Date: Apr 06, 2017 9:22 pm Title: Chapter 65
Hehehehe. Looks like both Joanie and Claire got their asses handed to them. Loved that part!
I like how everyone is gathering around Ron right now. giving him decent advise but letting him make his own decision. Just know that he has to live with that desicion.
Love how everyone is looking acfter Zee. Faal talkign about another kid...oh how sweet was that! Matt obviously was ver affected by that.
Nothing much has changed in Nancy unfortuately. I had a few hopes for her, but alas...her true colours shine through once again. That confrontation between her and Ron was great!!
Who's Teresa Brewer and what will she do to help Ron?? Has she been mentioned before and I've forgotten or is she another new player?
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Apr 06, 2017 3:27 pm Title: Chapter 65
Hiya, reviewing two chapters in one go.
When God was giving out braincells to every creature in creation Mr. Michael Novotny must have been the last in line. Even an amoebe on a flee on a dog has more braincells then Captain Nuts for Brains.
16 and a half years of jail already and counting........ Bubba is going to have a roommate for a long time to come.
The cherry on the cake in this chapter must be Zee's pregnancy. Oh this is such wonderful news and one hell of a plot twist.
Ronald? Bravo for finaly growing some balls. He will be a very welcome addition to the fold. I guess he will become one heck of a granddad for Gus and Jenny.
The "performance" of Joan and Claire Kinney deserves a night in jail. The opiniated cows deserve all that is coming to them. The utter stupidity of those two astounds me. Now they expect Brian to bail them out? Bitches, dream on......
On to the next session in court and another punch in the face for Michael "Mason" Novotny. Is he really that delusional in thinking "little" miss Jenny will have a kind word for him? Can't wait to see her rip him apart.
And I loved seeing the formiddable duo Narda and Meriam in action. They are a top team!
Can hardly wait for the next update of this thrill ride of a story.
XOXO
Meriam
Date: Apr 06, 2017 2:33 am Title: Chapter 65
Way to go Ron!
Fantastic update, along with Fantastic fic!
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2017 1:54 am Title: Chapter 65
Holy GUACAMOLE!!!
Joan and Claire must be tripping if they think Brian is going to lift a finger to help them or pay a dime for their bail, Joan got her bigoted Ass on that stand to use it as a pulpit to spew her hate and contempt and Claire came because she doesn't have an original thought in her head, but they mainly came to get their hands on Brian's money makes me wonder what Michael promised her to testify for him??
Joan and Claire might want to get use to that view because if they come after Brian they will be there again. (How are Claire's sons doing?)
Ronald is kicking Nancy to the curb and putting himself first for a change it is time for Nancy like Lindsay to stand on her two feet and take her lumps, looks like the bank of Peterson will be officially closed soon and I hope Nancy has enough to take care of herself and Lindsay??
Can't wait to see what is going to happen next :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2017 1:19 am Title: Chapter 65
That Joanie could say what she did and expect Brian to bail her and Claire out is unbelievable. Now everyone knows that Zee is expecting and Faal made Matt very happy. Ronald has finally come to his senses and we learn that Nancy had an affair. You don't suppose that Marcel is Lindsay's father?
Date: Apr 05, 2017 6:34 pm Title: Chapter 64
So does he seriously think that his little "huneybun" is going to say a kind word about him? Gawd...he is just...I mean idiot is a kind discription. I'm getting a fair amount of enjoyment of him making an absolute ass of himself. His questioning of Joan was almost painful. He just doesn't have a clue does he. How many years is he up to now anyway...16 or so.
OMG!!!!!!!!!! Zee is preggers! How utterly exciting and thrilling!! Happy dance! And a bonus on that is that B&L have a plan as to how Lindsey is going to be told! Oh how i'm looking forward to that. lol
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Apr 05, 2017 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 64
Wow the biggest surprise in this chapter is Zee's having a little girl🤗🤗🤗I got so excited about it..Hoping next to have a kid are Brian and justin..The family sure is getting huge....They're getting more and more untouchable to those damn enough to cross the line with them..
