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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2017 6:10 pm Title: Chapter 56

How does Michael plan on explaining that before Zee ever came into the picture he was selling the stuff he stole??

Can Lindsay be charged as Accessory After The Fact for obtaining and paying for the truck Michael used to transport his stolen items? 

So Lindsay did know about the contents in the garage?

Did Michael give her anything that once belonged to Brian that she still has?

Brian is going to freak when he finds out Michael sold his stuff.

Michael is going to make such a Fool of himself at this hearing...I Can't Wait!!! :)

 



Author's Response:

So in order the answers are:

Will be answered at the trial

No

No

He is

Hell yeah he is!   Cutthroat is going to live up to his name.

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2017 10:49 am Title: Chapter 56

Wow so he is the one who really rob the loft and worst sold everything in it  to random people...Novotny you're going down really bad..You just know how to pissed people off...



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, so bad.  Wait for when he gets Justin on the stand...

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2017 10:35 am Title: Chapter 55

The whiny brat is digging his grave farther and farther..and he expected the cunt Princess to testify for him,without knowing that she's gonna fry him as well just to save her ass..

I'm so glad for the family added two new members who could be a super spoiled with Brian as their Godfather..

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 55

OH man alive. michael just keeps showing just how much of an idiot he is time after time. There's just no end to his complete stupidity! I love it! LOL! Seriously really and truly can't wait for teh trial to happen!!!!! 

Her lawyer hsa zero symapthy for Lindsy. Nor does the guard or Martha. Fantastic! her tears and sense of entitlement aren't going to work on anyone. restraining orders from all of them! Yippee! and threat of being shot of she escapes, whoohoo! Lawyer is right! that sure got her attention I'm sure.

wonder what's happening with Grady? will he be a witness at the hearing I wonder? how is jail time trating him these days?

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

You are so close with Grady...he does make an appearance that puts a wrench in her future financial plans.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 54

Love teh idea of the christmas cards, and that "those two" will have them for quite some time and that it includes every single person and pet in their "family". And Making a very pointed statement that they aren't a part of it.

So Lindsey says she'll be a witness for Michael. why do I get the feeling that it won't go as well for li'l Mikey as he hopes.

what does Edwin have up his sleeve? It has to be without any ramifications for him. I have the feeling this hearing is going to be incredibly intertaining! Well, for us anyway. lol

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 55

Well Michael must have missed an episode of one of his court programs because he didn't know about preparing his witness list.I ( swear I have taken multi-vitamins with higher IQs)

Michael is going to send himself to prison for life.

As much as everyone wants this to be over and done with watching Michael stumble and fumble his way as a lawyer in his own defense is a sight everyone should see lol

Lindsay needs to practice her crocodile tears more cause if a guard isn't fooled I doubt a judge will fall for her act either.

I swear when God was handing out brains he gave Michael and Lindsay gum and told them to go play in the corner with a paperclip. (Craig, Luther, Elias and Grady got a pebble and was told to figure out the sum of zero)

Everyone is home and taking a weekend just for themselves before they enter back into the fray.

The next few weeks leading up to the Wedding, Blessing and Christmas is not going to be boring ;)

 

Reviewer: tataniastorm Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 8:30 am Title: Chapter 55

Awww poor Lindsey... heat that sarcasem. And Mikey Mikey what ever are we going to do with you.... lo k him away forever I say.. thanks again for another wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 54

Wait if Grady knew Michael was putting holes in the condoms then why did he make such a big production with his break up with Lindsay?

And Lindsay has a plan to get back in with The Family by double crossing Michael when she testifies, that wounded friend routine she was doing in New York was laughable, I didn't buy Lindsay was trying to change I just figured she was playing her favorite role, the misunderstood Angel who wouldn't hurt a fly in other words Lindsay was playing Snow White to Michael's whiny Dopey.

I wonder if Edwin Birch found out something about The Gruesome Twosome that no one knows and plans to bring it up to impeach them both?

Lindsay is scheming to get Faal and Brian to bend to her will I doubt she has given up on those two or getting revenge on Zee and Justin.

I wonder when the next shoe will drop?

 



Author's Response:

He didn't know as such but as Lance said he must have felt a difference no matter how thin they are....and his reasoning is to come.

MissMerlot.

