Date: Aug 04, 2019 5:52 am Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU
Hmm... I just realized I never left a final review. Not surprised as I had stayed up all night reading it last time, while devouring a 12 pack of diet pepsi. Anyway, it was an awesome story. I liked the slight changes you have just made too. If I could have added anything in to the final scene with David, I think the guys should have stood in front of him, Brian reaching around and jerking Justin off, then when Justin let go of his release, sprayed it all over David's face. Kind of a 'Dorothy and the Wicked Witch of the West'. Think it would have worked? Yeah, probably not. But David certainly would have lost any erection he had.
Thank you for bringing ALL of Liberty Avenue into a remake of a cross between Mr. and Mrs. Smith, and Dexter.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 11:34 am Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
WARNING: EXTREME GRAPHIC VIOLENCE ...
Here I was so sure David was going to get his just-due, and yet the other two cretins who suffered their demise. And oh, what a demise it was. It didn't bother me reading it... what does that say about me? *yikes*
But through the ?horror? I really had a good laugh... mini-uncooked bratwurst ...
Wherever do you come up with this stuff? have you ever read Richard Laymon? It kind of reminds me of a couple of his novels.
Well, I do hope we get to be witness to the Docs, too.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 10:36 am Title: Chapter 8- LOVE AND WAR
You're kind of sadistic, aren't you? Even I shuddered with the 357 Magnum between the legs. Ouchy, Mama!
I hope Debbie gives it to Cameron good! VERY Painful. I hate men who exert their power and strength over someone weaker.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 10:11 am Title: Chapter 7- CHAPTER SEVEN: IT’S A THIN LINE BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE Take 2
That was ... Interesting.
David is a scum of the lowest kind. After everything David said at the table, when Mikey does not show back up and they go looking for him, there is going to be no question in anyone's mind who killed the two in the bathroom.
I really hope there is a slow, painful death planned for David.
Ah-ha! Brandon was a good guy. I guessed wrong.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 8:24 am Title: Chapter 6- LET LOVE RULE
I see I was wrong earlier about the address. Apparently, Brian and Justin already own the loft.
I was enjoying the chapter immensely, until toward the end. I have mixed feelings. If Michael is aware of what's going to happen, why push buttons? If you're going to stick around, either OBEY, or GET OUT! Because you know what's going to happen, if you don't.
EEW, YUCKY... Justin, Michael... So, not only is Michael jealous of Justin, he's jealous of Brian, too. He's wanted both of them... permanently, and they have both shunned him sexually, and yet have each other.
Is this where I say I'm looking forward to David's demise? Besides, I can't take any more of his fantasy thoughts about him and Brian. *shudder*
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 7:12 am Title: Chapter 5- LOVE ON TWO-WAY STREETS leads to POSSIBLE LONELY HIGHWAYS
WOW! So much going on. So, Sap and Kip... EEW! Worse yet... Brian and David??? So, Michael must be a replacement therapy. So sad that Brian didn't give David the fight he wanted... NOT!
So, Michael hasn't seen Brian for ten years, but he still thinks he's his best friend. Yeah, I don't think so. Am I surprised everybody thinks of him as a sniveling, whiny man? Nope.
I thought of one more, could-be, bad guy. Brandon. I wonder if he will pop up. Anyway...
I like Jen's and Ben's past, nice touch.
Why didn't Em see and notice Jackie's attraction and lay a big 'ole wet one on Ted?!? that would be comedy in the best of form.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 5:06 am Title: Chapter 4- LOVE, EXCITING AND NEW….and EXPENSIVE as HELL!!
Holy mother! A big enough arsenal within their home! And they kept their lives SECRET!?! And I loved some of the places you came up with that Justin was using as hiding places! Sneaky blond!
Now we have the little pissant following them! Lordy! If he follows them to where they are going, they are going to have to tie him up and muzzle him!
Is the warehouse at 6 Fuller, corner of Tremont?
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 4:08 am Title: Chapter 3- LOVE COMES DOWN TO THIS….
Okay, I could have sworn the beginning of the chapter was something I would have watched in The War of the Roses, with Kathleen Turner and Michael Douglas if they had been secret hitman. Shooting up their house? hene...
Okay, so you are bringing in Mel and Lindz? Okaayyy!
Absolutely loved this... 'killing husbands while fucking'... I did see a woman do that on a movie one time too. Kind of messy though. If I ever write a murder mystery...
