[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2017 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
What a wonderfully complete ending to this fabulous tale. Thanks for letting us know where everyone stands.
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YumYum
Wanted to make sure to wrap it up so everyone got what they deserved.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2017 7:04 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
Michael and Lindsay are getting the exact punishment they deserve for their actions.
Everyone else moved on and eventually found happiness they deserve, a wonderful way to end such a fantastic story.
I look forward to reading it all over again, Thank You :)
Author's Response:
BlueMyst
Very happy that you enjoyed the story.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 10, 2017 6:36 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
Wonderful story!
Thank you for sharing
Author's Response:
SNO
So happy you enjoyed the story
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 10, 2017 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
So LOVED this story.. Thanks again for YET ANOTHER GREAT STORY :)
TERESA
Author's Response:
Teresa
Glad you enjoyed the story.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 10, 2017 3:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
I do not like MIchael, he is beyond delusional and cant even consider that he is EVER wrong.. he is the ONLY one who is right... duh... not sure why we can't all see that! lol
glad Deb took the time to find out the truth and make Michael deal with his own shitstorm.
I do have my own theory about what Lindsay is planning and to say it will backfire is an understatement... bet she can't fathom Justin being the top! (am I right?) lol
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Michael will always be Michael.
Deb has finally gotten a clue about her son
Keep reading
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 10, 2017 12:19 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow, Mikey killed Craig and Catherine. Mikey paralyzed himself, dang. And Justin got $10 mil, yay!!! I live the idea is sticking it to Craig. Deb and Carl are so lucky and finally Brian and Justin are happy.
Author's Response:
BellaDonne
Michael has done something that no one can or will try to fix for him. He will have to pay for what he has done.
Justin and Brian will put that money to good use.
The epilogue will cover the rest.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 9
Now they're one big happy family... Love the babies names!
Hugs Kathleen
Author's Response:
Kathleen
The boys will be great dads.
Nichelle came up with the names.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2017 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
Michael still refusing to deal with reality and now he will be in even more trouble when the authorities finish with him.
Justin and Brian taking that insurance money to help others who have parents or a parent like Craig, helping others is a much better way to stick it to the memory of Craig Taylor.
Deb and Carl running this place is a great idea because they're two caring people willing to help anyone who needs and it helps Deb to be needed since Michael has lost his mind.
Looks like everyone is moving forward with their lives while Michael and Lindsay are left far behind to face the consequences of their actions.
Author's Response:
BlueMyst
This is something Michael will not be able to get out of taking responsbility for.
Justin and Brian are good men who love to help people and the sperm donor's money makes it easy to do.
Deb is someone who needs to be needed. She and Carl have a lot of love and caring to share, this is a way for them to do it.
Karma will fix both of them.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 13
Pretty much knew Michael couldn't die in this. Craig no surprise. I'm assuming Catherine died as well? Even in the state Michael is in, he doesn't see reality for what it is. Still a demanding little fucker. Now what's goingto happen with him? Sith hsi spinal injury, he's going to have to be wheelchair bound adn I'm assuming will expect everyone to drop everything ot accomodate him. while I feel somewhat badly for his physical state, he brought in upon himself. Drinking and drugged up, HE caused it. Won't see it or acknowledge it though. Cheered Deb for sticking to her guns!!!!!! So proud of her. I know she's heartbroken over it, but she sees things for what they are. She has realy family surrounding her and supporting her. Carl is a dream! Absolutely love him in this.
B&J, putting together a home for LGBT kids, a gallery...so amazing! that Deb and Carl will be running it is a perfect scenario for them and also a perfect retirement. Nice that Vic adn Rodney will have the house. Not sure how that will go over with Michael. I'm sure he'll try to battle it out or whine insessantly about it. Maybe try to get them to remortgage it? Who knows with the selfish little asshole.
Perfect reading for this morning!! Thank you. nice way to start the day.
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine
What Michael will have to live with will be worse. Catherine is dead too. There are consequences for vehicular manslaughter.
