[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2017 12:08 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm assuming that Craigs little talk won't go well. As for Lindsay, just supposing she gets in and convenscates a used condum who's to say the jizz is Brian's? lol.
Author's Response:
YumYum
Craig's talk will be interesting. Lindsay will learn some new things. We are almost finished writing the story, but we can't give away too much. Trust us, it will be a fun ride.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 01, 2017 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
OK, so, gotta say. WOW! and a side of Holy Shitballs! A ton is happening already and it's only chapter 2.
Craig is seriously...I don't even have words. Hateful doesn't begin. You know that feeling, before you toss your cookies, that bile that churns and burns and then eventually finds itself in the toilet, only to be frlushed. Yeah...that's Craig.
I have to chuckle and shake my head when Craig described Brian as "weak-willed adn easily influenced" Can we all just sit and say BAHAHAHA! I was a bit concerned at possible outcomes that Craig my devise, but when I read that, and realized his true level of complete delusion, my fears are laid a side somewhat. No doubt he will do anything and everythign in his and anyone eles's power to bring his nemesises (is there a different plural for that ? Nemisi? Neminseseseses... ;) ) I am actually looking forward to how you and Lorie bring about his, huh, downfall is too kind of a word really...his nuclear meltdown? Either way, dear me, having him be a spectacular failure is going to be most entertaining to read. this he assumed would be on his side, he will quickly learn are no longer in hsi allegience. Other he may find will simply use him to gain more information in order to bring about his demise faster (and better).
Lindsey...I'm seeing a possibility here. Justin's kid instead of Brian's. Oh teh fallout would be sublime! Mel would shit her pants! I can even imagine the legal ramifications from that. Even if say it was Brian's...same thing. He would deny any allowable insemination. He's still go for custody. He's sue the hell out of both of them. Criminal charges?? Oh the possibilities are endless.
So grateful that Brian and Justin have su much support. They're going to need it even for teh emotional aspect of it. but I can foresee all of them circling the wagons around our boys and doing everything in their powers to fix any scenario.
Feel bad for Deb though. she's going to suffer greatly in this. she knows her some is a fool and has become a self righteous little bastard. How eve got away with disrespecting her as much as he did is beyond me, but it will end here, and everyone around her will make sure of it. the little bastard.
thank you for this!!! Excellent chapter to what is going to be a brilliant 2nd installment to the Boundless series. Can't wait to see what happens next! Definitely want to read about that dinner!! what happens with Michael next? Staying tuned in!!
sorry.man I'm long winded in these things aren't I?
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine
Craig will try to cause trouble as usual. Lindsay... it will get interesting. Deb... the boys will be there for her. Things will get interesting in this story. There's a lot to tell.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2017 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Looks Like Harriet and Jennifer are going to be busy at the country club once they find out what Craig is up to, perhaps the Chanders can get in their daughter's good graces by apologizing and helping to deflect whatever Craig tries to do.
Since Brian has up the security around his business, Justin and Daphne I hope he has security around the loft because it would be nice to have evidence of Lindsay breaking and entering. (Just wish Melanie and Michael were with her)
Perhaps Harriet should keep an eye on the Petersons because I don't see them not getting involved.
Glenn is one persistent young man I hope Daphne is appreciating the lengths he is going and after maybe talking to her parents she puts the man out of his misery and goes out with him. lol
Michael has been to quiet wonder what he is up to and does Ben know about the lawsuit yet?
Author's Response:
BlueMyst
Jen and Harriet will have a few fun adventures. Daphne's parents love her and want the best for her. The security will be with them but not at the loft. Harriet keeps track of whatever is necessary. Glenn should be able to wear her down. Michael is not finished causing trouble. Ben finally sees the light.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 01, 2017 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Excellent beginning to the next part. Deb has declared her side. Mikey and Linds are frightening. I wonder how Linds will solve her problem? Will Justin drop the suit? Will Mikey lose everything? Will Brian die from pleasure? And, will Justin gain some weight somewhere other than his ass? Can't wait for answers to these and more.
Author's Response:
BellaDonne
Deb realized what Michael is really like. There will be more to come from both the weasel and the bitch. It will be interesting. No Justin will not drop the suit. We'll see. Maybe (jk, would never let sexy die). Justin uses the best exercise to burn off what he eats, with Brian to look at who wouldn't? More good stuff to come.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2017 5:09 am Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Loving it.
Glad Deb is the sticking up for Michael
Lindsey and Mel I see nothing but trouble coming.
Looking forward to the next (all) chapter.
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Author's Response:
Lorna,
There will definitely be trouble coming, from several places.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 01, 2017 2:27 am Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Oh shit now!
Author's Response:
JP,
Hoping that means you like it. It will be an interesting journey.
Thanks for reviewing
~Chelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Hopefully you have a way to put the kubosh to Mel and Lindsay's manipulation. Love how Emmett steps up for Brian and Justin. Am also pleased that Debbie is seeing her son for the way he really is without making any excuses for him.
Author's Response:
YumYum,
Mel and Lindsay, well they have a lot to do. It will be an interesting ride for them. For Emmett, being strong and honest is the best way for him. Debbie is finally sick and tired of her son's manipulations and sees what others see in her son.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Proud of Deb for not flying off the handle and taking Michael's word she went to Brian and Justin to get the truth and now Michael is going to learn to deal with the consequences of his actions.
Justin knows Lindsay and Melanie pretty good but I don't remember if they know who Justin is and what will happen to them if they hurt Brian.
Perhaps it is time for the three babies to learn that hurting Brian and Justin has dire consequences, and for Craig and his trollop to learn that they should leave well enough alone.
Bravo for coming back to this story and building up the tension, will have to read the first all over again :)
Author's Response:
BlueMyst,
I hope you will like how this plays out. There are a lot of surprises to come. A lot of people don't take well to being fucked with, as certain people will find out.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 8:30 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
I am so happy that there is a second part of this story. I really loved "Bound by Fate" and reading the last chapter of it I could not stop thinking what was going to happen next.
Love you and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Steph,
It took a while between real life and the holidays, but we have been working on this since we finished Bound By Fate. Most of it is already written. Very glad you like this story.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~