Date: Feb 08, 2017 2:47 am Title: Chapter 46 - Cracking
I love how Brian included Justin in the parental talk with the kids after Michael and LIndsay interrupted the party.
Craig is in SOOO much trouble... I don't particularly LIKE Ethan, but I like how he is screwing Craig... not even literally yet LOL
and I love how people now know about how close Brian and Justin really are now that they are raw!
Date: Feb 07, 2017 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Cracking
Michael is getting worrisome now. Before he was just an annoying little mosquito that one would glefully smack flat. Not sure what his plans are. either way though, he'll be derailed, just hopefully before anything major happens. Not sure if Lindsey will be able to stop whatever he's scheeming. While I'm quite sure she has her own plans to enact, anything Michael does will most likely effect hers. Oh JOY! seriously! this is going to be fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun!
Craig. What's there to say really, except, "Craig, do you take Bubba to be your unlawfully bedded cellmate? To bend over for, to blow, and to be collarbound to?" hehehe. Ethan sure got him by teh short and curly's now doesn't he. LOL. Is it weird that I have a weeeeeee bit of sympathy for Craig? don't get me wron, all this fouldn't happen to a bigger asshole, but my imaginatio nis in overdrive as to what may actually happen in prison.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Feb 07, 2017 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Cracking
Wow that s kind of mean.
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Cracking
I actually feel sorry for Craig. Michael need a reality check.
Date: Feb 07, 2017 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Cracking
Still loving this!! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 8:41 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Cracking
Craig better get use to crying because no matter what his sentence is he going to be doing a lot of it.
Ethan tied him and Craig up in a nice now that so far no one can break and as much as he thinks this will bring Craig closer to him, he is not going to enjoy prison because it isn't like porn and the screams don't equal ecstasy.
Michael is going off the deep end while Lindsay is trying to rein him in and figure out a different route to Brian, Michael's jealous machinations could get them both in trouble.
Especially if he tries to get Jennifer charged with assault???
Can't wait to see what Michael and Lindsay try to come up with next? :)
Date: Feb 06, 2017 7:00 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Twinkle
Twinkle is a gem!! did what all of us have been dying to do and was appropriately rewarded for his loyalites by Grim. They may be a slightly odd couple according to some, but hey...if it works for them, and they appreciate and respect each other, so much the better.
Jenn of course is FAB-U-LOUS! Not only do those two get a shake shower thanks to Twinkle, but a good ol' smack from Jenn. Most excellent and well deserved.
Wonder what they are going to try next. It really is a good giggle to see them continually make complete asses of themselves!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Feb 05, 2017 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Twinkle
I want to kiss Twinkle. The way he treated Bitchy and Whiney to a milkshake made me giggle for a while.
The silent treatment B&W are getting all up and down Liberty Av. is awesome. They are getting what they deserve. Them crashing the party at the loft is unforgivable.
I just hope our hapless duo get it into their stupid heads that Brian and Justin are really together now. But somehow I think they will make even more mistakes towards Brian, Justin and the rest.
Twister in the loft! Who would have guessed that to happen. Great to see all of the "family" enjoying themselves.
Thank you for another great update
XOXO
Meriam
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2017 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Twinkle
Well I Totally Love Twinkle!! When He Poured those shakes on Michael and Lindsay's head I cheered and laughed, cause he did something everyone else wanted to do (Or Worse) and he was still classy about it. Way To Go Twinkle!!! lol
Michael and Lindsay just keep racking up A-hole points every chance they get, instead of keeping their mouths shut and staying quiet they just open their mouths and more crap spews out.
Brian and Justin are continuing to move forward while they get further and further behind, that stunt at the loft and the outcome of them being thrown out and then Jennifer Taylor giving them both a slap a piece was perfection.
I honestly can't wait to see what these two Scum Sucking Idiots come up with next, I swear every chapter just gets better and better.
I especially like that they were playing twister before the Gruesome Twosome ruined all the fun :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2017 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Twinkle
I love Grim and his Twinkie. Can't believe how stupid Michael and Lindsay are. Well yes I can. Great story, I look forward to each and every chapter.