Deb needs to be needed, this is perfect for her.
Epilogue will update everyone.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh, Michael didn't die. Good luck to him to live with what's coming to him.
Great ideas to spend Craig' insurance money!
Author's Response:
SNO
Michael will probably wish he had died.
Justin wanted to do something with the money that his sperm donor would hate.
Thanks for reviewing.
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 5:17 pm Title: Chapter 12
What a chapter!!! You were on overdrive!
Too much of good things to think of, but I loved the way Jennifer punched Melanie. Soooooo good and so deserved.
As for the end, it will solve some potential problems.
Author's Response:
SNO
There was a lot to tell.
Jen is tough when you mess with her kids.
Yes that definitely fixed a few things.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2017 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh well. One out of two isn't bad. Craig can no longer threaten Justin or anyone else. Unfortunately Michael is a different story. His mean spiritedness will cause himself nothing but pain. Deb and Carl are the perfect people for running the former convent.
Author's Response:
YumYum
Craig just needed to be gone.
Michael will probably wish he had died.
Deb and Carl will love being needed.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 8:49 am Title: Chapter 12
Yaaaay go mother Taylor!!That was one heck of a punch,knocking someone down🤗🤗🤗
So Laura wasn't that bad,only doing those horrible things to prove herself worthy and having low self esteem is kind of hard..But the most interesting is judge Russo being a good person aside with his bestfriend Jamie..So it's all good..And Brian and Justin don't have to worry about their babies being taken away specially now that Craig might die..
I think it was Michael who got slammed with Craig's car,isn't it??
So excited for the next chapterðŸ˜
Author's Response:
April Danielle
Jen is not someone who you want to piss off.
Jamison is a good friend to both Russo and Laura.
No one will take the kids away from their fathers.
Yes the other car was Michael's.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 5:43 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow!
Author's Response:
wellreadbunny
Hoping that was a good 'wow'.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2017 3:11 am Title: Chapter 12
Michael has some nerve wanting Deb to mortgage her house to give him money that he was never going to payback, so it's okay if Deb loses her house just as long as Michael gets what he wants to Hell with Deb living in the streets.
Lindsay got dealt with but good in court and now she has no one to save her, she is going to face the consequences of her actions.
Russo surprised me I was expecting him to help Craig but he has a good friend who is willing to put his anger aside to make sure he does the right thing, Jameson is willing to forgive rather then throw away a forty year friendship for Craig's vendetta, that shows he is a real man.
Melanie got lucky she wasn't sitting with Lindsay at the defendant's table, the judge is giving her a chance to change, her petty, vindictive, jealous behavior almost cost her her career, that it never crossed her mind just goes to show how much she wanted to have power over Brian.
Laura might actually get something that she never had before... a chance to regain herself self-esteem and confidence that her mother robbed her of to satisfy her own selfish needs.
Jennifer came in and laid Melanie flat with that powerful right hook and I Loved it just like everyone else.
But the ending was very surprising and I didn't see it coming at all!!
Author's Response:
BlueMyst
This is the order of who is important to Michael. Number 1- Michael. That's it, there is no one else who is important.
Lindsay found out that Karma will bite you back.
Jamison is a good man and willing to forgive Russo.
Melanie was blinded by what she thought was love.
Laura has learned a lot from Jamison.
Mel learned that Jen is not someone to piss off.
We needed to have a surprise in there somehow.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 2:39 am Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Loving this Thanks for another great story
~HUGS~~
Teresa
Author's Response:
Teresa
Glad you're enjoying this story.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 1:14 am Title: Chapter 12
Damn!!! Really nothing else to say I mean the whole chapter was just-- damn!!
Author's Response:
BellaDonne
Hoping that means you liked it.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2017 12:08 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow. I mean wow! Michael had hit rock bottom, feeling that his mother should support him as if he were five. We were worried that Craig would manage to get those beautiful babies and destroy there lives the way he'd tried with their father. But you fixed it with Michael driving into Craig. Hopefully it's perminant? Then we have Lindsay who is so stuck in her delusions that there is no hope for her unlike Melanie.
