Date: May 08, 2017 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 77
OMG!! LMFAO!!!! omg omg omg...Zee and Faal have taken over Lindsey's debt...oh shit...I'm in tears from laughing! That is freaking EPIC!!!
I hope and Brian isn't speaking too soon. It seems to me that Michael will do anything to hurt those around Brian...that take Brian's attention away from him.
Duh duh duh duuuuuuuuuuuuuh....Next EPIC part in the series to come. Looking forward to that let me say!! Such an exciting series! While we've been enjoying the experience of reading it and you sharing it with us. I hope you've been enjoying the experience of writing it!
Thank you!!!!! Your talent is a gift, and one we are fortuante enough to be on the receiving end of!!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: May 08, 2017 6:21 am Title: Chapter 77
Omg I am so sad to see the end ..for now still going to miss them. Thank you so much for putting this wonderul work out there for us readers to enjoy. Till next time take care lovely
Author's Response:
Thank you darling girl. The Family is coming back but not for a while. Hope you continue to enjoy my other stories.
Nicole xxx
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2017 5:07 am Title: Chapter 77
Great story happy about the ending and looking forward to reading more.
Date: May 08, 2017 2:23 am Title: Chapter 77
Well done! I will admit to being a reader, not a reviwer, but your work requires praise and a wish for more of this wonderful family!
Date: May 08, 2017 1:33 am Title: Chapter 77
Fabulous fic! Hate to see it end, but thanks for sharing this Fantastic fic.
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2017 1:15 am Title: Chapter 77
Okay we all know Lindsay is not going to be a good girl in prison so I see her doing all four years.
Michael just couldn't wait to get more years added to his sentence and after the last part I fear Michael did exactly what they were hoping he wouldn't do <smh> What a A-hole!!!
Two new babies in the family how Awesome bet those two are going to be the best of friends thanks to such good examples.
I so look forward to Lindsay being in servitude to Faal and Zee I can't wait to see what they make her do.
So how long before Lindsay is back in prison, Michael gets more time or tries to break out so he can see Brian (He heard Brian but did it actually penetrate?), and how long before Nancy goes down too also wondering about Luther, Craig?
I fear sorry for anyone who goes up against Jenny "The Pitbull" Marcus-Bruckner and I bet Hunter is just soaring higher?
So sad to see it end but I will take great pleasure reading it all over again:)
I Bow To The Greatness That Is You :)
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2017 1:00 am Title: Chapter 77
Wow. I'm so glad the Vic Grassi Foundation made it big thanks to Michael. LOL. This was a superb ending until you gave us that last sentance. Tell me we get to see The Family soon?
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2017 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 76
What a fantastic chapter. Micheal finally learned what Brian has been telling him. I'm not sure he took it all in.
Date: May 04, 2017 7:11 am Title: Chapter 50
I love your story it is very well written. I love the family. Just one thing truly bugs me, they're is no such thing as presents for Thanksgiving.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your compliments. Presents at Thanksgiving was an error on my part as I didn't realise that this wasn't a thing.
Date: May 01, 2017 4:17 pm Title: Chapter 75
So...Steve definitely stepped in it. LOL. At least he's smart enough to learn from his errors. He's simply reacting from previous issues. Understandable, we all do it. I like the fact that he took his lumps, he thought about it and discussed it all with Ben afterwards. I don't see anyone holding a grudge. I think they were all just "enlightening" him they best way they know how. :)
Oh Mikey, Mikey Mikey. You've brought this all upon yourself, but as usual, you are just incapable of seeing that. It's always someone else's fault, there's always an ecuse of some kind or other. It just seems he's never going to learn. Concerned now that he's goiong to be in teh same place as Stockwell. We all know he just doesn't think before he speaks. He's easily led around by the nose, so Stockwell, if givien the opportunity, will most likely be able to get any amount of information from the idiot as he pleases. Michael will simply think he's putting one over on Justin, rather than endangering his "best friend"
Certainly didn't see the whole Tank thing coming! Right out of left field!. Mind you , I shouldn't be surprised at that twist...you're very good at that. :)
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2017 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 74
Reread it and must comment.
Can't believe I was actually surprised that Michael would try to bring Ethan Gold back into the picture to sabotage Brian and Justin<SMH>
And Michael trying to make a profit out of the best and worst night of Brian and Justin's life makes me wish I had been able to kick his Ass, thankfully Emmett took care of that for everyone lol
I feel bad for Deb but Michael brought this on himself and he must deal with the consequences.
For Brian and Justin this is just another chapter they can put behind them while they move forward with their lives.
Thanks for two fantastic chapters :)
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 74
His ear-splitting screach pierces every set of ears in the courtroom and quite possibly beyond it.
Yep,that screach was heard right here in my livingroom. 40+ years..... Hmmm Manky Mickey will be old and decript by the time he leaves jail. Hey, he might possibly die there. Having to sit out that sentence in the state of New York far away from his "friends and family" serves him well. He finally got what he deserved.
And now it's just a matter of time before Miss Entitlement gets her day in court. Oh, she'll propably sigh, cry and almost die. Let's hope the presiding judge hates blond princesses with way to much airs and graces.
Whatever happened to Emmet to loose his cool in the courtroom like that? Not that I mind him decking Manky Mickey, I just didn't expect Emmet to loose it like that.
Thank you for the wonderful updates. You made my evening go by very nicely. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
XOXO
Meriam
Author's Response:
Emmy Lou lost it because Michael was trying to sell the notepad and scarf to a website that deals with memorabilia from dead/injured celebrities, if you remember the scarf had pressing clippings with it when it was found.
