Date: Jan 23, 2017 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 15
Am developing a new kind of respect for Talon. LOL. She REALLY knows how to go after what she wants. Lindsey should take lessons from her. Sadly though, Lindsey os of the mind that Talon could learn from her. Hehehe. Let's just see who comes out on top after this now shall we? *smirks* Talon is a devious bitch whereas Lindsey is just a C-word who assumes she deserves certain things i life. Just because.
So...Grady and Michael huh? whoever has the eye bleach, please pass it along my way!! Dear lord woman...that was a visual I hope to blank from my memory. Thank you for no description. lol. Grady's thoughts on it was hilarious. Not surprising though. always figured Michael would be shit in bed. Now however Grady is going to pay the price of having Michael dogging him. hehehe. I'm curious as to what Grady's ultimate goal is. He's doing all this for a reason. He's too opportunistic.
Terrific couple of chapters! I do so love this story. I look forward to every update. I know...I keep saying that, but it's true every time I say it.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 23, 2017 8:29 am Title: Chapter 15
Ã’ooh the waspy Queen Bee's are on the roll of plotting..This could be exciting to see...
Well done Lydia,the evil wants to destroy Justin,well I say throw it back ten folds...!!And Sara wow nobody suspect that she's a sister of that boy in class..
Nice play Talon,now show the whiny brat how talentless you are when you get a hold with all his collection,let's see how idiot he is..
Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 3:07 am Title: Chapter 15
Grady you aren't getting rid of Michael that easily you have now been sucked into his vortex...Enjoy! lol
If he thinks Michael is bad just wait Lindsay is worse and more manipulative. rofl
Michael will be shocked when he finds out Talentless has played him he will never learn that you can't outsmart a fox when you only have a pea for a brain.
Luther's brains are definitely in his pants which would explain why he is always sitting on it.
Craig is in for a shock that I hope will be painful and captured for posterity lol
Melody and Millicent have been spending way too much time with Emmett, but I love that they are planning something big for both the idiots that comes from hanging with Zee. rofl
Next chapter will be interesting.
Date: Jan 23, 2017 1:07 am Title: Chapter 15
Good and funny.
Date: Jan 22, 2017 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
Perfect way to work in the "love" triangle with Dumb, Dumber and Grady LOL
Oh Michael, why do I bet you didn't read the papers before you signed them.... BRILLIANT!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2017 1:22 am Title: Chapter 14
Someone give Michael some monopoly money so he can buy a clue, Talon wouldn't give him a thimble of piss if he was dying of thirst much less give him or Lindsay $50000!
Both have a better chance hooking on time square for 0.50¢ (More like the lint in someone's pocket) since they don't payback anyone unless forced to do and they both spend money like they have a Daddy Warbucks on retainer.
Grady sleeping with both of them is beyond Ewww I need brain bleach, or battery acid to get that imagine out of my head.
Uh he didn't rim Michael right and he did wear two condoms because I doubt after the day and night Michael had he was all April Fresh?? Ewwww!!!
So was Lindsay really out at galleries meeting new people and drinking with them, cause I seriously doubt word hasn't gotten around about her, even if Millicent hasn't dropped the hammer on her yet I doubt Melody wouldn't whisper in a few well chosen years?
Hope Tobias doesn't have a goose egg when he wakes up? lol
Zee is going after Craig and he is going to wish he had stayed off her radar by the time she is finished with him.
I would feel sorry for him but I have better things to do with my time ;)
I am waiting patiently for the next chapter with bleach on standby rofl
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 14
Grady and Michael.... the thought of Michael actually having body parts.... just EWWW!! But on the upside, Grady is running up mileage riding the Thundercunt and the Tunnel of the Bottomless Dump, so I suppose it's befitting since he's Luther's personal dildo.
I have to laugh at Lindsay's assessment of Michael and in turn Michael's opinion that he's not stupid. There is sooooo MUCH I can say about that! First, why would he even think to ask Talon for money when she can't stand his whiny ass? But then not question why she decided to lend him the money after he asked? Lindsay for all her arrogance, closet bigotry, ignorance and misplaced delusions of grandeur, knows this. I don't think SHE will be signing that paper; only Idiot Boy. Somehow, I think she will be taking the money she has left and finding herself away from Michael sooner rather than later.
