Date: Feb 14, 2017 8:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
Michael is going to fall as hard as Justin did. Only he won't have the intelligence and determination to get up again.
Author's Response:
Susi
Michael will learn that he is not above everyone else and he won't like it.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 14, 2017 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 6
So they are both pregnant. Poor babies. That is going to be really tough on everyone.
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Susi
Powerful sperm.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 14, 2017 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ben made the right decision. There is now way Michael will change.
I can't believe Mel and Lindsay actually stooped so low to dig condoms out of the garbage. But it has to be Justin's right?
Author's Response:
Susi
Ben needs to be free to get on with his life.
Lindsay was determined, but she may not get exactly what she wishes for.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 14, 2017 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well done Justin. Well done.
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Susi
Justin no longer has a reason to be afraid of anything Craig tries to do.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 14, 2017 2:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
He doesn't even know Justin. He just needs someone to blame for his own mistakes.
I love Daphne's parents. They seem to understand where they went wrong and try to make it better.
Author's Response:
Susi
Michael is an ass. He only sees what he wants to see, and hears what he wants to hear.
Daphne has good parents, they want their daughter back.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 14, 2017 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Craig is an ass. That's all I have to say. And what the hell will Lindsay try to do? Fishing the condoms out of the trash?
Author's Response:
Susi
Craig is only thinking of ways to help himself.
Lindsay is determined to get what she wants. Any way she can.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 14, 2017 8:47 am Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
I never thought Debbie could be that strong and would listen to all sides. It's a great development.
Author's Response:
Susi
In the show Debbie could be strong with everyone else, now she needs to be srong with Michael.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
I absolutely ADORED this story! so well done, and of course, I love anti-Michael and anti-Lindsay stories. I'm glad Mel was finally redeemed in this one. I do think if she got away from Lindsay, she wouldn't be THAT bitch.
thank you so much for the epilogue. I'm so happy to see how everyone gets their ending!
Mwah!
Author's Response:
Cookiebun,
Glad you enjoyed the story.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
can't say I'm upset about Craig being dead, or Michael's spine
the boarding house and having Deb and Carl there was ingenious!
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
They got what they deserved.
They want to be needed, and they are.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
the judge's chambers was intense
but that ending though.......
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
There was a lot covered in this chapter.
Asfor the ending, Karma's a bitch.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 6:18 pm Title: Chapter 11
Blake being the manny is awesome... keeping it in the family even without knowing it :)
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Needed something as a surprise.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 10
Craig doesn't want kids, denies his own, but just to fuck up Justin's life he thinks he can raise the kids... i'm with Catherine on this one....
Lindsay Lindsay Lindsay... sad and pathetic...and I bet Mel will be one pissed off bitch when Lindsay gets home LOL
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Craig is just a hateful bastard.
Lindsay will find out that she has been out-WASPed.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
fabulous chapter! I love how everyone is so happy for the boys and all want to beat the munchers. seriously Deb's description is perfect. beat one bitch with the other LOL
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Everyone knows what wonderful lives the babies will have with those two as fathers.
Deb is pissed at what the girls did, no matter how much she loves the babies.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 8
So happy that they had a heads up to what the hell those bitches were thinking.
Mel thinks she can undo this? with her legal expertise? the legal mind that thought stealing sperm was totally ok??? wtf
so glad brian and justin are already bonding with THEIR babies! :)
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Jessica felt bad about what she had done and saw a way she could help them, so she did.
Mel is grasping at straws, she knows they're screwed.
The babies will be loved.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 4:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
the gossip session in the diner was fantastic, but my favorite part was Deb finally kicking Michael out!
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Deb has finally had it with Michael's attitude. He wasn't raised to think he is better than everyone else and she's done with putting up with him.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
OH, Lindsay has no idea how much Justin can out WASP her LOL, I like that Mel has figured that out!
they are raw now???? guess Mel and Lindsay timed that one right! lol
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Justin is a good WASP, no one will slap him down.
Yes they are monogamous and raw.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
Craig having a lifetime ban took long enough... I don't know how they dealt with him as long as they did LOL
Emmett and Vic talking to Ben was just perfect. He needed to hear what Michael is like from someone else's point of view.
I was shocked that Justin actually popped his head out to talk to Daph while he was under Brian's desk LOL
I really didn't think Mel would play along with Lindsay's idea... I thought she'd be clueless until she had to be, but she knows how Lindsay got the sperm and she's going along with it??? wow... can't wait to see what happens when the babies are blond and blue eyed, not brunet and hazel LOL (still going with my theory here!)
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
They wanted to make sure they had a reason that he could not dispute.
They wanted to make sure Ben was seeing things clearly.
Nothing phases those two.
You'll find out.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 12, 2017 9:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm so happy that everyone bands together to help against that asshole Craig
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Justin is well loved and no one wants him to be hurt anymore by Craig than he already has been.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 12, 2017 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can't get over the delusion and how self-absorbed Michael is. he even admits to not being there for his friends, but they should ALWAYS be at his beck and call
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Weasel considers himself the center of the universe and he thinks everyone else should too.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 11, 2017 1:15 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
Wow i actually drop some tear of this,its just so beautifully done and written well...I'm gonna miss the boys surely,their chemistry,passion and love for each other is just overwhelming at times..And how they lost two of their member is so devastating to see but the best part is they gain more than you can count..
Loved everything how this story ended.
Thank you for sharing.😘 ðŸ˜
Author's Response:
April Danielle
Thank you for the compliments.
The boys, the kids and the family will have a great life.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 11, 2017 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Thank you ladies for this wonderful story.
I loved it.
Be it good or not so good, everybody got what they deserved. And yes, Karma's a bitch which Michael and Linday will confirm. I just felt so sorry for Debbie to "loose" her son like that.
I loved how everybody else ended up happy. Especially Ben and Mel who really needed a clean break from their partners. May they live happily ever after. I'd love to see how Brian and Justin will cope with their children growing up. Christian and Tiffany have the best parents a child could ever wish for.
Thank you ladies for sharing this story.
XOXO
meriam
Author's Response:
Meriam
So glad you enjoyed the story.
Debbie may have lost a son but she gained so much more.
Those kids will grow up with the greatest parents and family.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 11, 2017 2:31 am Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
Beautiful fic!
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Author's Response:
JoAnn
Glad you enjoyed our story
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2017 12:54 am Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
Really good story everyone got what they deserved but sorry to see it end. â¤
Author's Response:
Lorna
Very glad you enjoyed the story.
Karma took care of everyone.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 11, 2017 12:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Craig shouldn't get far
and I REALLY think my Lindsay theory is so true... blonde + blonde does not + mini Brian LOL
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Craig is an ass and Karma's a bitch.
Keep reading
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 10, 2017 9:52 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE
Wow, this was not the fitiuous world to f up in, lol. Poor Linds and Mikey, the future looks bleek. As for everyone else it happiness and a side of finally happy.
Thanks for writing this ladies, I enjoyed it.
BellaDonne Karma took care of everyone. They all got what they deserved. Glad you enjoyed the story Thanks for reviewing ~Nichelle & Lorie~
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