Date: Jan 31, 2017 4:49 pm Title: Chains
It just gets sadder and sadder...Now not only does Justin just have to worry about himself, but a helpless little girl. Oh dear...what monsters! I don't care if Kip is feeling guilty, clearly he isn't feeling badly enough! He needs to suffer. He and his brother both. I hope they really aren't stuck there for a whole month. I can't imagine how torn up Brian and the family would be.
Author's Response:
Yes, sorry about that. Too much Forensic Files I think.
Date: Jan 31, 2017 4:25 pm Title: Face from the Past
Oh no...This is bad...this is really bad. Stupid Kip! He couldn't just leave well enough alone could he? I hope they don't mess up Justin's head even worse.
Author's Response:
I never liked Kip, I always thought he would come back, so I made him.
Date: Jan 31, 2017 4:06 pm Title: Going for a Ride.
Ohhhh...This is so good! I wonder who took him. And why! I hope he'll be okay....At least he's got his family looking out for him.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it.
Date: Jan 31, 2017 3:39 pm Title: Found
Thank you.
Author's Response:
You're welcome.
Date: Jan 31, 2017 2:27 pm Title: Found
Aaaah thank u thank you thank you,you finally updated🤗😘
Whòooaa I had my heart on my throat the moment Sap put the knife on Justin's neck..But thank God zypher(Mikey) distracted him and then the cops..Now i can breathe again truthfully,since yesterday i've been a mess thinking of Justin could be under Sap's hand,crazy that I am but yes that's me..Too bad though this exciting and beautiful story would end sooner that i want to be..I got addicted by it...
Thank u again for the update and sharing.😘..Good luck with the Epilogue,can't wait for itðŸ˜ðŸ˜š
Author's Response:
I hope the last chapter is liked. I've had such fun writing this story, i'm so glad you've enjoyed. it.
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 2:19 pm Title: Found
Hurray! Brian finally found Justin and Mikey even helped! Hope the Sap got a splinter when he was taken down. Bobbie Jo will be so happy to see her daddy again. I guess this means that Gus gets another little sister.
Author's Response:
Mikey was a superhero.
Date: Jan 31, 2017 1:11 pm Title: Found
YES!!!!! That rat bastard is foiled AGAIN!! And for once, Michael was the hero. WOW! I'm exhausted after reading this. Glad that the fire chief was still close by to get custody of Barbara Jo. They should still give that punk ass Lee the death penalty and castrate Sapperstein, even though I don't think he'll miss the extra belly button all that much. Nub-having-Bum Ass Bastard.... so many names I could call him, so little time!
I will be sad to see this end and yet so HAPPY that Justin was found hale, and if not whole, at least largely unharmed to a degree. Rage and Zephyr truly saved the day!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it. I was worried it wouldn't be well recieved. Hopefully this last chapter will be liked too.
Date: Jan 31, 2017 11:55 am Title: Found
I'm so glad Justin has been found. Can't wait to read the last chapter.
Author's Response:
I hope it doesn't disappoint.
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 6:09 am Title: Cops and Criminals
Please tell me you have Brian find Justin?
Author's Response:
LOL. New chapter is up, I guess you'll get your answer. Thanks for reveiwing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 6:02 am Title: Fever
OMG! To get so close. I'm sure Kip would have given them the location and that is probably why Lee killed him.
Author's Response:
>>>Evil laugh
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2017 6:08 am Title: Cops and Criminals
Go, Brian, go! TAG
Author's Response:
He's going, I promise.
Date: Jan 30, 2017 4:33 am Title: Cops and Criminals
I thought we were in for good news and it just gets worse. Please happy thoughts.
Author's Response:
I don't think the good will come until the epilogue. But on the plus side it might be really good.
Date: Jan 30, 2017 3:24 am Title: Cops and Criminals
My heart is racing!! That bum-ass bastard Sapperstein!!! Good Lord, when they say birds of a feather flock together, there was never a more true statement when it comes to Hunter, the Sap and Kip!! YECK, YUCK, BLECH!! Poor Justin! I soooo hope he won't have to submit to that turd's advances. If Sapperstein pulls down his pants, Justin should laugh at him to cause his pint-size frank and beans to go further into hiding. Nasty-Summa.... <in my Bernie Mac voice>
Hopefully now that Carl has a third piece of this jigsaw puzzle of suspects, they will look into Sapperstein. As for Lee, I hope they don't give him a deal of any kind. Let the bastard stand trial and get the maximum sentences on all counts. Hopefully Sapperstein will stand trial with the bastard. Incidentally, now I question if Lee actually killed his bother instead of Gary.
Hmmm... definitely food for thought and certainly eager for MORE of this story!!
Great Job!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Gosh, thank you so much. You might not like this new chapter too much. I'm sorry in advance. I'm so glad you continue to like the story, hopefully I won't lose you with the new chaper.
Date: Jan 30, 2017 2:52 am Title: Cops and Criminals
Wow everything is connected,but this Sap is the one i hated the most..Hoping Brian can get to Justin before Sap could do anything to him..Thinking about that guy touching sunshine want me to throw up!!
Aaah Barbara Jo,what have you done,you shouldn't run like that..Poor sunshine can't do anything...
Brian hurry up......!!!!