The tasting had me in stitches as well as Tobias' reaction to the wedding venue. I think Tobias could have used a shot of vodka after he came to from his fainting spell. It's nice to have friends in high places.
Justin broke my heart. Craig is such a douche (apologies to douches and douchebags everywhere since you actually serve a purpose where Craig has none). I can't wait until the he falls into the same ditch he's trying to lay for Justin. There's an old adage that says: While you're digging one ditch, dig two. I think that saying is about to become a reality for Craig whereas Justin will come out the better man....again. I'm glad that Brian was able to soothe him in their own special form of communication. Now I think Justin is definitely going to be ready to come out fighting!
Looking forward to MORE!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yak yak yak i need a brain bleach!!Grady after Lindsay now Michael,it really grossing me out..😣😣😣
And what Talon is up to now,why she just hand over a 50 grand to them??
Well atleast i'm getting excited about the France escapade later on and another wedding at Portland...🤗🤗
Please what happens to the talk between Luther and Zander??
Poor Sunshine,really upset bcoz of his sperm donor...But whhhooaaà a what a way to erase the stress and disappointment...So HOT HOT HOTðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Great chapter thanks for updating!😘
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 14
Looks like Tobias and Darius are speechless about the wedding venue. But Tobias will be paying for it with audits I'm sure. I can't get over Michael and Grady, that will put a plip on the Lindsay and Grady love vest. lol. Michael thinks he's not stupid. I bet Talon knows what they didn't say and has plans. Can't wait to find out what it is.
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm still laughing about the dump ass living in a bathroom..What Ralph could have possibly done to his wine that Michael's stomach grows like a 4months pregnant as the cunt said??but whatever it is he deserve it!!And as for the cunty bitch,i'm enjoying this much how she got ignored and sidestep by Talon who she thought is her friend,hahaha if she only knew...Well all of them is so easily fooled by Talon!!Payback is really is a bitch...I wonder what Luther's reaction about the painting that sold only a dollar??good move Talon🤗🤗
And i can't wait for Zee and the three shark lawyers and genius accountant working their magic of making plan to the Taylor Electronics and another idiot called Craig..He doesn't know what hit him coming out of the blue...
Great chapter and thanks for updating..
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hahahha my stomach hurts from laughing,not just from Michael's scene but most of the episode..
Anyway thanks for answering about my curiosity about jewelry..
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 7:21 pm Title: Chapter 14
Mostly great chapter. Justin and Brian sex, always great. Weasel sex, not so much. EWWW. Some things are just too gross to even imagine. Love the story.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 12:35 am Title: Chapter 13
Michael always did have diarrhea of the month now that it is coming out the other end it should keep him busy for a few more hours or another day lol
Luther and Lindsay You can hold onto your delusion that Zee is still wants her ex, that will backfire Big time when Zee doesn't react and Luther parading Lindsay around doesn't do anything again, who wants creme brulee when they have Jello every night?
Talon has taken care of her jewelry and soon she will be taking care of Luther and walking away for good with her dignity intact.
Wouldn't it be funny if Grady was using Lindsay and Michael to get to Brian who he really wants or Justin? rofl
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2017 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
Luther is something else. Says No one likes to share their man yet he's spreading himself around on Talon. Love how Michael is having bowel problems, serves him right. Lindsay getting it on with Grady, is that good or not? Love that Talon sold the painting to Ralph for a dollar. Mel doesn't really hate Brian and Ted won the pot! Now Jennifer is pissed on learning that Craig is trying to run his business down. I know you have something planned for that and can't wait to find out what. What is Ted going to do for Menno?
Date: Jan 20, 2017 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
Luther is about as delusional as L&M. How he thinks he actually has influence over anyone. How he thinks that Zee would be upset about Grady. (sorry....that make me want to both vomit and laugh hysterically)
As much as Talon may be scheming against Luther, I don't see her having any altruistic motivations. I don't see her trying to make amends or anything, it's purely selfish. she doing everything soley for her own benefit IMO. I mean I'm loving that she's totally screwing Luther over!! lol, but I'm not sure she'd hesitate to do the same to any of the others to get what she wants. Who knows...
Michael now......can I just sit here adn say BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ROFLMFAO!!! Oh hell.that was EPIC! Priceless!!! Oh man o man. that had me in absolute stitches! Thank you for that.
