Date: Mar 09, 2017 4:46 am Title: Chapter 50
Ty for another great chapter. Mikey just keeps on digging himself a wonderful grave. I am looking forward to more. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Welcome and I hope you liked the dedication xxx
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2017 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 49
Michael is slowly starting to realize that he is in serious trouble of course that won't stop him from trying to get his story out or blaming Justin for how his life turned out.
Lindsay has now realized that she is really on her cause no one is coming to help or save her, well at least she will have a job when she gets out of prison that is more than Michael will have.
After watching his former friend spew his hatred Brian fainted and scared everyone, luckily he is okay, he and Justin needed to talk about prom and all the emotions they felt and couldn't deal with without outside interference, having Blake there to help them means they didn't have to contend with everyone else butting in with their opinions and feelings.
Now Brian and Justin are stronger than they ever were while Michael and Lindsay have nothing and no one.
Brilliant Chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thank you and apologies for not responding to reviews, between RL giving me an ass kicking and writing I got a little lax!
Yes, I thought it had to be Blake they speak to not only because he's a counsellor but he's the only one who wasn't there and could get them to actually listen to each other. There's Thanksgiving Schmoopiness to come.
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Mar 07, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 49
I can't believe the extent Michael went in his schemes. He really is evil! He's had everyone fooled hasn't he? Making people think he's this doe-eyed innocent, when in reality, he's had plans and agendas this entire time. For years even! Now that he's being transferred back to Pitt's, & has Matt's friend guarding him, he may not be able to manipulate anyone as easily as he has before. Will this be the end of his scheme's? He has so much against him already, can he do much more?
So Lindsey will be a maid eventually huh? HAHAHAHA! Oh how I'd love to see that. She seems to not know about the garage. Will she find out, thus also finding out just how far gone Michael is. what a sore spot for her to fidn out Emily will be "having" twins. What will her brain come up with now?
Good that B&J FINALLY really talked about the prom and that Blake was there to assist. They were in desparate need of that. Awful that it happened the way it did. Sad that Brian reacted theyway he did. So terrible for both of them. Had to smirk at the fact that all of the shit Michael did only brought them closer together.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing and apologies to you for not responding before, RL kicked butt so I got a little sidetracked.
Yes, finally the family see Michael for what he really is a nasty vindictive little man riven with jealousy and there's more of his machinations to come. She doesn't know about the garage and will find out and of course will use it to her own advantage/revenge against him. And of course there's more twin news to come.
It had to be Blake to speak to them because of the rest of the family was just too close, they needed Blake's quietness.
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Mar 07, 2017 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 49
As always another great chapter. I love what your doing with Brandon to. He played such a small parf of the show but you always wondered what really happened. Ty again for all yoor hard work.
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2017 4:14 pm Title: Chapter 49
So love how you keep this 'FAMILY' together and growing.
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2017 3:25 pm Title: Chapter 49
I'm not sure what to say about Michael. He was always devious in a way that you never knew it, but he's surpassed that. That one of Matt's friends is a guard should let him know that it will no longer work. But he may be too far gone. Lindsay a servant? That I like. Did she know about the garage? That's what I wonder.
Date: Mar 06, 2017 9:29 pm Title: Chapter 48
So lindsey is finally going down for the $30,000. Good! Apparently she's going to put it all on Michael. Highly doubt that will work, but she's desparate with nobody there to help her. she's burned all her bridges that's for sure!!
Grady too. Mind you, he seems to have enough shit to lay on Luther, that he may be able to lessen any kind of charges put against him. He's going to do anything and everything to save his own hide. Not sure if that will be of any good though. He received $15M out of it. Not sure he can talk his way out of this one. Wil he and Luther be in teh same prison? will Michael end up there as well? hehehehe, now THAT could be funny!!
Zeph was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! Absolutely brilliant. Luther has nothing....no one. He knows he's in for a great length of time, adn now knows that he has nothing waiting for him upon his release. and let's face it, a lot can happen in 15 years in jail.
