Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 70

Oh man..."bubble" is going to be so incredibly well loved by all, but Faal....oh man...it makes my heart burst thinking of him being a daddy again. This time from teh very start though. Love his little chats with Bubble. How he's already telling the little one about members of teh family, and in this case Jenny inparticular. Jenny is going to rival everyone else I think in being protective of this little new addition. She'll show even more how she has deserved the Pitbull moniker.

Oh how I remember "bubble boobs"!! I look back on that time quite fondly. Going from a barely there B cup to what seemed like a double C was mind blowing! And virually over night. Sadly, have gone right back to a B (slightly more solid B mind you;)  )  Everyone's reaction to Zee was funny and brought back memories. I too received much teh same reaction from friends and family. lol

HA!! judge Carruther's using my favorite expletive! Made me smile. :) :) :)  I have a deep fondness for Malcom in this part fo the series. I quite enjoy all of your original characters, but he really is a hoot! 

Michael is a bit of a,,,I'm not quite sure of teh exact word. Definitely not an ingenue that's for sure! He is so incredibly devious, to the point that one would assume he'd be fairly intelligent, but in reality, he really is pretty stupid. He really lacks intelligence. It's kind of mind boggling really. And makes for pretty laughable scenes, when he thinks he's smart! He thinks he can put one over on David of Zee, but in reality, he continues to make an ass of himself. After a coule of times, one would think that he'd start looking at all the evidence provided during discovery etc, yet, he doesn't. He seems to think that they way he sees things are indeed factual. I reality, it would make one bang ones head against the desk, but in fiction, it's just pure entertainment!!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2017 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 71

Lindsay and Nancy are so pathetic they really should learn to tell the truth cause lying just makes the situation more funny.

Michael is going to wish he just stayed in bed because the prosecution is about to give a new meaning to the word Eviscerate.

They are going to ask about the girl's anniversary party and why Michael got punched.

Not surprised he stole the picture but why sell it and the other items? How much did he get for the picture?

I wonder who he planned to sell the scarf too and for how much?

Brian and Justin being in another room during Michael's testimony is good because they will need to vent and killing Michael would destroy their fun.

Bubble is really making her presence known much to the displeasure of Zee but happiness of Faal lol

Fantastic Updates :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2017 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 70

Love your courtroom scenes.  This makes my day.  

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2017 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 69

CAtching up today on my reviewing. Realized I hadn't done the latest chapter. Not sure holidays in your neck of the woods, but I took a glorious 4 day weekend. Did some reading, but not much reviewing. (never really do on weekends)

I was so looking forward to Michael facing down Justin in the courtroon. I know we all refer to Michael as being delusional, but seriously....he really thought he'd be able to get the upper hand on Justin. A man that has proven time and time again his far superior intellect compared to Michael on numerous occassions. AS is usual, Michael was out of his depths and proved it beautifully! I admit to having a few spurts of giggles reading this. That Justin referred to "Zelda" as he did rather than Zephyr.....omg girl...That was freaking priceless!

The fact that the judge had to write the apology to Jenny, that he didn't bother himself speaks volumes and truly displayed once again, just what a low POS he really is. He wasn't even sorry for the way he treated her!! He felt it was within his right. ARG!!!!!

Bubble kisses.............How unbelievably sweet are those 2??!?! 

Looking forward to the next update.

Haven't had one in a few days...I hope it's just because of the holiday weekend. Hope all is OK on your  end. Tend to get worried when I don't hear from a regular, but decided not to panic until holiday weekend was well over. Nothing on FB recently either. Thinking of you and praying you're OK!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely review and concern.  I'm back to almost my best after RL kicked my ass.  I hope to be back to updating once a day as per usual.

Best

Nicole

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 2:41 am Title: Chapter 69

Zelda is just knocking it out of the park I swear he should handle all of his own cases from now on that way everyone who takes e stand can make him look like a buffoon (Sorry Buffoons You Are Actually Smarter:)) who can't figure out the opening of a paper bag with holes in it!!! <smh>

Justin didn't give him the reaction he was hoping for which was Justin crying, shaking, fumbling and trying to go fetal.

Instead Justin was poised, confident and got turned the tables on Michael to make him look even more incompetent. (How Much More Incompetent Can He Look By Now?!?!) 

Judge Paal wrote a beautiful apology that will stick in Michael's craw for quite some time.

Michael takes the stand Yeah and Noooo!!! lol

Faal talking to Bubbles is so cute and precious.

So Mel and Talon are going to see Lindsay, am very curious why??

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2017 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 68

That was disgusting!!!

Michael is such a Idiot!!!

Brian handled himself with smoothness and class he was able to put Michael in his place with complete ease.

The jury can see how big of a moron Michael is but that video did not help <shudders>, Michael really should have read what was handed to him cause his incompetence is growing every second.

Next up his Justin and this is going to be good for Justin but Michael is going to wish he had taken the deal.

I feel bad Lindsay wasn't there to see how Michael handled Brian on the stand it was very eye opening and nauseating.

