Date: Dec 28, 2016 9:08 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
Very nice. Michael needs to be hit with a Mack truck or a big fist.
Date: Dec 28, 2016 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
I find it amazing that Michael's gripe with Slick stems from the fact that she is from a 'broken' home. Last I checked so was his little sanctimonious non-existent ass! I dare him to call Slick 'ghetto' to her face...I really want to see him get punched that badly. It really seems like he is channeling Lindsay aka Cruella! The 'Mother' crappola and misinformed and judgmental pronouncements he's making sounds just like her Don't even get me started on his opinion of Deb dating!!!!! Where does that little turd get off?! 'It's not seemly...' and she shouldn't want to date... blah, blah, blah! I wish my sons would tell my single-parent behind some BS like that. They would also be saying I shouldn't have to make a track and a dot when I walk even as I leave one firmly planted in their rear ends! UGHHHH!!! <bleeping> Pious little Twit!!
As for the dinner: That whiny, weenie-less, worn-out whimpy bottom boy needs a fist to the mouth! I'm glad that in lieu of what Michael did, Emmett retaliated in such a manner to embarrass him worse than what he attempted to do to Justin. He left Michael no room to backpeddle. With luck, Michael will stop speaking to all of them but unfortunately, I don't foresee that happening. I think those of the 'neighbors' that he was trying to impress, will really begin to see what a pretentious jackass Michael truly is! At least I hope so.
Sooooo Slick is going to have Brian and Justin come out of the relationship closet, eh? I think it's a splendid idea! Considering Michael's attempts to have Brian resume the role of Stud to Liberty Avenue while trying to ruin Kinnetik's credibility in the eyes of Brian's clients, announcing their 'Cinderfella' story would be the perfect upset to Michael's machinations. Michael will be disabused of his notions that Brian needs to hang out with his unambitious, unsuccessful, untalented ass and Brian won't have the time to supply Michael with his need to live vicariously through him while trying to feel like he's superior in any way. That jealous little mongrel is in for one helluva surprise! I really can't wait for him to come off looking like a WASP-wannabe and getting shunned at every opportunity. I don't see Ben staying with Michael or Jenny reconciling with the idiot all because of his inability to mind his own business and leave Brian to run his own life. What an Asshole <in my Ted voice>!
More please!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Dec 27, 2016 3:44 am Title: Chapter 8 - Mixing
Oh this is not good when the Canada comes for a visit..I think Lindsay is as worst as the whiny brat is?!How can she think that a child should apologize to the parent when the said parent is the one at fault?just for the sake that he's the parent??
As expected she's trying to run Brian's life,and making plans like she can do anything without telling Brian first!!
I think i'm gonna cheer on Mel,she doesn't think and behaving like the wife,hopefully she and Brian would be getting along when they visit..?
Aaà h Brian who misses Justin who can't wait for them to be alone is just so cuteðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜i like it how they keep the whiny brat in the dark about the boys😅😅😅
But i was hoping Brian was going to confront his bestiest friend about the romour?but i guess being reaquinted with his blonde bombshell is more importantðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Another great chapter,thanks😘
Date: Dec 27, 2016 3:25 am Title: Chapter 8 - Mixing
Slick at the dinner party is going to be fantastic... and I cannot wait until they move past the making out, but it's great that Brian is content and happy getting just that from his Justin!
Date: Dec 27, 2016 3:14 am Title: Chapter 7 - Meeting
I hate Michael to the bones!!Debbie seems to just backdown when it comes to her son?
And the opposite,i love Slick to death😚with her on Justin's side the whiny brat can't just come and insult him and besides he knows how to depend himself..
Hoping Brian would put the immature selfish brat to his place from running his mouth and spread those romour..
Great chapter,thanks!
Date: Dec 27, 2016 3:06 am Title: Chapter 7 - Meeting
I think even Brian is going to get into scheming against Mikey (and i'm guessing eventually Lindsay) instead of just letting it happen :)
Date: Dec 27, 2016 2:53 am Title: Chapter 6 - Truth
Michael just doesn't even see how stupid he really is... and seriously Ben is beyond a saint to put up with him...
