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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2017 4:46 am Title: Chapter 20

OMG!  What a fantastic chapter.  Luther is on his way out thanks to his son and Talon.  Talon and Ralph?  I like.  Lindsay and Grady?  Not so much.  I'd like to say I feel sorry for Michael, but I don't.  I'm glad that the Stark family minus Luther is together and happy.  Now if only I had some king crab and lobster puffs.

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2017 3:23 am Title: Chapter 20

As much as killing Luther would be Wonderful there is no point in any member of the family going to jail for that worthless slug!

The best thing to happen for a man who loves power is to take it away from him and to destroy everything he stands for.

The fact that he is willing to pay $35 Million to make Zee suffer makes me wish I could jump into the story to castrate him.

Talon is a genius to put in the fine print that Michael forfeits his collectibles but Lindsay will be a maid makes me so happy!!

She and Ralph will be happy together in Canada living off Luther's generosity, I was wondering when they were going to realize they more than liked each other? lol

Grady how many times do you have to sleep with Michael to know he is a bad lover?

Top or bottom Michael couldn't satisfy his own hand much less his partner.

Being with Lindsay isn't going to be better cause no one can warm up a cold heart, and if Lindsay thinks Michael is going to sit back and take it then she obviously doesn't know him at all.

Love the way Ralph and Talon left Luther I bet it stings that they both bested him at his own game lol

The next few weeks are going to be very interesting

 

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 19

Luther has Craig over a barrel. that was amusing! Since he's currently going under the name of "Zebadiah" all transactions will be considered null and void right? Now that the gang is aware of that, I'm sure they will use it to bring about Luther's end, financially anyway. There will of course be further legal ramifications, long standing ones, I'm sure seeing as he has been doing this for so long. He has proven himself to be sub human and in dire need of as serious ass kicking. Something I know the gang and their ever growing comrades will happily particpate in. I am so looking forward to how you do this. Will be such fun. 

Michael and Lindsey, ineviatly fighting over Grady's attentions is already getting to be a great sport to watch. I stand by my earlier thoughts that Grady is going to get everything he deserves. LOL. While may have been Talon that planted the seed in his mind, she did it such a way that she'll come out smelling like roses. She's playing all three, (4 if you include Luther) sides brilliantly and like the master manipulator she apparently is. The gang will more than like really come to appreciate her abilities at some point. Lets face it, she learned from the best. 

Again, excellent chapter.

Lots of info coming out at every update. 

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 5:54 am Title: Chapter 19

Michael is an Incubus, Lindsay is a Succubus and they both plan to drain Grady dry whether he is asleep or awake lol

Luther is so disgusting and what he has coming his way is going to make what happened to Michael and Lindsay look like a love tap.

The level of his betrayal against his wife and children is so horrendous that there is no chance of forgiveness there is only destruction and taking away everything he values.

There isn't a hole big enough for Luther Stark he makes the devil look innocent.

I was not expecting that, good surprise twist there :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 5:29 am Title: Chapter 19

Arrgh!  I am so pissed at Luther.  I can't believe the shit he gets away with.  But I think Talon is taking him down a peg.  He's downfall is going to be massive if Zee and the family have their way.  It's funny how Michael thinks Grady would want to continue to see him.  He seems to latch on to people like a limpet.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 18

Forgot to comment on this last night I was just so excited that they finally got info about Copthorne.

Gus and Jenny called Leda Momma I bet she cried later with Mel in their room.

I got a bit teary-eyed when I read it the second time Leda will be the mother Lindsay was supposed to be to Gus and Jenny instead of thinking only of herself and she will protect them both with her last breath.

The four of them are a wonderful family with a great support system to keep them all safe every second of their lives.

Plus Mel has finally found a partner who is her equal instead of another child she had to look after or avoid like the plague.

Out of this pain true happiness won :)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 18

Wrote own the ingredients for those smoothies. ;)

Jenny and Gus, both calling Leda Momma....oh how that must've made her feel! But it just grapped on tight to her heart. Really lovely. I think Lindsey is going to absolutely freak out when and if she ever hears that. Her loss however. The kids both know what she's really like. they may love her as she's a parent, but they don't like her as a person and they certainly don't respect her. She's lost so much, yet she just doesn't see it at all does she.

Grady is getting nothing more that what he deserves. Aboslutely hysterical tht he's being chased by both L&M! They are going to turn on each other at any moment because of this. Now that will be monumental and can't wait to see if it actually happens. I do believe that that was Talon's idea all along. She really is a manipulative little thing ain't she? LOL. Have to say I'm enjoying that part. 

then there's Craig. LOVE IT!!!!!!!! OMG I busted a gut laughing at his situation! Kicked out of the hotel, news camped out at his home and then 2 little birdies was kind enough to let the media know his current location. AS for his getting bail. Hmmmm. Curiouser and curiouser. The assumption that Copthorne is someway involved in yet another legal manouver certainly is something to give one pause. I'm not sure why Luther is aiding him, but there has to be a good reason. Luther needs to tread carefully. Mind you he really has no idea what the others are all up to, nor how it will eventually come around to bite him in the ass. Looking forward to that.