Michael is.....I mean there are few words to describe his utter and unbelievable stupidity! He's actually going to try to defend himself. Watching this is going to be one of the most entertaining things if not the mose pathetic. He's completely useless in life, never mind trying to articulate anything remotely intelligent in order to defend himself. Oh this is just too funny! Not entirely sure what he's hoping for by talking to the press. Again, that choice will come around to bite him in the ass as well. the fact that this new person he's confiding in, getting help from is Brandon, once again...funny! Brandon of course rats him out and he's up the creek without a paddle in a different facility. Oh man...he's gonna be bait in there.
cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 06, 2017 4:30 am Title: Chapter 48
Great ending.
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2017 12:46 am Title: Chapter 48
Michael wants to represent himself in court? So that means he will get the life right? (Brandon Was Awesome!!)
I don't see him sitting on the stand and not admitting to everything while trying to put the blame on Justin for all his stupidity.
Yes, I knew Lindsay would get arrested!!!
Being fired doesn't mean you didn't commit fraud and now you must face the consequences of your actions.
Was surprised about Grady getting arrested I can't believe he was sitting on 15 million and tried to get more from his own son!
I can see why Michael, Lindsay and Grady were drawn to each other they are all greedy A-Holes who only think of themselves.
Luther deserved that punch and so much more which it looks like he will be getting just as soon as Grady turns state evidence against him.
So I guess Talon, Zeph and Zander got the last word after all lol
Brian, Justin and The Family need time away to deal with this and decompress, especially Brian and Justin they just need to let all that anger, pain out before they explode.
Portland will be good for everyone.
Lots of good stuff in this chapter can't wait for the next update!! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2017 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 48
Looks like Luther is not doing well and as for Michael, well all I've got to say is HAHAHA. At least everyone is going to Portland.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2017 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 48
Oh yeah. Micky keeps digging digging himself deeper deeper
Love Love this FAMILY :)
~Teresa~
Date: Mar 04, 2017 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 47
He's so creepy??!!seriously even when he got cought from everything what he's done still acts like he's innocent!!Can someone smack him just once but stronger than a typhoon maybe he could get a clue that no one wants to see his useless face anymore..
Date: Mar 04, 2017 1:22 pm Title: Chapter 46
I'm actually crying,i can each and everyone's emotion while gathered in the Tree House..poor Justin and Brian😔
Oh You conniving greedy leech just wait until they throw your ass in jail...!!
Date: Mar 04, 2017 8:59 am Title: Chapter 47
Thanks for the arrest. I just love him in a cell.
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2017 5:07 am Title: Chapter 47
Someone is aiming to be Bubba's bitch. :))))))
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2017 4:12 am Title: Chapter 47
This just gets better and better.
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2017 4:00 am Title: Chapter 46
Love seeing Michael finally get his just dues.
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2017 1:50 am Title: Chapter 47
I have eaten gummy bears smarter than Michael he will get on that stand and hang himself.
At least he can't use a mental illness to get a reduced sentence everything Jermaine Stewart said about Michael is true and then some. (Curious about what the doctor would say about Lindsay?)
Michael sitting there lying and gloating about what he did made me want to beat him with a chair?
Are the police in New York about to arrest Lindsay?
Damn two chapters in one night had me dancing with joy this story is Beyond Fantastic!!:)
Date: Mar 02, 2017 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 45
Oksy.... so I don't condone violence against women by a man in RL but I will not lie.... OMG!!! She deserved that pop in the mouth long since and Michael deserved to see the inside of a police cruiser as well. Can't wait until he's sharing a cell with Big Bubba on a daily basis. He really deserves to be locked in a trunk taking small sips of air through one small hole for the rest of his life for what he's done to Brian and Justin, let alone Ben and Jenny. Chest-rat bastard!
WHOO!! What an emotional and emotion-filled chapter! I really can't wait to see what the fallout will be from all these revelations. WTG bringing back Judge Maatje!! YAY!!! I just love her, both in RL and within the scope of this fic. I hope that she is able to sit in the courtroom as a spectator to see justice served since I don't think she can preside over the proceedings. If nothing else, it will provide her with some major comic relief watching his non-thinking, overtalkive ass try to worm his way out of this one.
