Date: Feb 15, 2020 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
Love it
Author's Response:
Angelika,
Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed our story.
~Nichelle & Lorie
Date: Feb 14, 2020 10:52 am Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
Love all the very humorous well-worded descriptions
Author's Response:
Becky,
It was a fun story to write. Glad you enjoyed it.
~Nichelle & Lorie
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2019 5:05 am Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
Nichelle and Lorie,
I have to commend your combined talents with this story. It was so very good. I found it to be a new level of hatefulness for Lindsay and Michael. Craig, too. At least you rid the world of Craig's hatefulness, sending Michael into his own world of life close to a vegetable. Can you imagine solitary as a paraplegic? It would be bad enough if you could get up and walk around, but to just lie there with four brick walls, allowing your mind to never shut off.
Lindsay... what can I say? Grandma's the Queen... and you have years of slavery. Serves you right!
I was glad Laura got a second chance for a new life. Yes, I didn't like her to start with, as I'm sure most didn't, but she was a product of her upbringing, which was tough.
Melanie... maybe it's because I read this in pretty much one sitting, but her hatefulness, to me, didn't quite get the punishment she deserved. She willingly went along with the plan... to have... "Brian pay through the nose, and get them out of debt." Extortion. And the verbal diatribe afterward, toward Brian and Justin, was awful, mean, and of poor taste. She out loud blamed Brian because they weren't his babies. Yes, she couldn't practice law for a long time, but she was still able to work with the judge. But, whatever. As I said, if I had read the story as posted, and had to wait between chapters, I might not have felt so strongly.
Brian and Justin... a new level of friendship and lovers. Husbands and fathers. And I loved the baby's names. They were so very Brian.
Yes, I commend you both, the story was very well done, and worth the reread.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
Cathy,
We have a great time working together. Glad you enjoyed our story.
~Nichelle & Lorie
Date: Aug 02, 2019 1:13 am Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
OMG that was amazing..... so glad Craig,Michael and Lindsey got what they deserved in
the end.
Date: Jan 19, 2019 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
good one, never likeed Lindsey
Date: Jun 18, 2017 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
I really enjoyed both stories Bound by Fate and Bound by Love.
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2017 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
Aaaaaamazing story....thank u for sharing....great work.
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2017 2:46 am Title: Chapter 11
Ted is soooo right...lol...i love it.
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2017 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
Jesus....are they totally crazy.......they are all mantle..they need serious help...amazing story.
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lindsey and craig both are pathetic...i hate them..awesome going.
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 3:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Very nice start.. i like it..thank u.
Date: Feb 28, 2017 1:49 am Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
Nice way to wrap up this world. Congrats on another finished story, ladies! TAG
Date: Feb 27, 2017 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
Instant family. Lol. TAG
Date: Feb 27, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yeah, that plan was never going to work, Lindz. Lol. TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2017 5:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
Go, Daph! Lol. TAG
Date: Feb 27, 2017 10:52 am Title: Chapter 3
Michael is again totally clueless. TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2017 10:32 am Title: Chapter 2
Sounds like Craig doesn't have much of a chance to get to anyone around Brian or Justin. Good. TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2017 5:23 am Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
I agree with Justin that Brian donating sperm for the girls would be a disaster - but will they be able to steal it anyways? Ack! As for Michael, he really does need to learn to deal with the consequences of his actions on his own. But will he? Hmm. Let's read & see. TAG
Date: Feb 15, 2017 1:10 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
I'm glad you wrapped it all up so neatly. I like knowing what happened to everyone. Thank you for sharing your story.
Author's Response:
Susi
So happy you enjoyed the story.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 15, 2017 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
I love the idea of Deb and Carl being parents to all those kids.
It seems that Craig and Michael got what they deserved.
Author's Response:
Susi
Deb and Carl don't just want to sit around, they like helping people.
They sure did.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 15, 2017 10:51 am Title: Chapter 12
So that makes two problems solved at once.
Author's Response:
Susi
It's getting to the end.
For some there is only one way out.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 15, 2017 9:53 am Title: Chapter 11
Blake is their new nanny? I love it.
Lindsay definitely got what she deserves. I'm glad Melanie finally realized what a bitch she is.
Author's Response:
Susi
Blake would have been great at this.
Lindsay finally found out there are consequences that she can't talk her way out of.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 15, 2017 8:43 am Title: Chapter 10
Has Lindsay gone completely crazy now?
Author's Response:
Susi
She will find out that she is not as smart as she thinks.
Thanks for reviewing.
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 14, 2017 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad it was that easy for Brian and Justin to get custody. I hope it stays that way.
Author's Response:
Susi
Justin is their father so he has the right to take them.
They will be raised and loved by the boys.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 14, 2017 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
What is she planning? It's not like she has any hold on Brian anymore.
Author's Response:
Susi
Lindsay is like Michael in some ways. She thinks she should always get what she wants in the end.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~