Jeeeez the asshat was expecting to get away of what he did to Vic's will,well another year added to his sentence surely he didn't expected it...
And the ice queen,really acting so self righteous but she came out the biggest hypocrite inside the court,and the ice princess is just an icing to their cake enough to send them straight to jail..
So excited for the next chapter...
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2017 12:47 am Title: Chapter 64
Michael actually thought he'd get away with everything. Unbelievable. Matt's gonna have a little girl. But we have to find out how much more damage Michael can cause in court. Tell me Joanie doesn't ask Brian to bail her out?
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2017 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 64
Biggest Ass in a Courtroom Drama Goes to: La La Land...Wait Sorry Michael 'Captain Asshat' Novotny!!!
He is now sitting on 16 1/2 years with more on the way so what does he do, he puts Joan on the stand as a character witness to get a reaction out of Brian and it backfired Big Time.
Joan just spewed her ignorance and hate then Claire tried to get her two cents in and now both are in jail for Contempt of Court<smh>
He still plans on questioning Jenny but is going to ignore Hunter?
So who is the next person up for Michael to question?
Ron is smart to walk away from Nancy and to try to get to know his grandchildren and everyone else in the end he will be happier to be free of Nancy and her conniving daughter.
Congrats Zee and Faal a new baby on the way for this ever growing Family :)
Now what does Brian have planned to ruin Lindsay's day??
Excellent Update :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2017 9:40 pm Title: Chapter 64
Baby and more babies to come. Love this family
~Teresa~
Date: Apr 04, 2017 9:29 pm Title: Chapter 64
The Zee's pregnancy was a huge surprise twist.. I love bringing Ronald into the fold...
Cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: Apr 03, 2017 4:55 pm Title: Chapter 63
Nancy, oh dear. Ir eally thought she had come around to seeing Lindsey for who, or rather what she really is. Once again however, we see that the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Lindsey seems to be her mother's daughter. I can't believe she was looking into the value of the painting, of Justin's works. thankfully Ron was there to hear it all. Yup...the man has definitely grown a pair adn they seem to be made of titanium! :) Wonder if Nancy will take him seriously?
Seriously Michael? respect that is OWED? I really adn dying to know where he's developed this sense of entitlement? how on earth does he seriously think he's smarter that others? That people owe him respect? That Brian owes him a relationship? I'm utterly floored by this!
Going by to my usualy expression of shock and dismay... HOLY SHITBALLS!. I can honestly say that not often to I feel such alevel of disgust towards a character in a story that I literally get a feeling of nausea. what Michael did and attempted to do with the wills is...........well, I don't think I have words to be honest. Disgust doesn't come close? Again, where does this come from? It's the actions of something who is a true sociopath! He has no remorse, no feeling of anything except that he felt it his due. People like that baffle me.
REally enjoying thsi new judge! She's great and not about to put up with any crap from anyone, particularly Michael.
Jenny and Hunter ride in at the perfect time. They are the heros of the day. And Meriam is right...definitely law school! ;)
I have to say, I am SOOOOOOOOOOOO looking forward to Brian and Justin being questioned by Michael. All he's going to be worried about is his lost relationship with Brian rather than the matters of his charges and what he's actully going to trial for! Am also looking forward to seeing what happens when Joan gets on the stand. I'm asuming she'll be on before B&J. She's not going to make a good impression on anyone in the courtroom when she does. hehehe. will be fun to read what you have happen there.
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Apr 02, 2017 7:44 pm Title: Chapter 63
Wow just wow..He's the lowest human being in here??!!doesn't matter either people are dead or not as long as he can get what he wants to hell with them is his motto...You should rot in jail bastard!!!
The pain you caused the family specially Brian and Debbie is too much...
