Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 44

Still loving this. Hopefully you are writing now because I need MORE.

~Lorie

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 44

OK, so I read back a bit (again) and I'm reminded that I think it was Zee who mentioned once that Grady could no long provide appropriate swimmers, so I'm guessing that  Lindsey isn't pregnant. Futher concern since Grady is stepping out without a glove. Now that is pretty friggin scary! Hopefully it's not a serious threat. I don't like Lindsey but don't want to see anyone suffer that much. Perhaps something that can be  treated easily, but she's still able to smack down Grady afterwards, but not enough for anyone of sympathize with her too much.

And woah!! The contents of the storage? Stuff from Tremont?!?! Was Michael actually the one behind the burglary at the loft?! He actually has it all?! WOW! just...WOW!

I am continually intrigued by the possibilities. you always throw a curve ball and I LOVE every moment. 

1 last thing...and I REALLY wanted to go truffle hunting with them! 

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 5:24 am Title: Chapter 44

I figured at some point Luther would raise his arrogant head again how pathetic he is to try to bring Xanthe down with him.

Harold and Millicent have guaranteed that Lindsay will get no help from her parents if they can prove she got money by double charging her commissions while working for Sydney and Lydia.

I think Lindsay might be experiencing a miscarriage or her appendix is getting ready to burst.

Could Michael be holding stuff stolen from the loft years ago that Justin got blamed for?

If he does than he is a real Bastard and he needs to be under the jail instead of in a cell!

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 4:28 am Title: Chapter 44

Happy Dancing for Realz!!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Author's Response:

Hugs back and double shimmy dip shake!!!

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2017 2:40 pm Title: Chapter 43

Well Sunshine i thought you're gonna punish Brian but why it turns out you got punished instead 😻😻but whatever it was the Hottest thing😍😍

Oh my god i didn't expect that the pilot was a woman and what a woman she is??really got me cracked when she said about starting of what between Zander's leg😅😅😅

And Cynthia,way to go girl,hands down to you🙌🙌🙌

Wow is Lindsay really did what Zee thought about her doing while working in the gallery?if that's the case she's in for a big surprise and what a thanksgiving surprise it would be??

As for the whiny brat,he's beyond stupid,greedy and horrible person!!Can't wait for his reaction when the family got a hold of what was in in that garage..

Thank you MsMerlot for having someone paired with Zander..Please can you made one for Zeph too,i don't want him to stay alone while the rest of his brothers have someone...

Thanks for updating💝💝💝

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 43

I've never been a big fan of Monty and Eli, but I love what you've done with them in this. they're a hoot. A "Thank fuck he's gone Party" hehehehehe! So appropriate. I bet they wish they'd actually had one. 

Oh thank fuck they've got the intel on Michael and the garages. Does that mean Hunter owns ALL of them? Wow!! I wonder what else Michael has hidden in there. They must be really valuable if he's hiding them. This toys were on display, but there are hidden. Hmmm.

Something is up with Lindsey. I'm thinking back to the fact that Grady was bare backing. that gives me pause. she could just be pregnant...heartburn is common. Hmmm.

The Pasta Palace sounds incredible! What a wonderful thanksgiving for them all.

Big applause for gus and his terrific idea for the plane. always so impressed with him.

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 8:35 pm Title: Chapter 40

I don't know how I missed this chapter but it hot passed me and after reading what happens after I must say that Michael is completely despicable for what he did to Ben.

I knew Grady had a Bit on the side I just wonder who it is?

Will Lindsay's parents be asking her to pay back her share?

Is there a possibility Lindsay could get more time than Michael??

Author's Response:

Just a regular fuckbuddy, but he's comes back for a denouement.

Oh how I wish I could tell you, but alas...

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 7:27 pm Title: Chapter 42

everytime I read a new chapter, with all this sort of angst and drama, I  think to myself, what mroe can happen. but then, you hit us with something out of the blue. I think how much lower can Michael and Linsey go? And again, you throw no punches. I mean, lower than sludge doesn't even cover it.

While Lindsey is just plain dumb, her current machinations are slightly less vile that Michael's I mean what she's been doing is terrible and obviously unlawful, Michael on the other hand is so far beyond reprehensible! My goodness! To do what he's done to both Ben and Jenny. I suppose we shouldn't really be surprised, but honestly...I really can't wait till he goes down! And I mean down HARD! while I'm really looking forward to it, another part of me wants to see him keep digging himself in even deeper! I want him to get so low that nothing could possibly help in out of it, no excuses could ever be made. I guess I want to prolong his agony. lol.

I seriously nearly peed myself laughing over the dogfood. (yes, previous chapter I know, but I missed that review, sorry) I'm sure the yall new he's eat it. they are all aware of his attitude. If not, they would have put a sign that said "dog food", not just "don't eat". that had me in absolute stiches for ages. Remembering it while writing this still makes me smirk.

This chapter's laugh worthy moment...Hunter now owns the lot where Michael's stuff is stored! Holy shitballs! LMFAO!

Oh this was awsome! Truly awsome. 

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 1:55 am Title: Chapter 42

Looks like Michael isn't the only one going down Lindsay was double dipping her hand in the till and after they figure out how much she has taken perhaps she and Michael can get matching handcuffs?

I just love when the family comes together to put Michael and Lindsay in their place it makes the holidays so festive lol

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2017 11:46 am Title: Chapter 41

Can't wait for the whiny brat to pay of what he did..And where did he get all the money he paid for all those collections aside fron Ben's insurance??Well just see what kind of reason he's gonna tell Jenny about her funds this time??

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2017 12:52 am Title: Chapter 41

Looks like Michael is about to lose yet again.  Can't believe he's using Brian as his excuse for being such a fucktard.  He's just pissed that Brian doesn't support him in all things anymore.  Love how they managed to get even with him for trying to spill the beans to Talon.  Thanksgiving in Italy, sounds stupendous.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 40

God i feel like crying for Ben😐😐Michael is most horrible person in this one..Imagine cashing out the insurance bcoz his husband is dead while he's not and totally alive...How can he do such thing,for what bcoz of those stupid toys...I'm hoping badly somebody would put his ass in jail for good..

Wow that was a HOT play between B and J😍😍

Who could be this guy that Grady is meeting regularly??He sounds really into it and liked it even..Wished Lindsay would know about this guy...

Thanks for updating,looking forward for the next one..