[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2017 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
Love how Chris is gay too, since we all knew that already. Wonder what Luther plans since they won't be able to use Chris. Nice that Mark thinks they should warn Justin. That's the icing on the cake. So six years ago in P-town Brian and Justin met Zeon? Who would've thought. Malachy, Malarky, whatever is going to regret working with Luther. It looks like Talon is seeing things differently about now since Lindsay seems to think she's a maid. Perhaps she'll soon join the rank with Xanthe? What is she going to tell Zeph?
Date: Jan 11, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 7
So Chris obviously isn't going to be intimidated by Craig or any of his threats. good! Glad Chris has come to terms with himself and has gone forward and found happiness. Impressed that he actually worked for his relationship with Mark. While as was mentioned, Mark may not have forgiven him, he's willing to work at it. Mark has obviously made Chris work for it and will keep him on the straight and narrow. Good on Chris for having the balls finally to face his past and talk to Justin. Further impressed with both Justin and Brian for listening and also moving past it and forgiving him.
Oh Luther Luther Luther....it's amazing how people who are so incredibly narcisissitic don't forsee their own demise. They actually think that nobody would dare cross them. Oh wow...is he in for a surprise!! For one thing, that he thinks the stupid twosome are really going to be any help is hilarious and in all honestly shows his real level of stupidity. Now these 2 are trying to convince malachy to see their side of things. Not sure about this guy. Who's he calling? I'm hoping their previous lawyer to give him a heads up, but again, not sure of his loyalties. I had to chuckle at Michael's naivete... "We didn't win" hehe. what an idiot.......
Talon is another we should keep an eye on perhaps? she's stated that she hates Zee, and now she's calling Zeph. however, Luther still thinks that Zeph is standing my him right?? (Trying to keep it straight)
Wow. Tons to think about and figure out. Can't wait for more!!! The whole thing with Zeon was funny! Now I really want to know what Faal's reaction is going to be. I'm thinking Zee is going to laugh about it. Faal may too. I guess we'll just have to wait and see what you have up your sleeve.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 11, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh My God!!!what a small world,imagine Zeon with B&J hilariousðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜Can't imagine the twins faces when the boys tell them about P-Town years ago..I just hope it won't upset Zee and Faal..
Good for you Chris trying to redeem yourself of what you've done to Justin..It's great that you found yourself a husband who loves you enough to stay by your side..And as for Craig,wrong move,very wrong,you should burn in boiling oil for trying to bring your son down..
Now everyone's trying to help the family,even to go behind the enemy's back,like Xanthie and now Talon..well good luck Luther you sure need it because it's your own snake who's gonna swallow you first..!
Oh i'm looking forward of what you got on C9...🤗🤗🤗
Great chapter again..Thanks for updating😚😚
Date: Jan 11, 2017 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
LMFAOOOOoooooo!!! Well the 'Chis Hobbs' angle to get to Justin is officially CLOSED!! Hell that even threw me for a loop, LOL. But now my anxiety just ramped up again about what Craig is planning for Justin's next show. I really wish the earth would just open up and swallow him. But regardless, I'm sure that Justin is going to be ready for the asshole or at the very least, able to recover quickly from his machinations and wage war against Craig for himself.
Malachy probably feels like he's loss some valuable brain cells having to deal with Michael and Lindsay. That foot-in-mouth disease Michael has comes in handy some time. And then for Lindsay to ask if they can take Phil to the board....That BITCH!!! If he agrees to any of their demands, he'd better be prepared to get his ass handed to him. Millie isn't going to let family go down for the Wonder Twits!
The scene in the office with Hobbs and his husband was so damn emotional. I found myself tearing up as Brian, Justin and even Ted's pain jumped off the screen. As violent as Brian was, I think Chris should thank his lucky stars that Jennifer wasn't there to deliver the punches. I don't think Chris would have been able to leave under his own steam if she'd been there. Justin, as always, was brave and level-headed during the whole scene. I think him having that small bit of closure during his Pink Posse days helped him to face Chris standing tall while keeping Brian from possible murder charges (no doubt Ted, Justin, Frank and Austin would have helped him hide the body but still...).
As always, Michael and Lindsay's sense of entitlement was front and center but they messed with the WRONG woman!! I don't think the Stupids are ready to feel the claws of Talon. The nerve of Lindsay and Michael to think she was the maid....WHAT?!?!?! I think I would have tossed their asses out right then and there but apparently Talon is a woman of great restraint. But then again she must have to be to get involved with Luther Stark. And she called Zeph.....WHOO-WEE!!!! They ain't ready!!!!!
Speaking of Luther....LMAO!!!! Not so much the big shot and charmer he thought he was...LOL I'm glad that Xanthe is going ahead with her life and that she has done pretty much everything to cut Luther out of her life. It was time that someone taught him just how expendable he really is. I have a feeling he'll be learning that same lesson in a million different ways by the end of TROS!
