Date: Jan 24, 2017 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Fall Out
Wow as in huge Wow!!!call me crazy but I read countless times the part where Justin was talking to Michael and gave him what he deserve..That's where i took so long to finished reading this chapter..Our little spitfire,aka the twink who can put the whiny brat on the ground in a heartbeat...Please more action from our little sunshine,it's kinda exciting and HOT if Brian's hard on and animalistic reaction is any indicationðŸ˜ðŸ˜…Really Love love love it😘😘😘Thanks for sharingðŸ˜
Date: Jan 23, 2017 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Honesty and Payback
Oh man...Craig is going DOWN! Even his lawyer can't help apparently. HA! This is going to be so goooooooooooooood! I wonder what else he's going to do. I mean, i don't see him just sitting there and accepting all these law suits. He's going to try to come up with some stupid plan I'm sure. hehehe. Oh just too funny.
Lindsey thought she had such an opportunity with sydney. she thought she was going to have the chance to besmirch Justin's art. She had such high hopes for herself. she always does mind you. Oh the glory of it all. The mere fact that her ass was handed to her over speaker phone was perfection.
Michael is just... well, Stupid really doesn't cover it does it? Who the fuck basically trades his business for a freaking comic?! My jaw was on the floor at his utter and complet idiocy. "I don't want to divuldge the intracacies of the transaction....." BWAHAHAH. He's trying to sound so intelligent, and making it sound like others wouldn't understand such a complex busines concept...again..BWAHAHAHA! OMG...I had tears from laughing. THEN!! Then the icing on teh cake...Michael finding out that sklick owns not only teh building, but now his business. I was seriously beside myself reading this. That.....that my dear girl was the absolute best smack down. Completely blind sided him. How not only does he have slick for a landlord, but is now her employee as well. He's also going to have to pay rent now that he has a job. And he thinks that he can support Lindsey AND Jenny on a simple wage of working retail. (again). Oh man...so amazing. the hits just keep on coming for these 2 morons.
Am soooooooo looking forward to the next update.
Epic.
Cheers,
Elaine.
hehehehehe. sorry...I just wish I could've seen Michael's face when Slick made that last announcement. hehehehe. just absolutely tickled. LOL!
Date: Jan 23, 2017 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Honesty and Payback
So sweet
Date: Jan 23, 2017 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Honesty and Payback
I just love Slick's plans... and Lindsay being oh so confident in herself having that call on speaker phone was CLASSIC!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Honesty and Payback
Oh, you really came across. Michael and Lindsay both got smacked down big time.
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Repercussions
Girls day out and they discover that Michael is the one who told Craig where to find Justin. Now that they've got the goods on him, just how will they get him back. lol.
Date: Jan 23, 2017 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Honesty and Payback
And Booooom!!!I loved this chapter to much..killing two birds with one stone..Totally incredible!!Slick is funny and sweet but when anybody pissed her off she's like a venomous phyton...ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Thanks for updating and sharing..
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Honesty and Payback
The Idiot Team just can't help walking into Shit can they?
Craig is about to have lawsuits coming out his ears and there will be no relief in sight, doubt it will stop him from doing something else stupid that will get him in even more trouble.
Lindsay in her quest to be clever got her Ass handed to her in front of everyone and I doubt Sydney will give her a job or good references.
Michael is beyond stupid he let Lindsay read the paperwork concerning his store and thinks he got a good deal, living with a lawyer doesn't mean Lindsay knows anything about the law.
I swear these two share the same brain which is just a a wad of chewed up gum, Michael has lost his store, still owes Mel child support, owes Slick and has to move his stuff out of Slick's store to make room for her new inventory which he will be unpacking and putting away for her.
Feels like Christmas morning to me after reading that chapter <does happy dance>
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 3:00 am Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
Great chapter, love the "defend" conversation.
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 2:54 am Title: Chapter 32 - Repercussions
Awww Brian and Justin got sick.
Well at least they had each other and the puppies to spend time with instead of the idiots making it worse.
Glad that Slick has found closure and is moving forward with her life to embrace her happiness.
Craig, Michael and Lindsay being sued for defamation of character?
Those three idiots should have kept their mouths shut cause now it is on and they are going to pay.
Lindsay and Michael are lower than fleas (sorry fleas) for that stunt but getting Michael to shell out thirty grand for a comic should be hilarious, and Lindsay trying to play mommy should be funny too since Gus and Jenny don't want to be around her or her sidekick.
Stupid Is As Stupid Does <smh>
Date: Jan 22, 2017 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Repercussions
I'm enjoying this much..First Craig should put to his right place where belongs far away from the family so he won't be able to upset Justin anymore..Then Suing the idiot duo for defamation and sue for costudy and after that cut them out of the family's life for good..Let them rot as far as i'm concern far away as the Mars as could be where they can no longer comes closer to anybody from the gang..