So glad you're still enjoying it.
Nicole xxx
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2017 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 75
40+ years all because Brian never loved him and chose Justin, Michael did all this stupid crap with and without Lindsay just to keep Brian's attention focused on him and to punish him at the same time SMH
What A-hole!!!!
Michael is still trying to get that unfinished handjob and doesn't care who he had to hurt in order to keep Brian forever fourteen and beside him for all eternity.
Thank goodness Justin came into Brian's life because he would be stuck with Michael<shudders>
That's why Lindsay and Michael relied on each other they let their jealousy, resentment and envy out for everyone to see they both wanted to punish Brian and Justin for failing in love and having a stronger relationship than them, plus it kept Brian's attention focused on them when they pulled his strings until Brian found the strength to embrace love from his Sunshine and severe the emotional ties to Michael and Lindsay.
Now they are out in the cold with no Brian to come to their rescue anymore.
Steve finally pulled his head out of his Ass before Zee or Faal made it his permanent residence lol
Wouldn't put it past Michael to tell Stockwell everything just for more petty revenge.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter, Totally Made My Saturday :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2017 10:21 am Title: Chapter 75
Just when you think Michael can't sink any lower. Glad to see that Steve figured out what he was doing wrong. Ben was very supportive. The info on Tank is very surprising. Really looking forward to your next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2017 10:09 am Title: Chapter 74
Michael still thinks Brian is going to come to his aid? I still want to know why Emmett went after him. I do love your court scenes.
Author's Response:
Thanks , I have fun writing them. Our Emmett went after Michael because what he wanted to sell of Justin's. If you remember he had the scarf wrapped with press clippings of the badhing.
MissMerlot
Date: Apr 29, 2017 8:18 am Title: Chapter 75
That was very useful information.
Date: Apr 29, 2017 7:54 am Title: Chapter 75
Ohhhh. The fun is about to begin. Poor Mikey!! yes that sarcasem. I really really want tosee him hurt. Thank you so much for sharing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2017 8:47 pm Title: Chapter 73
Nice with the water and squirting people. The cat had her kittens. and why is everyone so worried?
Author's Response:
Coming right up....
Date: Apr 25, 2017 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 73
A nice quiet chapter with no drama from Michael and Lindsay the family just needs to decompress before they have to go back into the fray.
Joan, Claire and the boys will hopefully stay away but if they don't that hose is going to come in handy lol
All the cats are just so precious:)
Date: Apr 25, 2017 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 73
Now that was a surprise.
Date: Apr 25, 2017 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 73
Nice chapter. So much emotion going on in the last few, a bit a breather was called for I think. Let everyone catch their breath and get themselves, adn each other rebalanced.
Hunter's a dad, and Carl is a granddad. hehe. that was really sweet.
Amazing how animals are able to detect negative energy isn't it. It's quite factual actually. They tend to...I guess attracts is it a way of describing it. Loved how you showed this through Milo and Lilah's behaviour.
HAHAH! Claire, Joanie adn teh kids all got hosed! well deserved! HA! wish we could've seen that. :) Yet another scene that made me smile, just in a more devious way. ;)
Thanks!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2017 12:11 am Title: Chapter 72
Michael is beyond Diabolical!!
The Man seriously needs to be thirty feet under the jail in a sound proof box with a recording that only plays his voice over and over again.
That was so painful for everyone but especially Brian and Justin they are witnessing pure evil at its worse a spoiled, vindictive, selfish whiny man who never grew up.
The next chapter is going to be very interesting:)
Date: Apr 24, 2017 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 72
Ugh...poor Zee! I get the whole having to eat carefully. Nevermind spicy...I definitely couldn't eat any of that. Hell, tomatoes gave me heartburn! I kept those huge containers of TUMS, in the bathroom, kitchen, bedroom and my purse. Never went anywhere without them! What a terrific family coming together as they do.
Wow...Michael continues to dig a deeper adn deeper hole for himself. (have to say though, teh whole gun oil part was giggle worthy hehe) The rest though was truly gut wrenching. My heart absolutely broke fro Brian. Knowing that he was friends...family with Michael for so many years, but could turn into the awful creature he is now...I can't even imagine how Brian is feeling.
Oh I so cannot wait fro teh next chapter! So bloody brilliant I can barely speak. lol
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Apr 24, 2017 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 71
Well shit damn MF! I had a review all set and ready, pressed submit, and realized out internet temporarily went down. Damn!
Basically I was stating the obvious. Michael is seriously diabolical, yet innately stupid! It's mind boggling really that he can be both at such extreme measures. He gets pissed when things don't go his way, he's unbelievably rude towards the court, and has the nerve to smirk at certain people when he thinks he's going to get the better of them. I'm glad this is fiction and that we're simply reading this. I have to say, if it were real life, I think majority of people would be acting on their own anger, or would be in dire need of barf bags! He's actions, adn his own statements were nausea inducing. I can't believe he lied as blatantly as he did!
thankfully Brian and Justin can go watch in another room. I'd be hard pressed to be in teh same room and not act out. contept of court be damned! ;) I have to side with Brian with this in wondering if Michael really is in possession of all his faculties! No normal person acts like he does! And why! what was it that gave him such a sense of entitlement? He's had it for years. It's mind boggling!
Anyway...I'm ranting. lol.
Off to read the next chapter.
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 72
That Michael is still denying that he stole those items is unbelievable. Poor Brian having to hear all that. If the jury does not find him guelty it will be much surprised.