Date: Mar 16, 2017 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 3- LOVE COMES DOWN TO THIS….
Thought I'd pop in and read a bit more of this... them working together is my idea of PERFECT!!!!! :)
Date: Mar 06, 2017 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 2: MAKE ME DO FOR LOVE WHAT I WOULD NOT DO
OMG, Deb and Jen are so ruthless!!!!
I kinda love the fact that Brian knows the truth now, but that Justin doesn't LOL
Date: Mar 06, 2017 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: LOVE IS A BATTLEFIELD
what a freaking start... YES!
I never saw mr. and mrs. Smith, but I know the basic plot of it and cannot wait to see how this turns out...
so the meeting was a flashback, and in present time, they don't seem happy with each other??? hmmmm, intrigue!!!!
Author's Response:
Kathy,
LOL!! Glad you're enjoying this tale of insanity from the start! Yes, the inital meeting is a flashback from eight years ago. In present day, they don't realize just how evenly matched they really are. You're in for one helluva ride!!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2017 5:18 am Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU
Great! Loved the BDSM and the portrayal of all the characters.
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2017 5:18 am Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU
Great! Loved the BDSM and the portrayal of all the characters.
Date: Mar 01, 2017 2:45 am Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU
Wow! That was quite the ride. Great QAF rewrite. TAG
Date: Feb 28, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
Ewwww! You weren't kidding with the 'graphic' warning. TAG
Date: Feb 28, 2017 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 8- LOVE AND WAR
Oh good, they're all banding together to go get David! TAG
Date: Feb 28, 2017 7:32 pm Title: Chapter 7- CHAPTER SEVEN: IT’S A THIN LINE BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE Take 2
Bye bye Mikey . . . TAG
Date: Feb 28, 2017 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 6- LET LOVE RULE
Just have to say - Michael and Justin together . . . ICK! TAG
Author's Response:
LMAO!!! Imagine having to actually type THAT!!! Had me reaching for Brain bleach, Holy Water eyedrops and a crucifix to exorcise the images!! BLECH!!!
Date: Feb 28, 2017 3:32 pm Title: Chapter 5- LOVE ON TWO-WAY STREETS leads to POSSIBLE LONELY HIGHWAYS
Love the team of friends the boys have assembled to help them. TAG
Date: Feb 28, 2017 9:48 am Title: Chapter 4- LOVE, EXCITING AND NEW….and EXPENSIVE as HELL!!
You couldn't have just left Michael in Portland with David? Lol. TAG
Date: Feb 28, 2017 9:18 am Title: Chapter 3- LOVE COMES DOWN TO THIS….
Well, that's one way to show you love each other - a fight to almost the death? Lol. TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2017 9:04 am Title: Chapter 2: MAKE ME DO FOR LOVE WHAT I WOULD NOT DO
Lol! I can just see Brian and Justin, each learning their husband's true jobs. Talk about awkward. TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2017 5:44 am Title: Chapter 1: LOVE IS A BATTLEFIELD
Reading this again from the beginning! Great start btw! TAG
Date: Feb 25, 2017 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU
This...I don't even have words. Just know that I loooooooved every second of all the action.
Date: Feb 24, 2017 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU
It was pure genius to make David watch them fucking, but he should have had a cock ring, just to make him suffer more until the end. The show he had to witness was burning hot!
Thank you for finishing this story: what a ride!!!
Date: Feb 24, 2017 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU
I love how in this chapter all the fighting, death scenes etc are approached by them kind of like a day at the office. lol. Big meeting, and they got it done. Love it. adn thank you for no more bird scenes! ;)
No way could they have David live adn just go to jail. Like they said, he'd just escape and he'd be even more dangerous. Great end for him! Not only having to watch B&J, but having his own form of torture, which was partially pleasure, adn haveing Cynthia finally end it. Very apropo. Must say though, that little twist with Cyn and David was definitely a bit "WOAH!"
Great story all round. Looking forward to putting it on my kindle and giving a good re-read.