Reviewer: tataniastorm Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2017 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 54

Thank you so much for another great chapter. I am looking forward to the trial. Ok off to start on another of your stories. I have waited for you to post just one more chapter of it . See you there.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2017 8:19 pm Title: Chapter 54

Christmas cards!!!!  With everyone including the babies and pets!!!  Why did Lindsay call Michael?  Why would Michael think it was Brian?  Great chapter.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2017 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 54

Brian is Brilliant and Evil I can't wait to for Michael and Lindsay to see the Christmas card of everyone together especially the addition of Cara and Aaron lol

So Lindsay will be back in Pittsburgh and is going to testify for Michael (and herself) this is such a Big Mistake! (I wonder if maybe Lindsay did know about the garage and it's contents??)

Zee handled Tobias beautifully and he is going to behave or continue to deal with Zee  :)

 

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2017 12:08 am Title: Chapter 53

Michael believes court is going to be like on tv? Oh Man Is He Going To Get A Rude Awakening lmao

Lindsay should be concerned about the fact that Grady was barebacking while they were together, her lawyer brought up a good point how did Grady not noticed the holes?

Still doesn't excuse what she did and how much time she will get.

Seems the twins couldn't wait to say hello and it looks like in the new year their might be more editions to this ever growing family. :)

Two Great Chapters 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 53

Hehehe. I can so see Daphne screaming at Vince that way. lol.

Love that they will be co parentlng. that wsa a lovely touch. Very excited for them all.

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! B&J talking about additions!! 

Lindsey, as much as I dislike her, I do believe has grounds to be concerned, and her lawyer has the right approach with regards to Grady. the fact that he was barebacking is definitely cause for concern and cause for legal action. not thatit should take anything away from what she's done!!

thrilled that there were 2 chapters awaiting to be read! YAY!! both most excellent!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 52

FAmily seems to be having a lovely vacation. Much needed and well deserved. 

Seriously...just how freaking STUPID is Michael? That he thinks because he's watched Perry Mason or Law and Order, he can handle what going to happen in court. Oh man...I hope this happens fairly soon, because that is going to be something else!! LOL. I can't wait to read what you have happen there!! He deserves whatever shit happens to him. My goodness he is so incredibly vicious! That he looks back on the prom and smiles...that he thinks of what happened to Justin fondly....how freaking vile is that?!? A part of me wonders if there is some sort of psychological issue there. He's just so bloody delusional!

Emily and Francine were pretty comical with Gus and Jenny. Gave me the giggles!

Curious if there's anything else wrong with Lindsey. did Grady pass something along to her? I can understand her concern. 

the babies are coming!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 53

Okay *sigh* I thought I could handle Daph and Vince giving up their children....but I can't. Even the thought of them co-parenting isn't comforting because they still won't truly be the parents. But all in all I'm glad that everyone is getting closer and closer to getting their own form of justice.



Author's Response:

I understand your feelings.  But as Daphne said at the announcement if she had found out early enough she would've had an abortion.  This was the compromise I could come up with without having to change the way I wanted the story to go.  Hope you continue to read.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: mcm Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 4:13 pm Title: Chapter 53

Yay we are going to have B/J baby(s). Thanks for the update Love I was having withdraws LOL

Reviewer: tataniastorm Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 7:37 am Title: Chapter 53

Awww I love how much Brian loves Justine. And babies yay. I am glad that Emily and Francine get a happy ending to. Know how it feels to want a baby so bad and told I was barren. We had a yong woman who met with me and my hubby to adopt her baby and she changedher mine the day we went to pick her up. Where we live she had 30 dzys to change it and she did. It was like having my heart ripped out. In the end she decided after two weeks she could not do it and contacted us. My daughter is 16 now. And want to hear something funny two years after adopting my daughter I found out I was pregos. Yep damn near died of a hezrt attack. I found out I was pegos on july 12 2004 and had her augest 18 2004 lol did not even know. So thank you for showing that sometimes there is a happy ending. I want to also thank youfor your support it means a lot to me on thode days after chemo and it reallyysucks tosee that dedication.looking forward to reading many more chapter and stories from you. Thank you forall your hard work.



Author's Response:

Tatania, oh wow!  My heart was in my mouth as I started to read your review and then I was sobbing with relief it worked out the way it did.

Anytime you want to vent just ping me an email.

