[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2017 3:36 am Title: Chapter 10
Nicely done. The kitten will win him over eventually.
Date: Jan 29, 2017 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 9
I really love this Cat and Mouse B/J's playing..Why Justin seems to be too scared to commit to Brian?But Brian is a little persistent in this one,so Justin can't really hide..
Date: Jan 29, 2017 10:45 am Title: Chapter 9
Yeah!!! Shower scene...
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2017 6:03 am Title: Chapter 9
Tell me that now we'll have Justin chasing Brian and Brian lets him.
Date: Jan 29, 2017 12:10 am Title: Chapter 8
Where do you come up with this shut? It is so funny.
Date: Jan 28, 2017 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
The caveman attitude is better for Brian; dating is not his style.
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2017 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
Poor Brian, he almost had it right but Michael messed him up. Though I don't think it bothered Justin so much. Very funny and an excellant chapter.
Date: Jan 28, 2017 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
This is hysterical! Love that Deb isn't blinded by her son anymore, go Deb! MM has got to go back to Portland or meet Ben...please!
Date: Jan 28, 2017 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
I LOVE Justin!!! I can't say that enough. OMG Michael, someone please hit him with a clue bus (or train)Another great story.
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2017 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
“You really need to talk to someone about what people do on dates.” Hahahaha! TAG
Date: Jan 27, 2017 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh Brian, you spke too soon my friend. While pondering the idea of keeping the house in order to stop people from dropping by.......MM shows up dragging a bunch of apparently very unattractive men-folk with him. Yup, I 'd say Ted and Emmett are toast. Not only that, but "The squad" shows up as well.
HAve to say, that little secretive choice of words between Deb and Brian shows the trust he has in her, and the knowledge that she'll understand. He's definiltey going to have Deb on his side now and helping Justin get to know Brian in ways he should.
I gather I'm going to need the brain bleach to wash away the picture of MM, along with Guido in the Speedo. *shudders*. You realize you're punishing yourself as much as the rest of us tight? How you get through writing it all is beyond me. Hats off to you!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 27, 2017 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
Really loving this whimsical Justin! And the slippers/shoes are perfect! TAG
Date: Jan 27, 2017 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
Hysterical right up until Brian hopes for a home run are dashed! Lol! I want them to move forward but this was too funny. Mikey is funny as f too.
Date: Jan 27, 2017 5:46 am Title: Chapter 7
Ha ha ha!!! Who would have guessed Brian knew about dates' rules!
Hilarious, as usual. Well done.
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2017 5:43 am Title: Chapter 7
Darn. I was hoping that MM got carted to the jail. He ruined any chance that Brian had with Justin. Though to help Teddy, Justin might give in.
Date: Jan 27, 2017 5:04 am Title: Chapter 6
First contact with Gus and it's a hit!
Now, they are alone and far away. Hard to try to escape...
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2017 12:02 am Title: Chapter 6
His meeting Gus went over good. I think if he had to deal with anyone Gus would be the one. Wonder how he feels about the house?
Date: Jan 26, 2017 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
The duckies were too cute. Justin is funny in this. I understand his embarrassment Brian did withhold important info, lol. Now that they are at the house I wonder if Justin will keep running or let himself be captured.
Date: Jan 26, 2017 2:25 am Title: Chapter 5
Love love love! Can't wait for the next chapter so we can see Justin's reactions & what he thinks of his asshole boss lol priceless! Daphne is the best!
Date: Jan 25, 2017 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is delightful. Another excellent chapter!!!
Date: Jan 25, 2017 6:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hahaha! (Can't stop laughing long enough to write a sensible review). TAG
Date: Jan 25, 2017 4:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
Such fun! Am enjoying this Justin and Brian. Funny interactions between them. Justin really is an odd duck isn't he. I really enjoy the different takes you have on the characters with each story you write.
I'm really trying to wrap my head around this Michael. The image I have in my head may be a little bit more ridiculous than you intended. LOL. I keep seeing him in a t-shirt and under-roos.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 25, 2017 11:18 am Title: Chapter 5
This is really cute, I love your different Justins every story has a completely original take on that character.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 9:16 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh that's priceless😶😶if I were Justin i wouldn't just sink under the table but hoping the floor would open and swallow me😅😅😅But it's kind of cute as well..I just love how Brian is playing him..And i think he's developing some feeling for Justin too..ðŸ˜
But cutest one is Brian is feeling disappointed when he didn't see Justin wearing his obsession..
Date: Jan 25, 2017 5:51 am Title: Chapter 4
This is so good and funny!