I'm also really curious as to what's going to happen with Craig and the store. Now that the gang seem to know what he's up to. Ubelievable that he'd be so low, but then.......he's another selfish asshole that deserves everything that's coming to him. and more!
Excellent chapter!!!!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 20, 2017 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 13
How delusional and ignorant can three people be?! Guess we are going to keep finding out if Luther, Lindsay and Michael keep going the way they are... please let them keep going LOL!
We will now join another episode of The Delusional & The Desperate already in Progress...
First let's talk about the asshole with the God-complex.... Luther, Luther, LUTHER!! Get a GRIP! You are NOT the Lord of All He Surveys. In fact there isn't MUCH he can really survey right now except his losing battle. For him (and Lyin' Lips) to think that Zee will be distracted or more accurately pissed off that Slut Butt is humping Golddigging Grady, he really has another think coming. There was a reason that Grady is Zee's EX and why it truly doesn't bother her that he is. Furthermore she has Faal. HELLOOOOOooooooo!!! What the hell would Zee want with Lindsay's male counterpart? This chapter made me even further anxious for Luther to get his comeuppance on all fronts, beginning with Talon. I really hope that Ralph leaves with her when she's finally finished doing her damage to that Lying, Sneaking, Scheming Sonofabitch she traded her marriage for.
Secondly, let's talk about the female member of the LL Ensemble (yes! The Lying Lips Ensemble is what I've taken to calling the Luther/Lindsay Alliance). Loose Lips Lindsay (and yes that statement can be taken two ways if you get my meaning) still hasn't learned her lesson about opening her mouth and her legs yet. What a supercilious SKANK. Well Talon shot her ass right on down to size about her "in" within the art world and Grady... well I suppose desperate times call for desperate measures and that includes tricking with a desperate whore. A stiff prick has no conscience but if he's not careful that Horse-humping Thundercunt Lindsay has is going suck the life out of him and spit out the bones and all for the sake of trying to get the attention and money of someone who doesn't want you or to remember that they once even knew yo' broke ass.
As for the third player in this Miasma of Misery, Michael....LMAO, LMFAO, OMFG ROFLMAO!!!!! I would high five Ralph if I could!! That was a genius way to get Mutton-mouth back and was the perfect accompanying torture to Talon's own brand of revenge. I honestly can't wait to find out what they are going to do next... or to WHOM! I'm sure that list will grow by next chapter but I'm also sure that Michael will remain on the Shit list both literally and figuratively...LOL
Can't wait for the next chapter, Nicole!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2017 5:30 am Title: Chapter 12
Had to comment about how Luther thinks Grady being seen with Lindsay is a step up when she is basically a social praha, even if she does get Michael to drop the lawsuit against Phil I doubt they are going to let her have an in at any gallery in New York?
I really hope they don't drop it because he and Michael taking the stand will be very amusing and the New York gossips would love to spread there testimony around.
Those shoes Zee was wearing and carrying in her lap are Gorgeous and perhaps the reason why Talon wanted to know is because she plans on wearing them when she stomps on Luther's face and out the door lol
I think Craig is going to move that money into his personal account.
You are Astounding me again with this story and all the cruel stuff you do to Michael and Lindsay lol
Date: Jan 19, 2017 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
First off...that spa scene was most enjoyable. The fact that it is currently on a UBS stick is even better. It's teh gift that keeps on giving. I nearly busted a gut reading it and that Talon did all that.as much as I question her loyalies at times, I have to high five her on that one.
Seems Grady didn't get the reaction he and Luther had hoped for from Zee. lol. Na na na na naaaaaaaaaa. Seems they all kind of made asses of themselves. wonder why they'll try to get up to next. Their attempts are almost comical really.
Loving Ralph!! Can't wait to see what he has up his sleeve.
A shout out to Hunter is of course so necessary! Oh to have been a fly on the wall there. Beautifully done!
And Lindsey for a time was in her element, or at least she thinks she is. Oh if she only knew. Love that everyone is against her, some quietly, some not so much. Her parents were a hoot! Definitely put her in her place but good.
And now we find out about they whys of the jewlery. sneaky sneaky! Love it. It seems Talon is just as described. A btich, but an honest one. She seems to be fully on "our team". Can't wit till Luther finds out about everyone being against him and to such an extreme. he won't know what hit him!
Excellent!!
Cheers,
Date: Jan 19, 2017 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
ROTFLMAO!!