Date: Feb 03, 2017 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Talking and Coventry
Lindsay is becoming a stupid cunt,Michael must have rub off of her for hanging out with him..Really what kind of parents does remember their kids if only they need something??I hope they got kick out from Liberty Avenue for good..
And as for Craig,that's what he gets for trusting someone he barely knows just because the chin rat is always pleasing him,does it means he can trust him..Now where that weasel got you??
Thanks for sharing..
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2017 12:19 am Title: Chapter 44 - Resolution and Realisation
Darn, Michael didn't blow up like I'd hope. I hate to say it but I feel sorry for Craig. Pictures what pictures?!!! It's nice to know that Michael and Lindsay are no longer legally in the kids lives. They never supported them financially or otherwise.
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2017 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Talking and Coventry
For once Craig is not guilty. Michael and Lindsay are left in the dark. Brian and Justin are doing it raw, can you just see Michael's face when or if he finds that out. Slick is too family and all of Liberty will defend her.
Date: Feb 02, 2017 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 44 - Resolution and Realisation
Oh boy!
Date: Feb 02, 2017 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Talking and Coventry
Great chapter
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2017 8:24 pm Title: Chapter 44 - Resolution and Realisation
Ummm...uh...What Pictures Is He Talking About?!?!?!?!?!!!!!
Michael and Lindsay must be busting a gasket after Justin's revelation and I bet the look on their faces was priceless lol
Craig got himself into some deep trouble he really shouldn't have lead Ethan on by sleeping with him and planning this kidnapping stunt, didn't anyone ever tell him don't say things you don't mean in bed?? rofl
Looks like he and Ethan are not going to be happy together <SMH> what a shame they seem like such a lovely couple.
Now after all the decisions made in court it seems like Michael and Lindsay can stop pretending that they care about Gus and Jenny, they have the people they want In their lives and they can walk away knowing that they are taken care of no matter what happens.
Michael and Lindsay are in so much trouble that not even a shovel can help them out, yet all they want to do is get rid of Justin, Slick and trying to crawl all over Brian.
Boy this is getting exciting! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2017 8:08 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Talking and Coventry
Hunter came up with the perfect idea to drive Michael and Lindsay up the wall, both of them getting frozen out of all information about Liberty Avenue is just the thing to drive them both completely batty. (Wish I had thought of it lol)
Date: Feb 02, 2017 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 44 - Resolution and Realisation
Holy frigging shit!!!! I quite literally spat out my drink! I had to mop up my office desk!! It even came out my nose! I had in my head a scenario of Craig finding out, but OMG!!!!!! OK...I have to stop laughing...(I can't) Pictures?!?!?!?!
Court was perfection. M&L got everything they derserved thus far adn am looking forward to further proceedings. Those should be quite entertaining as well. To be able to see the looks on the faces of M&L, after what Justin stated........I would give my right boob. (almost) (admittedly, not much there, but it's the thought I figure)
My heart BROKE for Slick! To be brought back to when her father murdered her mother. Oh I pray that any PTSD is not too much for her. So traumatic. Thank goodness all are gathering around her. I do hope Ted's slip also doesn't do any damage. That I have to admit was shocking.
Oh what a treat to have yet again, 2 chapters today. Thank you!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Feb 01, 2017 1:43 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Broken Record and Just 'Broken'
And that could be the end of Craig Taylor!!Served you right!
Poor Slick,really got shaken up with what that chin rat was about to do..Why they didn't call Brian or Lindon,as far as I know she's Brian's bestfriend,so he should be there..But on the bright side who wants to disturb such a lovely weekend...And I say,that was way too HOT😥😥😥And i want more🤗🤗Wow i'd do anything just to be in that room with them..😙😙
Thamks for updating and sharing..
Date: Feb 01, 2017 3:09 am Title: Chapter 41 - Afterthoughts and Machination
Lindsay and Michael really are two irresponsible parents i've known in here,imagine they have a lot of time causing trouble but to read the kids letter,how screwed up that really is??!!I just hope the judge would strip them off their parental rights..Poor kids dealing with that kind of people in their life and being used to as well..