Oh what tangled webs there are in this. So much fun waiting and watching how things go for the idiots and evil doers. 

Hooray for Zee having the house now! She's over the moon. Very happy for her.

Can'twait to see what else you have up your sleeve!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 18

Ok i really want to meet this Copthorne,he sounds bad as Luther or maybe worst..But now that he got the attention of the gang especially Zee,he better watch his back..He has no idea what hit him..Good job Xanthie for sharing that information with family..

Now as for Grady,well it's a big Gross!!sleeping with Lindsay but not satisfied bcoz maybe she lacked dick,but when he slept with Michael not satisfied either??I think he's the biggest perv i know😅😅😅How Zee falls for him,is a big mystery??

I loved all what's happening in Paris,the best one is Jenny calling Leda "momma"is just cute😍i wonder what would Lindsay feel about that when she hears it??But the hell with her,nobody cares anymore...

Oh My God Zeon is priceless,didn't see that coming😀😀😀I'm sure he's struggling to keep a straight face while talking to craig at the same time mocking him...Can't wait for press to get in the evil's office...

Thank you for updating and sharing.😘

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 6:19 am Title: Chapter 18

Hope he gets it good. What is Grady thinking his Dick will run and hide first Lenz then Michael, how gross.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 4:51 am Title: Chapter 18

Zeon and Thomas I hope you got enough popcorn for me because I can't wait to see this show lol

Craig Taylor This Is Your Life!

The press are going to hound him non-stop and they are going to dig and dig there is nowhere he can hide <evil laugh>

Grady has realized that sleeping with Michael and Lindsay is something he will regret for a longtime, Michael is a lousy lover and Lindsay is a cold-hearted Bitch that no orgasm can warm up, he laid down with dogs and woke up with fleas that he will never be able to get rid of.

I would feel sorry for him but I am too busy laughing and doing cartwheels, now that he has tapped both of them he is theirs forever. (Brain Bleach, Brain Bleach!!!)

Thank You Xanthe for giving them the info they needed to take care of Judge Copthorne and Luther the dominoes are falling and they are going to be buried.

Oooooo Tobias is about to have  some Funnn!!!

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 3:59 am Title: Chapter 18

Oh things are heating up.  Michael, Lindsay and Craig are all due for another smackdown.  Great job.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 2:21 am Title: Chapter 17

Craig is certainly in trouble.  Not only with Lucian but Luther too.  That should be fun.  Meanwhile in Martha's Vineyard poor Grady is being stalked by Michael with Lindsay not far behind.  In Paris Justin's showing is going over well and it looks as if Zee is getting the house from her brother.  Daphne is in Paris as well.  Xanthe is finding out that Luther's daughter can be a very good friend to have.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 1:50 am Title: Chapter 17

Perhaps Craig might want to stay in jail I doubt anyone is clamoring to be in the same room with him.

Justin handled the press conference smoothly he said just enough to let them know he is leaving Craig to fend for himself.

I can't wait for Lindsay to find out Grady slept with Michael not long after sleeping with her, that should break the merry twosome up or they could be childish and make Grady choose between them?

I say let Grady suffer by having them follow his ass all over the place and calling him 30xs a day.

I wonder what new information Xanthe will have for the family? :)

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 17

I say good for you Craig,you should stay in jail for life..And when Talon mention the price total of what they destroyed all i can say is wow!!You really fucked up this time Craig!!!Well see if the other evil called Luther is going to help you this time?!

As for Talon,good move and great plan you silly,sneaking lady..I'm picturing out both Lindsay and Michael's face while.flirting with Grady both at the same time..And i can just see the cunts face when she learn that Grady slept with the whiny brat as well..!!

Oh i love what's happening in Paris,everything is great and of course seeing and meeting Xanthe is just a bunos..Now another person added to the family😍
Thanks for updating and sharing.😘

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 17

Such a happy, lighthearted chapter for our "family" that keeps growing and growing. So nice to see them all in Paris enjoying themselves. Im certain Xanthe will be a wonderfull and valuable member to the family. I expect her and Zee to get on like a house on fire.

The freakshow that is the weekend in Martha's Vineyard has me already giggling mildly. Can't wait to see how Talon will scheme and cajole to get Captain Stupid and Blondie Bitch to fight over Grady's ass. Man, C.S is already acting like a bitch in heat. That fall out is propably gonna be epic. 

Craig Taylor in jail. Hooray!! Let him rot there for the weekend. I hope Lucian and Deidra use their influence to get him to stand trial in San Fran. Whatever the sentence may be the repercussions for his action will be met with an even heavier one doled out by Luther Stark. I wouldn't at all be surprised if we were never to hear from Craig Taylor again.

The memory that will stay with me forever: The image of Brian and Justin walking away after that press conference. That image is so vivid in my mind. Thank you for that image.

XOXO

Meriam

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 7:49 pm Title: Chapter 17

Really funny. Hope he serves time.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 17

So Xanthe is now hanging with the gang. She should be good for some inside scoop on Luther. 