Loved it,another great chapter..and wow just two more chapter and this will be over soon....Well i'll just look forward for your another upcoming story then..I love this one,so i'm sure i would love whatever your having next,knowing your a brilliant writer and all...Thanks for sharing..
Author's Response:
I think the Sap is on everyones most hated list. Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm so glad you're liking it. I can't wait for this to be done, I have loved to hear what people say about it in reviews. I'm just so glad that people are liking it and not saying it's stupid and to never write again.
Date: Jan 29, 2017 3:22 pm Title: Fever
Wow so Hunter killed his brother too?well it's Kip's own fault things got that way,he knows what he's brother's capable of..Anyway I hope they find them sooner bcoz the baby could be seriously ill and Justin would do anything for the baby to get some help..
Seriously though,Neverbreeze,you're killing me here from excitement and nervousness,just to think of Justin slicing his foot is already a torture until we know what happens on next chapter..You are such a brilliant writer and torturer at the same time but i love every minute of it..Thanks for updating😘
Author's Response:
I"m so glad you are liking to story. Thank you so much for the compliment. I have a short one shot that i'll post after this one is finished. Only two more chapters.
Date: Jan 29, 2017 3:17 pm Title: Fever
WOW!!! So Kip is dead? Of course him questioning Lee about what he planned to do with Justin lying on the ground possibly listening to the exchange was an automatic solution for self-preservation *snickers*. Idiot! Part of me is glad he is dead but the other part of me feels he escaped to easily regardless of the 20+ stab wounds.
So now the race is on to find Justin and Bobbie Jo...SMH I keep wondering how Carl hasn't come across Lee owning that cabin while investigating the man. Something is there but he has to be missing it. Who could that cabin belong to if not Lee? So many twists and turns to go with! Too bad Brian isn't allowed to beat the truth out of Lee. He's far too smug in thinking that he has the upper hand. And in all fairness, they are being forced to ask him for answers, so maybe that is affording Lee a level of self-satisfaction but still...
I had to smile a little when Bobbie Jo called Justin 'Daddy.' It makes sense since he's the one taking good care of her. It broke my heart, as it did with Justin, that she's come to think of the chain around his ankle as normal. What a way for this child to grow up! Hopefully Justin can figure a way out without maiming himself or some random person is going to come by the cabin. Far-fetched I know, but I'm just desperate enough to hope at this point!
Again, great job! I'm totally invested in this story!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
So, no sadness for Kip? LOL. Poor little Bobbie Jo, her little life has been a rollar coaster. Thank you for reviewing. Two more chapters
Date: Jan 29, 2017 3:10 pm Title: Under the Sea
Oh my God!!I hope they can connect at what happen to Cynthia with Justin being missing...When can they find Justin??It's a good thing the kid is with him if not Justin would die from loneliness..Brian hurry finding SunshineðŸ˜
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I love these reviews. Thank you.
Date: Jan 29, 2017 1:58 pm Title: Fever
I do hope they can find Justin and Bobbie Jo soon.
I'm so glad they have Lee in custody.
Author's Response:
Only two more chapters, so they better. LOL. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: Jan 29, 2017 3:59 am Title: Fever
Please don't cut your foot off yet, Justin. :/
Author's Response:
It was just a passing thought for him. Both feet. But you're not gonna like the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2017 4:54 am Title: Under the Sea
Now that the cops have Hunter what will happen to Justin and Bobbie Jo? So sweet of Justin to write a story just for her.
Author's Response:
I thought it's what he would do wiithout books to read to her.
Date: Jan 27, 2017 10:48 pm Title: Under the Sea
But what's going to happen to Justin with Lee in police company? He & the baby won't have food. :/
TAG
Author's Response:
That is the question. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Jan 27, 2017 10:48 pm Title: Under the Sea
I'm so glad Ted had Eugene follow Cynthia out.
Poor Justin. I know he's trying to make the best out of his captivity. I'm glad that Bobbie Jo is trusting him now. I do hope they both can get out of their alive and safely.
The one thing I worry about is Justin is going to become very attached to that little girl. He's not going to want to let her go.
Author's Response:
You don't even what to know how close Cynthia acutally became a new victim. I thought better of it though. He is that, you'll see in new chapter that the feelings are returned.
Date: Jan 27, 2017 2:28 pm Title: Under the Sea
Good chapter. I was so worried about little Bobbi Jo.Good for Ted.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I can't write terrible things about kids, just can't.
Date: Jan 27, 2017 1:31 pm Title: Under the Sea
Justin and Bobby Jo are making the best of a horrible situation. Kip.....that is all!!
Well now Lee had done it! He tried to nab Cynthia!!!!! And there are witnesses to his actions! Hopefully the police will be able to make the connection between Lee and the murders but most importantly as the man who stole Justin.
I'm waiting with baited breath for the next chapter. It's times like this I wish I could ban real life for all of our writers (myself included) to let story continue immediately.
Great Job!
HUGS,~
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Sorry it took so long for the new chapter. It's up now. I wish I could ban real life too. I hope you like it. A lot you talked about is in the story.
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2017 12:31 am Title: Chains
Here's hoping that they find Justin and the little girl quickly.
Author's Response:
Can I say sorry early?