[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2017 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 28
Michael that is low even for you!
When Lindsay and Grady find out they are going to be pissed especially since I don't think Grady wants kids, despite Lindsay going through some changes I think she would see this as her opportunity to get back at Zee.
Luther, Elias and Craig aren't getting out anytime soon and all their crimes has guaranteed that they will not escape without jail time.
Yeah Matt and Hunter Are Married!! Just so Happy for them :)
Does Grady really like Lindsay or is he up to something I really don't trust him???
Date: Feb 05, 2017 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 27
YIHAA!! Luther, Elias and Craig, all of them brought down by their own machinations and two scorned furies!
The look on their faces: I can just imagine them. Elias and Luther will have a splendid time in jail. And Craig? He will propably end up homeless and destitute.
Michael is certainly on his way to his own ruin and can join Craig in the homeless shelter.
Lindsay? I hope she gets dumped in the most cruel way possible. May she end up being an outcast in every society there is. Desting the wasp and make her a cockroach to be spat on by everybody.
Girl this chapter made my dark and down day end in a blaze of sunshine. Thank you for a wonderful update. Love you!!
XOXO
Meriam
Author's Response:
You are welcome sweetheart love you too xx
Date: Feb 05, 2017 11:35 am Title: Chapter 27
Yaaaaay served you right Elias and Luther!!You both didn't fall on your enemies trap but to those closes to you..And Craig that was priceless!!
And now i just want to see what Talon is planning to the stupid dou,although Lindsay is getting better unlike Michael..
And everything about the gangs are all good..Love it so much..
Thanks for updating and sharing.😘
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2017 4:22 am Title: Chapter 27
I can't get over Michael. He's spending money he doesn't have, in fact why doesn't Bethany put a lock on the computer so he can't use it to buy things? It's times like this that I miss Talon. I have a feeling that by the time Evelyn and Brittany are finished with Luther and Elias, jailtime will be looking good. Good ole Teddy, he's fixed things in a nice little bow. Love how things are working out and hope Talon hits Michael where it hurts.
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2017 3:04 am Title: Chapter 27
HOLY GUACAMOLE!!! HELL HATH NO FURY LIKE WOMEN SCORNED!!!
Luther and Elias just got reamed six ways from Sunday and more Hell is on its way, Evelyn and Bethany gave a shout then the avalanche started rolling down and they both are in it up to their eyeballs and looking to go under before this over.
Craig is on his way back to San Francisco and that personal audit pretty much guarantees that he won't even have lint in his pocket much less two pennies to rub together.
Elias is going to turn on Luther, Luther is going to turn on Elias and Evelyn is going to sit back and toast their ruination.
So Justin now owns Taylor Electronics which means at last it is finally going to be making some money, just need someone to manage all five stores why he continues to pursue his art career.
Love the idea of a party for Lydia she is going to be so surprised, a little upset and over the moon with this celebration especially with the fantastic food from E&ZHoD.
Yeah Talon is back and the next chapter is going to be a lot of fun I wonder how long before Grady starts looking for a New girl or boy toy?
OMGAWD IT WAS SO WORTH THE WAIT!!!! <does happy dance>:)
Date: Feb 04, 2017 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 26
Wow what a twist this story turns out..Everything is being revealed and everyone is going behind anyones back..Like I said,i think Lindsay is trying to turn her life for the better i hope,and Michael well,he is just a hopeless case anymore..And Evelyn,can't wait what she's capable of doing but surely it could be so ugly specially to Elias..What a woman in love can do is just unimaginable,and Evelyn was in love with her husband's late step dad and now that she found out they've been using him,there's a hell to pay..
Thanks for sharing and can't wait for the update..
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2017 12:50 am Title: Chapter 26
Looks like Cope and Luther are in for it. Shame about Lindsay's dress, but she seems to be seeing Michael for the leech he is. Looks like the Rattle is being reduced.
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2017 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 26
Thank Goodness Joshua and Carrie were there to find out some information about Craig and knock Lindsay off balance.
Luther is a child throwing a tantrum because someone got to play with his toys first, Bethany wasn't his at first so who she slept with before is not his business and now that Evelyn knows what these two A-Holes have been up to she can dish out some of her own Wasp Justices.
Lindsay is acting all high and mighty now but at the end of the day she could end up lower than Michael and it might just be a lot more colder.
Grady is very much like Luther he sees women as objects and himself as King of all that he surveys, it will be nice to see them both stripped of these ideas and kicked in the balls for everyone to see.
Don't know what Michael is going to do whining and behaving like a baby doesn't pay anything.
This story is just full of interesting surprises and I can't wait for the next update :)
Date: Feb 01, 2017 8:08 pm Title: Chapter 25
Well Lindsay finally had had enough with Michael??Anyway nobody wants to stay with someone who is a grown up but acts like a toddler and despite everythings going on,to the point that they're on their way to the lowest ground still all he can think about is comic and collectibles.i mean seriously??!!!I'm having a little hope for Lindsay to strengthen out her life,now that Grady seems serious about her..Well one could only hope for someone..
Thanks for updating and sharing.😘
Date: Feb 01, 2017 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 24
Eeeeeww i cringed the way Bethany and Evelyn talks about their partner like some kind of a pet..But when you talk about Copthorne and Luther,well they are worst than a pet,atleast pets have compassion with their owner unlike those two they're doing unimaginable things to people..
When's the family meeting the horible judge? Can't wait for the showdown and Zee and brothers stripped the so called father from everything..