Martha's vineyard is turning into an hilarious event!!! And Talon is just going to sit back and watch. Michael as usual is making a complete ass of himself. Cloyingly clingy kiss ass that he is. I'm positive, that no wonder what Grady's schemes may be, it simply wasn't worth it and will regret that little roll in the hay till his dying day. Gotta laugh. 

Then there's Craig. Hooooooooooweee! Oh man. that guy has NO IDEA what he's done. Has no idea just how far in the hole he's gone. Yup...he's gone and done it now. $10M!??! Holy shitballs! Luther is going to have a stroke. Craig is in a world of hurt and for 1 can't WAIT to watch it all play out. Going to be so amusing. I'll be here on teh sidelines cheering away with my pom poms. The guy is fucked without lube.

Thank you for posting this! Most enjoyable chapter!! I laughed and laughed and laughed when Craig's lawyer told him everything. I howled when Michael was making an ass of himself. I cheered for B&J. so supportive of each other. So stable and so appreciative of those around them.

Brilliant!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 16

I like this Guido.  His mother is important and it's nice he's taking a stand.  I, too, can't wait to see how San Francisco turns out for Craig.  Ya did good with having Craig stuck in a bathroom window.  Talon has something special planned for Martha's Vineyard?  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 4:42 pm Title: Chapter 15

Wonder just how Michael got Grady's number?  If Luther thinks he's getting away with something he needs to think again.   So Sarah was 3 years under Justin?  Does it mean that Craig will be sending people to SF to destroy paintings?  So Talon knows about the little nickname that Mikey and Lindsay have for her and plans to take Michael to the cleaners.  Good for her.

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 16

That weekend on The Vinyard is going to be one bundle of laughs. For Talon that is. She has a front row seat of the battle between Dumb and Dumber over that golddigging Grady. The gloves are off and let the battle commence........ can't wait to see who wins. This could be the break up of our illustrious duo. Talon I love you.

The catching of Craig Taylor? Amazing. The damage done on those paintings will bankrupt him. Even if Luther were to help him out, it will damage the Taylor name beyond repair. I hope he has to go before a judge for this. Let him be send to prison. See how he likes it to be some big guy's bitch. 

Meanwhile I hope "the family" has a lovely stay in Paris and enjoy their time there.

XOXO

Meriam

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 16

would so love to see the picture of Craig stuck in the window

and Talon is moving up my LOVE list! lol

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 15

Hiya,

I actually threw up right after reading the first couple of lines of this chapter. I went like: Oh My Fucking God Almighty Sweet Jesus! Grady must have no taste at all or be very hard up to fuck them both. Lindsey at least has some nice features when face down on a mattress but Michael? It must be like fucking a babboon. BRRRR. Really, those first few lines creeped me out into the extreme.

I love the way Talon is shafting Luther about the sale of that picture. Him thinking he's making big bucks. I'd love to see the look on his face when he get's his measly dollar. GO TALON!! And her getting her hands on Michaels collection? That will teach him to piss off the wrong person once again. Guess he will never learn.

Off to read chapter 16.

XOXO

Meriam

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 16

Shame on you Craig!!!but guess what,your plan backfired right??You definitely deserve it..I hope you rot in jail for a very long time!!
And as for Guido,good for you,realizing sooner to stand up against Craig..maybe he would be added to the gang too..but is he gay or straight?

Great move guys,you were step ahead of what the evil was planning thanks to Kiki and Guido as well..

And what i love the most in this chapter is the HOT scene where it happen in the reception😍😍😍Gosh our boys really have the appetite for endless sex..Guess they just live up to Brian's motto 'no such thing as enough'😘😘

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 16

Oh Man Is Talon Wicked!!!

Grady is going to have spend the weekend with both his lovers this is going to be so good!

What is Grady up to?

Guido smarten up and walked away from Craig before he had to go through that horrible stunt, Kiki finding out the information and hurrying to Lydia was smart too and I hope she gets something Fabulous.

Craig is so stupid and the damage he did to those paintings is worth more than all his stores put together, he will never recover from this humiliation and his name isn't worth the price of his bail. roflmao

Thankfully the show was actually in Paris.

I hope they don't get bail and I doubt they will since those paintings are worth millions and they all came armed, plus it could be considered a hate crime which could be more charges?? 

Wait until Luther finds out he is going to Shit bricks <does happy dance>

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 16

Good for Guido! Gave out the info to Kiki, albiet unknowingly, but hey! whatever works. Good on him to face up and quit.

I have to say, there are many times in stories that I wish there were actual visuals. but Craig's attempted escape??!?!!!?? I wish I wish I wish i could see that! hehehehehe. the asshole is arrested. The new about it even hit international medai! The gang saw this in France! LOVE IT!!

Oh this was a most enjoyable chapter. thank you for the small reprieve from my work. Updates are always worth the time to relieve my mind of the daily grind. THIS was soooooo well worth it.

cheers,

Elaine

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