Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2016 3:21 am Title: Chapter 4 - Contact

Lovelyyyyy ...😊😍😍

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2016 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Contact

This story is so adorable. I love Brian being open and loving. Weasel is such an ass. He really needs to be told that there are other people in the world besides him. Maybe 'Mother' can slap him really hard and knock some sense back into him.

~Lorie

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2016 8:53 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Contact

A) Who was Brian trying to avoid? I mean, if he was headed to the diner, he must've known that Michael would've been there, so now I'm wondering...

B) Michael really is a pretentious little shit isn't he? What with the "Mother" BS and then pushing ahead of others in getting a booth then his reaction to Brian's clothes. Ugh! the sorry little shit needs to be bitch slapped! HARD!!

Loved how you have Brian in this. He's really wanting to explain himself to Justin, and not have Justin think the worst. He's really making amazing efforts! Getting Emmett to take the clothes over was such a sweet gesture. It also get Emmett a bit of teh back story and will inevitably get this and Ted's support. I really hope that Emmett is able to keep it quiet! that he won't mistakenly blab. He is teh gossip queen after all. As much as I love him, that tends to worry me at times. As the saying goes, lose lips sink ships. He'd never do it to harm, but I just hope that when he does tell Ted, that he's fully aware of his surroundings!

anther terrific chapter. I was so looking forward to it.

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2016 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Contact

Oh My God how cute Brian is trying to explain why he was gone for awhile😍😍Our stud definitely have it bad for our little puker😘
I want to dig the whiny's eyes and feed it to him for breakfast..🤔It's so annoying!!
I just love Emmett to death..and with an allies like Ted and Slick,i'm sure they can help the boys for working out their blossoming relationship without the interuption of the so called best friend or bestfriends,depend on what Lindsay's agenda on this one...
Another great chapter!!

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2016 7:15 am Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

I am soooo loving it...awesome..thanks for update..😍😍😍

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

Have I already mentioned how much I already LOVE Slick?! Well it certainly bears repeating! She is definitely a straight shooter from the hip of truthfulness. I wonder if she has clued Deb into how possessive and demanding Michael is of Brian while clearly neglectful of his relationships with Ben, Hunter and his daughter. Could that be why she and Deb had words exchanged? I definitely would like to know what happened the Queen of the Greasy Spoon on Liberty Ave. and the Queen of Grease Monkeys everywhere. 

I really wonder why Ben is with Michael. I've actually always wondered what the attraction was and since I really couldn't see it, I work very hard to break them up. But I digress... I wonder if it's a situation where because of his condition his self-esteem is low or that he thinks of Michael as his shoe-in to Heaven for performing a charitable work by marrying that whiny schmuck? I mean seriously. ..what the hell keeps him there because love isn't a reason for self-inflicted torture. 

As for DUMBZilla and his nosy ass Wonder Twit BITCHZilla, I wonder why they are so determined that Brian reenter his former world of debauchery. Is it so they can continue to live vicariously while making their usual sanctimonious pronouncements so that they can feel superior to Brian? Or is it that they both habe dreams of their partners dying off and Brian coming to not only their aid but to suddenly profess his umdying love and devotion to either member of the Pest Patrol? It's probably some warped combination of the two.

Well the fireworks are sure about to START because Brian and Justin have officially begun. And like a runaway train, whoever gets in their way to forever is bound to get run over. I'm looking forward to their asses getting flattened. Well actually since they both don't have asses, how about just rolling them over, LOL

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 

 

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

Fantastic updates!  So love anti- Mikey, plus throw in Linz and Mel.

Looking forward to next update, thanks for sharing!

JoAnn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

Things are looking up for Justin.  What does the scent of almonds mean.  Like Slick and I think Brian is getting involved with Justin and what does Mikey have to do with anything?

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

I'm loving it very much😍😍😍For a change we don't have to wait for Brian to realize that he cares about Justin because he already is and not afraid to show it...😚😚😚Slick is interesting woman to add to the normal gang...
How come the house is already named Britin??
Looking forward for the next chapter...😙

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 9:16 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

I love it😍😍😍Hoping it's the beginning of their knowing each other..But i'm curious though of Justin's story behind of why&how he became homeless or what happen to his family..Can't wait for the next chapter..😙😙😙

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

And the drama starts lol

Author's Response:

Oh yes!

Stay with me, I hope.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

Ugh...whatever part of brian's anatomy that may "have risen to the occassion" would've certainly deflated at the mere mention of Michael. Keeping it from Michael is a good idea for the moment. My immediate reaction was "Who gives a shit what Michael thinks"?!, but in reality, he'd be simply horrible to Justin, and he's simply not emotionally equiped to handle the abuse form such an asshole at the moment. Hopefully Slick will be able to keep him around for the time being. She'll definitely look after him. Deb, Hunter and the like will want to know how is he as well. Hopefully Justin will take whoever up on any offer of assistance. That heh won't let any sense of pride get in the way. Looking forward to finding out why he's homeless. I suppose his asshole father had much to do with it.

Brian is definitely still a bit of an asshole, but once he realised Justin's perdicament, he softened up. (emotionally...apparently not physically. hehe) That kiss was HOT!

Another great chapter. I love starting new stories. I love anticipating each and every chapter. I love that you are so good at posting regularly. Thank you for that!!

Cheers,

Elaine