[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2017 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted
Michael interrupted Daphne and Hunter? No wonder she wants to kick his Ass!
As much as everyone would love to see Daphne kick Michael's Ass up and down Liberty Avenue, he would use her so fast it wouldn't be worth the effort, Damn shame to because if anyone deserves to be beaten it is Michael.
I felt so bad for Brian his so called best friends have just broken heart, thankfully Justin was there to hold him and ease the pain a silly day is just what Brian needed to forget about the two idiots.
Slick as usual took care of The Gruesome Twosome and now Lindsay has to rush back to Canada to get her stuff and to get a lawyer because Brian is not kidding about getting custody of his son.
Can't wait to see what happens next? :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2017 2:44 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted
Hahaha. Michael was finally straightened out regarding Ben. Then Brian gets his cell phone and calls him on his lies. Love the silly day that Brian had with Justin. Wonderful chapter.
Date: Jan 17, 2017 1:04 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted
I just love Slick! She anticipates what anyone in her family needs... also, that final scene... I think I need a cigarette and a cold shower after that!!!!!
Author's Response:
So did B&J...though their shower would most likely be round two!!!
Date: Jan 17, 2017 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted
“Holy fuckety fuck of fuck!"......ROTFL so hard at this! Brian sure does have a way with words huh. I'll tackle Lindz and Mikey later.
Date: Jan 17, 2017 8:24 am Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted
That was HOT😗😗😗😗But i need more😥😥hehehe demanding much,but i just can't get enough when it comes to our boysðŸ˜ðŸ˜
I hope Gus would be granted to stay with his father full time,poor kid always put in the middle bcoz of his mothers craziness and delusional life..!!
Lindsay and Michael really deserve each other,they're so selfish and impertinent people...
So close Michael have his head off by Daphne,if only they let her go maybe the whiny brat can have a clue of what's happening around him!!
And I love Slick for moving things so quick. ..Lindsay thought it's bullshit,well take your own shit bcoz you don't have a home now...!!
Ilove it,Thanks for sharing!
Date: Jan 16, 2017 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Idiocy
Michael isn't just as asshole....he's completely hateful and umapologetic. what he said to slick was totally unacceptable and unforgivable. So too were the lies about the support payments. 3 YEARS!! Unreal. His attitude is disgusting and I don't see him ever changing it. Where on earth did he develop such an attitude? I mean I get the Deb may have smothered a bit, but she would never have allowed him to get away with being so "elitest" growing up. why does he think he deserves so much or that he can excuse his behaviour so much.
Molly, Jenny etc are terrific! Jenny at leasst knows exactly what Michael is all about now. Knows about the lies. Smart that she doesn't want to be around him.
OK....that last part....Accusing Ben of sleeping with Daphne?? HAHAHAHAHA! Oh what a moron! THAT was hilarious! Naturally he';; go flying off the handle and then when the truth comes out, he'll blame everyone else for not telling him anyting. *sigh* MORON!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 16, 2017 5:04 am Title: Chapter 27 - Idiocy
Oh my god. What an idiot.
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2017 3:12 am Title: Chapter 27 - Idiocy
Micheal shouldn't listen in to private conversations. He got it all wrong. Where did he get the idea that Daphne and Ben were an item? Poor Jenny, she has to put up with his shit. Love seeing how everyone is getting along, especially Brian and Justin.
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2017 2:35 am Title: Chapter 27 - Idiocy
If Michael and Lindsay didn't spend so much time chasing Brian maybe their children would respect them, it could happen but...no can't finish that they are both idiots who are too self-absorbed to care about anyone but themselves.
Brian is moving Justin into Britin which is going to make the Wicked Witch of the North and Whiny Dumbass freak out.
Ben is getting some luvin from Robin at last they just needed a place where Michael couldn't find them.
Michael accusing Daphne of sleeping with Ben was the wrong move to make, Daphne might string him along or just kick his Ass? (Crossing my fingers for the Ass kicking part and it being recorded lol)
More important to Michael is whining, chasing after Brian or Ben instead of spending anytime with Jenny Father of The Year Michael Novotny is.
Date: Jan 15, 2017 3:20 am Title: Chapter 26 - Showing
What a great way to end this chapter...Loved the boys and their closeness..I also love the character of Brian here,so open and sweet much like JustinðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Lindsay and Michael should be together,they're both hopeless and pathetic...It must be more insulting when your own son can't even respect your wishes..And as for Michael,Slick should just kick his ass to the sidewalk with his entire collectibles to teach him a lesson!!
Love Brn and Nel working together for Jenny's sake...
Thanks for sharing,this is another great chapter..
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2017 2:28 am Title: Chapter 26 - Showing
Sack of Hair meet Lindsay and Michael, Lindsay and Michael meet Sack of Hair now let's see who is dumber?
Slick really knows how to hit someone back and she makes sure you feel it slowly, won't take long for Michael to miss one payment and then the whiny will start, how long before Lindsay comes running back to Pittsburgh either to stay or pretend that she needs help from Brian?
