[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2016 7:07 am Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
Now that was an interesting start... totally loved it...waiting for more...thank u for sharing..lovelllyyyy.
Author's Response:
Thanks, thought I wouild try for schmoop with an anti L&M twist, but not so dramatic as my previous ones
Hope you still enjoy
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 21, 2016 2:52 am Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
Brilliant, beginning! Can just imagine Brian , with his car and himself covered with vomit.
So happy to see you starting a new fic, love your ability to weave these wonderful tales.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next update.
JoAnn
Author's Response:
Beaming happily.
Happy reading
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2016 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
LOVE IT!! Great concept, and fun...ohh please update soon and OFTEN! :o)
Author's Response:
Will do my best...xx
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2016 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
Oh you and new story from you! And this one looks to be a doozy. Ted and Emmett siding with Brian against Michael. Even Ben sees how bad Michael is. Love Kiki and can't wait to see if Hunter shows up. This is an interesting introduction to Justin. Let the games begin.
Author's Response:
Hunter...hmm would that be the guy that drops a hint on Brian and pulls his head out of his ass...
The games that people play...everyone is on Brian's side except Michael and of course Lindsay, this is going to be a bit schmoopy - after the last two I need fluffiness!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 20, 2016 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
Yep! That's the way to meet someone. Puke all over them. But why did Justin have to throw up all over Brian.
Would have preferred it would have been Michael who would have gotten the master load.
And do I have permission to stitch Whiney's mouth up so he finally shuts up?
Keep this one up. And I'l keep reading and reviewing.
XOXO
Meriam
Author's Response:
As much as a great idea as that would've been he wouldve whined and Brian would've taken him home. This way they get a few minutes for the sparks to start.
And yes, yes you do...use a big needle and no anaesthetic.
Nicole xxx
Date: Dec 20, 2016 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
Well this is definitely a different way for Brian and Justin to meet, LOL! As usual, Michael is being a Mitch... Selfish, self-absorbed and a stalking idiot. I look forward to him being thwarted at every turn.
Poor Justin... and yet maybe not!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thwarted is an understatement, he will be hassled, manhandled and just plain drop kicked over the high bars when the time comes
Happy reading and hugs
- Nicole
Date: Dec 20, 2016 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
OMG another entertaining read! What a messy way for the boys to meet. LOL
Author's Response:
Isn't it though...but funny
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 20, 2016 5:18 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
Fantastic! Was terribly excited to see you are starting another one. this one is off to a great start.
Tyical whiny Michael, with issues of entitlement. He's already starting off to be an major asshole, so I'm re ally looking forward to see how far you take him, and how far you make him fall!!! hehehe.
Justin starting out as homeless, yet a person with integrity and honour. Well done. He's going to be loved by most. (excluding Michael of course) Seems like Brian is a bit more open here as well. He doesn't seem as cynical, but it's early stages yet I guess.
Poor Justin...eating his fill and then throwing it all up, all over Brian's car adn then Brian himself. Definitely an interesting way for our 2 boys to meet. At least Justin will be able to eat for the next 6 months. :)
Great start and definitely looking forward to more.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thanks, yep he has more inegrity in his little finger than idiot boy has in his entire body.
And he has champions...apart from Debs obviously...and yes I am going to dump him from a bit height and hard!
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Dec 20, 2016 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
Well, well. That's a interesting way to meet, getting thrown up on. (Been there, done that and have a drawer of t-shirts. Ah youth)
You have my interest peaked, keep writing!!
Author's Response:
Nothing says I love you more than puke right?
Working on C2 as we speak.
Thanks for the encouragement
MissMerlot