Date: May 24, 2017 8:09 pm Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
You go Mel. I loved this chapter.
Date: May 24, 2017 2:39 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Genuflection
What is she planning? This is so exciting.
Date: May 24, 2017 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
Maybe Ben and Slick will finally be happy.
Date: May 24, 2017 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Dance
Yeah, he really really does need help.
Date: May 24, 2017 11:50 am Title: Chapter 20 - Nerves
Michael is ruining his life without even realizing it. I wonder how long it will take Lindsay to do the same.
Date: May 23, 2017 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Home
Now it's Brian's fault? How delusional is he?
Date: May 23, 2017 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Soothe
Ben did the only thing he could. I wonder why it hadn't happened sooner.
Date: May 23, 2017 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Truth
He forgot his husbands birthday? What a dumbass. Craig is even worse.
Date: May 23, 2017 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Remembering
It's a mystery to me that Ben would put up with that for this long.
Date: May 23, 2017 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Painful
Good question of Ben. Sadly he already knows the answer.
Date: May 23, 2017 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Reunion
Do it Jen. Please.
Date: May 23, 2017 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Disbelief
His mom is looking for him? That's so great. Can't somebody just stuff a sock into Michaels mouth? He is incredibly annoying.
Date: May 23, 2017 4:47 am Title: Chapter 12 - Realisation
I would have loved to be there for this dinner.
Date: May 22, 2017 9:21 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Disingenuous
Michael is an idiot. It's as simple as that.
Date: May 22, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Disapproval
Lindsay and Michael should get together. The would be perfect for each other.
Date: May 22, 2017 9:03 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
I think Slicks idea is perfect.
Date: May 22, 2017 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Mixing
I thought they would never get out of the diner.
Date: May 22, 2017 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Meeting
Michael is sooo going to get it. I can't wait.
Date: May 22, 2017 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Truth
Michael is absolutely delusional.
Date: May 22, 2017 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Foundations
Somehow it feels wrong to keep it all from Michael. He should just get over it or leave. I hate that dumbass.
Date: May 22, 2017 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Contact
I love Slick. She is acting like a mom. A great one.
Date: May 22, 2017 11:59 am Title: Chapter 3 - Warm
Awww. They are already falling for each other. I love it.
Date: May 22, 2017 11:49 am Title: Chapter 2 - Faint
I'm glad Justin found Brian. Maybe he can help him. Where does the scar come from?
Date: May 22, 2017 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
Well that's one way to meet someone. I love the beginning. Can't wait to read the rest.

Date: May 10, 2017 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away
OMFG. I can't imagine what a child born of the bitch and the weasel could be like. Dr. Douchebag is a fucking rapist. I hope you are planning on starting on the sequel soon. This is amazing.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, after I finish my two new ones then I'll get back to it. Dr Douchebag gets his and then some.
MissMerlot