Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 3:45 am Title: Chapter 40 - Twitterpated and Trouble

What a chapter.  Michael ripping his comic.  So funny and it most certainly was his fault.  Then Gold pining for Craig, kind of creepy.  

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Date: Jan 29, 2017 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 39 - Consequences

So funny.  Michael and Lindsay go to the police to bring charges on Hunter and find themselves being charged.  Hope it sticks.  Brian and Justin having a spanking moment was an interesting interlude.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2017 2:46 pm Title: Chapter 38 - Showdown

Go Hunter!!that just served him right...
Loved it,and can't wait for the next chapter.Thanks for sharing..

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2017 4:11 am Title: Chapter 38 - Showdown

Love the Tae Kwon do.  Huntsman weekend was good.  Just what part of barred from the diner do they not get?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2017 12:19 am Title: Chapter 37 - Stupidity, Love and Lust

Ewwww TT is in love with Craig, is he on drugs?

Michael and Lindsay got played again and now they have a restraining order that prevents them from getting their daily fix if Brian, I doubt fifteen miles is going to stop them from trying to talk to Brian, get rid of Justin or get revenge on Slick.

Brian and Justin needed time away from the drama and a secluded place for their love to grow stronger.

I am curious what Gus and Jenny wrote to the morons that they will spin to make them look good.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Protection

So...looks like a trip to the slammer for our favorite stupid duo. Hehehehe! LOVe how all of Liberty are on teh same page. All are in protective mode now, circling and protecting our boys. Well done. The touches of dry humour there are great! Mel..."what precinct?" OK, thanks." and Lindsey being outraged. Oh how I chuckled at that. It was like asking how do you take your coffee? Loved it.

Now you've brought Ethan into teh mix. Love the Mr. TT! LOL. Is Craig aware that he's gay? His ego, as usual, is unreal. thinking he's Craig's right hand man, when Craig himself calls him Mr.TT. Oh the joys of ignorance and stupidity. Curious as to how Ethan will eventually play a role in all of this.

AS for Emmett.when the hell did that happen? How? What?! Terrific either way though! M&L are on their own. Will they ever get a clue or will they continue on really beliving that everyone is out to get them, that they are right in all they've done, their never endingsense of entitlement. (again, I never quite get how Michael comes up with the idea that he desrves any of the things he assumes he does. How comes up with the concept he cam look down his nose at people)

Now that they've been kicked out of the diner, the hotel etc, what will they do now? Who's ass are they willing to kiss to get what they want? Hmmmmmmm

cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 6:52 am Title: Chapter 36 - Protection

Yes i'm jumping from joy right now...This stupid duo deserve to be barred from the diner and maybe from all over Liberty Ave..But i was shocked about Emmett owning the Diner...I hope Brian and Mel git custody of the kids full time...

As for Craig,well he's just plain bigot and bitter man,the funny thing is he didn't even know that his supposed right as mr.tt said is also gay..We'll see what his reaction ceould be..

Poor Deb,having a son like that...Don't worry Ma the gang are always there for you..And Brandon wow i actually love him in this one...

Thanks for updating..

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 4:17 am Title: Chapter 36 - Protection

Oooooo you are killing me with these short chapters, just when I start to sink my teeth into the story it stops at the OMGAWD part ;)

Emmett Owns The Diner!!! HOLY SHITBALLS!!!

I feel bad for Deb because no parent wants to see their child arrested but Michael needs to be taught a lesson and so does his sidekick.

Oh No Not Ethan! Already can't stand Mr. TT and I want him to go down.

Michael and Lindsay got arrested, tossed out of the diner by Emmett and been kicked out of the apartment, my face hurts from smiling so much that chapter was Amazing!!!!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 6:05 am Title: Chapter 35 - Reality Bites

Great. I love when they get spanked by the law.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 4:24 am Title: Chapter 35 - Reality Bites

OMG!!! I'm cracking up because these three couldn't plan a game of tic tac toe without screwing it up, how do they function without adult supervision is a wonder for the ages.

A three year old could have planned his payback better and he still would have fit in a nap, all the clues point to them because like the genuine geniuses they  think they are they left behind tons of clues.

Like he isn't in enough trouble Craig goes to Slick's Emporium and makes an bigger Ass of himself to the point that he has to be arrested.

Carl does that handcuff thing with Debbie and I bet she will be in heaven and silent for days with a huge grin on  her face to rival Brian and Justin lol

Michael and Lindsay really thought they wouldn't get in trouble for helping Craig now it is about to hail on them and they have no protection from the storm <does happy dance>

I wonder what Mel is going to do?

Better yet I wonder what Liberty Avenue is going to do?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 4:39 am Title: Chapter 34 - Fall Out

Had to read the last two chapters again because I enjoy laughing at Michael, Lindsay and Craig's stupidity.

Did Michael really not pay the fine, how did he get out of jail then?

So Michael and Lindsay have basically accused Jenny of lying about telling them where the family would be on Saturday night? 

Parents Of The Year!!

They have been so busy plotting and planning that they have barely acknowledged Gus or Jenny and that won't look good in their custody case.

How can Michael afford to take care of Lindsay when he can't even afford to support Jenny, a judge could rule that he and Lindsay have to pay back Brian and it will have to be the full amount.

Brian sent Lindsay a lot of money that wasn't just for Gus and if Brian has a smart lawyer he will ask for every cent that wasn't spent on Gus to be paid back to Brian with interest.

Plus if Lindsay doesn't pay Slick soon she will be served with another lawsuit along with Michael who I think might be behind in his payments to Slick aswell.

Plus they really should stop referring to Slick and Justin outside their names in front of others or else they will be collecting lawsuits like their good friend Craig. lol

Ahh, the audacity of the ignorant, they see themselves as victims, when actually they are the villains.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Fall Out

Deb's got it wrong.  Brian is not upset with Justin and never could be.  Michael couldn't get his comic that he sold his store for.  Now that's funny.