Loving it!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Aug 01, 2019 3:30 am Title: Chapter 2: MAKE ME DO FOR LOVE WHAT I WOULD NOT DO
HOW IS IT, THAT I HAVE NEVER READ THIS!?!
I was needing to get out of the heavy, so I looked at what else you've written, and settled on this!
Very different concept. I see we don't have Mel and Lindz as cast of characters, so that in itself should be interesting. I did see it's Anti-Cameron, which should be interesting since Mikey is holed up with him.
But, let's see... for still having 53k words to read, we've already have read of, Stockwell, Hobbs SR and Chris, Gardner, Craig and Ethan's demise. Boo-hoo. I'm trying to figure out who we have left. Well, David of course, (it stands to reason) the Sap, HMM... Russo and Kip? I'm doing my best to think Villians here. Reichert? Okay, I'm done...
The only thing at this point that I can see, is B/J talking, come clean with each other, and join forces... because I can almost be certain they don't kill each other.
Good Story, so far.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Nov 02, 2018 3:16 am Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU
Interesting
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2018 4:25 pm Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU
Unfuckingbelievable ...u guys are pure evil...jesus...that was one hell of a way to kill someone...very clever.
Loved the fic...everything was awesome...great team work.
Thank u for the outstanding story.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2018 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU
Unfuckingbelievable ...u guys are pure evil...jesus...that was one hell of a way to kill someone...very clever.
Loved the fic...everything was awesome...great team work.
Thank u for the outstanding story.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2018 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
Damn...evil minds..lols...they deserved it.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2018 2:44 pm Title: Chapter 7- CHAPTER SEVEN: IT’S A THIN LINE BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE Take 2
Shit...freaking killer david.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2018 11:24 am Title: Chapter 4- LOVE, EXCITING AND NEW….and EXPENSIVE as HELL!!
Whiney annoying mikey is here...lol..plot thickens now.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2018 11:03 am Title: Chapter 3- LOVE COMES DOWN TO THIS….
*They kissed hungrily and passionately; endlessly and tirelessly, the idea of losing each other taking over any and all anger they felt in that moment.*
That was BEAUTIFUL .
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2018 10:50 am Title: Chapter 2: MAKE ME DO FOR LOVE WHAT I WOULD NOT DO
SHIT...the plot twist...lols...excellent.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2018 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1: LOVE IS A BATTLEFIELD
Damn...that was one hell of a start...i always wanted to read something like this.
You are genious ...how u played the characters so well...amazing work.
Looking forward to read more.
Date: Mar 22, 2017 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU
so so so so so (there are more SOs, but i'll leave it here) good!
first, I love you just a little bit more for working my Patriots into a story!!!!
I almost felt sorry for the torture Michael endured, but it's Michael so that's why it ws almost.. and I like that even though they feel guilty, everyone puts the blame where it belongs... Michael for being a dumbass and David for being a douchy dick!
I love you how worked in all the people I love to hate and gave them grusome deaths!
and everyone (except Leda, I was waiting lol) made their appearance and it was done so freaking well!!!!
Date: Mar 22, 2017 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
Holy torture, but so freaking good!!!
Date: Mar 22, 2017 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 8- LOVE AND WAR
Damn, Jenna backing up Debbie was fantastic and truthfully a Lillie scary. Together those two are fierce!
david better run... far and fast!
Date: Mar 22, 2017 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 7- CHAPTER SEVEN: IT’S A THIN LINE BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE Take 2
Ok, not a David fan in the least, he is a douche to the nth degree, but damn, I don't mind that he killed idiot Michael. But for once, I was kind of on team Michael. he endured a lot, and was finally growing a set.
I'm happy at the progress of the merger, and hope like hell, that together, they bring the Sap down...and hard!
Date: Mar 22, 2017 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 6- LET LOVE RULE
wow... what a twist! Michael subbed for Justin all those years ago... so really he is jealous of both Brian and Justin... awesome.
David is such a douche, I love that he's in love with Brian, such a long disappointing road for him LOL
Date: Mar 22, 2017 11:59 am Title: Chapter 5- LOVE ON TWO-WAY STREETS leads to POSSIBLE LONELY HIGHWAYS
Amazing. David works for the Sap and in love with Brian??? Wow. The twists and turns are awesome. And I love Brian and Justin and their whole united team together!
Date: Mar 16, 2017 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 4- LOVE, EXCITING AND NEW….and EXPENSIVE as HELL!!
wow... Michael is still Michael... douche! lol