Date: Jan 26, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Chains
Oh my...aninnocent child is now in teh mix of it all. Well, Justin will do anything and everything to provide for her and keep her safe. He hsa a month to try and find a way out of this. Hopefully Brian and everyone will be able to find them by then. Save them both. I get the impression though that by the time Justin and babe do get rescued, he will do what ever it takes to keep her.
Kip and Lee. Wow. Lee's backstory is frigging terrifying. Kip, knowing about it and yet still collaborating with Lee to get Justin is just....wow. No words. Lee is a sociopath. Kip is a coward, plain and simple. Not too sure which is worse.
I'm as tense as a tiger reday to pounce. Please update soon. The suspense is a killer. Mind you...I get the impression that the suspense level will continue to be amped up for some time yet.
Am in this woth both feet now. I was going to wait for a bit as I'm currently reading so many other WIP's, but nope....had toread the first chapter to see if it was my cup of tea and now I'm completely hook.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the story. Yeah, sorry susense might get a little thicker with next chaper.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2017 3:37 pm Title: Chains
Wow! This is a seriously bad situation. But hey, at least we're avoiding the full-out torture. But how are you going to get Justin out of this? Better hurry and post more, please. TAG
Author's Response:
Yes, the torture warning was mostly about Lee's previous victims.
Date: Jan 26, 2017 2:35 pm Title: Chains
Kip is as worst as his brother!!He knows what his brother is capable of and saw it himself what he did to that woman,but still he agreed to kidnapped Justin??He really doesn't have any backbone just like always!!And also he knows about his niece getting starve he just left her with that monster??!!!Although he's feeling a little guilty,well too late..Just wait until Brian found you!!!
Poor sunshine,i hope he can scape...I'm sure he would take the baby with him...
Thank u for sharing.😘 Can't wait for the next chapter...
Author's Response:
Kip is pretty dispicable. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Date: Jan 26, 2017 1:13 pm Title: Chains
OMG! What a twist! I'm looking forward to Justin figuring a way out of this. Perhaps the little girl's grandparents know of Brian and Justin? I really hope so. Again I'm on edge. Lee and Kip need their asses whipped. Better yet Kip needs to grow a pair!
Looking forward to the next chapter chapter!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Don't count on Kip being any kind of stand up guy. I'm so glad you're liking the story.
Date: Jan 26, 2017 12:07 pm Title: Chains
That was a twist I wasn't expecting. I know Justin will make sure she is alright. I do hope Brian can find them before the month is out.
Author's Response:
I'm glad people weren't expecting it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2017 5:36 am Title: Face from the Past
You caught me, I hadn't thought Kip!
Author's Response:
At least I'm not obvious,, lol. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2017 4:24 am Title: Going for a Ride.
You've given us some great suspects, but I think we'll be surprised at who the culprit is.
Author's Response:
And it seemed you were, hehe. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2017 4:13 am Title: Wedding Day
I'm glad you let us know that Justin didn't leave on his own. I'm still suspicious of Michael, he seems too nice.
Author's Response:
Lol in this story Michael is good. He's still Michael but it's not a anti-Mikey story. Thank you for reveiwing.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 7:11 pm Title: Face from the Past
What the heck!!It was Kip and his brother?and a serial killer no less??!!!Oh My God I almost pee on my pants when that guy hit Justin on his head!!Please don't let anything happen to Justin or touch his previous head injury??And please don't torture him,can't bear to hear sunshine being tortured....
I hope Brian would pull himself together and help Carl whatever he can to get a clue where Justin could be??
Author's Response:
I will try and keep the violance and torture down. But there will be some. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 6:57 pm Title: Going for a Ride.
Whoever could that guy be?I would assume he's straight guy because he doesn't have a clue about the relationship between Brian and Justin..But what's the reason of the kidnapping when he just took off taking Justin with him and without even hurting sunshine??
I hate that Holloway guy,just opening his mouth without any consideration about the family's feeling specially Brian..They should let Jen deal with him....
Poor Brian,everything of what he's done to push Justin away from him before all comes back to haunt him...Hope Carl can find a lead sooner..
Author's Response:
Eek, I hope chapter four answers some of those questions. Sadly, it's not the last we'll see of Holloway.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 6:39 pm Title: Wedding Day
Whoa what a start!!Someone got a hold of Justin against his will but atleast they allowed him to write Brian which is good for him to get a clue that he didn't leave on hiw own and stupid part whoever who kidnapped Justin..Weĺl after all our little sunshine didn't get high score on SAT for nothing..One thing that i like in this story is Michael friendly,don't get me wrong but i'm a huge anti Michael & Lindsay's fan but for a change once in a while,i love to see a caring Mikey and seems like he and Justin get along better here than before..