Author's Response:
YumYum
Michael has always felt a sense of entitlement. He doesn't think there should be any consequences for his actions.
What happened to Craig and Catherine is definitely permanent. (We're not writing Pet Sematary).
LIndsay, like Michael has always felt a sense of entitlement. She also believes that she should have Brian.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Author's Response:
YumYum
Michael has always felt a sense of entitlement. He doesn't think there should be any consequences for his actions.
What happened to Craig and Catherine is definitely permanent. (We're not writing Pet Sematary).
LIndsay, like Michael has always felt a sense of entitlement. She also believes that she should have Brian.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 08, 2017 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 12
Everytime I read an update, I have moments where honestly, my heart is about to beat out of my chest. Again, another chapter FILLED with excitement, angst, loathing..Amazing
I was hoping that Roy was going to do teh right thing. thank goodness he has such a friend as Jaimie. Good that Jaimie was able to forgive him. The history behind them was interesting adn very informative.
Was very hesitant in trusting Laura when Jaimie first mentioned her. His faith in her proved spot on by the end of the chapter. that whole scene was intense! Mel got off relatively well! Aside from Jenn power punch. (again, well deserved!!) Jenn has a terrific right hook!
YAY! Glenn and Daph are getting hitched! Happy dance! Excited for this to happen.
then there's Lindsey........Having Jaimie as the judge! EPIC! Brilliance! Peed myself reading about what her lawyer said. Her inner thoughts.WOW1 This chick needs to be sent to the psych ward 'casue she's NUTS!
Not exactly sure how i feel about the accident. eaerly death would definitely eas teh angst, but you have to admit, you guys write angst SO well!! REALLY looking forward to how you do this! I hope Deb doesn't go overboard with feeling guilty! She can't take that on! I can totally see michael using it all to hsi own benefit though. Fake a worse injury? Fake amnesia? Not sure if he's smart enough to pull either off. AS usual I'm makignwild guesses.
What a treat today is. Updates galore! SAdly I'm not getting any work done at my desk. bonus is boss is out of the office!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine
Glad you're enjoying the story.
Jamie just proved what a good man he is by forgiving Roy.
Laura had reasons for the way she acted.
Jen is not someone to piss off.
Daphne and Glenn are a good match.
Lindsay, like Craig will find out what Karma has in store for them.
Deb has plenty of people around her to help.
Michael won't need to make anything worse.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 08, 2017 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 11
I was beginning to think that you were going to have Lindsey coming around for a second there. Happy to see otherwise. lol. she really is a foolish little girl isn't she.
That little history lesson re: Nancy adn her parents...my heart hurt for her. Thankfully she found a good man in Ron, adn both are equally disgusted by Lindsey's behavior. they've thrown her to the wolves!
Lindsey certainly underestimated Justini's clout within teh wasp community. I'm sure she will continue to do so as well, but to our amusement. For an educated woman, she's stunningly stupid. While I'm sure her ideas for revenge will be thwarted, I hate seeing all teh stressors on our boys. Wondering who she will align herself with now.
Mel as finally wisened up. Why it took so long is beyond me. Once again, thankful that brian recorded those conversations. They are and will continue to be put to good use.
her plans for a suit for "Alienation fo affections" Oh dear lordy..Quite near died laughing. Is there even a lawyer who will take the case for her? If there is...seriously, how far is she going to get? Any judge worth it's salt will piss himself laughing at the very idea. Wouldn't get past discoveries. that is unless she has some very underhanded lawyer working for her.
Happy the boys and family are settled into their new house. Nice and easily done. thank you Jen.
Did NOT see Blake as teh Manny coming! Very unexpected butwhat a great idea! More and more fun to be had in the house now.
Oh I really really enjoyed reading this. Lindsey's smackdown made my day. Was a grinning fool reading it. Had other grins, happy ones for all the joys that will abound for B&J adn the twins, alongwith the rest of teh gang.
cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine
Lindsay is very narcissistic. She will soon find out what it's like to be really on her own.