Thank you for updating😘😘
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2017 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 63
Nancy is more upset about losing out on a million dollars than she is with what Lindsay did to land herself in jail, totally love that Ron is ready to go forward with his life without Nancy and he held on to the paperwork, Nancy better decide once and for all what is more important standing by Lindsay or her marriage cause I doubt Ron is going to wait much longer before he kicks her to the curb.
Michael disgusts me I can't believe that not only did he steal from Deb but he tampered with Vic's will to increase his share?
And where exactly would a dumbass like Michael Novotny learn to do that?
I wonder if Lindsay gave him the idea for that I mean she didn't get too upset at the thought of her parents getting divorced, though she was upset that her father planned to leave her so little, wonder if Nancy's will is as accurate as she thinks?
Thank goodness Hunter kept in touch with Rodney and he had the actual will and thank goodness for Jenny that kid is one sharp cookie and will make one Hell of a Lawyer.
By the time Michael gets out Jenny's first grandbaby will be expecting her first baby.
Wonder if Lindsay will get more time tacked on when she testifies?? :)
Not even Judge Paal wasn't expecting that from Michael <smh>
Author's Response:
Michael tampered with Vic's will years ago, so Lindsay can't be blamed, sadly, for that idea he took a chance and it worked. His reasoning is coming it's priceless!
Ron has more than gained his balls...as he proves.
Happy reading
MissMerlot xx
Date: Apr 02, 2017 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 63
OMG and now he even stole from his mother and his uncel! How despicable can a person become, how low can he sink.
He will go to jail for a very long time! He'll be an old man by the time he get's out of there. An old and bitter man without any friends. I guess he will be forced to move from the Pitss for nobody will ever want to talk to him again. And that is the way it should be.
I love Jugde Narda. She is a real fiesty one who doesn't condone any dilly dallying in her court.
Can't wait for Joan to be called to the stand. That will be one very interesting day.
XOXO
Meriam
Author's Response:
I am so pleased that you love Narda. Yes her and Joan are going to clash and clash badly...there will only be one winner!
This is Michael we're talking about though, he thinks that Brian is going to come to his rescue and appeal the sentences previously handed down. Someone should tell him that denial is not just a river in Egypt.
Happy reading.
Nicole xxx
Date: Apr 02, 2017 2:06 pm Title: Chapter 62
Justin's love for food is amazing,I don't know where he lut all those carb and not gaining an ounce??
Oh I hope Ronald leave that wife of his,seems she didn't learn her lesson completely and still getting fooled by her own daughter..and after everything nothing on her mind but money??
Oh I love this Bubba character,wish he could make the brat's life hell...he deserve every minute of it..
And calling that ice queen and princess,he's really digging his own grave deeper..and I can't wait for Brian and Justin's lawyer to put them on the stand start frying them..
I love the new Judge too😊
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2017 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 63
can the dumb ass dig his self any deeper??
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2017 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 63
Thank you for giving us a better description of the painting. Looks like Nancy is more concerned about the money she's lost then Lindsay's behavior. Good to see Ron is standing firm. Just when you thought Michael couldn't have done worse you find out he did. And to Vic and his mother of all people. He's gotten money hungry with old age. Thank goodness for Jenny and Hunter and especially Rodney. What's with the taffy?
Author's Response:
Justin had some taffy in his mouth and well you can imagine the rest...
Date: Apr 02, 2017 11:59 am Title: Chapter 61
The whiny brat really is stupid,who's calling a witness without even meeting them yet before what he did??and now his plan backfired...served you right!!
Wow didn't expect that one from the cunty Lindsay??she's no different than her bestfriend brat bcoz she also stole something from Mel..
Wow i'd love to see all those HOT husband making a mess in the kitchen but i guess the result was good if Justin's reaction is any indication..Loved how the boys so natural to act like that in front of the family..ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2017 1:13 am Title: Chapter 62
I would love to be a spectator in that courtroom. Although I would probably be either thrown out or thrown in jail for laughing everytime the weasel did something stupid. Which is pretty much anytime he opens his mouth.