Date: Dec 27, 2016 2:44 am Title: Chapter 5 - Foundations
Slick is brilliant!!!!
Date: Dec 27, 2016 2:38 am Title: Chapter 4 - Contact
it's a shame not all of his friends would want his happiness, but I am going to so enjoy Slick, Em and Ted (and probably Deb) helping Brian and Justin be happy!
Date: Dec 27, 2016 2:29 am Title: Chapter 3 - Warm
it makes me happy that Brian is willing to make a go of this from the get go... hopefully not try to play the asshole with Justin, just let it happen!!
friggen Mikey... he will NEVER learn!
Date: Dec 27, 2016 2:22 am Title: Chapter 2 - Faint
I love that there is instant connection between them.
Date: Dec 27, 2016 2:12 am Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
awww, Poor Justin! he ate a good meal though.. but from nothing to everything, no wonder he got sick.
and Mikey is starting off a loser, I'm sure he just gets worse as it goes LOL
I was gonna hold off on reading this one since I don't do wip... but dammit, I couldn't help myself lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2016 12:54 am Title: Chapter 8 - Mixing
<Inserting Sarcasm Here>I just love the nerve of Michael and Lindsay to invite themselves to Britin without asking Brian, it is so thoughtful and sweet of them to do that, they are such good friends.
I can't wait for Brian and Slick to go to Michael's boring dinner party perhaps they can liven it up?
Ben is talking to a brick wall and wasting his time so stop hitting your head and move on.
Date: Dec 26, 2016 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Mixing
And yes I want to slap the hell out if Mikey...he needs to have several seats.
Date: Dec 26, 2016 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Mixing
Mickey keeps digging himself deeper and deeper.
I love that Idaho is hitting on Em. In my mind's eye he built like Drew but with Ryders (from the other story) temperment.
This is going to be a fun ride, keep writitng!!
Date: Dec 26, 2016 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Mixing
This is great. At first I thought it would be about vampires , but this is so much better. Feel free to do anything evil to Michael.
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2016 4:02 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Truth
Now everyone, well those that mean well, know about the bashing. Now they know everything about their respective pasts. Love how Ben tries to deal with Mikey. Michael may have invited Brian to the boring dinner, but that doesn't mean he'll go. Guess I'll have to wait for another chapter to find out what you have planned.
Date: Dec 24, 2016 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Truth
Oh Mikey....you just don't know the shitstorm you just started brewing.
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2016 5:01 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Truth
Wow...sexyyyy adorable hot etc etc...love this story so far...thanks.ðŸ˜ÂðŸ˜ÂðŸ˜Â
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2016 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Truth
This gets more interesting with each chapter. What is Mikey thinking? Will Brian show up for the dinner?
Date: Dec 24, 2016 7:47 am Title: Chapter 6 - Truth
Ben is so martyr,i don't like him letting Michael make him like an idiot partner!!
Ouch Brian made love twice before Justin?who could be that person or two that got lucky?I always thought only Justin he could & would only made love to..sorry if i'm making it a big deal, it's just i have a huge issue when it comes to the boys with anybody else especially B..
Another great chapter!!Thanks😘😘
Date: Dec 24, 2016 6:53 am Title: Chapter 5 - Foundations
I want to understand Ben,how he's not offended about his boyfriend acting like causes for living for him is Brian??Hope he would just dump his ass!!
Caring Brian is so adorableðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2016 6:10 am Title: Chapter 6 - Truth
Wow...sexyyyy adorable hot etc etc...love this story so far...thanks.ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Date: Dec 23, 2016 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Foundations
Hope the night watchman will be a solution.?
Fantastic update and lovethis verse.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 23, 2016 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Foundations
Smart girl that Slick....why does she remind me of Zee? Lol Are they distant cousins.
Author's Response:
You could say that. Can you imagine both of them having at Michael and Lindsay!
Happy reading
MissMerlot