[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2017 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
Mikey can brood all he wants until he realizes he's responsible for his own unhappiness it won't get better. Brian made Cynthia's day when he banned Michael Novotney from Kinnitik. Woohoo. Lindsay isn't exactly Ban, but Mel will be on her case. Yay. Slick and Linden are really getting close. Yippy. Lindsay is soooo jealous because Jenny Rebecca had been to Britin. When did everyone get an invite? Love Mel. She gave Brian back his rights and left Lindsay. To the surprise of everyone.
Date: Jan 11, 2017 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
Mel kicks ads.
Date: Jan 11, 2017 1:37 pm Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
Wow just wow!!i didn't expect that to happen but i'm so glad Mel finally damp her ass...Way to go Mel!!!Take that Lindsay,now you just have to wait until Brian kick yours and whiny brat'ass from Britin...This is getting more exciting🤗🤗🤗
Hahaa Brian was hilarious while practicing how the bottom walks😀😀
Date: Jan 11, 2017 1:22 pm Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
BOOM!!!! So GLAD Mel made good on her promises to Lindsay! Now the witch will have to deal with a Hard-hearted Brian, determimed to live his life and a Headstrong Gus, who is determimed to let his father have one.
As for that colossal jackass with NO ass, Michael... He really slays me trying to be smart! 'Hiatutus' had me damn near falling down laughing! Hunters quick wit and verbal stabs just add the icing on the cake. I marveled at his and Lindsay asking what Deb and Ben were doing in Brian's house, as if they were entitled to any sort of explanation. Too bad they're to dumb and self-absorbed to ask what they were doing there.
And now they are in prime position to get torn to shreds. Jennifer is already set a good example to follow!
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jan 11, 2017 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
OMG OMG OMG.... Mel is now the damn Queen!!! My jaw dropped so I can only imagine Michael and Lindsay!
Date: Jan 11, 2017 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
Damn I love this Mel....and for me that's pretty hard to do. Job well done!
Date: Jan 10, 2017 6:43 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Genuflection
OH MAN!! what a creat cummupence for Lindsey. I was rolling with laughter reading this. I could so imagine her face in my minds eye. And Jen was absolute perfection. Daph of course was a hoot and a hollar. 3 demerits...1 demerit..LMAO!!
The best was the overheard conversations. Oh my goodness. Lindsey is just digging herself in deeper adn deeper! Her thought that Jen would be in any way intimidated by her is hilarious! I am so looking forward to that face to face meeting. I'm assuming Gus recorded everything on his phone and had Mel listen. Oh BOY! Again...Lindsey is in a whole heap of trouble. Mel isn't going to put up with any of this. And now that Mel has "met" Justin, and has apologized to Brian, we can rest assured that she will be well ensconsed on their side. I wonder if Lindsey will take Mel's threat seriously?? Probably not, or else she'll assume she can ride ripshod over her.
The diner scene was great. No matter what Justin may have said about Michael's so called friendship with Brian, it will have fallen on deaf ears. michael will only hear what he wants to hear. I am looking forward to the "hunt" now though. hehehehe. Yet another evil laugh!
Looks like slick is gettin' some!! whoooot whooot!! Ben as well, or at least will be soon enough. A possiblity of a good and healthy relationship for hi.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 23 - Genuflection
Lindsay got her Ass handed to her but will that stop her? Of course not.
I look forward to her meeting Jennifer face to face that is going to be the highlight of my reading.
Slick gave Michael a warning, Mel gave Lindsay a warning let the Bitch Slap commence.
Not surprised Michael doesn't pay child support but if Mel was to take him to court he would go fetal lol (Ooo that would make Lindsay's hair go white which wouldn't hide her bad dye job ;))
Michael having to make an appointment to sit next to Michael had me giggling, will that happen every time Michael or Lindsay try to speak to Brian?
Everyone on Liberty Avenue sit back and prepare to watch the show :)
Date: Jan 10, 2017 3:27 am Title: Chapter 23 - Genuflection
Love the face timing with the gang against Linz. Four romances up and running, Fantastic!
Love the update, thanks for sharing, can't wait for next!