~Lorie
Date: Mar 31, 2017 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 62
Seems the apple doesn't fall far from teh tree. Nancy hears about the value of something and all she sees is dollar signs. Looks like she really hasn't learned much from the Lindsey debacle has she. Ron has at least is willing to drop Nancy like a hot potatoe if she doesn't fall back in line.
Oooooooooooooooh Michael has a new roomie! LOL! Seems strange to have a thin wirey guy be named Bubba. alwasy envisioned a big ol' muscle bound dude.
I love Malcolm. I know he's a side character, but he always makes me smile if not giggle. He gives a much needed note of brevety at times. His log suffering sighs, hsi eye rolls. I can absolultey see him really really wanting to be the baliff. LOL
Michael isn't making any friends what so ever in the courst system. Once again, his lawyer is mentioning recusing. LOL. Poor guy really drew the short straw on this case didn't he. This case alone should triple his required pro bono hours. ;)
REALLY loking forward to more goings on during the court proceedings. this is great fun!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2017 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 62
Well Perry Mason Jr really knocked it out of the park there he basically alienated his attorney, the judge and showed that Zee had nothing to do with his actions since he stole from Brian and his mother way before Zee was ever around, he also got Zee to admit on the record that he tried to attack her twice the second time in court in front of the judge despite his so-called fear of her, and Zee admitted that Talon not Justin had him investigated to protect her rights due to Michael's underhanded tendencies, even the apology to his attorney is on the record.
Day 2 should be a breeze<scoffs and rolls eyes>Yeah Right!
Looks like Lindsay is going to cost Nancy her marriage after all, Nancy is stupid to revert back to her old ways but Ron is not going back down that road so Nancy should pack her stuff the second she decides to help Lindsay.
Zee was smart to tell Brian to bring a change of clothes he and Justin both needed that release, while Michael, Joan and Claire need to take a pill and then go to Hell! lol
Oh I think Michael and Bubba are going to be Real Good Friends, who knows maybe they will even become Besties?? rofl
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!! Please Update Soon <Puppy Eyes> Pretty Please!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2017 8:42 am Title: Chapter 62
I'm sorry to see that Nancy has fallen into her old habits, but happy that Ron is sticking to his guns. The court case is going to be good. When will the fact that Justin was thought the culprit when the goods were stolen be shown? That should show Michael's meanspiritedness if nother else does.
Date: Mar 28, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 61
Hehehe. sooooo, Bubba will be arriving soon. this should be interesting. Wonder who he really is. will Michael's mouth get him into more trouble with his new roomie?
Oh Lindsey. critisizing Michael for stealing from Brian and others, yet she's obviously done the same thing to Mel. I suppose she thought it was "her due". considering her reluctance to write the list, she at least knows she was in teh wrong. what excuses will she make though?
Michael's new secondary attorney isn't going to put up with his crap! He's going to make sure that Michael does what he needs to do, have all hsi bases covered, if for no ther reason, he can't come back saying he didn't know. (not thqat he could) For someone who thinks he is so smart, and will have no problem handling his own case, he really is an idiot! Looking forward to court again. Wonder how it will go with Joan. lol. And really...the one question he has for Zee?? REALLY?!?!? He's not even considering what he's actually beign charged with!! He's more concerned about Brian. SMH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh how I WISH there were pictures of the boys baking! That would've been epic. lol. Loved that they did that. Naturally Justin needs to show his appreciation to hiw own baker.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2017 5:01 am Title: Chapter 61
Michael steals from his Best Friend, Mother, the Man Who He Will Never Be while Lindsay stole from her wife, I swear these two need to be put in shark infested waters.
Michael doesn't stand a chance against Zee but it will be fun to watch his pathetic attempt I do wonder if he will try to attack her again?
Lindsay really wants her day in court I just hope it will be a day (If she gets it?) that she never forgets.
Still surprised about Kyran and Edwin.
Aww Brian is so Sweet!!! ;)