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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2017 1:23 am Title: Chapter 21 - Dance

Great now Whiny Bitch is going to be on the phone with Flat-Ass Princess who is going to be on her way to Pittsburgh to size up her Actual Competition and what a thrilling time that will be when those two spoiled brats get together.

Everyone better get ready because a storm is coming. :(

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2017 12:18 am Title: Chapter 21 - Dance

Oh my.  Can't get over Michael being...Michael.  At least Brian isn't letting him get away with shit.  Love Lucy and her brother and cousin.  Looks like Slick might just have someone to come home to in the near future.  If only Micheal could see himself through everyone else's eyes.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Nerves

I didn't think that was the kind of head that got massaged in the back room.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Dance

Wow i thought about Lucy's brother and cousin yesterday for Ben and Slick,and to my surprise it's already happening..I just hope Lucy and Daphbe can find a partner too..🤗🤗Wow Mikey can be a real pain in the ass not just sometimes but most of the time..Good Brian didn't invite him for the dinner at Britin..

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 11:25 am Title: Chapter 20 - Nerves

So love Hunter surprising Ben.  Love Slick,she can so dish it to Mikey.

Brilliant update, thanks for sharing, looking forward to next!

JoAnn

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 7:11 am Title: Chapter 20 - Nerves

Hahaahh i love Slick,so subtle but effectively so to fool the whiny brat,but i think Brian's mind is going somewhere the moment Justin touch him..😍😍😍More action for the boys please 🤗🤗🤗

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 4:50 am Title: Chapter 20 - Nerves

seriously Michael still thinks anyone believes his bullshit? and that he is the wronged party... asshat!

Brian melting in Justin's hands is perfect!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 3:27 am Title: Chapter 20 - Nerves

Michael here is a clue: Brian Doesn't  Want You, He Is Not Waiting For You, Wouldn't Sleep With You If You Were The Last Gay or Straight Man on Earth, And He More Taste Than To Ever Choose You!!!!!!

Ben is having a Great Birthday with people who want him to be Happy.

The Diner scene was funny and I am surprised Michael didn't faint or run out screaming, I was cracking up at the way Brian was so comfortable while Michael was the one who needed a doctor.

More interesting with every chapter :)

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 2:51 am Title: Chapter 19 - Home

Ben has grown some balls , I'm so proud.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 2:21 am Title: Chapter 20 - Nerves

I'm shaking my head.  Why does Mikey think a massage is anything like behavior in the backroom?  I'm afraid Matt is right.  Ben is too good for him.  If Ben had shown up in the diner Michael would have somehow made everything Ben's fault.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Home

I'm ignoring the other scene,my only fucos is the bedroom scene😍😍😍That was totally amazingly HOT HOT HOT😘😘😘😘Finally the boys are getting intimate well enough🤗🤗🤗🤗

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 4:06 am Title: Chapter 19 - Home

Ben is my hero right about now.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 1:41 am Title: Chapter 19 - Home

I love the reunion of Justin with his family and molly and including his new family!

 

and damn that first time is HOT

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 12:04 am Title: Chapter 19 - Home

Brian and Justin seem happy together.  Slick, Emmett and Justin's family are getting along.  Now if Mikey could just see that it is his fault.  Not Ben's, not Brian's, but his.  Somehow I doubt it.

Reviewer: Lorma Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Home

So glad Ben kicked Michael out and happy that Debs told him off.

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 9:52 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Home

Fantastic update!

Sweet reuion of sister and brother.

Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next!

JoAnn

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 7:20 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Home

Obviously I ditched my current workload for a few minutes to read this.

Dear lordy lordy woman! B&J's first time was simply sumptuous! Hot and sweet all rolled into one. I temporarily thought I should've waited till I got home to read this, then had a ciggy and a cold shower, but then realized naaaaaaaaaaaaa. So well worth it! :) GAH! simply brilliant!!