You continue to read, I continue to write.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 6:22 am Title: Chapter 53

Babies, babies.  Lindsay and her STD test.  Michael and his stupidity.  Can't wait to find out what you do next.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 6:14 am Title: Chapter 52

Hahaha.  How stupid can Michael be?  He thinks his guards name is Holiday.  Zee needs to quit cooking.  I gain 5 lbs.  everytime I read a chapter.  Oh dear, the babies are coming, the babies are coming.

Reviewer: tataniastorm Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 51

I just can not stop laughing at Mikey.. wow.. I really needed a good laugh today thank you. I am happy that Brian and Justin are moving past the prom. I wish they would have done that in the show. Again thank you for another great chapter.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it.  He get so much, um, better yeah better!

Happy reading

Best

Nicole

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 51

It's amazing how with all the charges against him Michael thinks he'll get off.  At least Justin and Brian are good.  Now with Lindsay testifying against Michael, will that make any difference for her?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 51

I take back one of my previous reviews Michael has no idea the trouble he is in and I agree with Emmett Justin is going to eviscerate Michael when he takes the stand.

What proof does Lindsay have that Michael forced her to steal from the gallery?

I find it funny that Michael is expecting Lindsay to help him while Lindsay expects Michael to help her. 

Neither one has a leg to stand on and when they testify both is going to incriminate the other in every misdeeds they did together and apart.

I swear if the stuff in between wasn't so good I'd say we skip it and go straight to the trial of Michael Novotny because it will be worth the price of admission ;)

Brian and Justin have found a inner peace thanks to finally talking about everything and Blake just listening, which in turn helped them listen to each and put all those old insecurities away.

Brian and Justin have in a way refallen in love again they are finally at the place where they can be free to express how they feel for each without Brian worrying that Justin will leave or that love isn't strong enough.

Their love is strong enough to withstand anything because they now both are free of Michael and Lindsay's underhanded schemes, jealousy, whiny, evil behavior.

Brian can trust that Justin will always protect his heart and that at long last he doesn't need walls to protect himself he is safe in the arms of the only man he will ever love Justin Taylor-Kinney and Justin knows that Brian will never push him away again and that he is protected in the arms of the only man he will always and ever love Brian Taylor-Kinney.

Them in bed laughing so carefree was my favorite part ;)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 51

And the hits for Michale just kepp on comin'! (Thank goodness! as they are well deserved) What  a fool to think he can represent himself. I reallyl can't wait for the trial to begin. now THAT will be entertaining! 

B&J...they are finally at peace in their relationship. What a relief. And no doubt they will get stronger and stronger with each passing day. Now that they have gotten to the point of beingable to really talk, hopefully they will contiue to do so. They've already made the first hurdle, anything else will be easy peasy in comparison.

So was Michael really getting Lindsey to skim off the top? Was that really his idea? I could make sence since this appears to be the first time it happened. Wow...I go back and forth between him being a hell of a lot smarter than I ever imagined, and being incredibly stupid. Samrt that he's been able to get away with so much for so long, and sstupid that he atcually thinks he can get away with any of it.

Excellent update! Thank you!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 50

It's so nice to see Talon isn't as bad as we would have thought.  Justin and Brian are closer then ever and Michael is not getting his way at all.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 5:37 am Title: Chapter 50

Michael just keeps racking up A-hole points every time he opens his big fat mouth which is getting more of a workout than his Ass!!!

The trial is going to be such a spectacle because Michael will rat himself out while trying to explain that everything he did is Justin's fault.

Brian and Justin have finally found their inner peace and that will help them as they deal with all the crap Michael and Lindsay have done, especially the way Michael violated them out of jealousy, stupidity, spitefulness and utter cruelty, sitting through Michael's trial will be hard but together and with The Family (which gets bigger every day :)) by their side they will be fine.

Thank Goodness Michael is too stupid to function he made a list of everything and just gave the prosecution the proof they need to nail his Ass to the wall and it is in his own handwriting which he can't dispute. (Though He Will Try!)

 So is there a comic book reference of law Michael will use to fight the charges against him or is he expecting Captain Astro to walk into court to save him? lol

Did Lindsay know about the garage?

Ralph surprising Talon with the Doberman puppies was so sweet and it is good that despite all the evilness from Luther they were able to find happiness with each other.

A Wonderful Chapter :)

(I know RL gets in the way so you not commenting is okay I am just enjoying the ride you are taking me on ;))

 

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