[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2020 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1- it could have happened
I have read this a few times. I love "anniversary party" and "MIKEY'S BIG MOUTH" fixes.
It's a really good story. You even got Brian admitting his feelings, you got rid of the fiddler, letting us also know that he never really 'had' Justin.
Debbie walloped her son across the head - Well, about the only thing missing was everybody telling Mikey he disgusts them, and Ben telling him 'adios, amigo. I can't be with you anymore.' LOL.
(Do you get that I don't like the little weasel very much?)
Hugs, Cathy
Date: May 15, 2017 7:12 am Title: Chapter 1- it could have happened
I'm glad that there are people like you that are so kind to share their knowledge. These kind of blogs http://yourcollegepaper.com/ are really worth to read. Do you mind if I share this too? I would be glad if you allow me to do the honor. Well, thank you for sharing your thoughts, I hope you'll write again soon!
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[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2016 4:00 pm Title: Chapter 1- it could have happened
Even now Michael excused what he said by saying he was trying to be supportive. Love how you have everyone hear what Mikey said and how Justin comes to his senses. Really good job of rewriting.
Author's Response:
thank you - that means so much that you liked this rewrite
Charle
Date: May 22, 2016 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1- it could have happened
Ah, the 'what ifs' . . . In a perfect world everything would have been perfect! Lol. I like your version. Thanks for writing. TAG
Author's Response:
oh Tag, you're easy to please - but I gave to admit - I like this version better, too!
thanks
Charle