JoAnn
Date: Jan 10, 2017 3:19 am Title: Chapter 23 - Genuflection
Lindsay and Mikey have fucked up now....I can't wait to see what happens
Date: Jan 10, 2017 3:17 am Title: Chapter 23 - Genuflection
Hahaaaha now who's the bigger and biggest idiot alive,and the winner is/are fake blonde aka Lindsay and Whiny brat aka Michael!!I'm excited about them finding their plan goes straight down the drain bcoz of their stupidness never realizing that people knows what they are planning to do..Go Mel,you should put Lindsay in her place once and for all..
Wow Daphne always the creative one..I love the tandem between Daph,Emmett & Slick,they can pull anything in minutes..
Whatnwas Justin whispering to Emmett??
Can't wait for the next chapter..great as always😙
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2017 3:15 am Title: Chapter 23 - Genuflection
Opps. I thought vomit boy and ghetto queen was Michael and Lindsay. LOL. Love how you got Mel on their side. The facetime part was perfect.
Date: Jan 09, 2017 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
BAHAHAHAHA! OMG! I have to react to the phone call from Michael to *ahem* "Lindsey" first. That was priceless! Oh man did I laugh. Absolutely bloody brilliant scenario. Can't wait for the fall out from that. hehehehe. *manically evil laugh*
Jen's reaction to Ben was also giggle worthy. Thrilled for Molly. A dream car for sure.
Sorry for the really short review. On about 3 hours sleep and really not functional at all mentally.
Love this though! thank you for the very entertaining weekend.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 09, 2017 6:19 am Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
Jan 08, 2017 11:18 pm
Boòoom Michael is so angry ang panicked that he didn't realized he's talking with his daughter on the phone??Who talks to the phone without asking first�…�…
Little Molly could be having a crush on mini Brian,how cute and they both loved car so both can really enjoy together...And as for Ben and Slick,ooòh i think they headed in their future with Robin and Lindon..ðŸ˜
Author's Response:
On all crushes you are right...like that wasn't flasing lights and bullhorns! Off to write schmoopiness!
Date: Jan 09, 2017 6:18 am Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
Boòoom Michael is so angry ang panicked that he didn't realized he's talking with his daughter on the phone??Who talks to the phone without asking first😅😅
Little could be having a crush on mini Brian,how cute and they both loved car so both can really enjoy together...And as for Ben and Slick,ooòh i think they headed in their future with Robin and Lindon..ðŸ˜
Date: Jan 09, 2017 3:27 am Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
Poor Mikey not getting an invite to Britin, then whining to Linz ( actually Jenny).
Fantastic! Ben and Robin, Mikey will be pouting and whining more.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next update!
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2017 1:12 am Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
Lindsay is going to wish she had stayed in Canada, hope Mel comes she is going to love this show :)
I swear I knocked before I entered your head lol ;)
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2017 1:09 am Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
I swear I knocked before I entered your head lol;)
Oooooo All The Starks Together!?!
Luther is going to be wishing for Delia to smack him cause they are going to rip off his balls...Ouch!
Date: Jan 09, 2017 12:36 am Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
Jenny was great.
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2017 12:22 am Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
Brian and Justin are moving in the right direction and their Home will soon be filled with people who just want them to be happy.
Jenny handled Michael the way he deserved and it had me rolling, what is Melanie going to do now that Jenny has shouted out Michael's whining??
Perhaps Lindsay would like to meet the women in Justin's life?;)
Author's Response:
Oh you know me so well....
Date: Jan 08, 2017 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
My favorite part was "home"....
Date: Jan 08, 2017 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
I love that Molly is a gearhead. She has an appreciation for vintiage cars that Slick loves.
And boy, does Jenny now has her father's number. She's never going to trust him again. And I hope Mel reams Lindsey's ass for siding with Whiny.
[Report This]Date: Jan 08, 2017 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
Cars, cars everywhere. Now we have at least 5 more members added. Then we have Vomit Boy and Ghetto Queen. Gotta love that Jenny.
Date: Jan 08, 2017 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Dance
Poor Mikey, yet another huge clue, you know nothing of your "best friend'" life. Perhaps best is overstating it a tad. Watch out for glass doors, you're dingy enough to walk in to one.
Too bad she's not Lesbian with a name like Slick imagine how popular she'd be, in a positive life affirming sort of way, lol.
Date: Jan 08, 2017 1:48 am Title: Chapter 21 - Dance
No Mikey at Britin Fantastic! Looks like Ben may have a new man, plus Slick, Fabulous!
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next!
JoAnn