Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2017 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 11

I love the idea of a BroHouse it sounds so Stark and just perfect for Zee's brothers, funny that three of them were fighting over the same room until Zee stepped in.

Talon has finally opened her eyes to see that Luther isn't worth the twenty years she gave to him, but that jewelry he gave her should be worth enough to start a new life and a nice FU to Admiral Dumbass.

Ralph is helping Talon so that must mean he is getting ready to pay Luther back to before he leaves with more of Luther's money? (He must have years of information that could be useful?? ;))

Nancy and Ron have left Pittsburgh for greener pastures and a life free from spoilt children who don't give a Damn and would crawl over their dead bodies to take the last cent they had.

Lindsay is seeing Michael as an albatross around her neck and until she has dropped the dead weight will she get what she wants, it's funny how she looks down her nose at Talon but she has more social standing than Lindsay will ever have.

Can't wait for MOMA Friday that is going to be one Hell of a party lol

Zeon and Thomas? Hell Yeah More Hot Men Making Out!!!! Rofl

Yeah Phillip Mitcham is suing Michael and Lindsay I hope he is asking for a lot because those two put that man through the ringer and now it is his turn to return the favor :)

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2017 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 8

Sorry for not reviewing for such a long time. RL sucks sometimes. Taking care of my 82 year old mum takes up a lot of time. And sometimes there is still too much pain to fully concentrate on things.

Now on to the review:

That Stark head of the family is one fucked up piece of rottenness. Vicious, stingy and vindictive. All in all one gigantic arsehole. But I'm certain our "family" will handle him the same way they did Asshat and Twatzilla. Together they are really strong. 

OMG, the last scene in this chapter was amazing. I laughed for minutes on end, tears stremaing down my face. Hilarious and what a way to get back at some one. 

Girl, where do all these brilliant ideas come from? 

The scene between Menno and Solomon....... holy jalapeño. That was one hot, no make that vulcanic scene. Needed a long cold shower after that one.

Off to read the next chapter.

XOXO 

Meriam

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2017 4:47 am Title: Chapter 10

I do believe Lindsay might be getting tired of carrying Michael and could be looking for an excuse to push him off a cliff.

I can't wait to see what Zee finds out about Judge Copthorne and will Xanthe be making another appearance?

Wonder what Admiral Dumbass has planned next?

 

Author's Response:

Again get out of my head, in the nicest way of course!   But then of course there's Grady to...ahem...fight over.

Not sure I can bring Xanthe back...but watch for Ralph

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2017 8:33 am Title: Chapter 10

Oh my god that was priceless!!Lindsay doesn't seem to get a clue when her parents are so obvious but she's living in her imaginary world where everything can be manipulated and believe her craziness..Take that you lousy cunt!!

Hands down Emmett,you put Craig totally down where i'm sure he thought that the floor would open up and swallow him,Bravo Em🤗🤗🤗

Yeah I totally agree that no one can compare to B&J when it comes to make out session,what's more the real thing😙😙😙

Thanks for updating,Love it😍

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2017 2:16 am Title: Chapter 10

Holy Schnickies!!!

Ron and Nancy gave gave Lindsay a severe kick in the by telling her they were moving out of Pittsburgh, then the one two punch by selling their home quickly to Zee roflmao

About Time they finally dropped the dead weight and let both their daughters deal with consequences of their actions, especially Lindsay who feels the most entitled and self-absorbed.

I like that Faal thinks it would be a great place for Zee's brothers when they come to visit, just got to redecorate and get rid of the feel of entitlement, snobbery, jealousy, envy and Lindsay.

Bravo to Emmett for taking on Craig and knocking him down a few pegs, he is another person who deserves exactly what is coming to him ten-fold.

Perhaps Jennifer would like to do to Craig what Delia did to Luther? lol

Michael and Lindsay are back hopefully this will be a short visit?

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2017 3:54 am Title: Chapter 9

Now that sounded like the Brian we know.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2017 2:51 am Title: Chapter 9

Hold on, Lindsay wants Michael to treat Talon with respect because they are guest in her boyfriend's home? BITCH PLEASE!!!

Where The Hell was that when they were being disrespectful to Zee in her home or to Justin, Faal, Brian, Alice, George, Deb, Carl, Hunter, Matt, Mel, Leda, Ted, Blake, Gus, Charles, David, Hank, Jenny, Jennifer, Tucker??

So Talon is an honest Slut? She is helping by giving information to Zander to take down Luther, guess she is smart  and has some morals.

Can't  believe Captain  Asshat  and Stuck-up  Heifer can come to Pittsburgh now, hope Adam  and Solomon can reverse that and send them scurrying.

Talon his about to use her powers to cause some trouble for Grady and Luther? 

Will Lindsay be given the cold shoulder by The Art Set and The Wasp Net??

Oooooo I wish the party was tomorrow  night I just love when Lindsay is humiliated in a room full of her peers lol

I knew Zee wouldn't freak about Zeon sleeping with Brian and Justin I agree with Brian they are just that good and very memorable ;)

Can't wait for the next update :)

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2017 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 8

Genius I tell you!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2017 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 8

Honey this chapter was EVERYTHING!!!! First, something tells me that Cara and Thomas are going to be very good friends, much like Zee and Em. I think he is going to make a wonderful addition to the growing staff of E&Z HOD. I really want to hug Kiki for finding him! 