Oh you wicked, wicked girl. This chapter has te be THE most hilarious one you ever written and the most exquisite torture ever. Never knew hot wax could be this much fun.
So many people got their arses kicked in this chapter. Not only have Mickey but especially Twatzilla got the full blast. She's really out of everbody's good books.
Let's wait and see if both of them learned something from this evening.
Talon is simply marvelous. Playing Luther like that. I hope she gets away with it for she deserves it after being cheated on like that. Good for her to get Mickeys spa day taped. It could become quite a partypiece, wouldn't it.
Did a search for Zee's shoes. They are to die for..... especially in cobalt.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
XOXO
Meriam
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2017 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 12
Thomas and Zeon, I see they are going to be busy getting their lives back together. That means one less brother fighting over how to decorate the Bro-house. It's nice to see Zee and her brothers getting along and how happy Faal is for her. Everyone's off for NY and a showdown with the booby twins. I'm beginning to like Talon, especially with how she treats Ralph. She seems to have done a turnaround. The spa day with Michael was hilarious and if I got it right Talon had them video Michael's treatment. All that chest hair. Yuck. Grady wasn't nearly as bad as I thought he would be. Did Lindsay ever find Melody? Hunter and Miranda did a fabulous job, and Lindsay actually tried to take credit. Love how Steve and Brian didn't let Michael get away with saying shit. I'm still not sure what the coat tag number means. Lindsay's parents are there and they let Michael and Lindsay know that they are leeches. Now I'm glad we couldn't see the video and Michael's little you know what.
Author's Response:
You did indeed with the taping. And Talon needed Zee's coat tag number so she could put the USB port with the video of Michael's waxing from hell in the pocket. Grady gets worse...for some reason he finds them attractive....
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2017 7:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ronald called Lindsay and Michael Leeches! lol
I hope Lindsay and Michael continue the lawsuit it will be so funny when Lindsay gets the cold shoulder in every gallery in New York, but what will make it hilarious is that Grady and Luther are with her every time it happens. (Maybe get Michael banned from every comic book store too?)
Glad I wasn't drinking when I read the spa scene or I would have choked from laughing so hard, must have taken everything Jorge and his helpers had not to throw up looking at Michael and laughing at his twig and really tiny pebbles. (Talon is good and recording it is priceless)
Grady drooling over Brian isn't surprising it's him hitting on Lindsay that makes me sick.
So Ralph got his revenge on Michael I wonder if he has ever done that to Luther?
Lindsay trying to take credit for Hunter, Martine and Justin's achievement makes her look so pathetic.
Luther and some of his cohorts did not have the evening they were envisioning but everyone else had a wonderful time and it ended watching a buffoon getting his comeuppance.
Can't wait for more I could use more laughter :)
Date: Jan 19, 2017 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 12
So happy for Thomas and Zeus.
the quickie in the air was HOT!
but I don't think I'll ever laugh as hard as the waxing scene!!! Lol
Date: Jan 19, 2017 5:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
I still can't stop laughing!!! THIS!!!!!! OH THIS!!!!! Nicole, you are so evil... and I LOVE IT!!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2017 2:31 am Title: Chapter 1
You're right I did mean Thomas. Must have Mikey on the brain.
Date: Jan 17, 2017 8:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
Well i didn't expect that about Zeon and Thomas??But yeah i guess they're perfect for each other..Now we just have to find someone for Zeph,Zeus,and Zander...Cara's available Lydia and also Cynthia,how i wished for them to be pair up,after all they're gonna be staying in Pitts most of the time in broHouse..I love the name☺☺☺As for Talon,is she still on Zeph and Zee's side?If she is she can dump Luthers ass anytime,especially now that someone cares about her?I think Ralph could be her future?But i'm curious though,why Ralph was asking about her jewellery??
And about Lindsay and Michael,well you got what you're looking for Trouble!!you ask for it,now you definitely can have it,another court battle!!
Aaaah i miss B/J🙂🙂
Author's Response:
B&J back in the next few chapters, had to get the reuniting of Zee and her brothers rolling. Jewellery wise, it's a an oldie but goodie...the soon to be ex wives/girlfriends would swap their real jewels for convincing fake ones and kick up enough fuss when their ex demands it back and walk off with the real thing leaving the ex with the fakes...hope that helps