Good for Jenny to get such an amazing opportunity Ben, Mel and Steve are going to be so proud as soon as they get over the shock :)

On the edge of my seat for the next update :)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2017 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 68

I didn't need Brian Bleach, but I did need Novotny Bleach especially after the video.  Shudder.

Author's Response:

Gaah was so traumatised writing it that fingers were shaking badly...

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2017 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 67

The way Zee was "chatting" with "Bubble". And that Faal put the baby's heartbeat as the ringer...OMG...how precious!! How sweet!  What's in the salt grinder?? ;)

Michael needs to be drqwn and quartered. I cannot believe how far he went with Jenny. How incredibly badly he treated her. what the hell did he expect? She imancipated herself from him. did he seriously think she was going to be a good character witness? She proved herself to be an incredibly strong and independant young woman. The entire family must be so proud of her!

I CAN"T WAIT FOR MONDAY in court!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm dying to see Michael question Brian. that is going to be epic!!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2017 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 67

OOHHH Hurry, hurry, hurry please with the next update for I'm really desperate to see Manky Mickey go down.

After him slamming darling Jenny Rebecca in such a horrid way he is in dire need of a gigantic, humongous and most humiliating slapdown.

I want to see him dragging himself out of the courtroom by the tips of his hair. Not even clawing himself out on his fingernails. No I want him slithering back to his cell on his own bodily fluids. He deserves the entire world emptying their bowels on him.

The utter cruelty and disrespect he has for anybody is beyond words.

A very big bravo to Jenny Rebecca who showed how a young woman can rise above her age and be all grown up and mature. Yes, her future is definitely the law.Should she decide to study law Mel, Meriam, Charles, Empraim and so many others will, no doubt, be backing her all the way. She will most likely become a lawyer with the reputation of being a shark if necesarry. 

So once again, please don't make us readers wait too long for the next update.

XOXO

Meriam

Author's Response:

Oh now would I do that to one of my favourite girls...working on C68 as we speak.

Slithering back to his cell on his own bodily fluids?  That is so being stolen!

Nicole xxxx

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2017 4:36 am Title: Chapter 67

Way To Go Jenny!!!

She held her ground and got Michael to look like a bully especially when he charged up to her about the jacket, Michael is despicable and just for that stunt alone he should be ten feet under the jail!!! 

Jenny was brave to take the stand and to hold on until Steve could get her to let her emotions out, it has to hurt to see the man you once called Dad as the monster he really is <smh>

Loved the explanation about why Justin eats out of Brian's plate it is just so sweet (Sorry Brian, But You Are Very Sweet lol;)) and so them to have that wonderful secret.

Not surprised Albert has had enough and has asked to be recused Michael thinks this will give him some advantage now that Brian is going to take the stand But Perry Mason Jr is about to get stomped. (Though He Really Should Be Use To It By Now)

The Brian and Mikey Show Is Ending Officially Once and For All!!!!!!

 

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2017 6:25 pm Title: Chapter 66

It Was A One Two Punch For Nancy and Lindsay they both got knocked off their entitled throne.

Hope Nancy enjoys living with her lover Marcel in obscurity because no way will they be welcomed into The Wasp Nest.

Ron is putting himself first and has The Family to help Jim adjust to being single but not alone anymore.

Perry Mason Jr. is doing an excellent job at helping the prosecution I swear when they were handing out brains Michael was standing in line for a snow cone and an animal balloon<smh>

Now Lindsay was standing in line to get her nails done she didn't help Michael in anyway and now her testimony can be used against now that she is on her way back to New Jersey lol

So what other rabbit is Michael going to pull out of his hat?

Did Joan and Claire enjoy their stay in jail? :)

 

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2017 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 66

The total smackdown of the Blond Bitch!! 

This courtsession was absolutely thrilling! The way Ephraim smacked Blond Bitch down and revealed her true character was utter perfection. My, her squirming was such a delight to see. I sniggered all the way through this chapter. And her being forced to call Zee Mrs. Ugerstacht? Wow, that must have really hurt. 

So it's back to jail for Lindsey and bye bye to Mommy Dearest. 

Once again a big bravo to Ron for standing up to Nancy. She can pack up her shit and move in with her long time lover. It's like mother like daughter with Lindsey and Nancy. Both feel completely entitled, both have been smacked down and both have been utterly humiliated. Nancy can really forget the WASP circle she was in. Persona non grata.

Then again Ronald gained new friends and gained two lovely grandchildren who he will no doubt spoil rotten.

Brian and Justin: They way they rile up Blondy Bitch and Manky Mickey just before every courtsession is incredible wicked and well planned. Brian showing up with a hickey in so purely evil.

Thank you for THE best chapter you have ever written. I thoroughly enjoyed this. 

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

XOXO

Meriam

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2017 5:41 am Title: Chapter 66

What an interest court room scene.  I'm so glad that Ron didn't cave.  You had me worried.  Lindsay is probably wondering what's going on.  So is Nancy.