Secondly, Cara had me cracking up and repulsed on her behalf by turns. First, some dude named Guido who is associated with Craig Taylor in any capacity- from janitor to personal assistant- is bound to be a slimeball. Aside from his overt bigotry, Craig is a major blight on mankind in general and probably should have an intentional dip in a pool filled with lava to boil that evil out of him. Craig is the type of asshole that would think he could go down into Hell and overthrow the government. But then look at the actual company he's keeping....Luther Stark.

Now there is another one who will probably end up sitting at the right hand of Satan's pitchfork. What an arrogant asshole!! Not only that but he's an arrogant asshole with absolutely no taste or discernment about who he lets stay in his expensive house. Couldn't he tell that Lindsay and Michael were vermin immediately? Guess not if he is so blinded that he couldn't see the guttersnipes for what they really are. Well now what are they going to do because Malachy has told them that regardless of the amount of money they have or spend, there is no way for those verdicts to be overturned. Furthermore, I think Delia is about to deplete Luther's funds even further and I suspect that whatever is left, Talon will take care of. Craig and Luther deserve each other!!

Speaking of Talon, GO GIRL!!! That cartoon-character t-shirt wearing manchild better learn the difference between an expression and an order. One would think that since he's been getting shot down since he's met her that he would learn she's NOT a woman he wants to tango with. I mean...look at the last 'Stark' woman he thought to do battle with. Has that icerock improved the quality of his voice? Hmmm...NOPE, he's still the same whiny bastard he's always been. 

As for Lindsay, if she sucks up to Talon any more, she's going to taste what Talon ate for breakfast five weeks ago! But then again, Lindsay might like that but she better concentrate on trying to soothe and lick her own ass because of the asskicking that's coming her way from the King and Queen of the WASP nest. I would feel sorry for her once Millie and Harold descends on her but you know.... the way my feelings are set up....

Solomon and Menno are some HOT boys. Go ahead and fire up my screen anytime with them! But then you turn around and give me a Dom Brian scene.... Girl!!! Have I told you lately how much I love you? Orgasm denial is one of the HOTTEST acts in BDSM and takes concentration, skill and patience to pull off masterfully. Between you and Brian, I think Justin is a VERY happy man!

Speaking of Justin.... I think they are doing to the right thing to tie up the loose end of Cody Bell before Luther or Craig get ahold of him. Between him and the- wait! Why am I suddenly thinking of Ethan?? YICK, BLECH, ECK, YUCK, JINKIES!! Anyway, before anymore of Justin's past can be used to torment Justin, I think the Family should close all those avenues. It would also force Craig and clueless Luther to face Justin like the man he is instead of being little pussy boys trying to use others to do their dirty work.

Back to Craig for a minute.... EMMETT!!!! OMG!! What BRILLIANCE! Not only did he embarrass the hell out of the bigoted bastard but I think he ruined a number of prospective business associates as well. Based on Em's actions, no one will believe that Craig Taylor isn't a closet case and a two-faced liar. I mean at least the gay men he's trying to hurt live in their truth and regardless of how the straight men they do business with may or may not feel about that, they still respect Brian, Justin, Ted, Em and Drew's 'fuck'em all' personas. I doubt very seriously Craig's former associates have as much respect for him....period. 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2017 6:33 pm Title: Chapter 8

LMFAO!!!!!!!!! Omg..Emmett's idea for Craig's party was.......I can't even say priceless as it goes MILES beyond that! That...was...THE BEST EVER! I'm currently sitting in my office and completely lost it at that ending. Thankfully I'm on my own today. Jeebus Christmas....I have no words for the brilliance that is your mind.

Seems much of what Luther wants...Luther ain't getting, despite what he seems to think on the subject. Seems he DOESN"T get everything he wants! Yet another epic show down. HA! Just like Delia said, he didn't know whathit him. Looking forward to even more perils coming his way.

Such an enjoyable chapter! Thank you for posting!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2017 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 8

Looks like Thomas might work with Em & Zee, I hope so.  Now about the party for Taylor Electronics.  That could be a problem.  What does Emmett have planned?  Something evily delicious I hope.  Naked waiters!  Never saw that coming.  And he taped it.  OMG.   Hahaha.  Mikey and Lindsay owe $6,000 for moving.  That's rich.  Solomon and Menno!  Now that's a combo.  Michael has a lot of nerve, but Talon set him in his place.  I must have missed something, which is hard to believe, but what does Cody Bell have to do with any of this?  Malachy is well out of it, but with this crew one never knows.  Poor Ralph.  He can't seem to win for losing.  And Luther doesn't know what hit him.  Hunter is doing great!  

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2017 4:00 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh thank god I didn't take a sip of my coffee because my poor laptop would be getting cleaned off.

Emmy Lou, you have been hanging around Zee too long.  That was right up her alley.

Poor Luther (NOT), not having a good day today?  Keep turning the screws Delia.

Sending virtual chocolate to keep the muse content and happy.