Mel thought loving Lindsay could change her.
They needed someone who would be good with their kids and they found him.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 08, 2017 8:18 pm Title: Chapter 11
Well Lindsay just accept it that this could be your end,instead of plotting another scheme to ruin Justin and Brian because obviously you're just gonna fail..With you being arrested what else do you need to add problem to your shitty life..And who by the way reported her??And now even your parents had cut you out from their lives and also Melanie you should learn from it and try to get your life together..
Loved that the Kinney family finally settled in their new house and new life with the babies..With Blake being the manny as Justin put it,it could be interesting in that house..Loved also the closeness that developed between Brian and Ted..
Great chapter as always..Looking forward for the next chapter..
Author's Response:
April Danielle
You'll find out soon who reported her.
Blake loves kids and it's good to have someone you can trust.
Brian and Ted could have been good friends. They are both very caring men.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2017 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
Justin was smart to call Ron and Nancy Peterson they needed to know who their daughter really is and that helping her will destroy everything they made in their little world, I knew Lindsay would go running to them eventually but even they aren't stupid enough to go against someone like Justin Taylor with his kind of money and connections, with one phone call Justin could destroy them and wipe their names off the face of the earth.
So Lindsay is channeling her grandmother Virginia only her retribution came sooner than she expected, Nancy prayed neither of her daughters turned out like her mother but sometimes you don't see the devil until he is ready to reveal himself, what could be excused as being a spoiled brat was actually a vindictive person with evil in their soul.
Wait Jennifer comes from old steel money and Craig cheated on her with the town Slut and tossed Justin out into the streets?
Is He On Crack??
Catherine and Laura can never give him the kind of clout Jennifer, man she really married beneath her, thankfully she dumped the trash so he could marry trash.
Brian and Justin are doing everything they can to make sure their kids have the best in life and now that Blake is working for them they can breathe a little easier.
Every new chapter just blows my mind. Thank You :)
Author's Response:
BlueMyst
Justin only uses his clout when he needs to. Some people just think so highly of themselves they just expect everyone to bow to what they want. Both Lindsay and Craig are like that. They try to show off what they have to make themselves look better, not realizing it just makes them look like they are desperate for attention
Brian and Justin will be wonderful fathers to those kids.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 08, 2017 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
Michael really is in deeper ground,and now helping Craig to ruin Justin is just horrible..And Craig,wow the man is totally evil and pervert,after the mother,now he's aiming for the daughter..And what the heck is he planning to do with the kids???And what about this Russo,i hope he cannot do anything to give Craig what he wants.
As for Lindsay,really saving her own skin just to get what she wants to the point that she's betraying her own wife?!Well see Mel's reaction when she receive the recording Brian is sending her about her perfect cunty of a wife..
Poor Brian being betrayed over and over again by his so called friends is just disappointing..And who was Justin called??
Author's Response:
April Danielle
Michael feels sorry for himself and blames everyone but himself for his problems.
Craig thinks he deserves to get whatever he wants. All he wants the kids for is to hurt Justin. Craig will find out that you can't always get what you want.
Lindsay sees only what she wants, and she wants Brian, so she thinks she should be able to get him.
Brian finally sees his 'friends' for what they really are. He knows he has Justin's love and that's all he needs.
You'll find out soon.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 08, 2017 6:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
Whoa!!! I love how Lindsey's parents and Melanie have closed the doors for her.
The new home seems splendid and with an inhouse manny, the troubles should be limited.
Author's Response:
SNO
Both Lindsay's parents and Mel realize Lindsay only cares about herself.
They need to be able to settle into a happy life.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 08, 2017 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
I just love how this family protect their own members..
Atleast Melanie knows not to pissed off the little sunshine if she doesn't want her ass to be sued..
Great chapter as always. .
Author's Response:
April Danielle
They are family because they care for each other.
Melanie has at least some common sense.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~