While I'm looking forward to reading updates on the other story, like you, I'm going to morn the end of it. It's inevitable, but it'll be emotional as well. At least once it's finished, again, I can add it to my kindle, curl up with a "glass" (aka bottle) of wine and read in it's entirety again. (and again)
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Feb 24, 2017 9:11 am Title: Chapter 1: LOVE IS A BATTLEFIELD
Oh My God!!!!I've been waiting for this to finished🤗🤗I held myself not to start this one until its done,and now finally the wait is over...Thank you for finishing it..Got to start reading immediately after work...😘😘😘
Date: May 31, 2016 3:07 pm Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
Hello my dear!!!!!!!!!! Well, I must say, your warning for graphic violence was spot on!! WOW!! and YIKES!!
Like I said on FB, I have no idea how I missed chapter 8. Ah well. I got to read 2 chapters at once.
I must say, I think Kip and Sap got off easy compared to what my lay ahead for David. LOL. Good to see Deb and Jen working wo well together. I can see them becoming friends do to their many common interests. Perhaps find a new found repsect for each other. haha.
Lindsey......talk about seeing a different side of her!! Again...YIKES! If the families merge, obviously another realtionship will be in teh works, between her ane Mel. Nothing like a perverse love ot pain and torture to bring people together.
Gotta say, teh bird thing.......eeeeeeeeeeeeek! I'm honestly scared shitless of birds, so that scene playing out on my head. Yeesh! Got chills!
Terrific 2 chapters. Have been thoroughly enjoying this fic. Enjoyed the twists you've created.
Looking forward to more.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Hey Elaine!!! What can I say about this chapter? I had so much fun being this vicious and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I have to say this is probably the first time I really enjoyed writing Lindsay and Mel. Talk about a match made in CREEPY!! Jenn and Deb are getting to know each other by more than reputation only and that can only strengthen the partnership. They may never fully be friends but they definitely have a newfound respect for the others ability to torment their victims. Wait until their sons get to David!!! **Hint: Brian is going to see a side of Justin he's never seen but only recently heard about...And so is David!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. I promise no more Vultures... well not the kind with wings anyway...LOL HUGS!
Date: May 31, 2016 5:54 am Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
O boy, this is really hard to read. I can't even imagine what will happen to David after that.
Author's Response:
Sorry if I made you cringe a bit, Claire. I was in a particularly NASTY mood when I wrote this. But I can't say that I didn't enjoy it, LOL! David is in for quite the surprise going forward and not one he is going to like at all! Thanks so much for taking this ride through Sadistic-ville with me!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 31, 2016 5:27 am Title: Chapter 8- LOVE AND WAR
Yeah, you're back on this one too!!!
Author's Response:
YES Darling and I'm acting a FOOL! LOL It's nice to live vicariously through the characters, LOL.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 31, 2016 1:10 am Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
Chelle,
Love this chapter. First the annoying of Douchebag Dave. Then the pure sadistic torture of Kip and Sapperstein. Great for reading if you are in a particularly nasty mood towards someone. Thinking about this sure beats wearing an orange jumpsuit for actually doing it. Now on to the Karma for DD.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!!! I was definitely in a 'MOOD' when I started writing this chapter. And yes, I think I value my freedom too much to end up in that gaudy orange jumpsuit- that's just NOT in my colorwheel...lol Next up the true torment of that Dastardly Disgusting Dom David. *Evil Grinning and Rubbing Hands* I have something particularly special in mind for him. LOL I can't wait!!
~Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: May 24, 2016 6:34 am Title: Chapter 1: LOVE IS A BATTLEFIELD
You were so good to us last weekend with all those updates . . . And here I am already begging you for more? Lol. Still looking forward to the end of this one, though. Pretty please? With cream and sugar and a naked Brian on top? TAG
Author's Response:
Hmmmm....you had me writing at the thought of a nake Brian, LOL! I think one more chapter and the Epilogue featuring Brian and Justin's next therapy session will finish up this insane piece. But then again, you never know. I'm having so much FUN writing it!!
~Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Chelle