As for Brian and Justin's personal connection with Zeon.... LOL!!! Brilliant and Hilarious! Well one thing is for certain and two things, for sure, Zeon must have an awesome story to tell. I don't think that he's forgotten Brian and Justin but just had to relegate them to the back of his mind....for now. Either way, I'm soooo looking forward to that conversation!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2017 12:41 am Title: Chapter 6
Great work. LOVED Chris's answer.
~Lorie
Date: Jan 10, 2017 7:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
Had to wipe the water I sprayed all over the computer screen at the last part. OMFG! Fuck me that...........WAS UTTERLY BRILLIANT! I kind of had a feeling something like that would happen, but the way you wrote it....Priceless!
Back to the top though...Jen has layed it out to the those 2 boys clearly and did not mince words. It really doesn't matter who anyone is, they will never stand a chance against that group. They are family, whether by blood or not. Jen is a lioness with all who she considers her, and Lord help anyone who tries anything.
Very heartwarming reunion for Thomas and his folks. Kiki is a gem. I'm so glad she's been getting such great parts in these stories.
Zander freaked me out for a second there, but all fears were alleviated. HA! Oh Luther....I'd almost feel sorry for you if you weren't such a completly hateful bastard. He deserves everythign coming to him. What a joy it will be to watch. I'm there will be much angst before the inevitable happens, but in teh meantime will make for fantastic reading! Having Luther actually meet L&M is going to be another fun filled adventure. I'm sure afte r10 minutes he's going to regret ever signing them on. The suits and charges etc won't be overturned apparently, and he's going to soon discover what utter pains in the ass those 2 are. How utterly useless they will be in his plans.
Loving this and looking forward to the nex update, Thank goodness you are so regular!
(still chuckling over Craig and Chris..."Mark"BWAHAHAHAH!)
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 10, 2017 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
Lovely and what's her name?
Mark.
I dearly rly love you. I burst out laughing.
Date: Jan 10, 2017 6:26 am Title: Chapter 6
Hahahhah i can just imagine Craig's reaction to that😅😅😅So Chris finally dealt with his sexuality?I just hope he doesn't agree to what the evil Craig is offering him..
Zee is so sweet,all the years that he fight with her twin but still she remembered about his allergy,wow that's a real love..
And Zeus is kind of afraid of Jen.Well he should have when mama bear try to protect her cabs she won't care who's the opponent🤔🤔
And last can we have a vivid detail of Menno and Solomon inside the office?? (blushing here)i think it would be so HOT watching two huge guy going at it like there's no care in the world..But most of all i missed B & J in action😘😘😘
Another great chapter,thanks for updating...
Author's Response:
Oh you're going to love C7 and C8....
Date: Jan 10, 2017 6:19 am Title: Chapter 6
That was good.
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:24 am Title: Chapter 6
Chris Hobbs I would Kiss You if I Still Didn't Want To Kick Your Ass!! (Is Mark Hot, Does he know the whole story and how did the Parentals take the news?)
Perhaps it is finally time to put the ghost of Chris Hobbs to rest?
I don't know if Justin and Brian are ready to be in the same room as Hobbs but maybe a letter or phone call could help them all move on?
Happy that Zee's brothers are stepping up to stand by their sister and make their father pay.
Mel always knock!! rofl
Solomon is ready for New York I don't think Michael and Lindsay have realized that a change of venue won't help their chances but it will be funny to watch:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:20 am Title: Chapter 6
My goodness what a fantastic chapter. First off I'm gonna go with Thomas being a chef and Emmy and Zee needing help. Now that they have Cara all they need is Thomas. Then on to Luther and everything falling apart for him. Xanthe has him on the hang up list, Solomon has New York locked up so that what ever he has planned for Lindsay and Michael won't work, then we have Ted siccing Tobias onto Craig and last but not least Chis is married to Mark!!!! Perfect.
Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 6
It seems that all these devious plans they have are backfiring right out the gate. And we all knew how deep in the closet Chris was...
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:02 am Title: Chapter 5
I forgot to say how much I like the Thomas and Kiki parts from the last chapter. And now we have Luther with his daughter-in-law and someone else? Good thing Xanthe has enough scruples to leave Luther high and dry and give one of the brothers a call. With four brothers all starting with Z I'm getting them confused. Zeon is allergic to appricots? At least Zee managed to keep him from eating. The messy feast sounded mouthwatering.
Date: Jan 10, 2017 3:48 am Title: Chapter 6
You brought tears to my eyes with Zee's brothers ready to rally around her. Then just about gave me a heart attack with Hobb's reply to Craig. OMG you are so good!
Fantastic upate, thanks for sharing. Wishing for an update very soon please and thanks.
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2017 3:38 am Title: Chapter 4
It appears that it's going to take awhile for Zee to forgive Zeus. Shame that Ron and Nancy fell for Lindsay's bull and sent her money. Too much money in my opinion.
Date: Jan 10, 2017 2:57 am Title: Chapter 6
Chris -1, Craig - zip. Can just picture Craig's jaw on the floor.
Zander and Zee - 1, Luther - nada. Luther is going to be unimpressed with the Doublemint Twits.
Do we get to see Talon getting a clue?
