the same as Callie, sadly though, he's an adult and is making life miserable for everyone around him. Pointing fingers and laying blame on others isn't going to get him anywhere except the back of the line. All his friends will continue to ignore him, to a point where he eventually has no friends at all if he doesn't get his shit together. Hopefully Carl his some truths home to him, however, I never seem to be able to hold my breath when it comes to that. We have a moment of hope that he's going to come around and see the real hard truths, then he just does soemthing stupid and idiotic to prove that he's still the spoiled brat, whining and comlaining because life isn't going the way he wants it to.  I get the impression that he's going to continue to do stupid shit until something drastic happens to have him see things as they really are, rather than as he wishes they were.

Another great chapter.

Cheers,

Elaine

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