Now...as for his lordship, fuck me what an arrogant little asshole! for one thing,,,the whole calling Deb "mother" all the time must be driving everyone up the wall. Who the hell does he think he is? Ignorant little shit. Thinking that Ben is actually going to come to him apologetic BWAHAHAH! Nearly reached through teh computer screen and grap the little shit by the throat adn squeeze when he spoke about Hunter. Sending him away..pfffffffffffft like Ben would EVER allow that. And naturally he calls Brian and pins the blame on him. Krikey I hate this litte shit.

Lovely meal with everyone! All connecting again, Justin getting that car. Loved his and Molly's reunion! I got a bit misty eyed during this part.

Nothing like getting sexually frustrated, happily teary and then seriously pissed off in one chapter. LOL.

Not surprisingly, another brilliant chapter.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Soothe

Perhaps Michael should invest in a clue and dictionary he is beyond dumb and insensitive to Ben, you don't make half-assed plans with your 'Best Friend' then try to placate your husband later.

It would make things more easier if Michael would clean out his ears and stop trying to hump Brian's leg all day.

Craig got what was coming to him but I doubt he will slink back into his hole, I hope he enjoys meeting Brian and Slick?

Love that Brian and Justin are moving slow because they want everything to be right for each other, Brian rushing to help Justin when his hand cramped is just so Brian.

Glad that Slick wasn't alone on her and that everyone rallied to make the day better for her.

Can't wait for the next chapter:)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Soothe

Thank the frigging gods! Ben finally has had enough and has kicked Michael out. Hoping it's not just temporary. Did Michael seriously think that Ben is stupid? And really..New York? After he found out that Ted, Blake and whoever else ends up going? The lame lie that he used Brian as a ruse? And THEN had the fucking balls to accuse Ben of lying to him! ARGH!!!!! Hunter is a gas in this! love his little quips. Hilarious that a teen has so much more intellect than Michael. hehehe. So where is he off to now? Where does he think he's going to stay at? I can't see anybody putting him up. He'll probably try to get into the loft somehow. Hopefully get arrested for B&E. Love when he gets his ass kicked. You always do it so well!! :)

Brian is on the protection train again. Had to laugh actually at his reaction. At least now he knows and as put in his place by Slick. Not surprised that she's a psych major. She's very astute.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Truth

Happy that Slick had the support she so needed on such a sad day. Glad she reached out, even more thrilled that everyone was already there ready. Much needed. gut wrentching story she told.

B&J started off very sweet and funny, quickly heated up. Nice that they are taking things slowly.

Have to say...You out into the story what I desparately wanted to do to Craig since watching the show. Have always desparetly hated him. He got a small amount of payback, but I see more coming on the horizon. (I hope) I don't see him just dropping the issue. His pride adn ego know no bounds.

Michael is his usual selfish self. Poor Ben. He's always getting the short straw when it comes to Michael's affections. 

Off to read the next chapter.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Soothe

Haaaaah finally you got your ass dump you whiny selfish immature brat!!Good for you Ben,bravo🤗🤗🤗

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 11:52 am Title: Chapter 17 - Truth

Yeeeeesssssss cuntface craig got what he deserve,but not enough!!Proud of you Dahpy girl🤗🤗🤗!i wonder if Lucy's brother can kick his ass more..

Hhhhmmmm that was HOT,Dr & Pat play😍😍😍

Poor Slick,i hope she finds someone to be with,maybe one of Lucy's brother..

Great chapter😙😙

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 4:28 am Title: Chapter 18 - Soothe

Fantastic verse!  Love Ben and Hunter, giving Mikey so what he needs.  Sure he will be running to Brian and blaming Justin for all is problems.

Thanks for sharing, looking forward to more.

JoAnn

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 2:57 am Title: Chapter 17 - Truth

I love the way Brian and Justin are with each other. As usual the weasel is still an ass.

~Lorie

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 1:27 am Title: Chapter 18 - Soothe

I want the bath over and the first time starting!!!!  I'm such a sucker for them together.. I do think it's so sweet that they are taking it kind of slow, but still want them to finally do the deed :)  lol

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