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2017 1:36 am Title: Chapter 25
Michael just lost his best friend and his home again he really should be use to this part of the story by now.
Never insult the Cash Cow unless you have a backup plan!!!
What game is Grady playing we all know he isn't really interested in Lindsay, I mean most men don't enjoy ice on their dick and a frigid princess in their bed so what is he up to??
Bethany use to be Copthorne's Ho but know she has moved up?
Bethany might not be enjoying her number one status for much longer, perhaps she and Evelyn can find new sugar daddies together?
Craig better get use to eating Shit and enjoying the taste because Luther is not going to stop.
Two Awesome Updates in one day, love that :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 25
Looks like Lindsay is finally realizing that Michael is not only stupid he does nothing but take take take. Craig is finding out he has no choice. He's lost his business and if he doesn't do what Lucian asks he'll end up paying from his own funds. Nicely done.
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 24
Let me see if I got this right. Bethany was Elias girl friend and dropped him for Luther? Lindsay is getting along too good with Bethany and Evelyn and finally seeing that Michael is a drain on her reputation. Zee's family seem to be fitting right in and Brian is going to need to go on his treadmill for a couple of hours.
Date: Jan 31, 2017 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 25
Hmmmm.....not going to lie, not crazy about how Lindsay is seemingly getting off the hook here. She needs to suffer just as much as Micheal is. Being treated to shopping trips and spa dates as well as being afforded a new romance is just a bit unfair. But I'm sure that you have something in store for the little witch.
Author's Response:
Jazzpoet...worry not she's not. She's got two nasty surprises coming her way. I promise!
Date: Jan 30, 2017 7:34 am Title: Chapter 23
Wow now Harold and Millie knows how to play with the dump duo....Lindsay on the other hand is planning to dump the whiny ass just to save herself from going down any farther,the question is when the people she thought would be there for her dump her ass as well at the end though where would she go?and Michael,well it doesn't take a genius to figure out what he could be doing rather than watching movie and read comics as if his life depended on it..
I'm so enjoying this story much..!Thanks for the quick update and sharing.😘
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2017 4:40 am Title: Chapter 23
$2000 a month? They can't even afford the fair to ride the subway!!
Millicent and Harold were masterful to get them to drop the lawsuit and sign paperwork that proves it.
Lindsay getting tired of supporting Michael? Are they going to break up the duet? Oh What A Shame!! <laughs evilly>
Boy are these two dimbulbs in for a few surprises in the next few weeks.
I like that Jenny, Gus, Hank and Phil wanted to help it is just better the way everyone made sure to send Craig and Luther scrambling.
The rats continue to follow the scent of cheese to their doom lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2017 3:57 am Title: Chapter 23
Amazing. Between Bethany and Millie I think Lindsay is getting a clue. Michael not so much. So the Utube was the catering or something else? I look forward to each and every post.
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 22
Love how the brothers are over the moon about their mancave. I think Thomas will be a stabilizing person for them. After awhile I warmed up to Talon and now it appears that Bethany is also someone I'm enjoying. Telling Mikey that his toys need to go back where they came from and charging rent is a good start.
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2017 6:36 pm Title: Chapter 22
Harold and Millicent are going to need invest in lotion and new sheets because their sex life is going to get Alot more vigorous. lol
Not surprised Brian, Justin, Faal and Zee are competing for who has the most sex just surprised the whole family didn't know about it.
Blake may divorce Ted if he doesn't give him time to rest lol
Bethany has just become my new favorite person and it seems Michael should have been nicer to Talon, guess they better get out the want ads because I don't think Bethany is playing about them paying rent. roflmao
This may be made favorite chapter...so far ;)
Date: Jan 29, 2017 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 22
In love when they get bitch slapped.
Date: Jan 29, 2017 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 21
Loved all of it...Great chapter as always!!Thanks for updating and sharing.😘
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2017 6:14 am Title: Chapter 21
I Swear I knocked Miss Merlot lol ;)
Perhaps we are linked every few chapters rofl
Author's Response:
And I answered! Hope you still enjoy both xx
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2017 4:30 am Title: Chapter 21
So much goodness. Ralph and Talon, like this. Then the aquarium for Zee's brothers!!! So cool. Then Craig turns a cool million over to Molly. Things can't get any better.
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2017 4:27 am Title: Chapter 21
Jennifer did walk in there and rock it like a Boss!
Especially when she recorded all of Craig's info so now they can closely keep tabs on Craig.
The insurance company is looking into his claims which means more trouble for Craiggy, the gallery and Uncle Luc are going after full restitution for the damage he caused.
Ralph was smart to keep Talon from instantly reacting to Michael it is always best to kick someone when they are down on the ground, besides if you give Michael an inch he is going to take an yard and run a mile to try to win.
Too bad Michael isn't smart enough to see if he loss against Talon before they ever met.
The perfect revenge for Grady is him and Lindsay being embraced by everyone until December 20th then everyone turning their backs on them everywhere they go, being social pariahs would be the cherry on their Christmas celebrations lol
What does Millicent and Harold have planned for Lindsay?
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
Date: Jan 29, 2017 2:24 am Title: Chapter 20
I loved everything about the gang and about Talon meeting everyone..Another one added to the growing family or should we say two including Ralph. ..Ooohhh Love is in the air,i'd like to see a picture of the two of them...And i love how Zee is cheering and encouraging them both..
As for the others,i say karma strike when you less expect it,so just wait when it comes your way,you know who're you bcoz it will hit you hard i'm sure of it..
Thanks for sharing.😘