But before that,yap slick you should get the whiny brats store until he goes down with nothing!!the same for the cunty wasp!!They don't know whats coming on their way until it hit their faces....
Slik was so strong and brave facing her sperm donor like that..Good for you Slick,now you can move on completely towards the future and hoping that future including a studly Lindon..And what is that,Slick seems to be expert but it was a surprise that she's still untouch yet,wow🙄🙄wonder never cease...
Poor B/J cought a cold,well it was worth it,atleast both of them suffered..And the sweetness overload..ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Great chapter andbthanks for updating😘
Date: Jan 22, 2017 4:23 pm Title: Chapter 31 - When?
I know stumbling blocks are needed, and the Disparaging Duo lead the charge, I am just glad that they are caught (and overheard) and they still don't realize that everyone defends the family since they are loved by all!!!!
the defense (love) convo that ended the chapter was beautiful!
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2017 1:31 am Title: Chapter 31 - When?
Not surprised Michael and Lindsay used Jenny to find out what was going on and then sent Craig to freak Justin out.
What they should be ready for is what Slick is about to do and what Jennifer, Melanie are going to do?
The puppies sound so cute and it is bringing out Brian's inner child with glorious results, Brian is finally comfortable enough to indulge his own wants and needs instead of trying to live up to Michael and Lindsay's selfish desires.
Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Cold, But Humiliation Always Appreciates a Captivating Audience ;)
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:41 pm Title: Chapter 31 - When?
If Mikey and Lindsay think calling in Craig is going to work, they have another think coming. Loving this.
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 31 - When?
I....LAWD I.....<humming some negro spirituals RIGHT NOW so that I don't type a whole stream of cussing!>
Can we PLEASE have the next chapter be called "GUT-PUNCHED and THROAT CHOPPED" so that you can write me into the story as an anonymous person who decides to check a BITCH and MITCH?!! These two.... LAWD!!!!
My turn to torture some assholes....Off to write!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
LAWD!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Jan 21, 2017 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 31 - When?
The nerve of those two,how some idiot people still manage to upset somebody??Poor Justin can't even form a word when he saw his bastard of a father?!well J better off without Craig in his life,so i hope he get over it soon..
And for the twin dump ass,the family should just cut them out of their life for good,before they made another huge mistake or do any damage to them or worst harm one of the family specially Justin..Who knows what else they're capable of doing just to get what they wants..
Great chapter as always!!Thanks for sharing..😘
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 7:56 pm Title: Chapter 31 - When?
Loved this, especially Carl's speech about Justin.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 6:56 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Bears
I love how playful Brian and Justin are with each other in this story. As for the two mindless fools - will they ever get a clue? The dogs are adorable and will be well loved by the whole family.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 2:24 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Bears
I always knew that Brian has a soft heart. Two dogs instead of one. Love the names.
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:32 am Title: Chapter 30 - Bears
Good chapter
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:27 am Title: Chapter 30 - Bears
Oh my God!!I just research the kai ken puppies,they are to die forðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Brian can't really say no to Justin even without talking to each,they just know what other is thinking..😘
I love how Ted ask Lindsay about the idiot part😆Seems both of them can't get any clue that nobody wants them around least of all having them at Britin..It's very annoying duo!!
Thanks for anothet brilliant update..
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 12:41 am Title: Chapter 29 - Unashamed
Michael and Lindsay can always be counted on to make Asses out of themselves and to excuse their behavior because of course they don't do anything wrong.
Slick will destroy them if they hurt her boys and that should be hilarious and make them think they can take her on.
Just Love that everyone on Liberty Avenue is trying to protect Brian and Justin from the idiot duo.
The next few chapters are going to be very interesting
Date: Jan 20, 2017 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Unashamed
Hahahaa is there anyone's more idiot that this two???How they just jump to conclusions without learning the whole story??They really are piece of work😅😅
It's good to know that Brandon is not a bad guy and competing Brian in here..
And Brian,well finally he lost his virginity to our little spitfire,how sweet is that specially when he announced it to the whole Liberty AvenueðŸ˜ðŸ˜
And as for Daphne,you go girl,always knows how to make an interesting story with a touch of hot scene in it🙂🙂anybody can be fooled by her😆😆
Thanks for updating,loved it..
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2017 8:35 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Unashamed
ROFLMAO. That was too cool. A car? But to get back to the beginning, Brian let everyone know that he is no longer a bottom virgin. That was very classy of Brandon to salute Brian. So Brian gets a puppy, about time and gave Justin a key! I was glad to see that Michael and Lindsay were not allowed to sit just anywhere in the diner. Another fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2017 12:21 am Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted
GREAT chapter.
Bitch and weasel get their asses handed to them.
And then, such a hot ending.
~Lorie