Thanks for sharing.😘
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the start. I like anti-Mikey stuff too but sometimes I just want nice Mikey. There is already two villians in this story, no need for more. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 4:47 pm Title: Face from the Past
Woah...KIP?!?! Seriously?! WOW!! That wasn't even a blip on my radar! Holy shitballs. Oh this is going to be all bad! I'm hoping there isn't alot of violence for justin. Very concerned about that. That blow to the head is already concerning. The fact that Kip's brother has such a history is really disturbing. No wonder Brian is having a melt down. will they figure out this guy is Kip's brother? will the be able to put it all together and rescue Justin sooner rather than later? I certainly hope so and that Kip and hi brother get their just desserts.
I must say...there were several times where the hair on my arms stood straight. Very nerv wracking! Well done!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I didn't think Kip would have been anyones guess. There will be some violance and torture, but I promise it won't be graphic or a lot. I'm glad the story is entertaining. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 4:38 pm Title: Going for a Ride.
Hmmm. curious as to who has Jstin. It's obvious it's someone that doesn't know him, at least not by sight. Wondering what the guy meant by "I know what you are" when Justin mentioned getting married...that was a strange interaction.
I'm not sure Craig would be behind it. Again, the kidnapper alluded to Justin being something...I really want to find out what he meant. Other possiblities? Countless...
OK...off to read the next chapter. See if any of my questions get answered. I love a mystery I must say. I can see myself becoming suspicious of any number of people.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I hope to keep you liking it. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 4:02 pm Title: Face from the Past
Tortured for weeks before being killed is definitely NOT good. TAG :/
Author's Response:
Definitely not. Thank you for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2017 3:52 pm Title: Going for a Ride.
Hmmmmm . . . Who's the mysterious giant man? Why would anyone want to kidnap our Sunshine? Very intriguing. TAG
Author's Response:
Sorry I just saw these reviews. I guess you know now. LOL. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 12:04 pm Title: Face from the Past
And the plot thickens. Kip! I guess it's his brother who is leading this. Kip doesn't have the balls to do it on his own.
Poor Brian. He has to find his Sunshine.
Author's Response:
I know, sadly Brian isn't going to be happy or have his Sunshine for a little bit. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 11:57 am Title: Face from the Past
That damn crater-faced mongrel!!! I hope they work fast. Yes Justin is tough and has endured a lot of pain but he's never been at the mercy of an actual killer. Hopefully Kip in all his arrogance blabs to the wrong person immediately. It would be just like him to brag that he was the one to finally separate Brian and Justin. The only good thing so far is that Carl and crew will have the element of surprise... well that is if they can pinpoint his whereabouts.
Damn what a way to wake up!!! Great job!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I can see you're not a Kip fan. I hope you like this next chapter. My computer flaked out on me so it's a little different than it was before. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Jan 24, 2017 9:19 am Title: Going for a Ride.
Very intersting start. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I hope you like this chapter. I'm kind of nervous how it will go over. Thanks.
Date: Jan 24, 2017 8:30 am Title: Going for a Ride.
OMG!!!! Who the hell has Justin?! Of course my first initial thought is Craig hired some goons to keep Justin from marrying Brian and putting him in some kind of Conversion Camp. But then that would probably be too obvious no matter how plausible. Hobbs definitely owes Justin for the whole gun incident but considering what the asshole did, Chris might just have called it even. The only other people I can think of is Ethan, wo certainly wouldn't want Justin happy with Brian or even worse the Sap since he has a vendetta against both Brian and Justin. OMG!! This is already starting to drive me a little insane! LOL Looking forward to the next chapter!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
This will answer the big questions. I hope you like it. Thank you for the review, it made my day.
Date: Jan 23, 2017 9:34 pm Title: Wedding Day
Damn!! What a beginning! Anxiety spiked already but can't wait for the next installment!
Happy Writing,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Oh gosh. Thank you. I hope the new chapter doesn't let you down.
Date: Jan 23, 2017 9:05 pm Title: Wedding Day
WOW! That's some way to start off a story! I'm ready for chapter 2 already! Welcome to KD! TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm hoping people like it. I'm glad you do.