As for Luther's lyin' ass, I can't wait to see what happens when all of his machinations come back to make mincemeat out of him. It looks like the sons are geared up to deliver the final dose of "FUCK OFF!" Oh it's going to be so much fun to read!!
Back to Lyin' Loose Labia Lips Lindsay for a second... it's too bad that she isn't preggers with neither Grady nor Michael's baby and instead is sick with an ulcer BUT knowing that her Karma is coming for her in a big way, I'm glad that's all the pain in her stomach is. It will be interesting to see how she deals with the ultimate stress of becoming Big Bertha's Bitch in prison...LOL LAWD I can't wait!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 45
As bad as I feel for Lindsay after what Michael did a small part of me wonders if she might use this to get her place back at Brian's side?
This is just what she would use to go crying back to The Family for some sympathy and coddling from her Best Friend, ex-wife, and ex-kids???
I wonder what the boys have to say to Luther and how has he been enjoying his time in his cell and has he made any friends?
Date: Mar 02, 2017 9:37 am Title: Chapter 45
Out of breath from ranting and crying.
WTF Michael. You unimaginable bastard! Robbing your best friend and let his lover take the blame? You should be flogged, skinned alive and rubbed down with salt and then left to stew in it with you hands and feet tied.
Messing with the condoms was stupid but then offer Lindsay to be the father to her next child? How stupid are you? No please don't answer that. An amoeba on a flee on a dog has more braincells that you will ever have.
Michael has crossed some major lines here and may the courtcase that follows all these transgressions be a serious drama. Is Judge Maatje going to be the one to preside over this one? I'd love to see her chopping Widdle Mickey to bitesize chunks and feed him to some ravenous long time jailies with an appetite for a whiney piece of ass.
Done ranting now!
So looking forward to the next update.
XOXO
Meriam
Date: Mar 02, 2017 9:20 am Title: Chapter 45
Ok I think i calmed down enough to review😑
I'm just so so so angry at the conniving cunt right now!!!How dare he and how he could've done that to Brian as he always pronounce to anybody who listen that he's his bestfriend but at the same fucked him over?!Really so he has to do something at the burglary happened way back in the Loft and then just stood there and let Justin took all the blame??I want to dig his eyes feed them to him!!And also the original artwork of Rage??Oh Michael you're totally going down for what you've been putting the family through specially B and J! !
I can feel the pain that B/J feels right now,it really cutting through...
As for Lindsay well atleast she just stole from the recent gallery she worked for so it would lessen her punishment but even though she's not getting away with it now that she has nothing..Grady left her and she and the greedy leech has finally over i hope so,and mostly her parents wants nothing to do with her..
Oh My God MsMerlot this is way way greater than any movie i saw...Thank you😙😙So excited for the next update🤗🤗
Date: Mar 02, 2017 6:58 am Title: Chapter 45
I'm so glad she isn't pregnant. Michael needs some serious beatings.
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 4:32 am Title: Chapter 45
Gotta love Medea. All that time trying to get Lindsay to be pregnant and he doesn't know that Grady is sterial. Hahaha. Let's see Michael can be charged with Assualt, fraud, theft, possession of stolen goods. How many years can we have him put away for.
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 45
OMGAWDAMN!!!
I can't believe Michael did that to Lindsay!!
He outed himself and that pathetic scheme has destroyed the possible last friendship he has and all for Greed.
Michael let Justin take the blame for his theft he watched as for months Justin had to work hard to pay Brian back and he sat there all smug.
If that little weasel had an Ass I would say the line forms to the left and everyone gets a turn.
What Michael did is beyond vile and he deserves everything that is coming his way and then some.
I knew Lindsay wasn't pregnant!
So now Grady is gone or just taking a break?
Lindsay wasn't stealing from Bloom tried to steal Hunter's accomplishment and got tossed on her flat Ass, I am surprised that I am not surprised ;)