Ian aka Ethan is just creeps me out,how i wished Brandon would do anything with that chin rat!!
As for our boys,i loved how caring and sweet Brian is towards Justin...
Tha ks for sharing.😘
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2017 12:55 am Title: Chapter 42 - Broken Record and Just 'Broken'
Read the two new updates and I must say Ian is an Idiot who is not going to enjoy prison, especially after he finds out Craig is going to let him rot and really hates gays. (Ian fantasizing about Craig makes me want to bleach my brain!!)
Michael and Lindsay didn't even read the letters from their kids bet if Brian had sent them a letter they would have killed each other to read it first, Gus and Jenny are going to be alright because they have a great support system and The Gruesome Twosome don't deserve such wonderful kids in their lives.
Brandon, Grim and Twinkle are AWESOME!!!
I am so happy they were looking out for Slick who is Liberty Avenue's Duchess, Ian's big plan was to kidnap Slick?
What An Idiot!!!
Brian and Justin had another HOT moment that ended with them not freaking out because the condom broke but deciding to do it raw.
Michael and Lindsay are going to Freak Out!!! rofl
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Broken Record and Just 'Broken'
Interest to say the least. Lawyers for the defense not helping them get away with shit. Grim, a cop?, and his twinkie guarding our guys. I just need a little clarification, when Mel, Ben, Justin and Brian are reading the so call letters from Lindsay and Michael and Brian went off and found whoever was smoking, who was it?
Author's Response:
Sorry to confuse lovely. It was Ben who went to see Brian in the driveway when he went for a calming smoke after he got upset. Hope you continue to enjoy
MissMerlot
Date: Jan 31, 2017 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Broken Record and Just 'Broken'
WOW!!!!!! Am so glad that what stupid scheme Ethan was obviously thinking up flopped. I have to say I was a bit nervous at the possibilities. I wonder if teh actual truth will come out as to why he was attempting such a feat. I'm imagining Craig's reaction. LOL! OMG...how priceless would that be!? Craig is already pissed that the money from court is going to Vic Grassi house. If he finds out that Ethan was just trying to help due to his feelings for him..........BWAHAHAHAHA! I highly doubt Craig would even be able to tolerate manipulating Ethan knowing that.
Brian adn Justin's last scene there.WHEW! I think I need a ciggy now. That was awesome!! And o my gooooooodness! When certain people find out they are actually doing it raw now!? I really really really want to see that. Can't wait for you to describe it it complete detail. LOL.
I am so incredibly disappointed in both Lindsey adn Michael. I'm not at all surprised. Seeing as it hadn't been mentioned at all, I was assuming that neither had read the letters. I've been waiting to find out what they said, or what any reaction would be. typical that they simply were excusing their behaviour rather tahn apologize for it. Utterly heartbreaking for Gus and Jenny. Thankful that they are surrounded by others who love them so much. that give them the support they need. Even if not family by blood, they are family by choice. Sometimes even makes for a stronger bond. On top of their lack of any kind of decency or remorse, they continue to treat the restraining orders like they are a joke. B&J's are taken seriously, but slick...they feel she is beneath them, so have no need to follow basic law. I guess it simply doesn't suit their interests, or don't deem herimportant enough. Now aside fro mmore charges, another $1000 is lost. Oh joy...oh bliss!
hopefully this makes up for the lack of review in teh past 2 chapters. I apologize.
Fabulous updates and how generous that yo ugave us 2 at once!!!
thaks.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 41 - Afterthoughts and Machination
Brian is so not in trouble with Justin even though he wants to be. Lindsey and Michael need to finish answering the kids letters. Mel was right about neither of them having read them. Will Brandon find a way to stop Ethan from his plan?
Date: Jan 30, 2017 6:59 am Title: Chapter 40 - Twitterpated and Trouble
First thing first,Ethan aka Ian give me a creep!!Can't imagine what Craig would do if he knows that he's someone's fantasy not to mention his gay employee (shuddering here)..
Hahaaaha that's just made my day,tearing up the 30k worth of comic,how stupid can he be??!!But that's the least of their problem now,as they need to find somewhere to live..
Thanks for sharing,can't wait for the next chapter..