Gus is very much his father's son I just love that he snuck out while Lindsay was being ridiculous wish that Gus didn't have to go back to Canada.
Gus witnessing the quiet moments between Brian and Justin is beautiful it helps him to see that his dad is happy and not alone anymore.
Slick has Michael and Lindsay's number wonder what The Whiny Brats are going to do next?
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2017 2:08 am Title: Chapter 26 - Showing
Michael and Lindsay never learn. I'm amazed at all the ways you manage to get them to fuck up. Great job.
Date: Jan 14, 2017 9:53 am Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Well that's done and done. Can't believe Michael would say such a thing. And Lindsay was warned to act proper, now look.
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
You are scary. Great story.
~Lorie
Date: Jan 14, 2017 2:29 am Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Love kick arse Mel. Slick getting revenge on Mikey and Linz, Fantastic.
Fabulous update, can't wait for next update.
Thanks for sharing
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2017 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Wait Michael Hasn't Paid Child Support In Three Years!!!
Mel has restraint because I would be beating the dog piss out of him bit figuratively and literally.
I feel so bad that Jenny had to find out but it is good that she can see him for what he really is and Lindsay aswell.
I would slap Lindsay so hard it might help improve her looks, she lied and lied and lied to hold on to her place in Brian's circle and now she is out in the cold.
Michael using Slick's mother to get back her was beyond low thankfully Daphne took care of him.
So Slick owns the house in Canada and the building Michael had his comic book store, this is going to be very interesting and a lot of fun.
I wish that the next chapter was up already I want to see Michael go fetal again and hopefully Lindsay go red before her head explodes lol
Date: Jan 13, 2017 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Wow. The truth finally comes out about Michael's lack of involvment re: support payments. 3 Years though. what a massive dissapointment he is. all for his stupid store. Certainly know whre hsi priorities lie. Bith L&M have been called to the carpet finally. And with slick as their landlord, well, this will be interesting to say the least.
Daph deserves a massive round of applause! Between tossing Lindsey's shit out the door and almost de-balling Michael, well, she's one of my new heros. Again, nothing short of brilliance.
M&L now will be in full forse revenge mode I'm sure. will be trying every dirty trick in teh book, but naturally it will be to no avail. their continual downfall will be most enjoyable.
I always look forward to each and every update. You NEVER disappoint. I get such pleasure reading this. Thank you!!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2017 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Michael, Michael. He doesn't think Brian bottoms, that Ben should be able to see Jenny, and he hasn't been paying support for her. He lied to everyone letting them think he was and Lindsay never told Brian that the money he sent was for both kids, not that he would have minded, but to be lied to? Love how Daphne tosses Lindsay's stuff. So we have Lindsay and Michael packing and planning to come back later, but they don't realize that they have no idea how they got to Britin. Holding my sides laughing. Mel's back? Was that planned? Love how Mel had Jenny keep Lindsay's mind off of keeping track of where the car was taking them. Mel is so smart, she even had the joint credit card canceled. I can't believe they are sending Gus back with Lindsay. How cruel. Even more cruel was Michael bringing up Slicks mother. You'd think he learn his lesson about opening his mouth? Daphne let him have it though. Buying out Michael's place of business and Mel and Lindsay's house isn't enough of a payback. Wander what standards Micheal is not upholding?
Date: Jan 13, 2017 2:42 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Slick is one "slick" lady... smart and pissed off, such a dangerous combo if you are on her bad side... I ALMOST pity Michael and Lindsay, Almost but not quite LOL
Date: Jan 13, 2017 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
DAYUUUUUUMMMM!!! They really fucked with the wrong one
Date: Jan 13, 2017 9:37 am Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Very nice
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2017 5:57 am Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
Extremely great now please don't make me wait long for more....loving it!
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2017 1:02 am Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
Michael don't act smart you make dictionaries weep and don't think cause your brain can't handle the pressure.
Brian and Justin were Hilarious, Slick and Lindon were Hot and Jennifer handled Lindsay smoothly.
But the winner goes to Melanie who served the one two punch with grace instead of stooping to their level, she rose above Michael and Lindsay to lay them both out.
Wonder what is going to happen next? :)
Date: Jan 12, 2017 12:37 am Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
Way to "bitch slap" them both Mel
Fantastic, thanks for sharing!
More soon, please and Thank You!
JoAnn
Date: Jan 11, 2017 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
hitatatus..........?!?! BWAHAHAHA! omg...I nearly fell of the bed laughing. And Hunter.....priceless!
Mel was Aaaaamazing! Even the gang were floored by it. I'm assuming she's back in the Pitts now?
The 2 twits continuously set my mind spinning. I mean really...they really think they're that great? what do they actually see when they look in the mirror? I just don't get it. they are totally infuriating.
Best of all, Brian has his rights back and Lindsey can no longer screw with him. At least not that way. She may want to try, but she sure won't get far.
Thank you!!!
Cheers,
Elaine