Glad to see that the brothers are banding together to be the big brothers that htey should have been.
Date: Jan 09, 2017 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ahhh...Craig and Luther won't know what him them
Date: Jan 09, 2017 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Had to laugh with regards to Xanthe. score 1 for the girl. Now....I'm wondering how long before Talon figures stuff out. Will she follow the same course as Xanthe or will she stick by her money maker?
As for Nancy and Ronald.Oh dear lordy......When will those 2 learn?!! They've been screwed over enough by Lindsey, yet their first instinct is to throw money as soon as she cries for help. Once they realized, it was too late. How many more times will it take for them to just STOP?? I want to smack them up side the head Debbie style.
Luther and Craig in cahoots is no surprise. Luther kind of reminds me of Trump. So incredibly narcissistic that he assumes he can do anything without any repercussions. That whatever rules he creates, must be followed by everyone EXCEPT himself. He can do whatever and whoever he wants. That people wouldn't DARE go up against him, and if they do....they'll pay. Sadly, it's typical school yard bullying bullshit. Hypocritical and entitlement issues in abundance. In the end, they will get what's coming to them. Craig on the otherhand, is simply the bullies sidekick. A bit player real;ly. He'll go down faster than Luther I would imagine. I highly doubt he has any idea what he'll be up against when he tries to take on Justin, Brian, Jen and all the rest. He'll take teh fall long before Luther does I'm sure. Like the typical bully though, Luther will hang him out to dry just to save his own ass. It's going to be such fun watching Luther, Craig and whoever else go down.
Lindsey and Michael thuse far are pretty much still blips. I assume they also will get involved with Luther and Craig. That should be fun. lol. They aren't intelligent enough to take on the RTOAF. They also stupid enought to think that Luther would "look after them" if they side with him. Please...the man would throw them under the bus before either of them could even blink.
The intrigue in this third part is and is going to be fantastic!! A real cat and mouse game to see who is in the forefront. Seems that Zee's, Zeus's and Zeon's connections will serve them well though and will hopefully keep them one step ahead.
Absolutely brilliant!!!!!!!!! Very exciting!! Oh I can't wait for more!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 09, 2017 7:11 am Title: Chapter 5
Oooh it should be interesting when all of them face each other....Luther doesn't know that his enemies is step ahead of his game,thanks to Xanthie..But i'm really worried about JustinðŸ˜Just hoping he can overcome facing Hobbs and Craig again with the help of the family specially Brian..
Zee was so sweet and adorable when she's angry to Zeon but risk like everything just for him not to get hurt🤗🤗
Thanks for updating😚
Date: Jan 09, 2017 4:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Boy, you have all the villans in this one, hope they ALL get their arses kicked to HELL.
Fabulous!
Thank for sharing, looking forward to next update!
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2017 1:15 am Title: Chapter 5
Luther is going to wish he had stayed in bed...in Siberia
Starks are talking and that is not good for Luther and his idiot cohorts.
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2017 12:34 am Title: Chapter 5
Luther is such a Hypocrite!!
Neither Talon or Xanthe are pure black yet it is okay for him to sleep with them, man I want to punch that man in his smug, arrogant face.
At least the family can see Craig and Chris coming this time so no one will be blindsided, does Luther plan for Lindsay to get involved with Zee's ex cause I doubt she will pay to tear the apart and he deserves what he gets for even being seen with Lindsay.
So Luther is only a millionaire (More like way shy of a billion right?) and he is giving money to Craig how will the RTOAF deal with that information?
Zee, Zeus and Zeon are in the same room the next chapter is going to be very interesting.
Author's Response:
I was thinking he is more along the lines of an arrogant misogynistic fuckwit!
Oh RTOAF are going to deal big time...and 3 Zs become 5....
[Report This]Date: Jan 08, 2017 1:36 am Title: Chapter 4
Ron and Nancy how many times are you going to let Lindsay make a fool out of you and con you out of your money?
Next time just hang up unless you plan on declaring yourselves incompetent and just letting the spoiled brats run the world?
Not surprising Luther lied to his son (Craig and he must be old golfing buddies) he would never give up control to any of his children and I bet he got off playing them against each other and especially Zee.
Zeus and Zee are slowly make some headway but it is going to take time to forgive all the heartache and pain.
I hope Thomas will be ready to see his parents and that they can leave the past alone and just build on a future where they are all happy.
Michael and Lindsay must be high twenty thousand isn't going to last in New York it wouldn't have lasted in Canada the way they spend.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: Jan 08, 2017 1:26 am Title: Chapter 4
Love it. Linz and Mikey did all of this to themselves, Fabulous!
Nice small stepfor Zee and Zeus.
Ronald and Nancy will never learn.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next!
JoAnn
Date: Jan 07, 2017 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Del sure can smack really hard if the bruise on Zeus face is still visible..That's the mother never to tolerate a son's stupidity...Unlike Nancy just jumping on her daughter's riscue without learning the real story first..
Hoping Zeus and Zee would make up sooner,and then when Zeon comes they both could deal with him together..
Can't wait for the next chapter..Thanks for sharing😘